Hmm, Ok I'm gonna thank everyone, but first there's some news that you guys aren't gonna be thrilled with, but hey. Ben read this chapter when it wasn't finished yet, and he said it was good. So maybe you guys will like it also. Anyways, here it is:
Thanks to a review by Twinkle, she reminded me that non-fictional characters aren't allowed. I forgot about that, and I went back and re-read the rules. So I will NOT have Haldir get revenge on PJ. However, Haldir will still get revenge, on the Uruk-hai and the such. He might get revenge on Saruman for sending out Uruk-hai, but I'm not sure about that. This story is still in the process. The majority did say they want revenge on Haldir instead of a vampire story, and I am sorry that that won't happen. However, it's not going to be a vampire story (at least I don't consider it as one). So if you guys are mad at me, I understand. But I don't want this story getting kicked out, and I also dont' want PJ to sue me. (Even though I honostly don't think so...He's way too busy, and I can't imagine him reading lotr fanfics, but that's just me. Anyways....)
So again, I'm sorry, here's the thank-you's. Or you could just find ur name, and then go and read the story.
L-thanks for your request.
EdgesGothDiva-Whoah! That's one of my motto's : Haldir Lives! Coolness! Yes, Justice shall be served, even if it is in a different way.
saera-yes, I agree that the original plot will be great, but it's stated above why. I'm sorry, but he'll still get revenge.
Anon-Hmm..that's an interesting thought. But I beleive that if I do go that way, it won't work. First of all, I have no idea how to even start that! But I think you should register, and write a story like that. I think it'll be great. Besides, I always like reading other people's works instead of mine.
verry happy about this fic-Yes! I'm upset that he died also. I was thinking..."what?!?!?!" But yes, Haldir will still live in this.
twinkle-Thank you so much for reminding me! I always think it's weird that anonymous reviewers are the ones reviewing telling authors about the rules. *shrugs* whatever. It's helpful. Thanks, again.
blueyesfaerie-Thank you! I'm glad you think it's good even if the intro was short. Well, I can't do both, but I hope that you'll like what I wrote.
Lord Angelus-Yes, I want Haldir to live as well. I always liked him in the first book, but I don't doubt that you're a bigger fan than I am.
Haldir Fan- Yes, your guess was right. Hmm, you seem like you really want Haldir get revenge on PJ. Again, I'm sorry. (I have to stop saying that)
romeninque-Yes, Haldir will kick some bum... A lot of bum...scroll down and you'll see what I mean.
Urylia-Thanks for the compliment. Yes, I know it's short. But this one is longer!!!!! And yes, I will continue this story, absolutely.
asia-Yes, I don't want to get sued either. I love PJ b/c he did the films, but I hate him b/c he screwed the books around. Grr...
Lanfear-Yes, I can't understand PJ's decisions.
Haldir's Girl-Yes! He will seek revenge. I didn't cry in the movie, but I cried in the book. But nooooo PJ has to put that part in ROTK...Grr..
Well, yes. Again, I hope you guys like my decision of writing the story, even if it isn't what you want. And again, I thank you guys a bunches for reviewing. Enjoy!!!!!!!
Bodies of elves and men lay all over Helm's Deep. There were Uruk-hai bodies lying around as well - they were the reason the place was stinking up.
Among them lay Haldir, elf of Lothlorien. He had taken a nasty blow to the head, sending him to his death. His last glance was of Aragorn, who quickly came to him the second he saw Haldir get injured.
The noble elf lay, left to rot among the dead. The rain was pouring hard, but no matter what, the blood still didn't wash away from the back of his head.
Battle had only just commenced. More Uruk-hai climbed up Helm's Deep with the help of ladders. They marched hastily, stepping on Haldir, as if he were part of the ground. Each time one of the servants of Saruman stepped on the elf's lifeless body, he'd flop around for an instant, like a rag doll.
They continued to swarm around Helm's Deep. Growling, and snarling, as they ran. One Uruk-hai, who was carrying a torch, stepped on Haldir's face as he went by.
He was able to run for about seven feet, until he fell down to his death. To that Uruk-hai, he had no idea what had been the cause of his end. Then again, he had no time to think about it. The other Uruk-hai took no notice of this. They never did. The men and elves took no heed of the dead Uruk-hai, for they wanted them dead. However, it would have been for the wisest if the Uruk-hai did take notice, at least of this one Uruk-hai. For the cause of his death is one that could prove too strong for any of the Uruk-hai to handle.
