Hello I just realised that chapter one and two are the same!!!!!
AAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!! This is sssoo
bad! I HATE my computer!!! It must of stuffed up when I done chapter one and then it fixed it up when I
done chapter two!!!! (starts to bash the computer up)HOW DARE YOU STUPID COMPUTER!!!!!!!!!
Ok there is a fighting scene in here and I really suck at making fights so don't flame at me!!!! Just when you review tell me if it was good or in the middle or if it is bad. Ok?
Dark Strawberry: Hey I guess you found my story!! Jee thanks for the review!!!! I love your story too it
rocks and I hope you update chapter 7 soon! I'm really excited to read chapter 7. Your story is going really
good so far and I hope you can keep it up!!
Ok here's chapter 4!
~*~*~*~ Captured, seen and locked away ~*~*~*~
Chichi and Bulma stood there and watched as they crawled away. The Amazon's knew this was their queue to run. They were led by Lunch to a hiding place where they knew no one would find them. The human army ran from Chichi and Bulma.
"You can run but you can't hide," Chichi whispered.
"Your not going any where guys," Bulma nodded to Chichi in agreement.
Bulma ran forward and punched the guy in the back. The man groaned and tried to fight back but Bulma was
too fast and he couldn't see her at all. Chichi came charging up to a human woman and kicked her in the
stomach and the lady tried to punch her in the face but Chichi just dodged it. Chichi kept dodging and blocking the woman's every moves.
"That's it! Take this!" Chichi kicked her in the guts and picked her up and threw her to the ground hard.Then she started to attack other guys.
Bulma blocked the guy's pathetic punches and kicks. Then decided to start fighting back and kicked the guy in the groin.
"HIYA!!!!!!!" Bulma yelled as she elbowed him in the back once again.
He fell to the ground with a silent thud. Satisfied Bulma attacked a bunch who were trying to do a sneak attack on her. She kneed a woman in the stomach then smacked her to the ground. Chichi attacking a man done a roundhouse kick on his face and he was sent flying back.
*~*~*~*~*~
The fight continued and Vegeta, Kakarrot, Tulrus and Radtiz still watched them.
"We should help them their losing against pathetic women's and they haven't touched them at all!" Raditz pointed out.
"Who cares, we'll help them as soon as they lose a little more people," Kakarrot answered.
"Well their just pathetic humans anyways so how come they can turn into super saiyans and I can't!" Vegeta growled.
"Don't worry Vegeta at least you know two more people you can get jealous of!" Kakarrot joked.
"SHUT UP!!!" Vegeta shouted raising his voice.
"Ok, ok come on guys lets go and capture all of them!!" Kakarrot announced.
"YEAH!!!" they all cheered as they flew towards Chichi and Bulma.
*~*~*~*~*~
Chichi recognised them charging up to them.
"Bulma their coming AAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!" Chichi warned as a bunch of humans teamed up on her and started to beat her up.
"Chichi were out numbered!!!" Bulma yelled as she was too getting beaten to the ground.
*~*~*~*~*~
That was a cliffhanger and it was so short!!! Oh just wait for chapter 5. Yeah I've finished chapter 4!!YEAH!! *starts to celebrate* ^_^ I'm happy ok that's all and I hope you review!
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Don't listen to strangers and you know that. If your driving try and not slip into a micro sleep. Don't eat too much KFC or MACCA's cause they are very UNHEALTHY!! If you want to lose weight badly talk to a docter just in case.
Ok that's all my advise.
Good luck if you are doing a story. Ja'ne!
bad! I HATE my computer!!! It must of stuffed up when I done chapter one and then it fixed it up when I
done chapter two!!!! (starts to bash the computer up)HOW DARE YOU STUPID COMPUTER!!!!!!!!!
Ok there is a fighting scene in here and I really suck at making fights so don't flame at me!!!! Just when you review tell me if it was good or in the middle or if it is bad. Ok?
Dark Strawberry: Hey I guess you found my story!! Jee thanks for the review!!!! I love your story too it
rocks and I hope you update chapter 7 soon! I'm really excited to read chapter 7. Your story is going really
good so far and I hope you can keep it up!!
Ok here's chapter 4!
~*~*~*~ Captured, seen and locked away ~*~*~*~
Chichi and Bulma stood there and watched as they crawled away. The Amazon's knew this was their queue to run. They were led by Lunch to a hiding place where they knew no one would find them. The human army ran from Chichi and Bulma.
"You can run but you can't hide," Chichi whispered.
"Your not going any where guys," Bulma nodded to Chichi in agreement.
Bulma ran forward and punched the guy in the back. The man groaned and tried to fight back but Bulma was
too fast and he couldn't see her at all. Chichi came charging up to a human woman and kicked her in the
stomach and the lady tried to punch her in the face but Chichi just dodged it. Chichi kept dodging and blocking the woman's every moves.
"That's it! Take this!" Chichi kicked her in the guts and picked her up and threw her to the ground hard.Then she started to attack other guys.
Bulma blocked the guy's pathetic punches and kicks. Then decided to start fighting back and kicked the guy in the groin.
"HIYA!!!!!!!" Bulma yelled as she elbowed him in the back once again.
He fell to the ground with a silent thud. Satisfied Bulma attacked a bunch who were trying to do a sneak attack on her. She kneed a woman in the stomach then smacked her to the ground. Chichi attacking a man done a roundhouse kick on his face and he was sent flying back.
*~*~*~*~*~
The fight continued and Vegeta, Kakarrot, Tulrus and Radtiz still watched them.
"We should help them their losing against pathetic women's and they haven't touched them at all!" Raditz pointed out.
"Who cares, we'll help them as soon as they lose a little more people," Kakarrot answered.
"Well their just pathetic humans anyways so how come they can turn into super saiyans and I can't!" Vegeta growled.
"Don't worry Vegeta at least you know two more people you can get jealous of!" Kakarrot joked.
"SHUT UP!!!" Vegeta shouted raising his voice.
"Ok, ok come on guys lets go and capture all of them!!" Kakarrot announced.
"YEAH!!!" they all cheered as they flew towards Chichi and Bulma.
*~*~*~*~*~
Chichi recognised them charging up to them.
"Bulma their coming AAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!" Chichi warned as a bunch of humans teamed up on her and started to beat her up.
"Chichi were out numbered!!!" Bulma yelled as she was too getting beaten to the ground.
*~*~*~*~*~
That was a cliffhanger and it was so short!!! Oh just wait for chapter 5. Yeah I've finished chapter 4!!YEAH!! *starts to celebrate* ^_^ I'm happy ok that's all and I hope you review!
Advertising corner
Read all of Kei's stories! They rule! Ok and read a Kiss to make it feel better! An original G(K)/CC fic set on the time of the tournament. Two chapters so far but their long and good so try and read it!
Advise corner
Don't listen to strangers and you know that. If your driving try and not slip into a micro sleep. Don't eat too much KFC or MACCA's cause they are very UNHEALTHY!! If you want to lose weight badly talk to a docter just in case.
Ok that's all my advise.
Good luck if you are doing a story. Ja'ne!