Hello again! Hope you had a good week, hopefully this story will make it a
little better!
Got lots of reviews, so lotsa thankyou's to hand out, so here we go!
Alicia: uhh. I thought I made it pretty clear that they were gay, but I'm sorry to make ya angry.. It says so in da summary, the first chapter opens with "I don't know what made him love me" and thirdly, It's five years after the rapy thingy.... but all the power to ya!
Asaroth69: nope, not fluent, just a little habit I have to stuff random words in whenever I can. Da? (not Russian, either) ^_^ Just a lousy American turned Aussie.
Lone Wolf: Ya I've only been on one, and it leaked the whole time and the pool was disgusting.. But HEY this is MY dream ship so it can be however I want it to be!
Annie Maxwell: ya it was too short, sorry 'bout that but I was tired. I have two styles; the really short ones with too many chapters, and the really long ones with like a million words and 1 chapter. I write whichever one I want, but if you like, I'll write a longer one.
Chara: if you need the self-confidence, of course I luv u! I luv nebody who reviews my fic! I'll write a little more in this one, then I'll start a new one, which will be COMPLETELY different.. Although it probably will have 1X2 in it too... But it will be different!!!......right?
CrimsonWings: Hey welcome back! Srry bout your computer... I didn't tell you that Bob is a virus ^_^ but then he sent me a virus to read things like lemons, so it got weird after that, so I let him stay. Hope you like my pathetic attempt at a lemon!
I think that's all.. Nebody I missed! ::somebody raises hand:: oh whatever, I never liked you anyways. On with the show!
Update: this is my crappy try at a lemon, but you gotta start somewhere right? LAST MINUTE WARNING: LEMON LEMON LEMON 1x2 LEMON! THIS MEANS TWO BOYS HAVING SEX, OKAY? DO NOT READ IF YOU DO NOT WANT TO , BUT PLZ DON'T COMPLAIN TO ME ABOUT HOW I DIDN'T WARN YOU!!!! Thank you
Chapter 8 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"I got you right where I want you." He said, whispering in my ear. Funny thing was, this wasn't exactly our first time at it, but I still melted when he said that. Instead, I turned around and mock-glared at him. "How dare you! I'm not that kinda guy!" He just rolled his eyes at me and said "Yeah, right." I almost giggled at that. Heero, being sarcastic? Just not something you usually thought would happen. Once again, though, I controlled myself and just said "I'm not doing anything until we get out of the pool." "well, then, how will we get out of the pool if you aren't going to move?" Damn him and his stupid logic. I turned around and faced my back to him. "Oh, Duo?" He said. "yes??" I answered, a little irritably. "You moved." Damn him again.
I looked over at him and stuck my tongue out insolently. "Well too bad, I'm still not coming out." "Well, isn't that what I wanted you to not do?" "well, yes but-" I never got to finish my sentence because right then, Heero grabbed my mouth up in a kiss. I just sat there dumbly for a few seconds, before my instincts prevailed and I started pressing back. He was getting better at this. I remembered the first time he had tried this with me, what a klutz. But I stuck with him, mostly 'cuz he was sooo damn hot and sooo damn.. Well so damn Heero. But man, when you stick your tongue into someone's eye it makes it a little hard. Finally I couldn't control it anymore and I started laughing into Heero's mouth. He broke off immediately. He looked apologetic as he muttered "What's so funny?" I felt a wave of loss and then pity as I saw the hot bishonen looking so down. "oh, just thinking about how much better you are then you were a year ago." At this he smiled again "oh you haven't seen anything yet."
