Wiccan Worries
Chapter Four: Another World
a/n: I have to say that this story definitely did not get as many reviews as the first time I posted it- but oh well. Hopefully this chapter and the sequel will do better! Plz R&R!! (
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Melissa awoke to harsh sunlight and chirping birds. "What the..." she muttered groggily, "I don't have the window facing east...."
In an instant she was sitting up and observing her surroundings. She lay in a clearing, Nikole next to her (though she was starting to stir), a normal sized Yusuke under another tree. They were in what looked to be a forest, but the ground was clear of tangled underbrush.
"Huh? Wha 'appened?" Nikole yawned, sitting up and rubbing her eyes. Her hair was tangled; she started to finger comb it.
"I don't know where we are," Melissa said softly in reply. She crawled over so she was next to Yusuke, and started to shake him. "Whae up! Yusuke, wake up NOW!"
His eyes opened slowly, then got wide as he sat up. "Hey! You got really small!"
She giggled. "No, silly, you returned to normal. Do you know where we are?"
He looked around and shook his head slightly. "It reminds me of Makai, but looks different."
"Hn." A black blur landed on the ground and straightened- it was Hiei. "We're in the Eastern part of Makai, luckily."
~I will NOT panic. I will NOT panic. I'll save it for when we get out of here. I will NOT panic,~ Melissa told herself firmly.
"Ouch!" Nikole yelped. Melissa looked over- her friend was on the ground, face twisted in pain. "What's the matter?"
"My ankle- I think it's sprained," she replied gloomily. "That' great, we're stranded in Makai and I can't walk. Wonderful. Bloody lovely."
"Um- Hiei- is there a way we can return to, um, ningenkai?" Melissa asked, worried that they would not get out of there.
((Nikole's POV))
I tried to listen as Hiei replied. Yes, there was a way- a portal about 20 miles away. When activated properly, it would go to ningenkai.
My ankle throbbed. Yusuke asked, "But how do we get that far if Nikole-san can't walk?"
I grmiaced. "I could always crawl," I said, trying to be funny. Melissa knelt beside me and pulled her bandanna from her pocket, and wrapped it around my ankle for support. "You still won't be able to walk, but...."
"I'll carry her." I snapped my head up to look at Hiei, who walked towrads me and picked me up like I was feather light. With my size, I was pretty light, but wow.
"I could carry her," Yusuke said defensively. Hiei made a sound of disbelief that made me smile. "Not only am I faster, so I can avoid being attacked, I'm also a lot less clumsy than a ningen like you."
Melissa laughed but put a hand on Yusuke's arm. "He's right. You have to protect me, though, don't forget."
He looked sheepish, "Oh yeah. Do you know any type of fighting?"
I barely heard Melissa reply "Some" before Hiei jumped into a treetop. He started to go so fast I only saw green and brown blurs, and I buried my face in his shoulder.
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That's the end of Wiccan Worries! I'd originally thought of ending it on that note, but decided not to. I mean, you can imagine them getting back into ningen kai and either a) finding a way home or b) living the rest of their lives there. But the sequel, Wiccan Warriors, should be posted soon if I get some support. So whaddya say? could you review for me, please? And tell me what ending YOU would like.
Much Luv
-Devils Little Doll-
Chapter Four: Another World
a/n: I have to say that this story definitely did not get as many reviews as the first time I posted it- but oh well. Hopefully this chapter and the sequel will do better! Plz R&R!! (
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Melissa awoke to harsh sunlight and chirping birds. "What the..." she muttered groggily, "I don't have the window facing east...."
In an instant she was sitting up and observing her surroundings. She lay in a clearing, Nikole next to her (though she was starting to stir), a normal sized Yusuke under another tree. They were in what looked to be a forest, but the ground was clear of tangled underbrush.
"Huh? Wha 'appened?" Nikole yawned, sitting up and rubbing her eyes. Her hair was tangled; she started to finger comb it.
"I don't know where we are," Melissa said softly in reply. She crawled over so she was next to Yusuke, and started to shake him. "Whae up! Yusuke, wake up NOW!"
His eyes opened slowly, then got wide as he sat up. "Hey! You got really small!"
She giggled. "No, silly, you returned to normal. Do you know where we are?"
He looked around and shook his head slightly. "It reminds me of Makai, but looks different."
"Hn." A black blur landed on the ground and straightened- it was Hiei. "We're in the Eastern part of Makai, luckily."
~I will NOT panic. I will NOT panic. I'll save it for when we get out of here. I will NOT panic,~ Melissa told herself firmly.
"Ouch!" Nikole yelped. Melissa looked over- her friend was on the ground, face twisted in pain. "What's the matter?"
"My ankle- I think it's sprained," she replied gloomily. "That' great, we're stranded in Makai and I can't walk. Wonderful. Bloody lovely."
"Um- Hiei- is there a way we can return to, um, ningenkai?" Melissa asked, worried that they would not get out of there.
((Nikole's POV))
I tried to listen as Hiei replied. Yes, there was a way- a portal about 20 miles away. When activated properly, it would go to ningenkai.
My ankle throbbed. Yusuke asked, "But how do we get that far if Nikole-san can't walk?"
I grmiaced. "I could always crawl," I said, trying to be funny. Melissa knelt beside me and pulled her bandanna from her pocket, and wrapped it around my ankle for support. "You still won't be able to walk, but...."
"I'll carry her." I snapped my head up to look at Hiei, who walked towrads me and picked me up like I was feather light. With my size, I was pretty light, but wow.
"I could carry her," Yusuke said defensively. Hiei made a sound of disbelief that made me smile. "Not only am I faster, so I can avoid being attacked, I'm also a lot less clumsy than a ningen like you."
Melissa laughed but put a hand on Yusuke's arm. "He's right. You have to protect me, though, don't forget."
He looked sheepish, "Oh yeah. Do you know any type of fighting?"
I barely heard Melissa reply "Some" before Hiei jumped into a treetop. He started to go so fast I only saw green and brown blurs, and I buried my face in his shoulder.
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That's the end of Wiccan Worries! I'd originally thought of ending it on that note, but decided not to. I mean, you can imagine them getting back into ningen kai and either a) finding a way home or b) living the rest of their lives there. But the sequel, Wiccan Warriors, should be posted soon if I get some support. So whaddya say? could you review for me, please? And tell me what ending YOU would like.
Much Luv
-Devils Little Doll-