Senshi of Light
By puppyeyes
Card Captor Sakura is owned by Clamp, k? ________________________________________________________________________
Answering Review:
sakurachick03- Oh, I'm glad that this is a good storyline! Yes, I'll try to extend my chapters, but remember, I'm a lazy eleven year-old!
Chapter 2: A Visit from Touya and Riches
Sakura instantly knew who it was. Touya, the successful businessman. He would be coming for dinner, and Sakura was all too familiar with Touya's routine. He would sit down, start eating, give Mr. Kinomoto the thumbs-up and say "Great stuff Dad!" But that's not what Touya came to do. He would soon get down to business and start bragging about how successful his company was and "Hey Dad, you should go back to work and join my business!" A few hours later, sure enough, he went according to routine. This time, he payed more attention on his "making money" lecture than on what he was doing with his food. Instead of going into his mouth, Touya's saucy meatball hit his well-ironed suit. Sakura tried to hide the smirk on her face. Touya ran to the bathroom and started dunking his suit in water. Mr.Kinomoto got up to start making desert. Sakura sat, waiting. But then she noticed his wallet on the table. Sakura picked it up and looked through it. Was there enough money in there? Probably. Touya liked to carry a million in his pocket, in case someone ever thought that they might be richer. Sakura grabbed every fat bill. It was most definitely not enough. Then Sakura saw a check. "Aha!" she thought. "That's how he carries so much around!" Sakura pulled the check out. "Wait," Sakura thought. "Is this right? Should I steal from Touya?"
Memory starts:
Sakura is sitting on the steps during recess, crying because Touya had tested one of his new disses on her. Her face is red from crying all morning. Syaoran comes and sits next to her. "Sakura, what's wrong?" he asked her. "My brother," Sakura said. "Told me that I made a turkey seem like a genius!" She burst into tears again. "But you're not gonna believe him, are ya?" Syaoran asked her. "Normally," Sakura sobbed, "No. But then his friends started laughing. One of them pulled my hair and said it was ugly. They yanked some of it out." Sakura reached into her skirt pocket and took out a few strands of honey-colored hair. "See?" "It's okay." Syaoran comforted her. He pulled a cherry blossom off of a tree and gave it to her. "Thank you, it's beautiful!" Sakura said, her face starting to look happier, even though she was still sniffling. "They're nice when they are in bloom," Syaoran said, "But not as good or sweet as you. You, Sakura are always in bloom! I have yet to find anything worthy of you!" Sakura warmly thanked him and hugged with him, not normal for a 5-year old.
End of Memory.
"Still," Sakura thought. "It's not right."
Memory Starts:
Two years later, Sakura and Syaoran are always made fun of. Kids sing "Sakura and Syaoran, sittin' in a tree: K-I-S-S-I-N-G!....." The two don't care. While they are eating a snack outside, Sakura beckons her best and only female friend, Tomoyo. While she turns to do this, Syaoran is replaced with the ransom note. Sakura tells her teacher, but the teacher just tells Sakura that he was moving away. Sakura doesn't believe her teacher.
End of Memory.
"Yes," Sakura thought, her emotions changed, "Syaoran was there for me, and I'm going to be there for him!"
This is short, but I'm not going to write the next chapter until I get five reviews.
By puppyeyes
Card Captor Sakura is owned by Clamp, k? ________________________________________________________________________
Answering Review:
sakurachick03- Oh, I'm glad that this is a good storyline! Yes, I'll try to extend my chapters, but remember, I'm a lazy eleven year-old!
Chapter 2: A Visit from Touya and Riches
Sakura instantly knew who it was. Touya, the successful businessman. He would be coming for dinner, and Sakura was all too familiar with Touya's routine. He would sit down, start eating, give Mr. Kinomoto the thumbs-up and say "Great stuff Dad!" But that's not what Touya came to do. He would soon get down to business and start bragging about how successful his company was and "Hey Dad, you should go back to work and join my business!" A few hours later, sure enough, he went according to routine. This time, he payed more attention on his "making money" lecture than on what he was doing with his food. Instead of going into his mouth, Touya's saucy meatball hit his well-ironed suit. Sakura tried to hide the smirk on her face. Touya ran to the bathroom and started dunking his suit in water. Mr.Kinomoto got up to start making desert. Sakura sat, waiting. But then she noticed his wallet on the table. Sakura picked it up and looked through it. Was there enough money in there? Probably. Touya liked to carry a million in his pocket, in case someone ever thought that they might be richer. Sakura grabbed every fat bill. It was most definitely not enough. Then Sakura saw a check. "Aha!" she thought. "That's how he carries so much around!" Sakura pulled the check out. "Wait," Sakura thought. "Is this right? Should I steal from Touya?"
Memory starts:
Sakura is sitting on the steps during recess, crying because Touya had tested one of his new disses on her. Her face is red from crying all morning. Syaoran comes and sits next to her. "Sakura, what's wrong?" he asked her. "My brother," Sakura said. "Told me that I made a turkey seem like a genius!" She burst into tears again. "But you're not gonna believe him, are ya?" Syaoran asked her. "Normally," Sakura sobbed, "No. But then his friends started laughing. One of them pulled my hair and said it was ugly. They yanked some of it out." Sakura reached into her skirt pocket and took out a few strands of honey-colored hair. "See?" "It's okay." Syaoran comforted her. He pulled a cherry blossom off of a tree and gave it to her. "Thank you, it's beautiful!" Sakura said, her face starting to look happier, even though she was still sniffling. "They're nice when they are in bloom," Syaoran said, "But not as good or sweet as you. You, Sakura are always in bloom! I have yet to find anything worthy of you!" Sakura warmly thanked him and hugged with him, not normal for a 5-year old.
End of Memory.
"Still," Sakura thought. "It's not right."
Memory Starts:
Two years later, Sakura and Syaoran are always made fun of. Kids sing "Sakura and Syaoran, sittin' in a tree: K-I-S-S-I-N-G!....." The two don't care. While they are eating a snack outside, Sakura beckons her best and only female friend, Tomoyo. While she turns to do this, Syaoran is replaced with the ransom note. Sakura tells her teacher, but the teacher just tells Sakura that he was moving away. Sakura doesn't believe her teacher.
End of Memory.
"Yes," Sakura thought, her emotions changed, "Syaoran was there for me, and I'm going to be there for him!"
This is short, but I'm not going to write the next chapter until I get five reviews.
