A/N: Okay, it's FINALLY here! Chappie two. um. I wonder what it will be
like. All you have to do is scroll down!
A/N: I am fully aware that this story is a very good example of a Mary Sue, so you don't have to rub it in, OK? Something else, constructive criticism is VERY welcome. Meanwhile, flames are just ignored.
DISCLAIMER: The incredible Mr Tolkien invented all of the characters you recognise. Otherwise they were invented by moi/amin/ME!
Chapter 3
It was a beautiful spring day, and the leaves were finally unravelling and the flowers blooming after 4 months of waiting. They were stretching out their branches to make sure they were still well trimmed after their sleep. The sun was shining bright on Middle-Earth, for it was about midday. Elrond called his daughter Arwen, into his study. It was two days after Legolas' arrival. The study seemed to be only white. The floor was made of white marble and the desk, chair and shelves were made of silver birch. The tree was very common in Rivendell. The elves would never claim the lives of trees if the weren't common.
"Arwen, I have asked you to come here, for I have to ask you a question," Elrond stated. "Have you noticed anything different about your sister?"
"What about, atarfather?" Arwen asked suspiciously.
"Well," Elrond continued, now blushing quite a bit. "Mostly if she fancies any of the elves. I know that many elves fancy her and would not mind courting with her, but have you noticed if she fancies any of them?"
"No! I wouldn't notice these things. At least I don't think I would. Atar, does Legolas fancy Meldávanë?"
"What do you know about it, Arwen?"
"Nothing, its just a question. I just thought. Oh, well. Never mind. Why do you tense when I ask you if he fancies her?"
"I tense because I know something else about Legolas, and if I told anyone about it, he would kill me. I am sure that the first word that slips out of my mouth about it would lead to me having his straightest arrow in my head like a crown!"
"What is it, atar?"
"Have you not heard what I just said? I shall tell you when the time is right, seldedaughter."
With these last few words, Elrond stood up and went to the window. Arwen knew what that meant. Elrond wants to be left alone. She stood up and curtsied. "Milord," she said, and left to her room.
A year and a half later it was autumn and the leaves where turning golden and copper and finally falling off after months of hanging on. The flowers were long gone. Specially the roses. Only some flowers like the blue and purple ones that Meldávanë wore on her hair were still blooming, for they were autumn flowers. Soon, winter would come and ALL the flowers would be gone, so Meldávanë needed to plant some of her favourite flowers in the indoor garden so she would still have them during the cold months.
Elrond called his daughter, Arwen into his study again.
"Arwen, I guess it its time for me to tell you the truth about Legolas. Please, do not interupt me. The truth is that Legolas loves Meldávanë. He has loved her for quite a long time. If I am not mistaken, ever since the first time they met, which was." Elrond was calculating the time, but Arwen cut in.
"93 years."
"Yes, that is right. It is a very long time, do you not agree?"
"Of course, atar. I can not believe I never noticed it!"
Well, selde, I have called you to ask you if Meldávanë shows any signs of liking him as well."
"Atar, I believe she does. I have seen her crying many times, sighing 'Legolas, I really should try to lock my heart away from you.' I also know that every night she writes another chapter for her story, which is about her and Legolas."
"How do you know about the story?"
"Well, I. em."
"ARWEN!!!!!"
Arwen answered, speaking quickly. "I-went-through-her-things-when-you- told-me-about-Legolas. I-got-curious-and-did-a-bit-of-inspecting-myself. I- heard-her-crying-and-went-to-see-what-she-was-crying-about-and-I-saw-her- writing-something. When-she-went-to-sleep-I-looked-at-what-she-was-writing- and-it-was-a-love-story." When she finished talking she took a deep breath.
"Tsc, tsc. Well, at least we know something. Why was she crying?"
"Because she thinks it's an impossible love."
"It's more than possible. It's perfect. I think they are destined to each other. I need to talk to Legolas about this. You may go now, Arwen."
Arwen took her leave and went to her room. She was quite puzzled, but that cant be helped. How many times to you hear that your little sister loves an elf secretly, and that that elf loves her secretly as well? Not many times, even in a whole eternity!
A/N: Umkay! That was the second chappie. I'm going pretty slowly, but that can't be helped! You have NO IDE how many tests I have in a week! And my Dutch teacher is killing me with the entire new vocabulary! I don't even know WHY I have to learn Dutch. It's like, almost a non-existent language! Only the Netherlands speaks Dutch! If it was German, than FINE, but DUTCH of all the languages? Ok, fine, so I DO live in The Netherlands, but everyone here speaks English! Jeez! Well, a special thanks to:
Nihtfyr: Well, I know there are WAAAAAAAY to many Mary-Sues, but that can't be helped, it's the idea that came into my head. You are not FORCED to read my Mary-Sue. I would still like to thank you on the compliment about the details! And anyway, I don't really like writing the love scenes, only like "and they kissed" blahblahblah. no details!
Sakura Kuonji: Thank you. VERY MUCH! *Curtsies*
Chatelaine: Thank you for the tips. This chapter was a bit longer, wasn't it???
Hulaberrie07: Why, I had no idea my story's first two chapters would be enough to get people hooked! I am deeply thankful! *Curtsies* (I seem to curtsy quite a lot!)
Meltem: Hey Melti!!! Thanks for checking it! You read the first draft, but I had no idea you would read it on the site! * winks* you know what I mean, girl!
