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Some of you told me to be more descriptive, and I want to thank you guys,
you were right! It was a little confusing, and I think I know what to do.
Thanks to all who reviewed!
Ok, yeah, I know I haven't gotten ten reviews yet, but those three reviews
really told me what was wrong and I've come up with a couple more ideas,
and I couldn't wait! So here's the next chapter.
Last time we saw Goten being threatened by some creep and Trunk's getting all the kid's sick on the merry-go-round thingy.
Little Adventures Chapter two
"Wait, Larry, he's a kid. He might not have money." Said another kid with Larry. Larry turned to Chris. "Shut up! If I say I want money, I'll get it! Dummy, I always get what I want! If he don't have it today, I'll get it tomorrow, doubled!" Larry turned to Goten. "You got that?!" Goten was gone. "Rrrrrr, where'd he go?!" Larry and Chris quickly looked around. By now a lot of the people around them were observing and whispering to one another.
"Up here, stupid!" Goten yelled, slamming down a kick on to Larry's head, not hard enough to do anything serious, but so much it hurt a lot. Larry fell over, unconscious. Chris took one look at Larry, and bolted. Trunks ran over. "Goten, what was that all about?" Trunk's questioned. "A guy was threatening me, so I defended myself." Goten explained. Trunks took a look at Larry unconscious on the ground and said, "Goten! You didn't have to bust his head open!" "I didn't! I just knocked him out!" Goten yelled. The people around them started to get back to what they were doing before. "Well, I guess we better get outa here before he wakes. He's gonna be pretty PO'ed when he wakes. Let's go, he's getting up!" Larry opened his eyes so they were just a slit, then he saw Goten and Trunks and his eye's were as wide as tennis balls. Trunk's started to run, and Goten followed. Goten took a look back, and ran into something and made it collapse. It turned out to be Trunks. "Trunks, why'd ya stop?" questioned Goten. "M-mom's here." Trunks stammered. Bulma was searching for them, looking ready to kill. I'm going to murder those kids! "I thought you asked your mom to come here." Said a nervous Goten. "Um, actually, I told her, but I think she didn't hear." Trunks said, stumbling over his words. Then Vegeta appeared. "There's the little brat, right over there!" Vegeta said roughly. It took no less than a split second to pin-point where his son and his and were. Bulma stalked over to Trunks. "Why-Did-You-Leave-Without-Telling me?" She asked through clenched teeth. "I tried to tell you, but you were too absorbed in your work." Trunks said, looking down at his feet. "Goten will not be able to come over any more if you two keep making trouble." Vegeta stood by, enjoying this little conversation and smiling to himself. She was so cute when she was mad, in a scary way. Bulma suddenly started sobbing uncontrollable tears. Vegeta stopped smiling. Oh God, not now! "Trunks, I was so worried! Don't ever do that again, I was worried sick! I'm so glad you're safe." She gave Trunks a hug, digging her nails into Trunks. He didn't mind; he was actually used to it. (She usually did this after Vegeta and him were training roughly, being glad the guy hadn't killed her only son) Goten tried to amuse himself with a butterfly fluttering by, but got rather bored of it. Bulma suddenly got up and hugged Vegeta. "Thanks so much for finding him. I would have been such a nervous wreck." Vegeta blushed furiously; he didn't like her to be affectionate in public. He whispered "Can you hug me later?"
"Sorry. Goten, Trunks, get in the car; I have to take Goten home soon." Bulma released Vegeta reluctantly, and then headed towards the car. Vegeta followed, still a little red in the face. "Goten, I hope you had fun. How about asking your mom if Trunks can stay over tomorrow? Better yet, a sleep over?" Goten looked up, sorted out the words, realized what she meant, and then practically screamed, "Yeah! I'm sure Mom'll let him stay!" Then the boys started talking excitedly about what they would do that night, planning a little mischief.
ChiChi heard the car pulling up. Finally! I was wondering where the little ball of energy was. She put down her spatula; she could leave the food for five minutes. "Hey ChiChi!" Bulma yelled. "Oh hey, come in!" ChiChi yelled back "Hey mo-" DOOMPH! "GOTEN?! Are you all right?!" Bulma and ChiChi screamed Goten had landed flat on his face. "Goten (snicker) what happened?" asked Trunks. Goten looked up with that Son grin. "I tripped over the seat belt!" Everyone snickered silently, except Vegeta. So the kid tripped, what's the big deal? Everyone filed into the spotless house, the little boys running up to Goten's room with a sly grin on their faces.