* * *
Haldir was still lying in the rain, full of dents of the Uruk-hai's feet. Not all Uruk-hai were smart. Some were the biggest lug-heads known to any race of Middle-Earth. One Uruk-hai in particular was exactly one of those. He was carrying his sword and sprinting (his sprinting was what most called power-walking), but he wasn't looking where he was going. Instead he was lookng over to his right, where down below he could see hundreds more Uruk-hai marching in. He was too busy smirking to himself to notice the limp body lying in his way. The left hand of Haldir's was stretched out, and this idiot tripped flat on his face.
His sword (which was held in his left hand), cut the side of Haldir's face (accidently). This particular Uruk-hai had so much excessive armor on, that he couldn't get up on his own. He eventually got up, but not the way he expected. Instead, he was flung up in the air and smashed back down.
"Ugh," growled the Uruk-hai. He turned to see who had done that, but couldn't figure out who. All looked as if they were busy with their own affaires. However, he swore he had seen a dead elf lying there.
'Maybe he wasn't dead,' he thought. He tried to push himself up, but he was quickly pushed back down. Once again, no one noticed this scene. But if they did, they would have seen one Uruk-hai lying helplessly flat on the ground, with an injured elf kneeling on top of him. Haldir had both his hands clasped tightly around the Uruk-hai's neck. He squeezed his hands even tighter. The Uruk-hai began suffocating, coughing up thick black blood in the process. In addition, his eyes were bulging out of their sockets.
Haldir then sprang up in a prancing position on the foul creature's back. Haldir, still clasping onto the neck, front flipped, flippng the Uruk-hai over behind him. He let go once the Uruk-hai was in mid-air.
The Uruk-hai lay dead on his back, covered in his own blood. But that was not enough for the elf. He still had his bow and arrows with him. Two arrows were shot into the lame excuse for a Uruk-hai until Haldir was satisfied and left.
Many pains attacked his leg, and he limped as he walked. It was still pouring hard, creating a mist over the battlefield. An effect of this was that it was hard to see where one was going.
Another Uruk-hai was rushing forward in a hurry. He bumped into Haldir on his way. He thought he could get away, but Haldir refused to allow that. Haldir stayed where he stood, but he outstretched his right arm, grabbed the Uruk-hai, and sent him to the ground. This Uruk-hai was smarter than the last. He knew who had sent him down.
He quickly got back up and came to face Haldir. No pain was shown evident on his body, but he was highly agitated. This Uruk-hai was not used to being overthrown by a creature whom he considered inferior. He prepared to make his first blow. He tried to send his left fist into Haldir's face, but was unsuccessful. Haldir sensed the blow, and immediately caught his fist with his right hand. He then punched the Uruk-hai with his free hand, once again sending him to the ground. All this was done rapidly and calmly.
Although Haldir gave a strong hit, the Uruk-hai was far from defeated. Again he got back up, and tackled Haldir at the waist. Haldir fell backwards with the Uruk-hai ontop of him.
As he fell, Haldir's head hit the ground, the same place where he had taken the blow. Blood spewed forth from the back of his head. Haldir was pinned down by the Uruk-hai, so as the blood spread, it reached to Haldir's ears, and went in.
The Uruk-hai lifted his right arm and prepared to try to punch Haldir successfully. However, this was an opportunity for Haldir. For if the Uruk-hai was only pinning him down with one arm, Haldir wasn't as pinned down as before. So he blocked the Uruk-hai's right arm and pulled his left arm off him. However, when he pulled the left arm, the arm went out of its socket.
The Uruk-hai took no notice of this at first. He didn't even take heed of all the blood gushing out from his body.
Now Haldir only had one arm to take care of. With all his might he pushed the remaining arm, sending the Uruk-hai backwards with so much force that his neck was literally snapped in two. The head came off the body and rolled away. The blood of this Uruk-hai was everywhere, adding to everyone else's. But there were still many Uruk-hai left. Many stepped on the head, resulting in more blood and a flat head.
* * *
Haldir got himself up and moved himself closer to the edge. He was already pissed, and what he was seeing agitated him more. Elves were being defeated and mocked by the Uruk-hai. His eyes were fixed on all this, but he still sensed what happened around him.
A Uruk-hai put a ladder up to the top, and began climbing. However, he could not make it because Haldir had kicked the ladder off. Stupidly, the Uruk-hai still held on all the way, even when it reached the ground. A thud was heard, followed by a serious of cracks. Once the heavy ladder fell on top the Uruk-hai, it shattered, sending splinters into his face, including his eyes.