He was right. Within minutes, I found myself pressed up against the shallow end of the crystal-blue pool, feeling for all the world like a mermaid.er merman. This time, I closed my lips around his first, then shoved my small pink tongue into the mouth of the other. It traced lines and contours of the roof of Heero's sweet-tasting mouth, like it had done countless times before. I knew a spot at the top left corner of hit mouth that would make him like putty in my hands, so I found it and licked. He pushed forward into me, and I could tell he was already very excited about this game. Not to say I wasn't, of course. My shorts were loose enough to hide it, but Heero, in his Spandex (swear he NEVER takes that off.) was a little obvious. I trailed my lips up to his ear, nibbling on his earlobe while muttering "Excited, are we?" Before I realized I must have seemed rather excited myself, because my voice was more husky then an ear of corn (1) I released my hold on his ear as I saw him looking deep into my eyes. They had always fascinated him, and he proved that once again when he said "Your eyes are so beautiful, I could drown in them." This was the Heero who tried to kill me once, and my gundam too. "Well, I think your neck is beautiful." I said, moving down to lick the whole bronze surface. Groaning with pleasure, he moved his head open for wider access. Not a bright idea. I found a good spot, and bit down, marking him as mine. His eyes snapped open. Obviously he was not about to take that. Quickly he divested me of my red shirt, and took ahold of one nipple. I was thrown into a world of ecstasy as he twirled his tongue around skillfully, applying a bit of suction. I was feeling a growing need to see that tongue go a little lower, to regions still covered. I pushed my hands into his thick locks of chestnut hair, pulling them every which way in my feelings of intense pleasure. I was in a white daze, where all I could feel was his tongue around my nipple. When he withdrew, I saw we had somehow gotten our selves back onto the cement of the pool edge, and onto Solo's blanket. "Seems you got me out of the water after all." "Hnn.. Oh well I guess I lose some, at least I still have what I want." He muttered back, turning his hot mouth onto my abdomen. Muscles rippled and twitched underneath his tongue's slow movement to what seemed to be nowhere. My hands had drifted out of his hair and was now working down to the Spandex, which fit him like a skin and was now pulled quite tight, I noticed. Before he could react, I stripped him of his shorts, leaving him naked on top of me. However, he pretended not to notice and kept his random path around my chest and stomach. This was driving me crazy! "Heero.." I whimpered, trying to get him to go farther down, just a bit farther. "hmm?" He hummed back, pressing his lips to the other nipple, creating a healthy vibrating. "Please.." "Please what?" He said, smiling mischievously. I tried to ignore how weird it looked to see a mischievious smile on him, but I couldn't get past the pleasure. "Please give me." "what?" I pushed his head down onto my shorts, which he quickly took off. Then he feigned confusion. "What do you want me to do?" Damn him. "I think you'll have to show me." He said. Okay, I'll show you, I thought to myself, and, violet eyes gleaming, I flipped him over before he could get another word out and swallowed his whole length in one gulp. Foreplay was over, I decided. Bobbing my head up and down, I started up a quick rhythm while Heero found his hands into my hair, like I had. Unsnapping the band, he shook free my hair, lock by lock, so that it fell around us and covered most of us like a curtain. Then he lost all coherent sounds and movements as he moaned and his head reeled at my menstruations. My hands reached up and tweaked at both of his nipples at random patterns while my tongue darted everywhere it could on Heero's cock. Then I decided to be an ass. Pulling back immediately, I reached up to him and whispered "That's what I want you to give me." He played along, pushing me back down and weaving his tongue on a beeline over my taught abdomen, but this time he ended up at my throbbing need. Positioning himself about an inch over my cock, he whispered "Now what?" The hot breath of air rushed over my length and I hissed. He was deciding to make this difficult too. I took a hold of his head and thrust up, but all I got was the touch of his lips. "oh I see, I kiss it now." He said, and he gave it a chaste kiss, which was strangely erotic. "mm. more." I muttered, feeling along his back as frustration fought with agony. "I like this date though, so maybe I'll give him a little tongue too." He said, and a second later, I was back in my white fuzzy world. The same kiss he had given me earlier was now being preformed on my wanting erection. It only covered the head though, and my small thrusts were in vain. I moaned loudly as he suddenly ran up the underneath of my length, from tip to base, striking all kinds of pleasure bells. I was lost. I couldn't go back if I wanted to. Not that I did. His tongue was skilled, and I couldn't help but throw my head back and scream loudly, pushing my cock farther into his awaiting warm cavern. It felt so good, felt so right- And