Here is chapter four for you. Make sure to tell me how you think the story
is progressing please.
I own nothing. Thank you for any reviews that I get. This is fairly new and I do not expect to have many yet. I will always hold reviews in my heart though. Yes I am a massive suck up but that is what Tiggers do best.
Here comes chapter four for you all.
I have to thank Aahz again for her proofreading abilities. You can now somewhat understand what I write now. Isn't that great? If you like Sap about Sirius Black read her story Sirius' Moon. It is rather good if you don't mind Mary-Sues. The main character is a Mary-Sue. A good Mary-Sue though yet a Mary-Sue non the less. Lisa, please do not ADD errors to my story as a form of vengeance. I know that I may deserve it but I am the speaker of truth. Allow me to remain such and love me all the same. (FIX AND ADD WHAT YOU WANT IT IS YOUR ADVERTISEMENT)
This is Lisa, AKA Aahz. Rachel, Teqon, is delusional. I would never shamelessly put myself into one of my own stories! Never! I really never meant too. If it seems like it, it was a boo-boo.. I'm taking away Lestat and Marius Rachel! And you, you shall be naked forever. *EVIL laughter* How exactly does one become a vengeance demon?
More advertising, I just put the sequel up people, so if you do a search on my SN, you can check them (All my stories) all out. *cries due to the fact that her story could be interpreted as a Mary-Sue though the author swears she never meant it that way*
Also, those of you who are thinking I am hogging this story, read the reviews in mine! Wow! Rachel can advertise without advertising I'll tell yah!
*Quirks a brow*
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Why do I so willingly accept what you say to me? Is there a problem with my head. I am never this enamored nor trusting of people I do not know. Can I really put my faith in you as I do now? Just don't hurt me. I am as glass. I can feel it. If you were to lie to me or be anything less than the picturesque angel I envision you as my mind will shatter. What did you do to me? Emotions that tend to be so visible to other people weaken me. I am not the strong person I once was. The proud arrogant woman I was seems to be hiding in the recesses of my brain being the mists which shroud and dampen the flames of emotion. All that I feel is love for you as you lie in this bed resting your energy to endow me with the immortality I am not certain that I want. My mind has always wanted such power but my heart is yelling 'no' in the distance. I can't even understand why I would not want what you are giving me.
I could stare at you for hours. That face of yours is a indelible image forever etched in my head. The love I feel is true. Even if I was under a enchantment I would still love you. You are a kind man, dangerous, but kind and never lacking in charisma. You always know what to say when you decide to speak and it is the correct thing. Not one word doesn't matter. The real reason that I love you which is clearer than any physical attributes you have is the fact that you are here with me. I was so desperate for companionship I would have killed myself in that street if you did not take me here. How crazy I am. I need your guidance. I need you to teach me. Teach me anything at all. What I want most of all from you though is for you to teach me to be strong again. Help me to regain my lost dignity. My spirit is diminished. Give me something to believe in.
You began to stir from your slumber. I know that you can sense things. Did you feel that I was watching you sleep, that is still a strange idea to me. Your eyes are startlingly blue-gray as are my own. I have not seen the reddish gleam in them since when you saved me from myself. For this I am most thankful. Right when your eyes open you look right at me. Yes, you did sense that I thought of you then. Most times your emotions are entirely unreadable but today as yesterday is not another one of those days. Your smile is so confident and warm. You hop out of bed and stride gracefully around it then take me by my hands. I grin to see such uncharacteristic fervent anticipation. Then all of a sudden without any warning your eyelids shun the sparkling gems that were your eyes. You collapse in front of me still grasping my hands in a iron grip. I can not remove them but that matters not. The first thing to come to my mind, my grin removed I fall to my knees and inspect you to see what caused this and what state you are in. I am gripped with fear at the prospect of losing my master.
I can accomplish nothing. You are beyond my help. The only thing that can be done is to await you when you return to consciousness. Nothing on Earth can kill you, this you have told me numerous times. I will just have to wait until you awake. I slump forward on your motionless form as I also lose consciousness and join you in quiet sleep.