Because the ladder made full contact with him, the pointy end of one splinter entered straight into his eye. Blood, and many other substances came bursting out. It could hardly be seen on the battlefield, for the place was covered by gore.
Another ladder was placed against the wall, with another climbing Uruk-hai. Instead of pushing the ladder off, Haldir pulled off his opponent, held him above his head, and threw him down below. Other Uruk-hai were knocked down in the process, and elves and men were spared.
Haldir was about to go down the ladder, but other Uruk-hai were taking advantage of it. Just because Haldir wasn't fully alive, he wasn't stupid. He took a nearby shield and skidded on it down the ladder (imagine the Legolas scene with him sliding down. Yeah, you know what I mean!), knocking off Uruk-hai as he went. When he reached the bottom, he was seen by several Uruk-hai, and they swarmed around him. Haldir took the shield and beheaded one of them. Then he took the headless body and whacked a second Uruk-hai with it. That didn't kill him, but only sent him backwards into another Uruk-hai. That Uruk-hai wasn't pleased with the Uruk-hai falling on him, so he killed him.
Althought the circle of Uruk-hai was waning, there were still many left. One grabbed at Haldir from behind, but Haldir only took the shield, stabbed behind him while still facing forwards, and took it back out. Because the edges of the shield were sharp, when Haldir took the shield back, there was a head attached to two edges.
Haldir threw the shield, including the head, at one Uruk-hai. That sent him to the ground. So Haldir took that Uruk-hai's sword and stabbed right at the heart. The Uruk-hai stopped all his movement, and was left there with his eyes staring emptily at where Haldir had stood.
Uruk-hai continued rushing in at him, multiple at a time. Haldir took out his bow along with four arrows. Haldir was quite skilled with the bow, and could shoot several arrows at a time. Although the Uruk-hai was about a foot away from him, Haldir still shot all four arrows at once. This immediately had the Uruk-hai coughing up black blood while sinking to his knees.
Once he sunk to the ground, Haldir retrieveed his four arrows back, and again saw elves go down. Although many Uruk-hai were left, and Haldir wanted to kill them all, his kin were more important.
He fought hard with his desire for vengeance and pushed his way outside the circle. He tried to run faster, but his leg was not agreeing. He rushed to the side of an elf, who had freshly fallen.
"Gilmaldor ," he whispered. He held the elf in his arms.
Gilmaldor half-opened his eyes, and reached for Haldir's hand. "Haldir, it can't be. I thought you were dead."
"Long have we been together, Gilmaldor . It will stay that way."
"Haldir, alas, I shall not be as lucky as you. Goodbye dear friend. May the white lady and Valar forever protect you."
"No, Gilmaldor . Stay strong. You must not give in."
"Good-" And there Gilmaldor shut his eyes, never to be opened again.
"Nooooo..."
The heart within Haldir broke, and painful tears ran down his cheeks. A Uruk-hai saw him, thinking he was an easy catch, and ran after him. But Haldir was not yet blinded by mourning and was not weakened. He took Gilmaldor 's sword, jutted it right through the Uruk-hai's open mouth, and took it back, but with difficulty. For when the sword went through, it pierced straight through the neck and throat.
Once Haldir retrieved the sword, and the Uruk-hai plummeted to the ground, Haldir ran away with Gilmaldor still in his arms.
He kept running, avoiding all Uruk-hai. He was no longer crying, but his heart was far from mended. Gilmaldor was his dear friend. The best friend he had in all of Lorien(can't put in accents, I don't know how. If you do, please tell me!) They'd spent their days shooting arrows, and their nights swimming in the Bruinen. They weren't always together, but it was an impossible sight to see them separated for long.
Haldir continued running, until he was far from Helm's Deep.
O.K. Yuppers! I've already begun chapter three! There'll be more conversation in that chapter, and other characters will be there. I dunno when I'll next update for I HAVE to finish The Threat of Eowyn BEFORE rotk is a movie.
I did re-read the chapter (only the story part-not the thank you's or author note's) to check for spelling mistakes, etc. So if I missed something, please don't give me a hard time about it. K? K.
See? I told you this chapter will be longer! Yup, I kept my promise!!!
Wow I love Helm's Deep, even if they didn't finish it in the movie. But what they did have was breath-taking don't you think? Even though the Smeagol/Gollum scene was even better. :)
Also, I needed an elven name, so I searched on the internet. I found the name Gilmaldor. Have no idea what it means though.
