Hey I'm back with so many reviews!! YAH!! *gives every reviewer
a small trophy with Goku and Chichi on it standing and giving
them the thumbs up* Thank you everyone for your reviews!
DBZbeauty: Thanks heaps for your review and heres more!
Ren-chan: Thanks heaps for all of your reviews and your story rocks! Did you think the kamehameha was funny? I did too! I just made it up on the spot. Please update chapter 3 for Deceptive love.
Kei: Thanks so much for your reviews! You know you have read my fic ever since the time I put it out! So thanks for stickin' with me! Ok and it's ok for the plug. And I know that was so short chapter 4 but hey you can't blame me I'm a Virgo and I'm too lazy to add more detail. Jeez did you have Goku and Kakarot with you cause uh their both the same it's just that he has a different way to say his name. Boy if there were two of Goku everyone would get all confused. Please update chapter 8 for I spy and email me if you do.
Ok that's all my thanks for the reviews and please don't flame at me because chapter 1 and chapter 2 are simply the same just a little changed don't get angry that's how bad my computer is! All truth! Ok time for the BORING disclaimer.
Disclaimer: Me….no….own….me….very……poor……me…..no…..own…..nothing! There are you happy cause I totally hate doing the disclaimer! It's so BORING! I don't know why we Authors bother I mean this is stupid everyone knows we own nothing!!
Ok, ok get on with the story is that what you want? *hears cheers* Ok then on with the story…
*~*~*~*~*~ Can we destroy them? *~*~*~*~*~
Chichi was beaten to the ground.
'No I can't let them beat me not with out revenge. No not with out revenge NO! Liliana I'm not giving up! You'll see I'll get revenge!' Chichi thought as she started to power up.
"AAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!" Bulma screamed in pain.
"Hang on Bulma and Chichi," whispered Launch from her hiding place. "Come on guys! CHARGE!" Lunch ordered.
The Amazons charged and started to pry off the humans who were pounding Chichi and Bulma down to the ground. Some of the Amazons suffered some injuries but continued to fight. Then there was a explosion of power from both Chichi and Bulma.
*~*~*~*~
Vegeta, Kakarrot, Tulrus, Raditz, (A/N: *starts laughing* you know what? You Raditz's name it has 'ditz' in it! Its actually very funny! Raditz: You dare mock my name! Chibi_Chichan: Uh-oh I should of shutted my mouth his going to kill me! AAAAHHH! *starts to run from Raditz* Ok back to the story! =O) were finally on the battlefield and watched as the Amazons started to destroy their army of humans.
"Oh just great here comes the great women of destruction! Look at those women dear Prince they dare destroy our army!" Tulrus growled.
"They won't defeat us!" Vegeta said smirking evilly.
"Sure they won't their so weak against us," Raditz also said grinning widely.
"Hmph," Kakarrot mumbled staring at the battle.
"What are you looking at Kakarrot?" asked his twin brother Tulrus.
"Hmph," was the answer.
Tulrus stared in the direction Kakarrot was staring at.
'A little to the right no a little to the left a little bit down no no no a little bit up there! That's what his staring at!' Tulrus proudly thought. He had just discovered what Kakarrot was staring at. And found it quite interesting to stare at. In the direction they were staring at stood a young girl about 14. She had blonde hair and deep teal eyes. (A/N: Is that how you spell it? Please tell me!) Her outfit she wore was perfect it showed every curve she had. She had a few cuts and bruises but that was ok she still looked beautiful.
"Aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwww has Karrot-chanie wanie got a crushie washie?" Tulrus asked using a mother like voice.
"SHUT UP! I do NOT have a crush!" Kakarrot yelled blushing a deep shade of red.
Raditz and Vegeta decided to listen to the conversation.
"Karrot-chan's in love! Karrot-chan's in love!" Tulrus said skipping around Kakrrot like a little girl.
"I am NOT in love!!! SHUT UP!!!" Kakarrot ordered.
"I will not! Karrot-chan's in love! Karrot-chan's in love!" Tulrus repeated skipping around Kakarrot like a little girl all over again and again.
"AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!" both Vegeta and Raditz started to laugh.
*~*~*~*~
Chichi was beating up a guy.
"Bulma can we destroy these guys?"
MUHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! BAHAHAHAHAH!!! That was such an evil cliffhanger! I know I left that on the chapter before but who cares?! I might do it again but I don't know when. Oh too bad! Poor Kakarrot his being bullied by his own twin brother! Ok please review!
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Hey why don't you read Deceptive love by Ren-chan! Its an excellent fic and it is going real good but I'm just sayin' if you haven't read it read it NOW! Its not finished yet but its got two chapters up. Oh I hope she updates real soon I'm getting tired of waiting!
Advise corner
Lets see now….if you want something over and done with slow down a little and think about it. Do you really want to do it? If not don't do it at all even if people are putting you under pressure don't worry its your choice not their choice. But if people are depending on you maybe you should give it try. If it doesn't work try again! If you don't want to do it again then don't worry you don't have to do it! Just remember its not somebodies else's choice its up to you to do what you think!