A/N: I am fully aware that this story is a very good example of a Mary Sue, so you don't have to rub it in, OK? Something else, constructive criticism is VERY welcome. Meanwhile, flames are just ignored.
DISCLAIMER: The incredible Mr Tolkien invented all of the characters you recognise. Otherwise they were invented by moi/amin/ME!
Chapter 3
It was a beautiful spring day, and the leaves were finally unravelling and the flowers blooming after 4 months of waiting. They were stretching out their branches to make sure they were still well trimmed after their sleep. The sun was shining bright on Middle-Earth, for it was about midday. Elrond called his daughter Arwen, into his study. It was two days after Legolas' arrival. The study seemed to be only white. The floor was made of white marble and the desk, chair and shelves were made of silver birch. The tree was very common in Rivendell. The elves would never claim the lives of trees if the weren't common.
"Arwen, I have asked you to come here, for I have to ask you a question," Elrond stated. "Have you noticed anything different about your sister?"
"What about, atarfather?" Arwen asked suspiciously.
"Well," Elrond continued, now blushing quite a bit. "Mostly if she fancies any of the elves. I know that many elves fancy her and would not mind courting with her, but have you noticed if she fancies any of them?"
"No! I wouldn't notice these things. At least I don't think I would. Atar, does Legolas fancy Meldávanë?"
"What do you know about it, Arwen?"
"Nothing, its just a question. I just thought. Oh, well. Never mind. Why do you tense when I ask you if he fancies her?"
"I tense because I know something else about Legolas, and if I told anyone about it, he would kill me. I am sure that the first word that slips out of my mouth about it would lead to me having his straightest arrow in my head like a crown!"
"What is it, atar?"
"Have you not heard what I just said? I shall tell you when the time is right, seldedaughter."
With these last few words, Elrond stood up and went to the window. Arwen knew what that meant. Elrond wants to be left alone. She stood up and curtsied. "Milord," she said, and left to her room.
A year and a half later it was autumn and the leaves where turning golden and copper and finally falling off after months of hanging on. The flowers were long gone. Specially the roses. Only some flowers like the blue and purple ones that Meldávanë wore on her hair were still blooming, for they were autumn flowers. Soon, winter would come and ALL the flowers would be gone, so Meldávanë needed to plant some of her favourite flowers in the indoor garden so she would still have them during the cold months.
Elrond called his daughter, Arwen into his study again.
"Arwen, I guess it its time for me to tell you the truth about Legolas. Please, do not interupt me. The truth is that Legolas loves Meldávanë. He has loved her for quite a long time. If I am not mistaken, ever since the first time they met, which was." Elrond was calculating the time, but Arwen cut in.
"93 years."
"Yes, that is right. It is a very long time, do you not agree?"
"Of course, atar. I can not believe I never noticed it!"
Well, selde, I have called you to ask you if Meldávanë shows any signs of liking him as well."
"Atar, I believe she does. I have seen her crying many times, sighing 'Legolas, I really should try to lock my heart away from you.' I also know that every night she writes another chapter for her story, which is about her and Legolas."
"How do you know about the story?"
"Well, I. em."
"ARWEN!!!!!"
Arwen answered, speaking quickly. "I-went-through-her-things-when-you- told-me-about-Legolas. I-got-curious-and-did-a-bit-of-inspecting-myself. I- heard-her-crying-and-went-to-see-what-she-was-crying-about-and-I-saw-her- writing-something. When-she-went-to-sleep-I-looked-at-what-she-was-writing- and-it-was-a-love-story." When she finished talking she took a deep breath.
"Tsc, tsc. Well, at least we know something. Why was she crying?"
"Because she thinks it's an impossible love."
"It's more than possible. It's perfect. I think they are destined to each other. I need to talk to Legolas about this. You may go now, Arwen."
Arwen took her leave and went to her room. She was quite puzzled, but that cant be helped. How many times to you hear that your little sister loves an elf secretly, and that that elf loves her secretly as well? Not many times, even in a whole eternity!
A/N: Umkay! That was the second chappie. I'm going pretty slowly, but that can't be helped! You have NO IDE how many tests I have in a week! And my Dutch teacher is killing me with the entire new vocabulary! I don't even know WHY I have to learn Dutch. It's like, almost a non-existent language! Only the Netherlands speaks Dutch! If it was German, than FINE, but DUTCH of all the languages? Ok, fine, so I DO live in The Netherlands, but everyone here speaks English! Jeez! Well, a special thanks to:
Nihtfyr: Well, I know there are WAAAAAAAY to many Mary-Sues, but that can't be helped, it's the idea that came into my head. You are not FORCED to read my Mary-Sue. I would still like to thank you on the compliment about the details! And anyway, I don't really like writing the love scenes, only like "and they kissed" blahblahblah. no details!
Sakura Kuonji: Thank you. VERY MUCH! *Curtsies*
Chatelaine: Thank you for the tips. This chapter was a bit longer, wasn't it???
Hulaberrie07: Why, I had no idea my story's first two chapters would be enough to get people hooked! I am deeply thankful! *Curtsies* (I seem to curtsy quite a lot!)
Meltem: Hey Melti!!! Thanks for checking it! You read the first draft, but I had no idea you would read it on the site! * winks* you know what I mean, girl!