Well yeah, enough of me, I want to know what you guys think!!!!!
Thanks to a review by Twinkle, she reminded me that non-fictional characters aren't allowed. I forgot about that, and I went back and re-read the rules. So I will NOT have Haldir get revenge on PJ. However, Haldir will still get revenge, on the Uruk-hai and the such. He might get revenge on Saruman for sending out Uruk-hai, but I'm not sure about that. This story is still in the process. The majority did say they want revenge on Haldir instead of a vampire story, and I am sorry that that won't happen. However, it's not going to be a vampire story (at least I don't consider it as one). So if you guys are mad at me, I understand. But I don't want this story getting kicked out, and I also dont' want PJ to sue me. (Even though I honostly don't think so...He's way too busy, and I can't imagine him reading lotr fanfics, but that's just me. Anyways....)
So again, I'm sorry, here's the thank-you's. Or you could just find ur name, and then go and read the story.
L-thanks for your request.
EdgesGothDiva-Whoah! That's one of my motto's : Haldir Lives! Coolness! Yes, Justice shall be served, even if it is in a different way.
saera-yes, I agree that the original plot will be great, but it's stated above why. I'm sorry, but he'll still get revenge.
Anon-Hmm..that's an interesting thought. But I beleive that if I do go that way, it won't work. First of all, I have no idea how to even start that! But I think you should register, and write a story like that. I think it'll be great. Besides, I always like reading other people's works instead of mine.
verry happy about this fic-Yes! I'm upset that he died also. I was thinking..."what?!?!?!" But yes, Haldir will still live in this.
twinkle-Thank you so much for reminding me! I always think it's weird that anonymous reviewers are the ones reviewing telling authors about the rules. *shrugs* whatever. It's helpful. Thanks, again.
blueyesfaerie-Thank you! I'm glad you think it's good even if the intro was short. Well, I can't do both, but I hope that you'll like what I wrote.
Lord Angelus-Yes, I want Haldir to live as well. I always liked him in the first book, but I don't doubt that you're a bigger fan than I am.
Haldir Fan- Yes, your guess was right. Hmm, you seem like you really want Haldir get revenge on PJ. Again, I'm sorry. (I have to stop saying that)
romeninque-Yes, Haldir will kick some bum... A lot of bum...scroll down and you'll see what I mean.
Urylia-Thanks for the compliment. Yes, I know it's short. But this one is longer!!!!! And yes, I will continue this story, absolutely.
asia-Yes, I don't want to get sued either. I love PJ b/c he did the films, but I hate him b/c he screwed the books around. Grr...
Lanfear-Yes, I can't understand PJ's decisions.
Haldir's Girl-Yes! He will seek revenge. I didn't cry in the movie, but I cried in the book. But nooooo PJ has to put that part in ROTK...Grr..
Well, yes. Again, I hope you guys like my decision of writing the story, even if it isn't what you want. And again, I thank you guys a bunches for reviewing. Enjoy!!!!!!!
Bodies of elves and men lay all over Helm's Deep. There were Uruk-hai bodies lying around as well - they were the reason the place was stinking up.
Among them lay Haldir, elf of Lothlorien. He had taken a nasty blow to the head, sending him to his death. His last glance was of Aragorn, who quickly came to him the second he saw Haldir get injured.
The noble elf lay, left to rot among the dead. The rain was pouring hard, but no matter what, the blood still didn't wash away from the back of his head.
Battle had only just commenced. More Uruk-hai climbed up Helm's Deep with the help of ladders. They marched hastily, stepping on Haldir, as if he were part of the ground. Each time one of the servants of Saruman stepped on the elf's lifeless body, he'd flop around for an instant, like a rag doll.
They continued to swarm around Helm's Deep. Growling, and snarling, as they ran. One Uruk-hai, who was carrying a torch, stepped on Haldir's face as he went by.
He was able to run for about seven feet, until he fell down to his death. To that Uruk-hai, he had no idea what had been the cause of his end. Then again, he had no time to think about it. The other Uruk-hai took no notice of this. They never did. The men and elves took no heed of the dead Uruk-hai, for they wanted them dead. However, it would have been for the wisest if the Uruk-hai did take notice, at least of this one Uruk-hai. For the cause of his death is one that could prove too strong for any of the Uruk-hai to handle.
