Well I know my last chapter was short, VERY short, not to mention with
plenty of grammatical and spelling errors, but like I said, I can't do
anything about it until I can reinstall Word, which I'm having difficulties
doing since there seems to be a problem with the installation program.
Anyways, until then I'll just do my best to steer clear of errors, and you,
my most gracious audience, will have to bear with me. Anyways Their are a
couple of things I would like to discuss befo....
Ryo: SHUT UP ALREADY AND READ THE DAMN DISCLAIMER!!
Mr. Badguy87: Who asked you anyways? And why have you all of a sudden popped up and started criticizing my disclaimer?
Ryo: Because it was a dumbass poem you've been using since chapter one!!!
Mr. Badguy87: It was not dumb!! It was a work of pure genius!
Rest of CCS cast: Sorry, Mr. Badguy, but I think we all agree with Ryo on this one, it may have been catchy for the first few chapter, but now it's getting a little old...
Mr. Badguy87: Well if that's the way you all feel, then here's my new disclaimer, I don't own any part of CCS or any of its characters in this story, but *smirks* I do own this story line and Ryo, MWAHAHAHAHAHA!
Kero: He's gone mad!!!
Yue: I have noticed this before and suggested he change his pen name to Mr. Madman, but he just kept on laughing....
Suppi: Oh well anyways here are some things his loyal readers should know-
"speaking" 'thinking' [[psychically communicating]]
~*****~ change of scene ~^^^^^~ flashback ~~ Change into/out of first person POV
Nakuru: Now onto the story------
He Has Returned
Chapter Ten
Birthday Gone Bad Part 1:Prelude to a Fall
Both parties, good and evil, were planning for Saturday, the day in which Sakura would celebrate her 18th birthday. While one side held nothing but good intentions, the other planned to unleash a living hell on this earth
~*****~
"Lord Unawa, our entire regiment is ready and waiting!"
"Perfect, tonight is the night in which we shall be rid of all of our troubles"
Unawa turned to his loyal subjects.
"Tonight is the night we shall feed on the corpses of our enemies!"
This brought cheers to the undead warriors
~*****~
The entire gang, excluding Sakura, who was currently being taught the art of teleportation by Syaoran's mother, was finishing up the plans for tonight, Sakura's birthday party.
They all planned to go out that evening, they would all go to the festival together, have a good time with the entire group of friends, then at ten, Syaoran would take Sakura out to a nice dinner, then propose to her. It was still amazing he, or any person within a 500 yard radius, could hear after the reaction of Tomoyo, Rika, Chiharu, Naoko, and even Meiling. They had squealed so loud a few windows nearby had cracked. Shen and Yamazaki were bleeding at the ears and Eriol landed a few yards away, with his glasses cracked, not from the fall but from the enormous amount of decibels being emitted from the excited girls.
"OMIGOD!!!" Chiharu shouted
"IT'S SSSSSSSSOOOOOOOO KAWAII!!!" Tomoyo squealed
"I CAN'T BELIEVE SYAORAN AND SAKURA ARE FINALLY GOING TO GET MARRIED!!!" Meiling said while dancing around happily
Syaoran took awhile to recover from the shockwave of sound that hit him, but when he did, he went off like a firecracker.
"WILL YOU ALL PLEASE QUIET DOWN SAKURA MIGHT HEA-"
"Hear what Syaoran?" Sakura said innocently
Th entire gang of teenagers sweat-dropped, hoping that against all odds that Sakura had not heard their plans. Eriol quickly probed her mind in an effort to find evidence that their plan had been unveiled, but could find none, as far as Sakura knew, he reasoned, they were all staying at the Li Mansion.
Sakura still looked slightly puzzled and gave no true hint that she knew.
"Did you just hear a loud scream?" Naoko asked tentatively
"No, none at all." Sakura said with the utmost sincerity
"I didn't hear anything either" Yelan said with a wink
Syaoran and Eriol realized that Yelan had put an anti-sound spell on the room they had trained in, so Sakura couldn't hear them talking, or in the girls' case, loud squealing. They all breathed a sigh of relief.
"Anyway, Sakura has finished her training and.."
"Look what I can do Syaoran!!" Sakura said happily, and started showing off her teleporting abilities to Syaoran and the others.
Both Syaoran and Eriol's mouths dropped to the ground
"IT TOOK US FIVE MONTHS TO LEARN THAT AND IT TAKES HER FIVE HOURS!?!?!?"
"Yes, it does appear Sakura is a fast learner." Yelan said with a slight smile "As I was saying, its time to eat, so you can all come inside now"
The group ventured inside to find Yukito and Nakuru already at the table, and an exasperated Touya fallen on the ground, appearing to have been trampled.
