A/N: I have re-written this chappie as well. Enjoy!
A/N: I am fully aware that this story is a very good example of a Mary Sue, so you don't have to rub it in, OK? Something else, constructive criticism is VERY welcome. Meanwhile, flames are just ignored.
DISCLAIMER: The incredible Mr Tolkien invented all of the characters you recognise. Otherwise they were invented by moi/amin/ME!
Chapter 1
Meldávanë was at her balcony, overlooking the whole Rivendell. She was waiting. Then, at a distance, in the middle of the fields, she saw a horse. Blinding white with flowing mane. But she wasn't paying attention to the horse. She was looking at the rider. A wood elf. It was Legolas. The happiness of seeing Legolas again was of such force that she cried out with glee. It had been SUCH A LONG TIME! At least 6 months. To a lover's heart it is as log as a lifetime.
What Meldávanë didn't know is that the same thing happened to Legolas. He loved her. Not because of her beauty, but because of the grace and mind. She was so innocent and pure. He couldn't help but love her. She was the sort of person you can trust and confide secrets to. They were very good friends, but Legolas sometimes wished they were a bit more than that, for he felt that Meldávanë was the one that he was willing to spend the rest of eternity with. He wouldn't mind at all.
Legolas was a wood elf. He was very tall and had long blond hair that would shine gold in the sun. His eyes were a dazzling blue (A/N: Yes, I know Tolkien doesn't say what colour his eyes are etc. but I'm taking these descriptions from the movie.) He was graceful and the best archer of Elrond's council (A/N: Yes, I know Elrond doesn't have a PERMANENT council, but heck, it's creative writing). He looked even better now that he was in love, for his eyes were shining even brighter. He knew that love changed a person deeply, but he had no idea how deeply love would touch him. He thought he could fake it, but it didn't take long till someone got the message.
When he saw Meldávanë at her balcony, with the wind blowing through her long hair, his heart leaped with joy and he galloped the rest of the way from the field to Rivendell. When Legolas got to the town, Meldávanë was at the gates to greet him. Their minds went blank when they hugged and Legolas went to see Elrond directly. They talked, and when Legolas left to go home, he was blushing and quite discontent, for Elrond had guessed his secret, but then he cheered up. "Maybe he'll be able to help me," he thought.
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A/N: Hope you've enjoyed the first chapter! I shall update as soon as I feel like writing on the computer (which is almost everyday, but you never know with the amount of homework the teachers give us!) I already have a plot in mind and in paper. It's all done till chapter 7, if I'm not mistaken, just 2 or 3 more to go! Namaarie!
A/N: I am fully aware that this story is a very good example of a Mary Sue, so you don't have to rub it in, OK? Something else, constructive criticism is VERY welcome. Meanwhile, flames are just ignored.
DISCLAIMER: The incredible Mr Tolkien invented all of the characters you recognise. Otherwise they were invented by moi/amin/ME!
Chapter 1
Meldávanë was at her balcony, overlooking the whole Rivendell. She was waiting. Then, at a distance, in the middle of the fields, she saw a horse. Blinding white with flowing mane. But she wasn't paying attention to the horse. She was looking at the rider. A wood elf. It was Legolas. The happiness of seeing Legolas again was of such force that she cried out with glee. It had been SUCH A LONG TIME! At least 6 months. To a lover's heart it is as log as a lifetime.
What Meldávanë didn't know is that the same thing happened to Legolas. He loved her. Not because of her beauty, but because of the grace and mind. She was so innocent and pure. He couldn't help but love her. She was the sort of person you can trust and confide secrets to. They were very good friends, but Legolas sometimes wished they were a bit more than that, for he felt that Meldávanë was the one that he was willing to spend the rest of eternity with. He wouldn't mind at all.
Legolas was a wood elf. He was very tall and had long blond hair that would shine gold in the sun. His eyes were a dazzling blue (A/N: Yes, I know Tolkien doesn't say what colour his eyes are etc. but I'm taking these descriptions from the movie.) He was graceful and the best archer of Elrond's council (A/N: Yes, I know Elrond doesn't have a PERMANENT council, but heck, it's creative writing). He looked even better now that he was in love, for his eyes were shining even brighter. He knew that love changed a person deeply, but he had no idea how deeply love would touch him. He thought he could fake it, but it didn't take long till someone got the message.
When he saw Meldávanë at her balcony, with the wind blowing through her long hair, his heart leaped with joy and he galloped the rest of the way from the field to Rivendell. When Legolas got to the town, Meldávanë was at the gates to greet him. Their minds went blank when they hugged and Legolas went to see Elrond directly. They talked, and when Legolas left to go home, he was blushing and quite discontent, for Elrond had guessed his secret, but then he cheered up. "Maybe he'll be able to help me," he thought.
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A/N: Hope you've enjoyed the first chapter! I shall update as soon as I feel like writing on the computer (which is almost everyday, but you never know with the amount of homework the teachers give us!) I already have a plot in mind and in paper. It's all done till chapter 7, if I'm not mistaken, just 2 or 3 more to go! Namaarie!