A/N Hey, back again. I have some things to say before I write next chapter. Some think that I was a bit too harsh with the A/N notes of my last chapter, and I must say that I am sorry. People, I don't only write when I get a review. Its a part of my daily routine. After class, I come home, write a chapter, post it, regardless if people read and review or not, I go to work, come home, check reviews and go to bed. The reason I ask for reviews is because it tells me that people actually like my story. But. even if I didn't get any reviews, I still start the next day like the last. Looking forward to reviews gets me though my pathetic life. Also, flames do not deter me, my sworn mission is to provide a great story to the world. So, like I said, I am sorry. Any way. Here's Chapter 21, hope you enjoy!
Also, thanx to rsd for that great review, after flames, its nice to know someone likes me.
Disclaimer: Blah, Blah, Blah.
Chapter 21: Love Goddess Part 2
Rose and Marron walked through the crowded shopping mall. All around them people stopped and stared.
"Look, Mommy!" A small girl said pointing to the two girls.
"Yes, sweetheart." The lady said holding the small girl's hand. "Thats the princess, Rose."
The child nodded, "She's pretty."
'Perfect,' Marron thought. 'All these people can do is stare. I was hoping to distract the princess, not have attention drawn to her.' She looked to her friend, who looked as depressed as ever. "So," Marron said. "What do you want to do first?"
Rose shrugged her shoulders, "It doesn't matter."
Marron looked around her. "I know! Lets get some ice cream!"
"Okay."
Marron took Rose by the hand and led her to the ice cream vendor. "Lets see, I'll have a double scoop of cookies and cream and my friend would like..." She looked to Rose.
"Vanilla."
"a double scoop of vanilla please."
The vendor gave them their ice cream and they sat down on a bench to eat.
Marron looked over at her friend. She still looked depressed as ever. "Hey," Marron put her hand on Rose's knee. "we'll get Amanda back, so please cheer up."
Rose looked at Marron "You promise?"
Marron smiled. "I promise, we'll get her back. Together."
Finally, Rose smiled. "Thank you Marron."
Suddenly all around them, glass windows shattered. People screamed and dove under tables. Marron put her arm around Rose's shoulders and pushed her to the floor. As soon as the glass fell to the floor, Rose lifted her head. "What happened?"
Marron slowly got to her feet, "I don't know."
Rose stood up beside her friend. "Call the others. We should investigate."
"AAAAHHHHH!!!"
"Someone's in trouble!" Rose said. "Marron, time to work!"
"Right!"
"Venus Neo Power!"
"Saturn Prism Power!"
"TRANSFORM!"
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Outside, in the giant parking lot, people ran into their cars trying to escape the monster that was persuing them. The small girl and her mother who had seen the princess earlier was cornered by Lighti, the mother held the girl tight in her arms as Lighti came closer to them. As the monster reached its hand to take the girl, the mother screamed.
"HELP ME!!"
Lighti smiled. "There's no one to help you."
"Yes there is!" Lighti turned to look behind him. On the roof of the mall stood two girls in short skirts and pigtails.
"Telling someone there is no hope is one of the worse things you can do. Bringing havoc and fear is another. But there is one thing you hadn't counted on. The love between a mother and her child. So, in the name of Venus, planet of love, I will bring fear into your heart!"
"You are unforgivable! You come to our world bringing destruction in your wake, I won't stand for it! You kidnap my friends and hold them prisoner, I won't stand for it! But I will stand up to you and ensure peace to our kingdom once again! I am Sailor Saturn, and I stand for love and justice! So prepare yourself, cause on behalf of saturn, planet of death and destruction, I will send you to the world of the dead!"
Lighti looked on as the two sailors jumped to the ground. "You are the ones who should be afraid!"
"Not on your life pal," Venus said, preparing her attack.
"Venus Laser Beam!" A strong laser struck Lighti on his chest, its light was absorbed and Lighti smiled.
"Thanks for the energy!" Lighti closed his eyes and the yellow skin on his body seemed to light up.
"He's like a giant light bulb!" Venus said.
Lighti became brighter and Saturn closed her eyes. "Oh, crap. Its too bright, I can't see. It feels like my eyes are burning up!"
"Saturn, what's wrong?" Venus looked to her friend. Seeing her friend's plight, she looked dead center at Lighti, who gaped at her in shock.
"How can you still see?"
"I am the sailor scout of light and love, a little flashlight like you can't hurt me!" She felt a new power weiling up inside her.
"VENUS SOLAR ECLISPE!!"
Overhead, the sun seemed to become dimmer, until everything around them was completely dark, or everything would be completly dark, had it not been for the giant lightbulb in front of them.
"Step back Venus, I'll finish him!" Saturn said, praying that she could see enough to hit the monster and not anyone else.
"Saturn Rings Blast!"
Her taira flew straight and true and hit Lighti dead center. As soon as the light monster was gone, everything was dark.
"Um, Venus I can't see."
"Me neighter."
"Can you turn the sun back on?"
"Um, I'll try." Almost immediatly, the world became brighter and Venus looked at her friend, and what she saw made her gasp.
Right behind Saturn, a black portal opened and a black arm reached out to grab her. The hand was coming closer, in a moment, it would drag her in.
"Princess! Watch it!" Venus dived and at the last minute pushed Saturn out of the arm's reach.
Saturn hit the ground with a thud and turned to see what caused Venus to shout. The only thing she saw was a black hand drag her friend into a black portal. It closed as Saturn ran to it.
Sobbing, Saturn collapsed into the ground. She felt herself being picked up, turning, she sobbed into her holder's embrace.
Sailor Mars held her friend close. "Its alright, We'll get them back."
Sailor Jupiter stood protectively over Mars and Saturn 'First Mercury, now Venus, my friends please stay safe.'