then I was left out in the cold. I felt the warm Caribbean air blowing on me, but couldn't feel Heero anywhere. When I got around to snapping my eyes open, I saw him kneeling with a tube of lube (2) held in his hand. "well, I've given you what you want." He said. He knew he hadn't, but still I said "What do you... want?" "You." He spread a generous amount of lube on his length, something I wanted to do, but this time I'd let him go. Then he put more on his fingers, leaning over me again, and planted a kiss on my slightly bruised mouth, while the first one of his fingers slipped behind me and pushed its way into me. I grunted a bit, getting used to the feel, then waited as a felt the second finger slip in, scissoring to widen me up. Still I was waiting. When the third came in, a huge crash of stars burst into my mind as he hit The Spot. Seeing my obvious pleasure, he continued the treatment a few more times, hitting it again and again. But, sensing I was too close to release, he pulled out, leaving me cold again. Soon I felt the humongous length push at my entrance, and I gladly accepted him in. I felt whole, complete. But he wasn't moving. I realized with a groan that he was giving me time to adjust. I pushed back, strongly, and he set up an easy rhythm, slightly changing the angle each time until he hit my spot. Then he struck the same place until I felt my rock-hard member aching for release. Right on cue, his calloused hands wrapped around it, squeezing it softly and then harder, until I was on the edge of a cliff of white bliss. I moaned again and again, and he got faster and faster, his hands working at an off-beat to the pounding length. Finally, I gave a last push and fell of the cliff, spraying all over my self's and Heero's chest. Feeling my muscles tighten, Heero was sent over the edge too, ejaculating deep inside me. He pushed in a couple more times, then collapsed on top of me, in total exhaustion. We lay there for quite a few minutes before I leaned up and said "So where'd Solo go?" "He said we could use a little alone time." "How much alone time?" "Until tomorrow morning." He said, then started to get up, but I pulled him back down. "Where are you going?" "To clean myself off." "no you're not." "why?" I smiled, deciding to let Shinigami out this time "cuz I've got you right where I want you."
OWARI
I know, really corny, but I couldn't resist.. Hee hee it rhymes! ^_^
Anyways, that's the end of that tale! How'd you like it? Should I write a new one? Do I need help with my lemon? Tell me now or forever hold your peace!! ::wields a scythe:: I mean it.
Got lots of reviews, so lotsa thankyou's to hand out, so here we go!
Alicia: uhh. I thought I made it pretty clear that they were gay, but I'm sorry to make ya angry.. It says so in da summary, the first chapter opens with "I don't know what made him love me" and thirdly, It's five years after the rapy thingy.... but all the power to ya!
Asaroth69: nope, not fluent, just a little habit I have to stuff random words in whenever I can. Da? (not Russian, either) ^_^ Just a lousy American turned Aussie.
Lone Wolf: Ya I've only been on one, and it leaked the whole time and the pool was disgusting.. But HEY this is MY dream ship so it can be however I want it to be!
Annie Maxwell: ya it was too short, sorry 'bout that but I was tired. I have two styles; the really short ones with too many chapters, and the really long ones with like a million words and 1 chapter. I write whichever one I want, but if you like, I'll write a longer one.
Chara: if you need the self-confidence, of course I luv u! I luv nebody who reviews my fic! I'll write a little more in this one, then I'll start a new one, which will be COMPLETELY different.. Although it probably will have 1X2 in it too... But it will be different!!!......right?
CrimsonWings: Hey welcome back! Srry bout your computer... I didn't tell you that Bob is a virus ^_^ but then he sent me a virus to read things like lemons, so it got weird after that, so I let him stay. Hope you like my pathetic attempt at a lemon!
I think that's all.. Nebody I missed! ::somebody raises hand:: oh whatever, I never liked you anyways. On with the show!
Update: this is my crappy try at a lemon, but you gotta start somewhere right? LAST MINUTE WARNING: LEMON LEMON LEMON 1x2 LEMON! THIS MEANS TWO BOYS HAVING SEX, OKAY? DO NOT READ IF YOU DO NOT WANT TO , BUT PLZ DON'T COMPLAIN TO ME ABOUT HOW I DIDN'T WARN YOU!!!! Thank you
Chapter 8 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"I got you right where I want you." He said, whispering in my ear. Funny thing was, this wasn't exactly our first time at it, but I still melted when he said that. Instead, I turned around and mock-glared at him. "How dare you! I'm not that kinda guy!" He just rolled his eyes at me and said "Yeah, right." I almost giggled at that. Heero, being sarcastic? Just not something you usually thought would happen. Once again, though, I controlled myself and just said "I'm not doing anything until we get out of the pool." "well, then, how will we get out of the pool if you aren't going to move?" Damn him and his stupid logic. I turned around and faced my back to him. "Oh, Duo?" He said. "yes??" I answered, a little irritably. "You moved." Damn him again.
