inu-gurl: HO-kay....I didn't expect you guys to be taking it so seriously about the 200 reviews...When I said I wanted to get 200 reviews...I actually meant NEAR that....geez inu-baby.... take it so seriously!!! -_- And....no. Manten is not ALWAYS with Hiten. This chap is longer! enjoy! Can I get 15-30 reviews on this? It's okay if it's just 10. Right now when I'm writing this it's Friday the 13th...Usually I LIKE it 'cause it gives me good luck....(got a free cookie coupon and winners circles.) BUT.....

*flash back to afternoon*

In gym....

teacher: Okay everyone! Separate! Girls over there and boys over there!

everyone walks to their place...

Me: Hey aren't you a boy?

girl: *turns around* I'm a girl.

Me: 'My god...damn, let me fall through a hole...ANY hole!' Oh...I didn't see your face...I don't want to offend you or anything...sorry...please forgive me

girl: .....(walks away.)

girl 2: (A/N: Which I haaaaate cause she's a showoff who wears so much makeup she will choke on someday) Hey. Are you retarded or what?

Me: 'Gak....Man I hope she chokes on that makeup soon.' No. Are you?

Later...

friend: Why'd you call her a boy?

Me: HEY! I didn't see her earrings OR hear how she talks.. OR even see her face!

In back...

girl 2: *whispers over to friends* (A/N: I have good ears...) Remember to ignore her okay?

Me: 'Feh. Like I'd wanna be near those makeup choking freaks anyway.'

*out of flash* kiiiiiiiiiill girl 2 and her friends.....DIE!!!!

Disclaimer: I do not own Inu-Yasha....but! I do own some dude and the Inu-Yasha minis! *glomps IY minis and puts some dude in jar* And.....I also own this copy of the tetsusaiga! Swings it at girl 2 and her friends. *sigh* All in my head though....

Lyn/Lin: Uh-huh....^^;; You're weird....

Chapter 11: If the demon's there

Kagome nears over to the edge of the boat--which of course is splintery and sharp.

Her skin slides across the wood like a knife and paper.

She winced. (Lyn/Lin: EEEEE!!!)

"Hehe......" Manten said as if this was a comedy on television.

"Why don't you just hand that jewel over here and you can get your ride without any more cuts?"

"NO~!" Kagome screamed as she jumped up on a thick pole thingy--which she almost fell off as she quickly jumped on Manten's head.

(A/N: Sugoi...^^;;)

"Hey!" Manten yelled as he tried to get Kagome down from there.

"Precious hair lives on that head!"

(Lyn/Lin: I know! Shame on you Kagome!)

(A/N: Yep....three strands are soooooooo precious if you're close to bald.)

Amazingly...He did not catch her. Or even REACH her.

"You're...so...mean...." Manten said as he jumped up and down s'more.

It appears that his head was big and his arms were short and stubby.

(A/N: Manten is KAWAII!!! When he didn't die that is. And in book 4...the heart eating was WAY too gross... I held my neck 4EVER 'cause I was gonna throw up... Apparently, I know what a heart smells like due to school health things... T________T)

(Lyn/Lin: Gross, Gross, Gross!)

"Yea....So what?" Kagome said as she smirked at him jumping up and down.

It was like watching a sumo wrestler do cartwheels.

(A/N: If you're a sumo guy/girl GOMEN NASAI!!!!!)

The boat reached nearer to the castle as Kagome started dawdling from his head.

"Will...You....stop....MOVING~?!" Kagome almost shrieked as she lost her balance and almost fell off.

"No I won't!" Manten said as he jumped more.

"Get off my head!"

"No!"

"Get OFF GIRL~!"

"No I won't fat DUDE~!"

Manten ended it with a large swing of his head; which he probably shouldn't have done...

"Eeek!" Kagome screamed as she grabbed whatever she could before falling on her bottom.

*pLuCk* *pLuCk*

(Lyn/Lin: NOOOOOOOOOO!!!)

"Yah!" Kagome said as she fell on the ground.

"Ow....."

"N-NOO~!!!!" Manten yelled in horror as he glared at Kagome as if she had a death wish.

"H-Huh....?" Kagome said as she looked up at him.

~*~*~*~

'YES!!!! I'm getting closer to this guy....His scent is right....HERE.' Inu-Yasha thought as he walked towards a corner with Inu-Yasha sitting there, eating crackers...

His back was turned on him.

"Hey you..." Inu-Yasha said with a pissed face.

(Also disgraced to see a HIM eating CRACKERS...)

(Lyn/Lin: CWACKERS!)

"Huh?" Shippou said as he turned to see a pissed face.

"You.....Who the hell are you and why the fuck do you look like me?!" Inu-Yasha said as a couple of ears popped up on Inu-Yasha's head.

