A/N: Getting kinda mixed reviews lately, but well its my story not yours,
and I write it. But anyways...as it turns out this story is longer than I
expected (don't know if thats good or bad but so far its good) but I can
still do a lot more! But anyways, this chapter gets back to the action a
little bit. Oh and sorry the update took so long my computer was so screwed
up it wasn't even funny! ALWAYS save to a disk.....
CHAPTER 11-BATTLE IN THE WAREHOUSE
Raiden had gotten up from his rest now. He didn't have much strength to go on. But now he had a chance to prove himself. The monitors were switched back off, but he didn't hear the conversation anyway. He was so tired now. But he'd gotten this far hadn't he? There was still chance. Snake gave him two rations, he just had to play smart now.
As Raiden approached the second elevator a call came in. "Be careful, there are claymore mines aroung there."
"Who is this?" Raiden said with a hint of deja vu in his voice. It was almost like the big shell, but this obviously wasn't Olga this time. There was no answer, instead the transmission was cut. Raiden got down and crawled around for claymores. It would be harder since he didn't have a mine detector or thermal goggles.
There were about six claymores, and Raiden was able to grab them all. He then got into the elevator and went down.
***
Snake was waiting for Raiden. Snake had grabbed the C4 lying around. Still no missiles because of what Otacon had done. In fact, you never got Nikitas and you didn't get Stingers until you actually got to REX. That was a little disappointing to Snake. He was hoping to get some stingers and blow Raiden away. Looks like he'd have to wait. He grabbed the C4, and there was that last ration. He decided to leave it for Raiden. Snake wanted a fair fight this time. He wanted Raiden to put up a fight. The Snowfields was close, he'd at least gotten some shots off. But the Blast Furnace was pathetic! Even for Raiden that was pretty damn bad. Raiden could've at least gotten up instead of staying on his back.
In the Warehouse, it was clear they were early or something. Raven wasn't there, or he was killed in the M1 tank or something. Raven was no where to be found. Snake had no claymores left, but he now had four C4 in his stash. He didn't want to use all of it here. He walked to the back. He needed to hide from Raiden.
***
Raiden made his way down to the warehouse. He gave a sigh, before he looked around. He found the rations, but everything else was gone. Snake was obviously here.
Raiden walked into the warehouse. It was so quiet. Raiden had almost forgotten about his Radar. He looked on it, but Snake wasn't in range. He was probably at the far end. Raiden peaked around the corner. If there was one thing he actually LEARNED from this, it was that Snake could be around any corner. He didn't see Snake anywhere, but he could sense his presence. He put down a claymore in the southeastern corner of the room. Snake didn't see this. He quickly ran to the southwestern end, looked around and then put a claymore there as well. "Come on out Snake!" Raiden shouted.
Snake came out of hiding just as Raiden shouted. Snake was at the far north end, and Raiden at the far south end. They both stood in front of the doors and glared at each other. Snake pulled out his Socom and fired off a shot. It barely missed Raiden. Raiden ducked out of the way, and Snake ran to his left.
Raiden ran to his right, that way he'd meet up with Snake. The warehouse was pretty big and had lots of room to run. Raiden got out his grenades. He threw one on top of on of the boxes in the warehouse. It exploded, and just as he predicted, fell over and blocked one of the ways. Snake wasn't sure what Raiden was doing.
Raiden ran down throwing grenades on top of boxes till they all collapsed. This would force Snake to run all the way up a row instead of cutting through the middle. Raiden had finally gotten done on the east side. Snake was on the east side. He had no choice but to run all the way to the southeastern corner. Unprepared Snake tripped one of Raiden's claymores! Raiden had nailed Snake!
Snake got up and Raiden had knocked down the boxes on the western side now. Damn! Raiden still had plenty of grenades left. Snake was going to run to the west but there was probably a claymore there too. Instead Snake ran up the middle since the other paths were blocked. BAM! A grenade exploded. Raiden must've thrown it. Luckily for Snake, he wasn't affected in the blast.
The center of the warehouse was blocked off by the boxes that Raiden had knocked down. This meant that now they were basically running around in a big Square. Kind of like fighting Ocelot.
Snake ran up the eastern row, and Raiden up the western. When each turned the corner, Snake was armed with a PSG-1. He turned the corner and quickly fired off a shot. Raiden was hit in the arm, but not too badly. Raiden pulled out his Socom now. He waited to see what Snake would do. With his Socom in one hand, and a grenade in the other, Raiden came out of hiding and decided to chase Snake!
Snake was running down the eastern side now. He then ran into the center and jumped on top of a box. They were tall, but not so tall he couldn't jump on. He wanted to elevate himself more, but if he did that he'd be a sore thumb to Raiden, and now that Raiden was actually DOING something Snake couldn't stick out like a sore thumb.
Raiden had ran right past Snake. Raiden actually stopped and thought for a moment. 'Snake can't be THAT fast,' he thought, and then he turned around and looked on a box and Snake was right there! Raiden quickly threw a grenade as Snake hopped off and ran the other way. Raiden continued to run around. The grenade had detonated and had actually blown a hole in the center.