I looked over at him and stuck my tongue out insolently. "Well too bad, I'm still not coming out." "Well, isn't that what I wanted you to not do?" "well, yes but-" I never got to finish my sentence because right then, Heero grabbed my mouth up in a kiss. I just sat there dumbly for a few seconds, before my instincts prevailed and I started pressing back. He was getting better at this. I remembered the first time he had tried this with me, what a klutz. But I stuck with him, mostly 'cuz he was sooo damn hot and sooo damn.. Well so damn Heero. But man, when you stick your tongue into someone's eye it makes it a little hard. Finally I couldn't control it anymore and I started laughing into Heero's mouth. He broke off immediately. He looked apologetic as he muttered "What's so funny?" I felt a wave of loss and then pity as I saw the hot bishonen looking so down. "oh, just thinking about how much better you are then you were a year ago." At this he smiled again "oh you haven't seen anything yet."
He was right. Within minutes, I found myself pressed up against the shallow end of the crystal-blue pool, feeling for all the world like a mermaid.er merman. This time, I closed my lips around his first, then shoved my small pink tongue into the mouth of the other. It traced lines and contours of the roof of Heero's sweet-tasting mouth, like it had done countless times before. I knew a spot at the top left corner of hit mouth that would make him like putty in my hands, so I found it and licked. He pushed forward into me, and I could tell he was already very excited about this game. Not to say I wasn't, of course. My shorts were loose enough to hide it, but Heero, in his Spandex (swear he NEVER takes that off.) was a little obvious. I trailed my lips up to his ear, nibbling on his earlobe while muttering "Excited, are we?" Before I realized I must have seemed rather excited myself, because my voice was more husky then an ear of corn (1) I released my hold on his ear as I saw him looking deep into my eyes. They had always fascinated him, and he proved that once again when he said "Your eyes are so beautiful, I could drown in them." This was the Heero who tried to kill me once, and my gundam too. "Well, I think your neck is beautiful." I said, moving down to lick the whole bronze surface. Groaning with pleasure, he moved his head open for wider access. Not a bright idea. I found a good spot, and bit down, marking him as mine. His eyes snapped open. Obviously he was not about to take that. Quickly he divested me of my red shirt, and took ahold of one nipple. I was thrown into a world of ecstasy as he twirled his tongue around skillfully, applying a bit of suction. I was feeling a growing need to see that tongue go a little lower, to regions still covered. I pushed my hands into his thick locks of chestnut hair, pulling them every which way in my feelings of intense pleasure. I was in a white daze, where all I could feel was his tongue around my nipple. When he withdrew, I saw we had somehow gotten our selves back onto the cement of the pool edge, and onto Solo's blanket. "Seems you got me out of the water after all." "Hnn.. Oh well I guess I lose some, at least I still have what I want." He muttered back, turning his hot mouth onto my abdomen. Muscles rippled and twitched underneath his tongue's slow movement to what seemed to be nowhere. My hands had drifted out of his hair and was now working down to the Spandex, which fit him like a skin and was now pulled quite tight, I noticed. Before he could react, I stripped him of his shorts, leaving him naked on top of me. However, he pretended not to notice and kept his random path around my chest and stomach. This was driving me crazy! "Heero.." I whimpered, trying to get him to go farther down, just a bit farther. "hmm?" He hummed back, pressing his lips to the other nipple, creating a healthy vibrating. "Please.." "Please what?" He said, smiling mischievously. I tried to ignore how weird it looked to see a mischievious smile on him, but I couldn't get past the pleasure. "Please give me." "what?" I pushed his head down onto my shorts, which he quickly took off. Then he feigned confusion. "What do you want me to do?" Damn him. "I think you'll have to show me." He said. Okay, I'll show you, I thought to myself, and, violet eyes gleaming, I flipped him over before he could get another word out and swallowed his whole length in one gulp. Foreplay