Disclaimer: Not mine, I wish!! I would not be writing this crap if I actually owned this,I would hire sum 1 who could actaully write!!
Answers to your questions: This story is in NO WAY related to the book The Giver. I should have said this earlier. I read the book 2 yrs ago in seventh grade. That was about a boy who became a "12" and revceived memories of earth's past. Once the people in that book became a 12, they were given a profession and his was "The Reciever of the Memory" and he was given memories that is all. The only similarities between this and the book is the title. And for the person who said The Giver is like Q.....no. I have only seen star Trek like 2 times but my older brother is an avid Star Trek fan and he says Q is way 2 complex to be like The Giver. He can do much more than just give to people like my character. O yes and about the wish of Jesse's The Giver granted since he asked for more than one...youll find out!! Haha Im so evil!! Ok story starts...........
Chapter 3: Torn Apart
After a week of being sick, everyone was beginning to feel better. Jesse had got it also but he recovered. He decided to keep the incident with The Giver tp himself. It was all he could think about though. The Giver was so mysterious and Jesse had an uneasy feeling that he wasn't as nice as he seemed. He was so wrapped up in his thoughts of The Giver, that he was slacking off at work.
"Jesse can you run a scan of the database for a Lori Saunders?" Adam asked. Jesse was in another world and didn't even know anyone else was in the room.
"Jesse! Hello?" Emma asked. When he didn't respond Emma snapped her fingers in his face and he jumped.
"What , what!" Jesse jumped.
" Brennan you run that scan." Adam said and then turned to Jesse." Can I talk to you for a minute alone?"
"Sure Adam." Jesse responded.
"I've noticed you have not been yourself lately. Is something wrong?" Adam wanted to know.
"No.....everything is fine." Jesse lied.
"Are you sure?" Adam knew something was wrong, he could read Jesse and all the other Mutant X members like a book.
"Adam, I am fine. I don't know whyy you would think something was wrong." Jesse again lied.
" You just have been in your own world since that night you went to pick up things for us when we were sick." Adam was trying his best to pull the information he wanted out of Jesse.
"I just haven't been getting much sleep lately, thats all." Jesse wasn't lying about that, but that was not thw whole reason. Adam still was not satisfied with Jesse's answer, but gave up.
"Okay Jesse. But if something is wrong you would tell me right?" Adam questioned Jesse's truthfulness ever since he went behind Adam's back and helped out his father, but Adam was not going to hold that against him.
"Of course I would tell you." The way things were going, Jesse was making himself out to be liar of the year. Adam smiled and nodded as Jesse smiled also and walked off to where the others were. Adam had an uneasy feeling in the pit of his stomach. He proceeded to the room filled with the four people he loved the most.
"I'm going to take a nap. If you need me you can wake me up.....hopefully you won't need me." Adam smiled as did the Mutant x team and he walked off to his bedroom.
*******A Few Hours Later**********
"Okay that Lori girl we just put into the underground last month is doing much better. Should I go tell Adam?" Brennan wondered
"Na, let him sleep that can wait."Shalimar said.
"Well, then what do you guys want to do?" Emma asked.
"I say we go to the movies." Jesse said. Maybe that would clear his mind.
"I'd rather go to a club." Brennan said.
"Hey you picked last time. No fair." Jesse joked."I say we go to the movies, all we ever do is go to clubs."
"Since when do you decide what we do?" Emma asked
"Oh shut up Emma." Jesse said sarcasticly, only the others didn't take it that way.
"Jesse! Don't tell her to shut up! She is right who made you Queen of England?"Shalimar snapped.
"Aww, come on Shalimar-"Jesse tried to say he was only kidding but was cut off by Brennan.
"Hey Shalimar don't yell at him. I'm sick of you telling everyone what to do! You're such a bitch! Take your PMS somewhere else!"Brennan yelled. Shalimar slapped him across the face and walked out taking her motorcycle with her.
"See what you did guys!" Emma yelled.
"Hey, it was your fault if you are going to blame someone. I'm tired of being treated like I'm nobody!" Brennan yelled back. His words shocked Jesse as The Giver's words of "wish granted" ran through his head.
"You're tired of it? You people treat me like I'm invisible!!" Emma was beat red from screaming, and Jesse just sttod there knowing his wish was back firing, they did feel unappreciated. Adam was awake from all the screaming.
"Will yopu shut up!! You people have no consideration for me at all!! I'm sleeping here so stop your bitching !!" Adam screamed. Jesse was holding his hand over his forehead as all three of them went at it screaming just about every curse ever invented, and they probably made up some knew ones. Finally everyone got so mad, Adam went back to his room slamming the door, Brennan left, and Emma went to her room also. Jesse stood in the middle of the room by himself thinking.
**Jesse's thoughts in ( )**
( Well my wish worked. Dammit....why did I wish for that.....I have to do something, but what?....) Jesse felt sick and uneasy that it was his fault everyone was fighting.
*****Later That Night****
Brennan returned from his outing after the outburst. Jesse thought he was going to be mad still and do something else to get a fight going but instead he just nodded a hello at Jesse as he walked in . Jesse was on the couch watching TV and Brennan came and sat in a nearby chair. Jesse knew Brennan liked to watch the news at ten o clock so Jesse turned off The Real World and turned on the news.
"Thanks."Brennan said gloomily. Jesse and Brennan listened to the newscaster talk about how there were record high temperatures and both of them were kind of zoning out until breaking news caught their attention.
"In other news, a fatal accident left one women dead as she collided with an SUV. She is unidenified at this time, but here is a picture of her motorcycle, if you know anything at all you are to contact the police immediately."
Brennan's jaw dropped as Jesse grabbed his chest from the sharp pain piercing through his body, he fell over.
"Jesse!"Brennan yelled."Adam! Emma!Help!" Brennan began to panick as they came rushing into the room ."Shalimar is......,"he hesitated,"she is dead...."
TBC!!!
NOTE: Don't review this saying you hate me, when the whole story is finished you can do that just know that something is going to happen that changes everything, so don't give up hope yet. I don't want to give away to much yet I fear the flames so just give me a chance before you say I need to die. PLEASE REVIEW!! I want to thank you all for reviewing, i got 15 reviews in 2 chapters!! YAY! 5 more reviews brings a chapter 4!!
Another note: The wish is still incomplete, the people feeling unappreciated was a part of it, but it is pretty much obvious what else happens if you read chapter 2 carefully!! TTFN!!
Answers to your questions: This story is in NO WAY related to the book The Giver. I should have said this earlier. I read the book 2 yrs ago in seventh grade. That was about a boy who became a "12" and revceived memories of earth's past. Once the people in that book became a 12, they were given a profession and his was "The Reciever of the Memory" and he was given memories that is all. The only similarities between this and the book is the title. And for the person who said The Giver is like Q.....no. I have only seen star Trek like 2 times but my older brother is an avid Star Trek fan and he says Q is way 2 complex to be like The Giver. He can do much more than just give to people like my character. O yes and about the wish of Jesse's The Giver granted since he asked for more than one...youll find out!! Haha Im so evil!! Ok story starts...........
Chapter 3: Torn Apart
After a week of being sick, everyone was beginning to feel better. Jesse had got it also but he recovered. He decided to keep the incident with The Giver tp himself. It was all he could think about though. The Giver was so mysterious and Jesse had an uneasy feeling that he wasn't as nice as he seemed. He was so wrapped up in his thoughts of The Giver, that he was slacking off at work.
"Jesse can you run a scan of the database for a Lori Saunders?" Adam asked. Jesse was in another world and didn't even know anyone else was in the room.
"Jesse! Hello?" Emma asked. When he didn't respond Emma snapped her fingers in his face and he jumped.
"What , what!" Jesse jumped.
" Brennan you run that scan." Adam said and then turned to Jesse." Can I talk to you for a minute alone?"
"Sure Adam." Jesse responded.
"I've noticed you have not been yourself lately. Is something wrong?" Adam wanted to know.
"No.....everything is fine." Jesse lied.
"Are you sure?" Adam knew something was wrong, he could read Jesse and all the other Mutant X members like a book.
"Adam, I am fine. I don't know whyy you would think something was wrong." Jesse again lied.
" You just have been in your own world since that night you went to pick up things for us when we were sick." Adam was trying his best to pull the information he wanted out of Jesse.
"I just haven't been getting much sleep lately, thats all." Jesse wasn't lying about that, but that was not thw whole reason. Adam still was not satisfied with Jesse's answer, but gave up.
"Okay Jesse. But if something is wrong you would tell me right?" Adam questioned Jesse's truthfulness ever since he went behind Adam's back and helped out his father, but Adam was not going to hold that against him.
"Of course I would tell you." The way things were going, Jesse was making himself out to be liar of the year. Adam smiled and nodded as Jesse smiled also and walked off to where the others were. Adam had an uneasy feeling in the pit of his stomach. He proceeded to the room filled with the four people he loved the most.
"I'm going to take a nap. If you need me you can wake me up.....hopefully you won't need me." Adam smiled as did the Mutant x team and he walked off to his bedroom.
*******A Few Hours Later**********
"Okay that Lori girl we just put into the underground last month is doing much better. Should I go tell Adam?" Brennan wondered
"Na, let him sleep that can wait."Shalimar said.
"Well, then what do you guys want to do?" Emma asked.
"I say we go to the movies." Jesse said. Maybe that would clear his mind.
"I'd rather go to a club." Brennan said.
"Hey you picked last time. No fair." Jesse joked."I say we go to the movies, all we ever do is go to clubs."
"Since when do you decide what we do?" Emma asked
"Oh shut up Emma." Jesse said sarcasticly, only the others didn't take it that way.
"Jesse! Don't tell her to shut up! She is right who made you Queen of England?"Shalimar snapped.
"Aww, come on Shalimar-"Jesse tried to say he was only kidding but was cut off by Brennan.
"Hey Shalimar don't yell at him. I'm sick of you telling everyone what to do! You're such a bitch! Take your PMS somewhere else!"Brennan yelled. Shalimar slapped him across the face and walked out taking her motorcycle with her.
"See what you did guys!" Emma yelled.
"Hey, it was your fault if you are going to blame someone. I'm tired of being treated like I'm nobody!" Brennan yelled back. His words shocked Jesse as The Giver's words of "wish granted" ran through his head.
"You're tired of it? You people treat me like I'm invisible!!" Emma was beat red from screaming, and Jesse just sttod there knowing his wish was back firing, they did feel unappreciated. Adam was awake from all the screaming.
"Will yopu shut up!! You people have no consideration for me at all!! I'm sleeping here so stop your bitching !!" Adam screamed. Jesse was holding his hand over his forehead as all three of them went at it screaming just about every curse ever invented, and they probably made up some knew ones. Finally everyone got so mad, Adam went back to his room slamming the door, Brennan left, and Emma went to her room also. Jesse stood in the middle of the room by himself thinking.
**Jesse's thoughts in ( )**
( Well my wish worked. Dammit....why did I wish for that.....I have to do something, but what?....) Jesse felt sick and uneasy that it was his fault everyone was fighting.
*****Later That Night****
Brennan returned from his outing after the outburst. Jesse thought he was going to be mad still and do something else to get a fight going but instead he just nodded a hello at Jesse as he walked in . Jesse was on the couch watching TV and Brennan came and sat in a nearby chair. Jesse knew Brennan liked to watch the news at ten o clock so Jesse turned off The Real World and turned on the news.
"Thanks."Brennan said gloomily. Jesse and Brennan listened to the newscaster talk about how there were record high temperatures and both of them were kind of zoning out until breaking news caught their attention.
"In other news, a fatal accident left one women dead as she collided with an SUV. She is unidenified at this time, but here is a picture of her motorcycle, if you know anything at all you are to contact the police immediately."
Brennan's jaw dropped as Jesse grabbed his chest from the sharp pain piercing through his body, he fell over.
"Jesse!"Brennan yelled."Adam! Emma!Help!" Brennan began to panick as they came rushing into the room ."Shalimar is......,"he hesitated,"she is dead...."
TBC!!!
NOTE: Don't review this saying you hate me, when the whole story is finished you can do that just know that something is going to happen that changes everything, so don't give up hope yet. I don't want to give away to much yet I fear the flames so just give me a chance before you say I need to die. PLEASE REVIEW!! I want to thank you all for reviewing, i got 15 reviews in 2 chapters!! YAY! 5 more reviews brings a chapter 4!!
Another note: The wish is still incomplete, the people feeling unappreciated was a part of it, but it is pretty much obvious what else happens if you read chapter 2 carefully!! TTFN!!