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Although it may have been noiseless in the chamber of the apartment in no way was the vision such. It was full of turmoil and sweat. Lose emotions running through the air. Darkness encompassed my sweaty form as I lay on the harsh ground of my unknown expansive environment. Where are we? You are here with me. holding my head in your lap whispering soothing words to me. You are trying to calm me. I can not calm. I will not calm. Swirling around us is a massive explosion of color as if we were in purgatory awaiting our fate. What will happen next? This color is so like the oblivion that enters my mind when I try to picture it. The colors are tremulous and in no way placid. They swirl in fury trying to pull me away from you with it. I feel as if it will swallow us whole and spit us into hell. I belong there. I am in no way a good person. I have done so much harm to other people. In the life before I lost my identity my heart was filled with greed and envy. Oh I loved the world I admired it so. I saw so much joy but I could never really touch it. I wanted to give the world my all but it would not let me. Where could I go where people did not hate? The world has evil in all corners. There were wars and tyrants financial sharks, killers and a whole gamut of terrible fates that I could not conceive. I did not want to be them. Oh no not at all.
The colors receded and we were left in the darkness once again. I sat up and found that our hands were still locked together as if by key. Like we have been we still remain locked by spirit and by fate. I put my head against your chest and you tell me that it will end soon. This cannot end by itself. There is nothing to end! It is pitch black oblivion to its fullest extent.
"Let us leave this now. It can not change. It will always remain as nothing here. Let us get out of here. We do not belong here. No human belongs in this place." I said with certainty.
"I am not human you know and soon neither will you, my love." Your eyes took on the ominous red glow for the second time before me. How chilling. To the very core of me.
This time though your eyes do not scare me. The glowing has the same symbol as the first time. You shall bring Death to me. It truly does not scare me. I stand up with you and kiss you for the first time. It is with out passion but contains the deepest respect. I accept my fate that you have given me. I will do this now and know that death shall soon follow.
I own nothing. Thank you for any reviews that I get. This is fairly new and I do not expect to have many yet. I will always hold reviews in my heart though. Yes I am a massive suck up but that is what Tiggers do best.
Here comes chapter four for you all.
I have to thank Aahz again for her proofreading abilities. You can now somewhat understand what I write now. Isn't that great? If you like Sap about Sirius Black read her story Sirius' Moon. It is rather good if you don't mind Mary-Sues. The main character is a Mary-Sue. A good Mary-Sue though yet a Mary-Sue non the less. Lisa, please do not ADD errors to my story as a form of vengeance. I know that I may deserve it but I am the speaker of truth. Allow me to remain such and love me all the same. (FIX AND ADD WHAT YOU WANT IT IS YOUR ADVERTISEMENT)
This is Lisa, AKA Aahz. Rachel, Teqon, is delusional. I would never shamelessly put myself into one of my own stories! Never! I really never meant too. If it seems like it, it was a boo-boo.. I'm taking away Lestat and Marius Rachel! And you, you shall be naked forever. *EVIL laughter* How exactly does one become a vengeance demon?
More advertising, I just put the sequel up people, so if you do a search on my SN, you can check them (All my stories) all out. *cries due to the fact that her story could be interpreted as a Mary-Sue though the author swears she never meant it that way*
Also, those of you who are thinking I am hogging this story, read the reviews in mine! Wow! Rachel can advertise without advertising I'll tell yah!
*Quirks a brow*
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Why do I so willingly accept what you say to me? Is there a problem with my head. I am never this enamored nor trusting of people I do not know. Can I really put my faith in you as I do now? Just don't hurt me. I am as glass. I can feel it. If you were to lie to me or be anything less than the picturesque angel I envision you as my mind will shatter. What did you do to me? Emotions that tend to be so visible to other people weaken me. I am not the strong person I once was. The proud arrogant woman I was seems to be hiding in the recesses of my brain being the mists which shroud and dampen the flames of emotion. All that I feel is love for you as you lie in this bed resting your energy to endow me with the immortality I am not certain that I want. My mind has always wanted such power but my heart is yelling 'no' in the distance. I can't even understand why I would not want what you are giving me.