* * *
Haldir was still lying in the rain, full of dents of the Uruk-hai's feet. Not all Uruk-hai were smart. Some were the biggest lug-heads known to any race of Middle-Earth. One Uruk-hai in particular was exactly one of those. He was carrying his sword and sprinting (his sprinting was what most called power-walking), but he wasn't looking where he was going. Instead he was lookng over to his right, where down below he could see hundreds more Uruk-hai marching in. He was too busy smirking to himself to notice the limp body lying in his way. The left hand of Haldir's was stretched out, and this idiot tripped flat on his face.
His sword (which was held in his left hand), cut the side of Haldir's face (accidently). This particular Uruk-hai had so much excessive armor on, that he couldn't get up on his own. He eventually got up, but not the way he expected. Instead, he was flung up in the air and smashed back down.
"Ugh," growled the Uruk-hai. He turned to see who had done that, but couldn't figure out who. All looked as if they were busy with their own affaires. However, he swore he had seen a dead elf lying there.
'Maybe he wasn't dead,' he thought. He tried to push himself up, but he was quickly pushed back down. Once again, no one noticed this scene. But if they did, they would have seen one Uruk-hai lying helplessly flat on the ground, with an injured elf kneeling on top of him. Haldir had both his hands clasped tightly around the Uruk-hai's neck. He squeezed his hands even tighter. The Uruk-hai began suffocating, coughing up thick black blood in the process. In addition, his eyes were bulging out of their sockets.
Haldir then sprang up in a prancing position on the foul creature's back. Haldir, still clasping onto the neck, front flipped, flippng the Uruk-hai over behind him. He let go once the Uruk-hai was in mid-air.
The Uruk-hai lay dead on his back, covered in his own blood. But that was not enough for the elf. He still had his bow and arrows with him. Two arrows were shot into the lame excuse for a Uruk-hai until Haldir was satisfied and left.
Many pains attacked his leg, and he limped as he walked. It was still pouring hard, creating a mist over the battlefield. An effect of this was that it was hard to see where one was going.
Another Uruk-hai was rushing forward in a hurry. He bumped into Haldir on his way. He thought he could get away, but Haldir refused to allow that. Haldir stayed where he stood, but he outstretched his right arm, grabbed the Uruk-hai, and sent him to the ground. This Uruk-hai was smarter than the last. He knew who had sent him down.
He quickly got back up and came to face Haldir. No pain was shown evident on his body, but he was highly agitated. This Uruk-hai was not used to being overthrown by a creature whom he considered inferior. He prepared to make his first blow. He tried to send his left fist into Haldir's face, but was unsuccessful. Haldir sensed the blow, and immediately caught his fist with his right hand. He then punched the Uruk-hai with his free hand, once again sending him to the ground. All this was done rapidly and calmly.
Although Haldir gave a strong hit, the Uruk-hai was far from defeated. Again he got back up, and tackled Haldir at the waist. Haldir fell backwards with the Uruk-hai ontop of him.
As he fell, Haldir's head hit the ground, the same place where he had taken the blow. Blood spewed forth from the back of his head. Haldir was pinned down by the Uruk-hai, so as the blood spread, it reached to Haldir's ears, and went in.
The Uruk-hai lifted his right arm and prepared to try to punch Haldir successfully. However, this was an opportunity for Haldir. For if the Uruk-hai was only pinning him down with one arm, Haldir wasn't as pinned down as before. So he blocked the Uruk-hai's right arm and pulled his left arm off him. However, when he pulled the left arm, the arm went out of its socket.
The Uruk-hai took no notice of this at first. He didn't even take heed of all the blood gushing out from his body.
Now Haldir only had one arm to take care of. With all his might he pushed the remaining arm, sending the Uruk-hai backwards with so much force that his neck was literally snapped in two. The head came off the body and rolled away. The blood of this Uruk-hai was everywhere, adding to everyone else's. But there were still many Uruk-hai left. Many stepped on the head, resulting in more blood and a flat head.
* * *
Haldir got himself up and moved himself closer to the edge. He was already pissed, and what he was seeing agitated him more. Elves were being defeated and mocked by the Uruk-hai. His eyes were fixed on all this, but he still sensed what happened around him.
A Uruk-hai put a ladder up to the top, and began climbing. However, he could not make it because Haldir had kicked the ladder off. Stupidly, the Uruk-hai still held on all the way, even when it reached the ground. A thud was heard, followed by a serious of cracks. Once the heavy ladder fell on top the Uruk-hai, it shattered, sending splinters into his face, including his eyes.
