Bwahahaha!
Hiya! Epica and Elese here to royally...screw things up. We decided that we didn't get to have enough fun in the original chapter 17, and the direction that it went cut our fun short, so, we edited a few things...okay, a lot of things. We're taking over this story, so enjoy!
By the way, if you caught the original, let's just say you got a preview of some things to come, and you'd better not say anything! But don't worry, after this chapter, a lot of the other stuff is going to be altered.
Lemme start this chapter off by giving a huge thanks to Burned Vamp (in Alaska) and YUE'S LOVER! They responded in detail to my request for help. Burned actually wrote part of the first section of the last chapter. Thanks for taking the time, you guys, and if I forgot anyone else, LET ME KNOW! My net is down, so I can't check all my stuff.
Also...I didn't mean to leave it as a cliffhanger. I mean I didn't even notice it. (heehee) I mean...yeah...and such.
By the way, I did NOT have writers block. (yet) You guys HAVE TO READ MY NOTES. My updates are taking so long because my phone company is screwing with us, and redoing the line. Which means, they have to dig, and I don't get any service for a couple of weeks.
I'm really sorry that I've been slack on this update. I know you're probably pissed. Maybe you've decided to give up on me. I WOULDN'T FORGET ABOUT YOU GUYS! Anyway, I just finished up with all my midterms, and last weekend had 2 shows to do. I'm hopefully going to get my service back very soon, but I'm not going to say when, because I think I'm jinxing it.
ARG! I looked at 14 and realized I put XIIII instead of XIV. Baka onna!
This is a nice long chapter, do be grateful! It moves fast, so try to keep up; if you have questions, ask in the reviews or through email. (Hotaru_no_hope@hotmail.com) And, as always, ENJOY!!!!
I haven't proofed this one either, so if there're any mistakes (like "pacem," it'll have to wait till later.)
"Trunks, think about what you're doing here. You've got a helpless--"
"You're anything but helpless."
She shook her head and continued, "--woman trapped in the stall of a women's restroom. I think it might be illegal."
"Really, Marron, you know as well as I do that there are very few people who would defy the head of Capsule Corporation."
"Trunks, look, if you wanted me scared, I am. I'm sorry. I wish none of this had ever happened."
"That's where we disagree."
"What?"
"I said--"
"I know what you said, damnit," she snapped. "Explain your statement to me. How could you possibly not wish that this hadn't happened?" (Yeah, I know...a double negative. Gimme a break here. Hey, Blu! - You're the only one who reads these.)
"Because then, I would have never met Rayne."
"Kamidamnitdendetohell, Trunks! (Gee, where did I get that one from??) Why can't you just get over her? She's gone."
He slammed his fist against one of the doors, and it hit the ground. "Love is NOT something you just 'get over!'" he yelled.
"What would you know of it?" she asked quietly, sliding down onto the floor (which was, of course, very clean).
Trunks noticed the odd change in her tone. "What," he cleared his throat. "What did you say?"
"I asked you what you would know of love. You've abused women's love your whole life."
He sat in front of her door. "Marron, people change. I fell in love with her--with you."
"No, you just think you did."
He sighed. "I know what love is, Marron."
"Yeah. You know what love is. You were in love, or at least your equivalent of it, for perhaps a month or so, and it's made you an expert."
"MARRON!" he shouted, getting to his feet, and ripping the stall door from its hinges. He glared down at her. "Who are you to tell me what is and is not love, or that my love isn't strong enough? Believe me, if you were still Rayne, we would already be married."
She stood, anger encompassing every movement. She looked up at him indignantly. "Love is like every other emotion--gained and lost on a day to day basis, so don't presume to tell me what might have happened between you and her. You may think you loved Rayne, but the fact of the matter is that she doesn't exist."
"No, but you do." He moved closer to her.
"What does that have to do with anything? I'm not Rayne," she bit out.
"You were. And let me tell you something. I didn't fall in love with Rayne because of she had a pretty face, or different hair."
"Damnit, Trunks. What I'm trying to explain to you is that it doesn't matter . I DON'T LOVE YOU!" 'Anymore,' her mind finished. She ignored it.
He was momentarily stunned, but recovered quickly. He tucked a strand of hair behind her right ear, and spoke softly, "You're right. It doesn't matter. But you're still mine."
She closed her eyes briefly, then opened them to return his intense gaze. "Trunks, please don't do this."
"Why not?"
"Because...because..." she needed to come up with something. "It...it just doesn't make sense."
"I'll have you know it makes perfect senzu beans. (I couldn't resist.) I want Rayne. You are Rayne. I want you, and I'm going to have you."