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Venus fell on a cold cement floor. She looked around her. She saw the only other occupant in that room. "Mercury! Are you alright?"
Mercury looked at her weakly. "Physically, I am."
"Tell me, who is responsible for this."
"Robert."
Ends Chapter 21
A/N Yep, thats it for now I'll update tomorrow, promise!
Also, thanx to rsd for that great review, after flames, its nice to know someone likes me.
Disclaimer: Blah, Blah, Blah.
Chapter 21: Love Goddess Part 2
Rose and Marron walked through the crowded shopping mall. All around them people stopped and stared.
"Look, Mommy!" A small girl said pointing to the two girls.
"Yes, sweetheart." The lady said holding the small girl's hand. "Thats the princess, Rose."
The child nodded, "She's pretty."
'Perfect,' Marron thought. 'All these people can do is stare. I was hoping to distract the princess, not have attention drawn to her.' She looked to her friend, who looked as depressed as ever. "So," Marron said. "What do you want to do first?"
Rose shrugged her shoulders, "It doesn't matter."
Marron looked around her. "I know! Lets get some ice cream!"
"Okay."
Marron took Rose by the hand and led her to the ice cream vendor. "Lets see, I'll have a double scoop of cookies and cream and my friend would like..." She looked to Rose.
"Vanilla."
"a double scoop of vanilla please."
The vendor gave them their ice cream and they sat down on a bench to eat.
Marron looked over at her friend. She still looked depressed as ever. "Hey," Marron put her hand on Rose's knee. "we'll get Amanda back, so please cheer up."
Rose looked at Marron "You promise?"
Marron smiled. "I promise, we'll get her back. Together."
Finally, Rose smiled. "Thank you Marron."
Suddenly all around them, glass windows shattered. People screamed and dove under tables. Marron put her arm around Rose's shoulders and pushed her to the floor. As soon as the glass fell to the floor, Rose lifted her head. "What happened?"
Marron slowly got to her feet, "I don't know."
Rose stood up beside her friend. "Call the others. We should investigate."
"AAAAHHHHH!!!"
"Someone's in trouble!" Rose said. "Marron, time to work!"
"Right!"
"Venus Neo Power!"
"Saturn Prism Power!"
"TRANSFORM!"
********************************************************************************
Outside, in the giant parking lot, people ran into their cars trying to escape the monster that was persuing them. The small girl and her mother who had seen the princess earlier was cornered by Lighti, the mother held the girl tight in her arms as Lighti came closer to them. As the monster reached its hand to take the girl, the mother screamed.
"HELP ME!!"
Lighti smiled. "There's no one to help you."
"Yes there is!" Lighti turned to look behind him. On the roof of the mall stood two girls in short skirts and pigtails.
"Telling someone there is no hope is one of the worse things you can do. Bringing havoc and fear is another. But there is one thing you hadn't counted on. The love between a mother and her child. So, in the name of Venus, planet of love, I will bring fear into your heart!"
"You are unforgivable! You come to our world bringing destruction in your wake, I won't stand for it! You kidnap my friends and hold them prisoner, I won't stand for it! But I will stand up to you and ensure peace to our kingdom once again! I am Sailor Saturn, and I stand for love and justice! So prepare yourself, cause on behalf of saturn, planet of death and destruction, I will send you to the world of the dead!"
Lighti looked on as the two sailors jumped to the ground. "You are the ones who should be afraid!"
"Not on your life pal," Venus said, preparing her attack.
"Venus Laser Beam!" A strong laser struck Lighti on his chest, its light was absorbed and Lighti smiled.
"Thanks for the energy!" Lighti closed his eyes and the yellow skin on his body seemed to light up.
"He's like a giant light bulb!" Venus said.
Lighti became brighter and Saturn closed her eyes. "Oh, crap. Its too bright, I can't see. It feels like my eyes are burning up!"
"Saturn, what's wrong?" Venus looked to her friend. Seeing her friend's plight, she looked dead center at Lighti, who gaped at her in shock.
"How can you still see?"
"I am the sailor scout of light and love, a little flashlight like you can't hurt me!" She felt a new power weiling up inside her.
"VENUS SOLAR ECLISPE!!"
Overhead, the sun seemed to become dimmer, until everything around them was completely dark, or everything would be completly dark, had it not been for the giant lightbulb in front of them.
"Step back Venus, I'll finish him!" Saturn said, praying that she could see enough to hit the monster and not anyone else.
"Saturn Rings Blast!"
Her taira flew straight and true and hit Lighti dead center. As soon as the light monster was gone, everything was dark.
"Um, Venus I can't see."
"Me neighter."
"Can you turn the sun back on?"
"Um, I'll try." Almost immediatly, the world became brighter and Venus looked at her friend, and what she saw made her gasp.
Right behind Saturn, a black portal opened and a black arm reached out to grab her. The hand was coming closer, in a moment, it would drag her in.
"Princess! Watch it!" Venus dived and at the last minute pushed Saturn out of the arm's reach.
Saturn hit the ground with a thud and turned to see what caused Venus to shout. The only thing she saw was a black hand drag her friend into a black portal. It closed as Saturn ran to it.
Sobbing, Saturn collapsed into the ground. She felt herself being picked up, turning, she sobbed into her holder's embrace.
Sailor Mars held her friend close. "Its alright, We'll get them back."
Sailor Jupiter stood protectively over Mars and Saturn 'First Mercury, now Venus, my friends please stay safe.'
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Venus fell on a cold cement floor. She looked around her. She saw the only other occupant in that room. "Mercury! Are you alright?"
Mercury looked at her weakly. "Physically, I am."
"Tell me, who is responsible for this."
"Robert."
Ends Chapter 21
A/N Yep, thats it for now I'll update tomorrow, promise!