Fujitaka walked in "Yukito and Nakuru did not watch where they were running when I said dinner was ready.
Suppi and Kero were on the ground next to Touya, attempting to provide words of comfort, but it appeared he was totally unconscious.
"IT'S ABOUT TIME YOU GOT HERE!!" Yukito and Nakuru said at the same time, rather eerily,"IT'S TIME TO EAT!!"
The entire group simply sweat-dropped, and quickly sat down at the table, not wanting to know what would happen to them if they got in the way of Yukito and Nakuru's dinner. The meal only consisted of light hors' douvres (is that how you spell it?). During the meal only quiet chatter could be heard until Yelan broke the silence.
"Shouldn't you all be going, you're going to be late for the fair if you don't go soon."
"Where? What fair?" Sakura asked
"We're all taking you out for your birthday" Tomoyo answered cheerfully
"But I thought it was too unsafe for us to go out, with Mangkukulam and all" Sakura stated
"Yes but every safety precaution has been taken care of." Yelan said," Just don't tell Ryo about this, he'll be furious with us if he knew you were just waltzing out into a huge crowd."
Sakura's face lit up in a huge smile. She doubted that she had smiled this much since she saw Syaoran again. She could only nod and quickly left to change. ~*****~
The group quickly left the mansion, reassuring Yelan and Fujitaka that Sakura's safety would be the utmost of importance. The limo quickly dropped them off at the park and the teenagers were left at a very wonderful scene, with a parade, food booths, and just a good time.
The group eventually split up into its respective couples, and seeing as Rika had no escort, Yukito had graciously offered his arm to her. Rika had taken it with a blush. Touya and Nakuru left for the swan ride, Eriol and Tomoyo left for the Ferris Wheel, Shen and Naoko left for a small bookstore cafe, and Chiharu and Yamazaki went all out and headed for the roller coaster, and soon enough Syaoran and Sakura were alone.
Syaoran led Sakura out of the hustle and bustle over to a nice quiet spot. They only stared at each other's eyes the entire time, for what seemed like hours.
"Look at the fireworks Sakura!!"
Sakura looked over and smiled,"They're amazing, but not as spectacular as you Syaoran."
They looked at each other lovingly and the pulled each other into a loving kiss. Syaoran immediately broke off their kiss. He reached into his pocket and fingered a soft, velvety box.
'This is it, it's now or never'
Syaoran tentatively kneeled in front of Sakura and reached for his pocket. Sakura, being the naive girl she is, looked at him questioningly. Neither of them knew of the eight people watching them from the bushes, one of which had a red, blinking eye.
"Sakura, I know that we're both young and all, but I want to spend the rest of my life with you"
Sakura watched in amazement as he held out the ring
"Will you marry me?"
She couldn't answer at first, and just had a dazed look in her eyes. Syaoran immediately become interested in the cobblestone pathway beneath him.
Sakura snapped out of her reverie and cupped his face with her palm.
"Syaoran, I would be honored to be your wife."
They then kissed each other with a loving passion.
The eight beings in the bushes then began sniggering and stepped out of their higing spot.
"The master will be pleased with what we have found here"
Sakura and Syaoran immediately came out of their kiss and took defensive stances.
"Who are you?"
The eight people then took out swords. The one with an eyepatch and a bloodred eye said "Sentients, of Master Demonyo Unawa. We are called the Death Knights, and we have come for your head."
Syaoran soon had his sword out and Sakura also took out her staff.
"Sakura, "Syaoran whispered," We can't take all of them on, we need to get back to the others, we need to teleport there, got it?"
Sakura nodded and in three seconds they were gone.
The lead Death Knights snorted in frustration and immediately ran off to the park, in hot pursuit of the newly engaged couple.
Major cliff hanger there!! Sorry!! I know it took me more than a month to get this chapter out, but please, I have exams and I had about fifteen projects to do and 5 books to read over november so I didn't really have time for this, I also had crew so it made it twice as hard to find time for my writing. I already have the next part of chapter ten written, I just need to proof it. Sorry for the long wait everyone!!
Please, I know it took very long, but please review my story!! Even if its flames about getting it out so late!!
READ: VERY VERY IMPORTANT!!
(On a sidenote, I don't have a very hard time coming up with the chapter plotlines, but I do have an extremely difficult time revising and proofing. I need help trying to figure out which parts to cut and keep, and I need help trying to fix my grammatical and spelling{really need that} errors! If anyone is interested to help me revise and proof my chapters please email me about this. My email address is Emikey87@aol.com or Emikey123@yahoo.com. Either address is fine. This would be a big help in getting out chapters faster!! Also I might need help with my other story I have just been coming up with, in dedication to my harry-potter addicted girlfriend Jennifer and best-friend Ray, who are both in highschool with me, I have decided to write a Harry Potter fanfic for them, commemorating their favorite couples in the novel - Cho/Harry, and Hermione/Ron. Help for this story would be greatly appreciated. If you would like to help for either of these stories please contact me!!!!!!)