She backed away, if that were possible. "That--that's crazy."
"No, that's Trunks economics."
"Damnit. I knew we couldn't leave this up to him. He's going to ruin all our hard work."
"Hmm," Elese began thoughtfully, "I think he already did. We might need to move onto phase two of your plan sooner than we thought."
"Yeah. The little Bastard ("the little Tramp..." where is that line from?? You could win your very own Clone no Mirai Trunks) will be writhing in agony when I'm finished with him." She watched the scene, which was still unfolding before them, with mild interest, as Trunks returned the door to its original position, and welded the metal, sealing Marron into the stall once again.
"This could get messy." (and you don't seem to mind) Elese commented, sitting back on her hand dryer.
Epica: hehheh. Think we shortened that too much?
Elese: Nahhh.
Epica: Good. I wouldn't want anyone to go insane and come after Shadow.
Elese: Yeah. *looks at you* Don't forget...this story doesn't exist without her.
TO THE REVIEWERS:
Cim - I thought you had left me! Have to say I haven't heard from you in a while. As for your request...Hmm, Trunks!
*Mirai Trunks comes up to Shadow* What??
Shadow: What's the going rate for a Clone no Mirai?? JUST KIDDING, Cim. Let's see, can you figure out the "little tramp" thing?? I mean SSJ is in the Weird Club, and as a member of the BB, I have to keep peace. Hmm, there must be something you can do. I mean, I can't just go around giving out copies of my man, can I?? THANKS, for reviewing!
leelee - That idea for Trunks was...well, harsh. I'd hate to get on YOUR bad side. Long reviews always welcome. Every time I read your review for 16, I crack up. I can just see Marron going SSJ and Trunks mumbling, "Holy Shiznit!" THANKS!
Heather - Incredible. Damn, you guys just make my head grow larger and larger! Really, I couldn't think of anything to write. *hersheys* I mean seriously. Did I write this whole thing in gibberish??
Blueydmnstr - Oh how you've waited so patiently for your Saiyans. And here they are. *Shoves them toward you* ENJOY! I knew you'd love reviews. They always brighten my day...unless there's a bad one. But then, you just get your brother in-law to give you another virus code, and make their monitor go hay-wire. *grins and laughs evilly* Excellent, ne?? Well, how's this for excellent...I'll not only give you a night with those boys, but you can hang on to them until I update SI again. Oh, and as always, THANKS!
Lily - HAHAHAHAHA!!!! THANKS!
flow-sista - (Met Marmalad down in old Moulin Rouge...) No...I would never wanna keep someone in suspense. *hersheys again*
SSJ Tokya - Hmm, there's an idea. Oh Mirai...
YUE'S LOVER - You're most welcome, and THANK YOU! I'm glad it lived up to your expectations.
Pink Rabbit - A..peice...of...paper?? GET BACK HERE! A PEICE OF PAPER!!!! I'll show you some action!!!! *continues to chase after Pink Rabbit*
Legolas Luver - *shutters* Scary...just scary. Your reviews are always...entertaining, interesting,...insulting. But, you're my chica, so keep...up...the good...work? Yeah, whatever.
Burned Vamp - Yes, the "developments" I have found to be rather,,,interesting. You wouldn't really hurt your old friend Shadow, would you?? I mean then, I couldn't finish SI. *waves insanely* HEY GOHAN!!!! THANKS!!!!
mary - THANK YOU!
leona/Marron Briefs - Sorry it took so long, chick! Glad I have your attention! Hope you enjoyed!
Marron Chestnut - Demanding, aren't we. Hehheh. Indescribibly great?? *beams* THANKS!
LIZZIE - Sorry! Hope you enjoyed this one, and THANKS!
Has someone ever been asked to describe you in one word, and that one word was WEIRD?? No?? Well, let's face it, you've got to be pretty weird if you're reading this story, and perhaps even weirder if you're addicted.
So, now that you have unleashed your deep, dark, and not-too-well hidden secret, how's about joining a club for people much like yourself, where we celebrate our abnormality??
Copy this address - http://www.anzwers.org/free/burnedvamp/ - and paste it into your little bar up there, and hit the go button, then scroll down, and click on the appropriate link. "Weird Club." Check it out, and leave a message if you likes.
BRAND-SPANKIN' NEW story comin' out tomorrow, so you better check it out! I mean, please feel free to read it. :o)
Trunks, start the grill. I'm in the mood for a barbecue.
Mirai Trunks: Briefs style??
Shadow: Sounds fun to me. Pop quiz, hot shot, what is a Briefs-Style barbecue?? (Hint - 6)