Here's my first stab at a one-shot shonen ai ficcie! Wow! And it's my
first REAL shot at a short song fic section too!
(lyrics will be in /.../ okay? good.)
Wish me luck!
And... as always if you don't know what shonen ai means, then either read and be amazingly surprised or don't read at all. (flames are welcome! But the response will be: "I told you so." ^_~ )
Just a warning! lol okays... now that that's over here's the ficcie!!
Ja!
~ Neko-chan ~
"..." speech
//...// song lyrics
'...' thoughts
*...* emphasis
=+=+=+=
All the things you said...
=+=+=+=
"what am I doing..." Duo said as he sat down on his bed with his head in his hands, "...I'm so confused..."
~*~
The next day, as class was starting, all the students filed in and took their seats. Before the teacher got in the room, a student walked to the front of the room and made an announcement:
"Hey every one! You all know me, Hitomi, from the soccer team? Well, I'm holding a huge party at my house this Friday. All who come are welcome!" he smiled as he took his seat next to his soccer buddies.
The teacher walked in a few seconds later and hushed the class.
"All right people... take your seats. I want your homework out on your desk when I come around to check it off," Mr. Kasha said as he pulled out his grade book.
Walking down the rows he checked off everyone's work, occasionally commenting on it.
When he reached Duo's desk, his mood changed.
"Mr. Maxwell, where is your essay?" he leaned over the desk as Duo fumbled around with his pencil in his lap.
"I- I don't have it..." he mumbled, hanging his head.
"This is the second day in a row. I was expecting that you would have a better turn out than this..." Mr. Kasha sighed as he put an 'x' in the grade book.
"sorry sir..." he said quickly, then he glanced to the side where a young dark brown haired boy was sitting, about 3 rows over.
'...why can't I just tell him...'
After the class was over he continued the rest of his day as normal.
~*~
The days passed slowly and soon Friday night rolled around.
"should I go tonight? I don't know if *he'll* even be there..." he said to himself as he massages his temples, sitting on the corner of his bed.
"I guess I'll go. Just for the heck of it," he finally decided.
~*~
The phone rang in Heero's apartment.
"hello?" he said in his usual monotone.
hey hee-chan! the voice from the receiver squealed.
He growled at the nickname, "Relena I told you NEVER to call me that... *EVER*..."
but hee-cha-... Heero, you *MUST* come to this party tonight! Pretty please?? For me!? she pleaded.
"no."
He then slammed the phone back in its cradle.
"she knows that I am not a 'social butterfly' like her... and why does she still like me?! I cannot *stand* her."
Sitting down on his bed a thought entered his mind:
'...I wonder if *he'll* be there...'
He shook his head and sighed, "I have a feeling he will be, considering he's got every girl in *every* class drooling over him..."
Moments later there was a knock at his door. He walked over and cracked it open, "state your business."
"Geeze Heero, you don't have to be so secretive...!" the visitor giggled.
It was Relena, he could tell by the annoyingly high pitched voice. The door was soon thrown open and Heero's arm was grabbed dragging his body along the halls and down two flights of stairs.
"I already told you I'm not going to that party..." he growled as she shoved him in her unnaturally pink limo.
"I know... but I was thinking... (WOW!! BIG shock there!!) and I said to myself, 'Relena, we need to get Heero out of that dark and gloomy apartment!' And here you are!" she giggled, trying to sound all knowingly smart.
His response was only silence and a growl.
~*~
okay pplz! How was it?
I think I did pretty good for my first shonen ai fic! ::smiles::
Yay! Now here's where you, the reader, participate:
REVIEW!! REVIEW!! REVIEW!!
Thankies!
- Neko-chan -
(1x2/2x1 4 ever!! W00t! lol)
(lyrics will be in /.../ okay? good.)
Wish me luck!
And... as always if you don't know what shonen ai means, then either read and be amazingly surprised or don't read at all. (flames are welcome! But the response will be: "I told you so." ^_~ )
Just a warning! lol okays... now that that's over here's the ficcie!!
Ja!
~ Neko-chan ~
"..." speech
//...// song lyrics
'...' thoughts
*...* emphasis
=+=+=+=
All the things you said...
=+=+=+=
"what am I doing..." Duo said as he sat down on his bed with his head in his hands, "...I'm so confused..."
~*~
The next day, as class was starting, all the students filed in and took their seats. Before the teacher got in the room, a student walked to the front of the room and made an announcement:
"Hey every one! You all know me, Hitomi, from the soccer team? Well, I'm holding a huge party at my house this Friday. All who come are welcome!" he smiled as he took his seat next to his soccer buddies.
The teacher walked in a few seconds later and hushed the class.
"All right people... take your seats. I want your homework out on your desk when I come around to check it off," Mr. Kasha said as he pulled out his grade book.
Walking down the rows he checked off everyone's work, occasionally commenting on it.
When he reached Duo's desk, his mood changed.
"Mr. Maxwell, where is your essay?" he leaned over the desk as Duo fumbled around with his pencil in his lap.
"I- I don't have it..." he mumbled, hanging his head.
"This is the second day in a row. I was expecting that you would have a better turn out than this..." Mr. Kasha sighed as he put an 'x' in the grade book.
"sorry sir..." he said quickly, then he glanced to the side where a young dark brown haired boy was sitting, about 3 rows over.
'...why can't I just tell him...'
After the class was over he continued the rest of his day as normal.
~*~
The days passed slowly and soon Friday night rolled around.
"should I go tonight? I don't know if *he'll* even be there..." he said to himself as he massages his temples, sitting on the corner of his bed.
"I guess I'll go. Just for the heck of it," he finally decided.
~*~
The phone rang in Heero's apartment.
"hello?" he said in his usual monotone.
hey hee-chan! the voice from the receiver squealed.
He growled at the nickname, "Relena I told you NEVER to call me that... *EVER*..."
but hee-cha-... Heero, you *MUST* come to this party tonight! Pretty please?? For me!? she pleaded.
"no."
He then slammed the phone back in its cradle.
"she knows that I am not a 'social butterfly' like her... and why does she still like me?! I cannot *stand* her."
Sitting down on his bed a thought entered his mind:
'...I wonder if *he'll* be there...'
He shook his head and sighed, "I have a feeling he will be, considering he's got every girl in *every* class drooling over him..."
Moments later there was a knock at his door. He walked over and cracked it open, "state your business."
"Geeze Heero, you don't have to be so secretive...!" the visitor giggled.
It was Relena, he could tell by the annoyingly high pitched voice. The door was soon thrown open and Heero's arm was grabbed dragging his body along the halls and down two flights of stairs.
"I already told you I'm not going to that party..." he growled as she shoved him in her unnaturally pink limo.
"I know... but I was thinking... (WOW!! BIG shock there!!) and I said to myself, 'Relena, we need to get Heero out of that dark and gloomy apartment!' And here you are!" she giggled, trying to sound all knowingly smart.
His response was only silence and a growl.
~*~
okay pplz! How was it?
I think I did pretty good for my first shonen ai fic! ::smiles::
Yay! Now here's where you, the reader, participate:
REVIEW!! REVIEW!! REVIEW!!
Thankies!
- Neko-chan -
(1x2/2x1 4 ever!! W00t! lol)