K, what do you guys think? I want to know if you like it. Give me any suggestions if you think it sucks. I've already got the next chapter in my mind. ^_^ I'll usually have the next chapter of a story in two more days, ok? I don't have much home work, so I got's plenty of free time! ~_^
Last time we saw Goten being threatened by some creep and Trunk's getting all the kid's sick on the merry-go-round thingy.
Little Adventures Chapter two
"Wait, Larry, he's a kid. He might not have money." Said another kid with Larry. Larry turned to Chris. "Shut up! If I say I want money, I'll get it! Dummy, I always get what I want! If he don't have it today, I'll get it tomorrow, doubled!" Larry turned to Goten. "You got that?!" Goten was gone. "Rrrrrr, where'd he go?!" Larry and Chris quickly looked around. By now a lot of the people around them were observing and whispering to one another.
"Up here, stupid!" Goten yelled, slamming down a kick on to Larry's head, not hard enough to do anything serious, but so much it hurt a lot. Larry fell over, unconscious. Chris took one look at Larry, and bolted. Trunks ran over. "Goten, what was that all about?" Trunk's questioned. "A guy was threatening me, so I defended myself." Goten explained. Trunks took a look at Larry unconscious on the ground and said, "Goten! You didn't have to bust his head open!" "I didn't! I just knocked him out!" Goten yelled. The people around them started to get back to what they were doing before. "Well, I guess we better get outa here before he wakes. He's gonna be pretty PO'ed when he wakes. Let's go, he's getting up!" Larry opened his eyes so they were just a slit, then he saw Goten and Trunks and his eye's were as wide as tennis balls. Trunk's started to run, and Goten followed. Goten took a look back, and ran into something and made it collapse. It turned out to be Trunks. "Trunks, why'd ya stop?" questioned Goten. "M-mom's here." Trunks stammered. Bulma was searching for them, looking ready to kill. I'm going to murder those kids! "I thought you asked your mom to come here." Said a nervous Goten. "Um, actually, I told her, but I think she didn't hear." Trunks said, stumbling over his words. Then Vegeta appeared. "There's the little brat, right over there!" Vegeta said roughly. It took no less than a split second to pin-point where his son and his and were. Bulma stalked over to Trunks. "Why-Did-You-Leave-Without-Telling me?" She asked through clenched teeth. "I tried to tell you, but you were too absorbed in your work." Trunks said, looking down at his feet. "Goten will not be able to come over any more if you two keep making trouble." Vegeta stood by, enjoying this little conversation and smiling to himself. She was so cute when she was mad, in a scary way. Bulma suddenly started sobbing uncontrollable tears. Vegeta stopped smiling. Oh God, not now! "Trunks, I was so worried! Don't ever do that again, I was worried sick! I'm so glad you're safe." She gave Trunks a hug, digging her nails into Trunks. He didn't mind; he was actually used to it. (She usually did this after Vegeta and him were training roughly, being glad the guy hadn't killed her only son) Goten tried to amuse himself with a butterfly fluttering by, but got rather bored of it. Bulma suddenly got up and hugged Vegeta. "Thanks so much for finding him. I would have been such a nervous wreck." Vegeta blushed furiously; he didn't like her to be affectionate in public. He whispered "Can you hug me later?"
"Sorry. Goten, Trunks, get in the car; I have to take Goten home soon." Bulma released Vegeta reluctantly, and then headed towards the car. Vegeta followed, still a little red in the face. "Goten, I hope you had fun. How about asking your mom if Trunks can stay over tomorrow? Better yet, a sleep over?" Goten looked up, sorted out the words, realized what she meant, and then practically screamed, "Yeah! I'm sure Mom'll let him stay!" Then the boys started talking excitedly about what they would do that night, planning a little mischief.
ChiChi heard the car pulling up. Finally! I was wondering where the little ball of energy was. She put down her spatula; she could leave the food for five minutes. "Hey ChiChi!" Bulma yelled. "Oh hey, come in!" ChiChi yelled back "Hey mo-" DOOMPH! "GOTEN?! Are you all right?!" Bulma and ChiChi screamed Goten had landed flat on his face. "Goten (snicker) what happened?" asked Trunks. Goten looked up with that Son grin. "I tripped over the seat belt!" Everyone snickered silently, except Vegeta. So the kid tripped, what's the big deal? Everyone filed into the spotless house, the little boys running up to Goten's room with a sly grin on their faces.
K, what do you guys think? I want to know if you like it. Give me any suggestions if you think it sucks. I've already got the next chapter in my mind. ^_^ I'll usually have the next chapter of a story in two more days, ok? I don't have much home work, so I got's plenty of free time! ~_^