Ryo: SHUT UP ALREADY AND READ THE DAMN DISCLAIMER!!
Mr. Badguy87: Who asked you anyways? And why have you all of a sudden popped up and started criticizing my disclaimer?
Ryo: Because it was a dumbass poem you've been using since chapter one!!!
Mr. Badguy87: It was not dumb!! It was a work of pure genius!
Rest of CCS cast: Sorry, Mr. Badguy, but I think we all agree with Ryo on this one, it may have been catchy for the first few chapter, but now it's getting a little old...
Mr. Badguy87: Well if that's the way you all feel, then here's my new disclaimer, I don't own any part of CCS or any of its characters in this story, but *smirks* I do own this story line and Ryo, MWAHAHAHAHAHA!
Kero: He's gone mad!!!
Yue: I have noticed this before and suggested he change his pen name to Mr. Madman, but he just kept on laughing....
Suppi: Oh well anyways here are some things his loyal readers should know-
"speaking" 'thinking' [[psychically communicating]]
~*****~ change of scene ~^^^^^~ flashback ~~ Change into/out of first person POV
Nakuru: Now onto the story------
He Has Returned
Chapter Ten
Birthday Gone Bad Part 1:Prelude to a Fall
Both parties, good and evil, were planning for Saturday, the day in which Sakura would celebrate her 18th birthday. While one side held nothing but good intentions, the other planned to unleash a living hell on this earth
~*****~
"Lord Unawa, our entire regiment is ready and waiting!"
"Perfect, tonight is the night in which we shall be rid of all of our troubles"
Unawa turned to his loyal subjects.
"Tonight is the night we shall feed on the corpses of our enemies!"
This brought cheers to the undead warriors
~*****~
The entire gang, excluding Sakura, who was currently being taught the art of teleportation by Syaoran's mother, was finishing up the plans for tonight, Sakura's birthday party.
They all planned to go out that evening, they would all go to the festival together, have a good time with the entire group of friends, then at ten, Syaoran would take Sakura out to a nice dinner, then propose to her. It was still amazing he, or any person within a 500 yard radius, could hear after the reaction of Tomoyo, Rika, Chiharu, Naoko, and even Meiling. They had squealed so loud a few windows nearby had cracked. Shen and Yamazaki were bleeding at the ears and Eriol landed a few yards away, with his glasses cracked, not from the fall but from the enormous amount of decibels being emitted from the excited girls.
"OMIGOD!!!" Chiharu shouted
"IT'S SSSSSSSSOOOOOOOO KAWAII!!!" Tomoyo squealed
"I CAN'T BELIEVE SYAORAN AND SAKURA ARE FINALLY GOING TO GET MARRIED!!!" Meiling said while dancing around happily
Syaoran took awhile to recover from the shockwave of sound that hit him, but when he did, he went off like a firecracker.
"WILL YOU ALL PLEASE QUIET DOWN SAKURA MIGHT HEA-"
"Hear what Syaoran?" Sakura said innocently
Th entire gang of teenagers sweat-dropped, hoping that against all odds that Sakura had not heard their plans. Eriol quickly probed her mind in an effort to find evidence that their plan had been unveiled, but could find none, as far as Sakura knew, he reasoned, they were all staying at the Li Mansion.
Sakura still looked slightly puzzled and gave no true hint that she knew.
"Did you just hear a loud scream?" Naoko asked tentatively
"No, none at all." Sakura said with the utmost sincerity
"I didn't hear anything either" Yelan said with a wink
Syaoran and Eriol realized that Yelan had put an anti-sound spell on the room they had trained in, so Sakura couldn't hear them talking, or in the girls' case, loud squealing. They all breathed a sigh of relief.
"Anyway, Sakura has finished her training and.."
"Look what I can do Syaoran!!" Sakura said happily, and started showing off her teleporting abilities to Syaoran and the others.
Both Syaoran and Eriol's mouths dropped to the ground
"IT TOOK US FIVE MONTHS TO LEARN THAT AND IT TAKES HER FIVE HOURS!?!?!?"
"Yes, it does appear Sakura is a fast learner." Yelan said with a slight smile "As I was saying, its time to eat, so you can all come inside now"
The group ventured inside to find Yukito and Nakuru already at the table, and an exasperated Touya fallen on the ground, appearing to have been trampled.
Fujitaka walked in "Yukito and Nakuru did not watch where they were running when I said dinner was ready.
Suppi and Kero were on the ground next to Touya, attempting to provide words of comfort, but it appeared he was totally unconscious.