was over, I decided. Bobbing my head up and down, I started up a quick rhythm while Heero found his hands into my hair, like I had. Unsnapping the band, he shook free my hair, lock by lock, so that it fell around us and covered most of us like a curtain. Then he lost all coherent sounds and movements as he moaned and his head reeled at my menstruations. My hands reached up and tweaked at both of his nipples at random patterns while my tongue darted everywhere it could on Heero's cock. Then I decided to be an ass. Pulling back immediately, I reached up to him and whispered "That's what I want you to give me." He played along, pushing me back down and weaving his tongue on a beeline over my taught abdomen, but this time he ended up at my throbbing need. Positioning himself about an inch over my cock, he whispered "Now what?" The hot breath of air rushed over my length and I hissed. He was deciding to make this difficult too. I took a hold of his head and thrust up, but all I got was the touch of his lips. "oh I see, I kiss it now." He said, and he gave it a chaste kiss, which was strangely erotic. "mm. more." I muttered, feeling along his back as frustration fought with agony. "I like this date though, so maybe I'll give him a little tongue too." He said, and a second later, I was back in my white fuzzy world. The same kiss he had given me earlier was now being preformed on my wanting erection. It only covered the head though, and my small thrusts were in vain. I moaned loudly as he suddenly ran up the underneath of my length, from tip to base, striking all kinds of pleasure bells. I was lost. I couldn't go back if I wanted to. Not that I did. His tongue was skilled, and I couldn't help but throw my head back and scream loudly, pushing my cock farther into his awaiting warm cavern. It felt so good, felt so right- And then I was left out in the cold. I felt the warm Caribbean air blowing on me, but couldn't feel Heero anywhere. When I got around to snapping my eyes open, I saw him kneeling with a tube of lube (2) held in his hand. "well, I've given you what you want." He said. He knew he hadn't, but still I said "What do you... want?" "You." He spread a generous amount of lube on his length, something I wanted to do, but this time I'd let him go. Then he put more on his fingers, leaning over me again, and planted a kiss on my slightly bruised mouth, while the first one of his fingers slipped behind me and pushed its way into me. I grunted a bit, getting used to the feel, then waited as a felt the second finger slip in, scissoring to widen me up. Still I was waiting. When the third came in, a huge crash of stars burst into my mind as he hit The Spot. Seeing my obvious pleasure, he continued the treatment a few more times, hitting it again and again. But, sensing I was too close to release, he pulled out, leaving me cold again. Soon I felt the humongous length push at my entrance, and I gladly accepted him in. I felt whole, complete. But he wasn't moving. I realized with a groan that he was giving me time to adjust. I pushed back, strongly, and he set up an easy rhythm, slightly changing the angle each time until he hit my spot. Then he struck the same place until I felt my rock-hard member aching for release. Right on cue, his calloused hands wrapped around it, squeezing it softly and then harder, until I was on the edge of a cliff of white bliss. I moaned again and again, and he got faster and faster, his hands working at an off-beat to the pounding length. Finally, I gave a last push and fell of the cliff, spraying all over my self's and Heero's chest. Feeling my muscles tighten, Heero was sent over the edge too, ejaculating deep inside me. He pushed in a couple more times, then collapsed on top of me, in total exhaustion. We lay there for quite a few minutes before I leaned up and said "So where'd Solo go?" "He said we could use a little alone time." "How much alone time?" "Until tomorrow morning." He said, then started to get up, but I pulled him back down. "Where are you going?" "To clean myself off." "no you're not." "why?" I smiled, deciding to let Shinigami out this time "cuz I've got you right where I want you."
OWARI
I know, really corny, but I couldn't resist.. Hee hee it rhymes! ^_^
Anyways, that's the end of that tale! How'd you like it? Should I write a new one? Do I need help with my lemon? Tell me now or forever hold your peace!! ::wields a scythe:: I mean it.