Ja'ne!
DBZbeauty: Thanks heaps for your review and heres more!
Ren-chan: Thanks heaps for all of your reviews and your story rocks! Did you think the kamehameha was funny? I did too! I just made it up on the spot. Please update chapter 3 for Deceptive love.
Kei: Thanks so much for your reviews! You know you have read my fic ever since the time I put it out! So thanks for stickin' with me! Ok and it's ok for the plug. And I know that was so short chapter 4 but hey you can't blame me I'm a Virgo and I'm too lazy to add more detail. Jeez did you have Goku and Kakarot with you cause uh their both the same it's just that he has a different way to say his name. Boy if there were two of Goku everyone would get all confused. Please update chapter 8 for I spy and email me if you do.
Ok that's all my thanks for the reviews and please don't flame at me because chapter 1 and chapter 2 are simply the same just a little changed don't get angry that's how bad my computer is! All truth! Ok time for the BORING disclaimer.
Disclaimer: Me….no….own….me….very……poor……me…..no…..own…..nothing! There are you happy cause I totally hate doing the disclaimer! It's so BORING! I don't know why we Authors bother I mean this is stupid everyone knows we own nothing!!
Ok, ok get on with the story is that what you want? *hears cheers* Ok then on with the story…
*~*~*~*~*~ Can we destroy them? *~*~*~*~*~
Chichi was beaten to the ground.
'No I can't let them beat me not with out revenge. No not with out revenge NO! Liliana I'm not giving up! You'll see I'll get revenge!' Chichi thought as she started to power up.
"AAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!" Bulma screamed in pain.
"Hang on Bulma and Chichi," whispered Launch from her hiding place. "Come on guys! CHARGE!" Lunch ordered.
The Amazons charged and started to pry off the humans who were pounding Chichi and Bulma down to the ground. Some of the Amazons suffered some injuries but continued to fight. Then there was a explosion of power from both Chichi and Bulma.
*~*~*~*~
Vegeta, Kakarrot, Tulrus, Raditz, (A/N: *starts laughing* you know what? You Raditz's name it has 'ditz' in it! Its actually very funny! Raditz: You dare mock my name! Chibi_Chichan: Uh-oh I should of shutted my mouth his going to kill me! AAAAHHH! *starts to run from Raditz* Ok back to the story! =O) were finally on the battlefield and watched as the Amazons started to destroy their army of humans.
"Oh just great here comes the great women of destruction! Look at those women dear Prince they dare destroy our army!" Tulrus growled.
"They won't defeat us!" Vegeta said smirking evilly.
"Sure they won't their so weak against us," Raditz also said grinning widely.
"Hmph," Kakarrot mumbled staring at the battle.
"What are you looking at Kakarrot?" asked his twin brother Tulrus.
"Hmph," was the answer.
Tulrus stared in the direction Kakarrot was staring at.
'A little to the right no a little to the left a little bit down no no no a little bit up there! That's what his staring at!' Tulrus proudly thought. He had just discovered what Kakarrot was staring at. And found it quite interesting to stare at. In the direction they were staring at stood a young girl about 14. She had blonde hair and deep teal eyes. (A/N: Is that how you spell it? Please tell me!) Her outfit she wore was perfect it showed every curve she had. She had a few cuts and bruises but that was ok she still looked beautiful.
"Aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwww has Karrot-chanie wanie got a crushie washie?" Tulrus asked using a mother like voice.
"SHUT UP! I do NOT have a crush!" Kakarrot yelled blushing a deep shade of red.
Raditz and Vegeta decided to listen to the conversation.
"Karrot-chan's in love! Karrot-chan's in love!" Tulrus said skipping around Kakrrot like a little girl.
"I am NOT in love!!! SHUT UP!!!" Kakarrot ordered.
"I will not! Karrot-chan's in love! Karrot-chan's in love!" Tulrus repeated skipping around Kakarrot like a little girl all over again and again.
"AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!" both Vegeta and Raditz started to laugh.
*~*~*~*~
Chichi was beating up a guy.
"Bulma can we destroy these guys?"
MUHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! BAHAHAHAHAH!!! That was such an evil cliffhanger! I know I left that on the chapter before but who cares?! I might do it again but I don't know when. Oh too bad! Poor Kakarrot his being bullied by his own twin brother! Ok please review!
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Hey why don't you read Deceptive love by Ren-chan! Its an excellent fic and it is going real good but I'm just sayin' if you haven't read it read it NOW! Its not finished yet but its got two chapters up. Oh I hope she updates real soon I'm getting tired of waiting!
Advise corner
Lets see now….if you want something over and done with slow down a little and think about it. Do you really want to do it? If not don't do it at all even if people are putting you under pressure don't worry its your choice not their choice. But if people are depending on you maybe you should give it try. If it doesn't work try again! If you don't want to do it again then don't worry you don't have to do it! Just remember its not somebodies else's choice its up to you to do what you think!
Ja'ne!