I got an interesting review today…some people just don't know how to flame. Anyway, this person is really lame, one of the worst flames I've ever seen, everyone point and laugh at the crappy flamer. Come on, you know you want to…point and laugh! Point and laugh!!!
This is the entry for those that haven't seen it: this is by B*chan- kawaii_beechan@hotmail.com
Ugh. Trunks & Pan stories are ALWAYS the same. And then, they add Goten and Bra as a couple to make the pairing even more illegal! I honestly think that all of the T/P & G/B obsessers are mentally retarded. That would be just like fucking your uncle, you sick perv. You can go on and flame all of my fanfics if you want to, I'll just laugh my ass off.
And for the record, how is it illegal for t/p and g/b to be together? trunks and pan are not related, and neither are bra and goten...so i don't know, and i think that this person is mentally retarded, come on, imagination is the root of everything! Also, how am I a sick pervert? I'd like this B*chan to explain. How would it be fucking your uncle? Pan and goten don't get together. If you want those kind of stories, looks for those. And for the laughing your ass off, that wouldn't be good, did you ever read the story about the boy who lost his bottom? You wouldn't be able to do anything, so much for that! You'd be in effect, ruining your life, so, maybe I would like to see you laugh your ass off.
Sorry people, I'm being a bit bitchy today, but that person deserves it. I dare you all to flame her really boring stories, so she does laugh her ass off!
I'd also like to say thankyou for all you people that review my story. Reviews help provide inspiration to keep updating, you people actually are doing something constructive with your lives. And as always, review.
Thankyou for listening to my rant and raving. And have fun with the next chapter!
Love you all (well, not this B*chan person, she sucks)
Chapter 13
"BRA! HURRY UP! WE ARE ONLY GOING SHOPPING!!" Pan yelled up the stairs.
"COMING!!!" Bra ran down the stairs. "Mum, can we have some capsules? Please…"
"Oh, ok, Bra. Here you go, and have fun!" Bulma said handing them 3 capsules each.
"CYA MUM!"
"Bye dear!" Bulma yelled as the two girls flew out the door. They flew down to the shopping complex in Satan City, then Bra and Pan (with no objections) shopped until they found everything they needed.
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They arrived home about 3pm that afternoon. Bra, as usual, had bought a lot. She had bought a bright red, long, flowing gown (which complemented her hair, and her figure), red semi-high-heeled shoes, strappy, of course. She also got some hair clips and jewels, some new makeup and garnet earings.
Pan, for a change, had bought a fair bit too. She had found the perfect dress, a silver dress which sparkled blue shimmer as she moved- perfect for night time, and for showing off- with spaghetti straps which went over her shoulders and criss-crossed down her back. She also bought some silver strappy shoes, and some new makeup (Bra picked it out for her). She decided on a simple silver chain with a tiny sapphire on it, and tiny sapphire earings.
They went up to Bra's room and popped open their capsules. All their purchases popped out, all over Bra's floor.
"Sorry bout the mess, Bra."
"No prob. The only reason it was clean was that mum activated all the robots to clean up the house for tomorrow." Bra collapsed on the bed.
"Tired are we?"
"Yeah, shopping is like a sport. It takes so much out of you, I don't know how normal humans do it!" Pan had to agree with her. After shopping for 6 hours straight, she was ready to relax, and maybe have a nap.
"Hey, let's just lounge around this afternoon. I'm tired." Pan fell onto the bed next to Bra.
"Yeah, how bout you sleep over tonight. Just this time, I'll lock the door, so you can't get out, so you can get your beauty sleep…" Bra giggled.
"I did get some sleep…oh BRA!" Pan realising what Bra had implied. Pan went quiet.
"Are you thinking about my brother?" Pan didn't reply.
"Do you love him?" Pan nodded. Bra continued.
"Is he your mate…?" Pan nodded again.
"Really?" Bra asked. Pan just smiled and nodded.
"I love him with all my heart and I know we'll be together for ever…" Pan paused.
"Unless he gets killed or dies…" Bra commented.
"Yeah…" Bra was shocked. Before today, she would have gotten her head bitten off for that comment. Now, whenever they talked about her brother, Pan went off into her own little dream world.
Oh well. Bra thought. I can't do much about that!
Meanwhile, Pan was telepathically talking to Trunks (unknown to Bra).
So, what are you doing? Pan thought.
I'm supposed to be working, but I'll always have time for you! Trunks thought. So, what's on your mind?
You should know, you're reading it!
Tsk, tsk, tsk. You wanna meet up later?
I'm staying over here tonight, so we can spend all day tomorrow getting ready.
I'm looking forward to seeing you.
I can't wait to see you too… Pan smiled.
"HEY! What are you thinking about?" Bra yelled. Pan ignored her.
Ok then, I'd better go. Mum's trying to talk to me about some stuff. Trunks thought.
Ditto, but it's your sister on my end. Pan giggled.
"Hey! PAN!!"
I love you, Pan.
I love ya too. Bye!
"PAN!!!" Bra yelled. Pan turned to Bra.
"Sorry, come on. Let's go veg out."
"Cool! Let's go!" They both ran down the stairs, plonked down in front of the TV and watched videos all afternoon.
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The day of the party had arrived. Bra and Pan had spent the morning lounging around, as well as going down to the shops to buy a new dress, shoes and accessories for Bulma.
"I just know she'll have forgotten." Bra had said. "She's so busy organising everything else, she'll have forgotten about herself." So before they got ready, they had got her dress, and put it in a capsule next to her bed. "She'll come to ask me to get her something about 2 hours before the party, I just know she will." Bra giggled, then Pan joined in.
"Come on, Bra, we have 4 hours until the party. Let's get ready!"
"I'll just grab my stuff, have you got your stuff?"
"Yep, it's all here." Pan pulled out a capsule.
"Cool, just a sec." Bra ran to her room and in a few moments she was back with her capsule. She opened the door to the master bathroom. "After you!"
"Why thankyou!" Pan started to giggle again, and walked though the door. Bra followed, and locked the door behind them.
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2 hours later, sure as Bra's word, Bulma knocked on the door of the bathroom, asking them to go down to the shops and get her a dress.
"We already got all your stuff! It's in a capsule on your bedside table."
"Thanks Bra! Thankyou!" Bulma ran down the corridor, and into her room. Bra turned to Pan.
"Told you. Lucky we bought one this morning."
"Lucky us, lucky her!" Pan slipped her dress over her head and over her body. "Ok! Now for the hair!"
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