"IT'S ABOUT TIME YOU GOT HERE!!" Yukito and Nakuru said at the same time, rather eerily,"IT'S TIME TO EAT!!"
The entire group simply sweat-dropped, and quickly sat down at the table, not wanting to know what would happen to them if they got in the way of Yukito and Nakuru's dinner. The meal only consisted of light hors' douvres (is that how you spell it?). During the meal only quiet chatter could be heard until Yelan broke the silence.
"Shouldn't you all be going, you're going to be late for the fair if you don't go soon."
"Where? What fair?" Sakura asked
"We're all taking you out for your birthday" Tomoyo answered cheerfully
"But I thought it was too unsafe for us to go out, with Mangkukulam and all" Sakura stated
"Yes but every safety precaution has been taken care of." Yelan said," Just don't tell Ryo about this, he'll be furious with us if he knew you were just waltzing out into a huge crowd."
Sakura's face lit up in a huge smile. She doubted that she had smiled this much since she saw Syaoran again. She could only nod and quickly left to change. ~*****~
The group quickly left the mansion, reassuring Yelan and Fujitaka that Sakura's safety would be the utmost of importance. The limo quickly dropped them off at the park and the teenagers were left at a very wonderful scene, with a parade, food booths, and just a good time.
The group eventually split up into its respective couples, and seeing as Rika had no escort, Yukito had graciously offered his arm to her. Rika had taken it with a blush. Touya and Nakuru left for the swan ride, Eriol and Tomoyo left for the Ferris Wheel, Shen and Naoko left for a small bookstore cafe, and Chiharu and Yamazaki went all out and headed for the roller coaster, and soon enough Syaoran and Sakura were alone.
Syaoran led Sakura out of the hustle and bustle over to a nice quiet spot. They only stared at each other's eyes the entire time, for what seemed like hours.
"Look at the fireworks Sakura!!"
Sakura looked over and smiled,"They're amazing, but not as spectacular as you Syaoran."
They looked at each other lovingly and the pulled each other into a loving kiss. Syaoran immediately broke off their kiss. He reached into his pocket and fingered a soft, velvety box.
'This is it, it's now or never'
Syaoran tentatively kneeled in front of Sakura and reached for his pocket. Sakura, being the naive girl she is, looked at him questioningly. Neither of them knew of the eight people watching them from the bushes, one of which had a red, blinking eye.
"Sakura, I know that we're both young and all, but I want to spend the rest of my life with you"
Sakura watched in amazement as he held out the ring
"Will you marry me?"
She couldn't answer at first, and just had a dazed look in her eyes. Syaoran immediately become interested in the cobblestone pathway beneath him.
Sakura snapped out of her reverie and cupped his face with her palm.
"Syaoran, I would be honored to be your wife."
They then kissed each other with a loving passion.
The eight beings in the bushes then began sniggering and stepped out of their higing spot.
"The master will be pleased with what we have found here"
Sakura and Syaoran immediately came out of their kiss and took defensive stances.
"Who are you?"
The eight people then took out swords. The one with an eyepatch and a bloodred eye said "Sentients, of Master Demonyo Unawa. We are called the Death Knights, and we have come for your head."
Syaoran soon had his sword out and Sakura also took out her staff.
"Sakura, "Syaoran whispered," We can't take all of them on, we need to get back to the others, we need to teleport there, got it?"
Sakura nodded and in three seconds they were gone.
The lead Death Knights snorted in frustration and immediately ran off to the park, in hot pursuit of the newly engaged couple.
Major cliff hanger there!! Sorry!! I know it took me more than a month to get this chapter out, but please, I have exams and I had about fifteen projects to do and 5 books to read over november so I didn't really have time for this, I also had crew so it made it twice as hard to find time for my writing. I already have the next part of chapter ten written, I just need to proof it. Sorry for the long wait everyone!!
Please, I know it took very long, but please review my story!! Even if its flames about getting it out so late!!
READ: VERY VERY IMPORTANT!!
(On a sidenote, I don't have a very hard time coming up with the chapter plotlines, but I do have an extremely difficult time revising and proofing. I need help trying to figure out which parts to cut and keep, and I need help trying to fix my grammatical and spelling{really need that} errors! If anyone is interested to help me revise and proof my chapters please email me about this. My email address is Emikey87@aol.com or Emikey123@yahoo.com. Either address is fine. This would be a big help in getting out chapters faster!! Also I might need help with my other story I have just been coming up with, in dedication to my harry-potter addicted girlfriend Jennifer and best-friend Ray, who are both in highschool with me, I have decided to write a Harry Potter fanfic for them, commemorating their favorite couples in the novel - Cho/Harry, and Hermione/Ron. Help for this story would be greatly appreciated. If you would like to help for either of these stories please contact me!!!!!!)