Raiden picked up his claymore that he put down in the southwestern corner. He grabbed it and decided to put that on one of the boxes in the center. Snake might actually try something like that again.
Snake wanted to put down C4, but if he couldn't monitor Raiden's movements, it wasn't that useful. Snake, still equipped with his PSG-1 and was now in the northeastern corner, decided that if he really wanted to win this he'd have to make it look a little good.
Raiden's claymore was on the center box in the west, both of them. Raiden thought Snake would do something like that again. He wasn't too sure though. He couldn't anticipate moves like Snake could, but at least he was beginning to learn his enemy. With his Socom still equipped he took out his grenades again.
Snake was still on the move. Unless they saw each other, Snake and Raiden almost never stopped. Snake wasn't breaking a sweat. He still knew what kind of person Raiden was. But he was completely unprepared when he detonated another claymore, as he made tried to elevate himeelf. He fell of, and he knew Raiden was still moving! He quickly got back on the box and got up as high as he could on the next set of stacked boxes. He looked through his scope, and saw Raiden setting another claymore in the northwestern corner. He shot the claymore and it detonated in Raiden's hands! Raiden hadn't used a ration, but he certainly didn't expect Snake to do that.
Snake then laid down and watched Raiden run to the southwestern corner. He had a grenade in hand and had pulled the pin. He got to where Snake was and threw the grenade! In a swift motion Snake had jumped off the pile of boxes just as the grenade detonated. He landed on Raiden and they tumbled over with full blown force.
Remembering what happened in the blast furnace, Raiden kicked Snake off quickly and fired a shot into his arm with the Socom. If Snake wasn't going to give remorse, than neither should Raiden.
"Ack!" Snake screamed as he was shot in the arm. He quickly got up and before Raiden could fire off another shot he kicked the Socom away and did a round-house kick that knocked Raiden down.
Raiden quickly got back on his feet. He looked at his Socom on the ground. Immediantly he and Snake dived for it. They both grabbed it at the same time. They tussled for the gun as if it were the only gun they had. As they tussled Raiden kicked Snake twice trying to break his grip.
"I've had enough!" Snake said and then reached back and smacked Raiden with his FAMAS. Raiden yelped like a dog, but didn't let the grip go on the Socom. He kicked Snake in the face now, and retrieved his Socom. Snake flew off, but he watched as Raiden put it away. Raiden then did a torso- axle into Snake, and he connected with Snake, but in return Snake kicked Raiden. Thus, they both took damage, but only Snake used a ration. Amazing! Raiden was actually TAKING ON the Legend now! He had a small chance to win too.
Snake and Raiden quickly got up, and Snake rolled Raiden's way. This time, Raiden had jumped over Snake as he was balled up. Unfortunately he landed right behind Snake and so all Snake had to do was do a sweeper kick and it knocked Raiden off his feet.
Snake lifted his foot up and nearly stepped on Raiden's face, but Raiden kicked Snake in the kneecap. Snake didn't go down, but the kick was actually pretty damn painful. Snake groaned at first but quickly kicked Raiden while he was down. Raiden screamed, Damn Snake could hit hard.
Raiden kicked Snake in the kneecap again and then he got up and ran. Snake, pulled out his Socom and fired it like a semi-automatic machine gun. The bullets spread out vastly, but to Snake's amazement, NONE managed to hit Raiden!
Snake began to give chase. He had to reach Raiden before Raiden reached the doors at the end. Dammit! Snake could run fast, but Raiden could run just a bit faster. Snake then took one shot at Raiden's leg. Raiden yelped once again and fell over. Snake ran right past him, and through the doors. But before he went through the doors he turned around faced Raiden. "Not bad kid." He said and then disappeared through the doors.
TO BE CONTINUED.....
A/N: Hmmmm this makes me rethink who should win...but I had to make Raiden DO something, and he actually had to HIT Snake sooner or later and I was getting bored with him taking all the damage anyway. Please R+R! Oh and by the way....something came up with Chapter 12 that has prompt me to delete a few scenes so chapter 12 will take a little longer than expected to post....
CHAPTER 11-BATTLE IN THE WAREHOUSE
Raiden had gotten up from his rest now. He didn't have much strength to go on. But now he had a chance to prove himself. The monitors were switched back off, but he didn't hear the conversation anyway. He was so tired now. But he'd gotten this far hadn't he? There was still chance. Snake gave him two rations, he just had to play smart now.
As Raiden approached the second elevator a call came in. "Be careful, there are claymore mines aroung there."
"Who is this?" Raiden said with a hint of deja vu in his voice. It was almost like the big shell, but this obviously wasn't Olga this time. There was no answer, instead the transmission was cut. Raiden got down and crawled around for claymores. It would be harder since he didn't have a mine detector or thermal goggles.
There were about six claymores, and Raiden was able to grab them all. He then got into the elevator and went down.
***
Snake was waiting for Raiden. Snake had grabbed the C4 lying around. Still no missiles because of what Otacon had done. In fact, you never got Nikitas and you didn't get Stingers until you actually got to REX. That was a little disappointing to Snake. He was hoping to get some stingers and blow Raiden away. