The characters all by J.K. Rowling and I won't get money with that story.
That's my first English Fanfiction. I hope, I didn't wrote a lot wrong. I can't write drama very good. Please review! Sarista
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The last Way
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He stood at the window and looked out. In his hand a crumple up letter. This letter was his fall, his ending hit over the cliff. He hung on the brink of the ruin for a long time and the letter hit him over it. It didn't give any escape because he flow already to the death.
Would he have the courage to spring? Would he really choose the death? Would HE want that?
No, HE wouldn't want that! HE would say that the match isn't finish! HE would spend courage! HE would fight!
But HE can't fight, now! HE can't say something! HE can't spend courage! HE can't want something!
It's all over now!
How long did he stand at the window? Seconds? Minutes? Hours?
He didn't know and it wasn't important.
He have stayed alive all the time. The death of James, Askaban, the torture from the Lord.
And what did it bring to him?
Nothing, because HE is death!
He went upstairs slowly. This time he wouldn't stop! This time he wouldn't go to Remus at the last moment! He would escape the everlasting pain!
Yes, the pain! He would escape THIS pain! He would be with HIM!
He didn't know what the others would think. He didn't know who stayed alive. How many have been died? Hundreds? Thousand? It wasn't important! It didn't give any escape! No matter how long they would fight, the Lord would win! The Lord had armies on his side! And they only the pain!
How would Harry think about him? Would he hate him? No, wrong! Will he hate him?
It didn't give any "would"! His decision stood!
How will Remus react? Will he fight against the pain? Will he die also?
No, Remus was strong! He would fight, wouldn't he?
It wasn't important! What did him interest Remus?
Now he arrived the tower. On the high of his pain! He stood at the edge and looked at the country.
Where would they bury him?
He looked the last time on the letter . . . and jumped!
The last think before he died was meant for the question whether he would see HIM next time.
Then he died without any noise, nearly soft. Only his tears remember the pain.
He was with HIM!
After his death the letter fell out the bloody hand.
*yesterday, twelve o'clock S. Snape were found in the wood. He were death. My heartfelt sympathy!*
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Finish
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What do you think? Please write me your opinion. Good by Sarista
That's my first English Fanfiction. I hope, I didn't wrote a lot wrong. I can't write drama very good. Please review! Sarista
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The last Way
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He stood at the window and looked out. In his hand a crumple up letter. This letter was his fall, his ending hit over the cliff. He hung on the brink of the ruin for a long time and the letter hit him over it. It didn't give any escape because he flow already to the death.
Would he have the courage to spring? Would he really choose the death? Would HE want that?
No, HE wouldn't want that! HE would say that the match isn't finish! HE would spend courage! HE would fight!
But HE can't fight, now! HE can't say something! HE can't spend courage! HE can't want something!
It's all over now!
How long did he stand at the window? Seconds? Minutes? Hours?
He didn't know and it wasn't important.
He have stayed alive all the time. The death of James, Askaban, the torture from the Lord.
And what did it bring to him?
Nothing, because HE is death!
He went upstairs slowly. This time he wouldn't stop! This time he wouldn't go to Remus at the last moment! He would escape the everlasting pain!
Yes, the pain! He would escape THIS pain! He would be with HIM!
He didn't know what the others would think. He didn't know who stayed alive. How many have been died? Hundreds? Thousand? It wasn't important! It didn't give any escape! No matter how long they would fight, the Lord would win! The Lord had armies on his side! And they only the pain!
How would Harry think about him? Would he hate him? No, wrong! Will he hate him?
It didn't give any "would"! His decision stood!
How will Remus react? Will he fight against the pain? Will he die also?
No, Remus was strong! He would fight, wouldn't he?
It wasn't important! What did him interest Remus?
Now he arrived the tower. On the high of his pain! He stood at the edge and looked at the country.
Where would they bury him?
He looked the last time on the letter . . . and jumped!
The last think before he died was meant for the question whether he would see HIM next time.
Then he died without any noise, nearly soft. Only his tears remember the pain.
He was with HIM!
After his death the letter fell out the bloody hand.
*yesterday, twelve o'clock S. Snape were found in the wood. He were death. My heartfelt sympathy!*
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Finish
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What do you think? Please write me your opinion. Good by Sarista