I'm really sorry to everyone who's been reading this and wanted an update,
I hadn't had the time in these past few months, but now I have the time I
need and can get the story going again. And I promise to not let it go this
long without being udated again
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Dangers of Milocinnia part 3
As we entered the city, the first thing I noticed was a large statue. As I looked around, I couldn't help but feel something wasn't right about this place. The people living here seemed to be almost lifeless, I wnt and asked someone when the city was created, all I got was a blank stare. The man's eyes were dark, almost blood red in color. I went to tell Claude what I had noticed, but he was staring at the statue with a worried look on his face. "Guys, look over at this." He called out to the group. They immediatly gasped when they saw the statue. I had no idea what was wrong, it was well carved and I liked it. "What is it, I see nothing wrong with the statue." I said. My mom turned to me, "Son, do you remember the stories we've told you about our fight to save the universe?". I nodded and she pointed to the inscription, I read it aloud, "For our great leader, Indelico, may he never be forgotten." I thought for a moment, Indelico, THE Indelico? If this is a society that worships him, we are in some serious trouble. But we decide to take our chances and find a place to rest for the night. After many hours of searching, we found the inn. The woman here seemed more vibrant than the person I had spoken to earlier. "Excuse me," said Chisato, "We would like a room for the night, and here is my press card, we're investigating, so could we have a discount on the room?" The woman smiled very eerily at us and chirped, "Why of course you may have a discount on a room, but you must also follow our laws and go listen to tonights sermon on the Great Indelico." We looked at one another for a moment and all at once said, "Ok, we'll go." The woman directed us out to a large building, it was a church and people from all over the city flocked to get inside. "This is not good." Chisato said as she snapped a picture of the church.
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Well what do you all think, again I'm very sorry for the extremly long delay, but as I said, I will not get behind anymore. It'd be nice for everyone to R&R the story, tell me what you think, and ow I could improve my writting, be cause I'm writting for all of you as well as myself. Also feel free to email me with any plot points you would like me to add as it would help me make a good story for my readers.
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Dangers of Milocinnia part 3
As we entered the city, the first thing I noticed was a large statue. As I looked around, I couldn't help but feel something wasn't right about this place. The people living here seemed to be almost lifeless, I wnt and asked someone when the city was created, all I got was a blank stare. The man's eyes were dark, almost blood red in color. I went to tell Claude what I had noticed, but he was staring at the statue with a worried look on his face. "Guys, look over at this." He called out to the group. They immediatly gasped when they saw the statue. I had no idea what was wrong, it was well carved and I liked it. "What is it, I see nothing wrong with the statue." I said. My mom turned to me, "Son, do you remember the stories we've told you about our fight to save the universe?". I nodded and she pointed to the inscription, I read it aloud, "For our great leader, Indelico, may he never be forgotten." I thought for a moment, Indelico, THE Indelico? If this is a society that worships him, we are in some serious trouble. But we decide to take our chances and find a place to rest for the night. After many hours of searching, we found the inn. The woman here seemed more vibrant than the person I had spoken to earlier. "Excuse me," said Chisato, "We would like a room for the night, and here is my press card, we're investigating, so could we have a discount on the room?" The woman smiled very eerily at us and chirped, "Why of course you may have a discount on a room, but you must also follow our laws and go listen to tonights sermon on the Great Indelico." We looked at one another for a moment and all at once said, "Ok, we'll go." The woman directed us out to a large building, it was a church and people from all over the city flocked to get inside. "This is not good." Chisato said as she snapped a picture of the church.
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Well what do you all think, again I'm very sorry for the extremly long delay, but as I said, I will not get behind anymore. It'd be nice for everyone to R&R the story, tell me what you think, and ow I could improve my writting, be cause I'm writting for all of you as well as myself. Also feel free to email me with any plot points you would like me to add as it would help me make a good story for my readers.