Authors Note: Okay in is chapter and the rest from here on my friend Isabel
has a running commentary. They are funny. So I thought you guys would like
to read them too. (I'm also the story's conscience :: laughs evilly::)
That was Is. Well I hope very body enjoys. Please read and review.
Chapter 3: Sweet Treats
Inside the candy store, it was dark. A sweet smelling pink smoke filled the room, and all at once all the lights came on.
"You're your 100th shopper." Said a short fat man wearing what looked to be like muggle cotton candy.(if it was Willy Wonky candy the possibilities are endless :: smacks her lips and thinks cotton candy::)
"Who me?" Ron said as the short fat man shook his and hard.
"Yes you. For being my 100th shopper." The fat man said jumping onto his desk in front of the shop. ( Now ever one break in to song) Then the man handed Ron a big red sack. Ron opened the sack to find in had well over 10,000 gallons in it.
"Is this real?" Ron asked still in shock, that he had won something Harry didn't. (yea 4 Ron)
"Yeah my twin brother and I once got a hold of some fake gold." Fred said eyeing the short fat man.
"Yes, yes, it real gentlemen." Said the fat store keeper, (The store keepers legal name is The Short Fat Store Keeper.) "You can use it any where in the wizarding world."
After getting 5 pounds of candy the Ron got for free, (Cause he bought it with the money he had won making it free) They set off to do more shopping.
First they went to the joke shop and Fred got some stuff to bother the other students when he got back to Hogwarts.
"Hey it's my last year at Hogwarts and George and I want to go out with a bang. (Literally) Fred laughed as he put the blue powder in to his bag.
Ron bought him self a small glass ball.
"Umm, Ron, What is that for?" Harry asked knowing what Ron was going to say. (If he knew then why did he ask?)
"It's a spy ball. When I tell it to spy on some one it shows me like so. Show me Ginny Weasley." Ron said as the ball began to glow an ice blue. Then the ball showed Ginny looking at a small black cat, in a pet store.
"Now show me Hermione Granger."
Like before the ball turned an ice blue and showed Hermione and George laughing. While George took one of his fake wands and turned it in to a pretty little yellow butterfly.
Ron growled. (Ron says Grrrr.) and shoved the spy ball back into his pocket.
"Wow look at the time. We have to meet Mum back at the Leaky Cauldron for dinner." Fred said as he put Ron in another headlock, and pulling him on to the street. (Lots of head locks. Much bondage, But only the male kind.)
Well there is chapter 3 (Yea it is over) please tell me what you think of the story this far, and Is wants to know what you all think of her commits. Please review. We will bow at your feet. ( I will not :: Crosses her wings over her body and sits cross legged on the floor::)
Chapter 3: Sweet Treats
Inside the candy store, it was dark. A sweet smelling pink smoke filled the room, and all at once all the lights came on.
"You're your 100th shopper." Said a short fat man wearing what looked to be like muggle cotton candy.(if it was Willy Wonky candy the possibilities are endless :: smacks her lips and thinks cotton candy::)
"Who me?" Ron said as the short fat man shook his and hard.
"Yes you. For being my 100th shopper." The fat man said jumping onto his desk in front of the shop. ( Now ever one break in to song) Then the man handed Ron a big red sack. Ron opened the sack to find in had well over 10,000 gallons in it.
"Is this real?" Ron asked still in shock, that he had won something Harry didn't. (yea 4 Ron)
"Yeah my twin brother and I once got a hold of some fake gold." Fred said eyeing the short fat man.
"Yes, yes, it real gentlemen." Said the fat store keeper, (The store keepers legal name is The Short Fat Store Keeper.) "You can use it any where in the wizarding world."
After getting 5 pounds of candy the Ron got for free, (Cause he bought it with the money he had won making it free) They set off to do more shopping.
First they went to the joke shop and Fred got some stuff to bother the other students when he got back to Hogwarts.
"Hey it's my last year at Hogwarts and George and I want to go out with a bang. (Literally) Fred laughed as he put the blue powder in to his bag.
Ron bought him self a small glass ball.
"Umm, Ron, What is that for?" Harry asked knowing what Ron was going to say. (If he knew then why did he ask?)
"It's a spy ball. When I tell it to spy on some one it shows me like so. Show me Ginny Weasley." Ron said as the ball began to glow an ice blue. Then the ball showed Ginny looking at a small black cat, in a pet store.
"Now show me Hermione Granger."
Like before the ball turned an ice blue and showed Hermione and George laughing. While George took one of his fake wands and turned it in to a pretty little yellow butterfly.
Ron growled. (Ron says Grrrr.) and shoved the spy ball back into his pocket.
"Wow look at the time. We have to meet Mum back at the Leaky Cauldron for dinner." Fred said as he put Ron in another headlock, and pulling him on to the street. (Lots of head locks. Much bondage, But only the male kind.)
Well there is chapter 3 (Yea it is over) please tell me what you think of the story this far, and Is wants to know what you all think of her commits. Please review. We will bow at your feet. ( I will not :: Crosses her wings over her body and sits cross legged on the floor::)