Because the ladder made full contact with him, the pointy end of one splinter entered straight into his eye. Blood, and many other substances came bursting out. It could hardly be seen on the battlefield, for the place was covered by gore.
Another ladder was placed against the wall, with another climbing Uruk-hai. Instead of pushing the ladder off, Haldir pulled off his opponent, held him above his head, and threw him down below. Other Uruk-hai were knocked down in the process, and elves and men were spared.
Haldir was about to go down the ladder, but other Uruk-hai were taking advantage of it. Just because Haldir wasn't fully alive, he wasn't stupid. He took a nearby shield and skidded on it down the ladder (imagine the Legolas scene with him sliding down. Yeah, you know what I mean!), knocking off Uruk-hai as he went. When he reached the bottom, he was seen by several Uruk-hai, and they swarmed around him. Haldir took the shield and beheaded one of them. Then he took the headless body and whacked a second Uruk-hai with it. That didn't kill him, but only sent him backwards into another Uruk-hai. That Uruk-hai wasn't pleased with the Uruk-hai falling on him, so he killed him.
Althought the circle of Uruk-hai was waning, there were still many left. One grabbed at Haldir from behind, but Haldir only took the shield, stabbed behind him while still facing forwards, and took it back out. Because the edges of the shield were sharp, when Haldir took the shield back, there was a head attached to two edges.
Haldir threw the shield, including the head, at one Uruk-hai. That sent him to the ground. So Haldir took that Uruk-hai's sword and stabbed right at the heart. The Uruk-hai stopped all his movement, and was left there with his eyes staring emptily at where Haldir had stood.
Uruk-hai continued rushing in at him, multiple at a time. Haldir took out his bow along with four arrows. Haldir was quite skilled with the bow, and could shoot several arrows at a time. Although the Uruk-hai was about a foot away from him, Haldir still shot all four arrows at once. This immediately had the Uruk-hai coughing up black blood while sinking to his knees.
Once he sunk to the ground, Haldir retrieveed his four arrows back, and again saw elves go down. Although many Uruk-hai were left, and Haldir wanted to kill them all, his kin were more important.
He fought hard with his desire for vengeance and pushed his way outside the circle. He tried to run faster, but his leg was not agreeing. He rushed to the side of an elf, who had freshly fallen.
"Gilmaldor ," he whispered. He held the elf in his arms.
Gilmaldor half-opened his eyes, and reached for Haldir's hand. "Haldir, it can't be. I thought you were dead."
"Long have we been together, Gilmaldor . It will stay that way."
"Haldir, alas, I shall not be as lucky as you. Goodbye dear friend. May the white lady and Valar forever protect you."
"No, Gilmaldor . Stay strong. You must not give in."
"Good-" And there Gilmaldor shut his eyes, never to be opened again.
"Nooooo..."
The heart within Haldir broke, and painful tears ran down his cheeks. A Uruk-hai saw him, thinking he was an easy catch, and ran after him. But Haldir was not yet blinded by mourning and was not weakened. He took Gilmaldor 's sword, jutted it right through the Uruk-hai's open mouth, and took it back, but with difficulty. For when the sword went through, it pierced straight through the neck and throat.
Once Haldir retrieved the sword, and the Uruk-hai plummeted to the ground, Haldir ran away with Gilmaldor still in his arms.
He kept running, avoiding all Uruk-hai. He was no longer crying, but his heart was far from mended. Gilmaldor was his dear friend. The best friend he had in all of Lorien(can't put in accents, I don't know how. If you do, please tell me!) They'd spent their days shooting arrows, and their nights swimming in the Bruinen. They weren't always together, but it was an impossible sight to see them separated for long.
Haldir continued running, until he was far from Helm's Deep.
O.K. Yuppers! I've already begun chapter three! There'll be more conversation in that chapter, and other characters will be there. I dunno when I'll next update for I HAVE to finish The Threat of Eowyn BEFORE rotk is a movie.
I did re-read the chapter (only the story part-not the thank you's or author note's) to check for spelling mistakes, etc. So if I missed something, please don't give me a hard time about it. K? K.
See? I told you this chapter will be longer! Yup, I kept my promise!!!
Wow I love Helm's Deep, even if they didn't finish it in the movie. But what they did have was breath-taking don't you think? Even though the Smeagol/Gollum scene was even better. :)
Also, I needed an elven name, so I searched on the internet. I found the name Gilmaldor. Have no idea what it means though.
Well yeah, enough of me, I want to know what you guys think!!!!!