He had dog ears on his head and he even had fangs and claws...

"Wha-?" Shippou said as he poofed into the kitsune he was.

"So......" Inu-Yasha started.

"A young badger demon here to annoy us all huh?"

"I'm a FOX DEMON!" Shippou said as whacked Inu-Yasha on the head.

*pow*

"Don't touch me." Inu-Yasha said with a vein mark on his fist.

"Owowowowowowow....." Shippou said as he rubbed his head.

(Lyn/Lin: You deserve it Shippo....)

"You deserved it." Inu-Yasha said.

"What a worthless demon you are." Inu-Yasha said, boasting.

"Hey...At least I'm a FULL demon unlike you." Shippou said.

"Nani?!" Inu-Yasha yelled angrily.

~*~*~*~(Lyn/Lin: What's with putting this thing here?.......)

"I'm just as full a demon as YOU are!"

"No you're not." Shippou said.

"You may have the strength of a demon and maybe even the looks but you're a hanyou."

"I can smell the human in you."

Inu-Yasha was not pleased by this.

"Why you--" Inu-Yasha said with fangs baring out.

(SORT of showing out...not a lot like a tarantula)

(Lyn/Lin: LOL)

Shippou jumps up to the window and transforms into the big pink balloon thingy.

"I have no time to fight with you." Shippou said seriously.

"I have to rescue Kagome from that wolf demon. And since none of YOU are going to help me, I'll do it myself."

~*~*~*~

'K-Kagome...?!' Inu-Yasha thought shocked. "Hey kid, come back!"

But right after Shippou had said "I'll do it myself " he floated towards the forest.

"Chikuso......" Inu-Yasha said as leaped up onto the windowsill.

"I'll have to fly...and quick too..." Inu-Yasha said to himself as he jumped down.

But right at that moment.....

someone was watching him.....

It was Kikyo.

"Wha?! Inu-Yasha!!! Be careful!!!!" Kikyo yelled worried.

'Is trying to commit suicide?!' Kikyo thought as she ran up to him.

She looked down.

He was gone....

'Where did he go?!' Kikyo thought as she kept looking down for a sign of him.

~*~*~*~

Kagome was on the floor wondering what he was yelling about.

"What's wrong?" Kagome asked curiously as if she had forgotten that he could kill her.

"You...bitch...how DARE you take away my hair...Now I'll have to kill you and take that jewel of yours." Manten said.

The look of murder was in his red eyes.

"Er..." Kagome said as she started to stand up.

'Ow kuso!' Kagome thought.

It seems that her knee was bruised...ALOT

"Hey Manten. Isn't that a WIG over there?" Kagome said quickly.

(Lyn/Lin: A WIG!!!! Give it to me! I have to give it to Manten!!)

"Nani????? Where? Where is it?!" Manten said happily as he turned to see nothing.

(A/N: A wig....Hm...In THIS era??? Well....Cut of some of your brother Hiten's hair and pluck it into your head Manten.)

"Hey girl, there's no hair here..." Manten said as he turned around to see Kagome laughing.

"Why you..."

"Oops." Kagome said surprised.

"My bad. There's no wig. Oh well...."

Manten started looking at her more closely.

"You're....truly a beautiful maiden...." Manten said.

"Huh?" Kagome said.

'Why do guys always check ME out~?!' Kagome thought angrily.

(A/N: Yea! Manten, go check out someone that looks like YOU!)

The boat hit the dock by the castle and Kagome nearly fell off.

"Come here..." Manten said as he tried to grab her.

"Yaaaaaah!!!!!" Kagome yelled as she jumped onto the dock.

"NO!!!!" Kagome yelled to herself as she looked up at the trees.

"Not ANOTHER forest!!!"

Manten started getting out of the boat.

Kagome sighed and went into forest.

~*~*~*~

Inu-Yasha ran/flew/leaped/jumped/whatEVER! through the forest.

He thought he was going to find Shippou--when really he was going to meet up with Kagome.

"A-HA!" Inu-Yasha said as he found Shippou.

"Wha-Why'd you follow me for?!" Shippou yelled.

Suddenly, Inu-Yasha smelt a scent VEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERY familiar.

.......It was Kagome...

He flew over quickly to where her scent was--TOTALLY ignoring Shippou.

"Kagome!" Inu-Yasha yelled as he saw a fat dude behind her.

"Inu-Yasha...." Kagome said.

"...What the hell are you doing here?!"

"Hehe....Come here girl!" Manten yelled as he grabbed her.

(Lyn/Lin: I wanna see HITEN!!!!!)

A/N: 15-30 reviews please! Even 10 is okay but I want more than that!