I could stare at you for hours. That face of yours is a indelible image forever etched in my head. The love I feel is true. Even if I was under a enchantment I would still love you. You are a kind man, dangerous, but kind and never lacking in charisma. You always know what to say when you decide to speak and it is the correct thing. Not one word doesn't matter. The real reason that I love you which is clearer than any physical attributes you have is the fact that you are here with me. I was so desperate for companionship I would have killed myself in that street if you did not take me here. How crazy I am. I need your guidance. I need you to teach me. Teach me anything at all. What I want most of all from you though is for you to teach me to be strong again. Help me to regain my lost dignity. My spirit is diminished. Give me something to believe in.
You began to stir from your slumber. I know that you can sense things. Did you feel that I was watching you sleep, that is still a strange idea to me. Your eyes are startlingly blue-gray as are my own. I have not seen the reddish gleam in them since when you saved me from myself. For this I am most thankful. Right when your eyes open you look right at me. Yes, you did sense that I thought of you then. Most times your emotions are entirely unreadable but today as yesterday is not another one of those days. Your smile is so confident and warm. You hop out of bed and stride gracefully around it then take me by my hands. I grin to see such uncharacteristic fervent anticipation. Then all of a sudden without any warning your eyelids shun the sparkling gems that were your eyes. You collapse in front of me still grasping my hands in a iron grip. I can not remove them but that matters not. The first thing to come to my mind, my grin removed I fall to my knees and inspect you to see what caused this and what state you are in. I am gripped with fear at the prospect of losing my master.
I can accomplish nothing. You are beyond my help. The only thing that can be done is to await you when you return to consciousness. Nothing on Earth can kill you, this you have told me numerous times. I will just have to wait until you awake. I slump forward on your motionless form as I also lose consciousness and join you in quiet sleep.
***
Although it may have been noiseless in the chamber of the apartment in no way was the vision such. It was full of turmoil and sweat. Lose emotions running through the air. Darkness encompassed my sweaty form as I lay on the harsh ground of my unknown expansive environment. Where are we? You are here with me. holding my head in your lap whispering soothing words to me. You are trying to calm me. I can not calm. I will not calm. Swirling around us is a massive explosion of color as if we were in purgatory awaiting our fate. What will happen next? This color is so like the oblivion that enters my mind when I try to picture it. The colors are tremulous and in no way placid. They swirl in fury trying to pull me away from you with it. I feel as if it will swallow us whole and spit us into hell. I belong there. I am in no way a good person. I have done so much harm to other people. In the life before I lost my identity my heart was filled with greed and envy. Oh I loved the world I admired it so. I saw so much joy but I could never really touch it. I wanted to give the world my all but it would not let me. Where could I go where people did not hate? The world has evil in all corners. There were wars and tyrants financial sharks, killers and a whole gamut of terrible fates that I could not conceive. I did not want to be them. Oh no not at all.
The colors receded and we were left in the darkness once again. I sat up and found that our hands were still locked together as if by key. Like we have been we still remain locked by spirit and by fate. I put my head against your chest and you tell me that it will end soon. This cannot end by itself. There is nothing to end! It is pitch black oblivion to its fullest extent.
"Let us leave this now. It can not change. It will always remain as nothing here. Let us get out of here. We do not belong here. No human belongs in this place." I said with certainty.
"I am not human you know and soon neither will you, my love." Your eyes took on the ominous red glow for the second time before me. How chilling. To the very core of me.
This time though your eyes do not scare me. The glowing has the same symbol as the first time. You shall bring Death to me. It truly does not scare me. I stand up with you and kiss you for the first time. It is with out passion but contains the deepest respect. I accept my fate that you have given me. I will do this now and know that death shall soon follow.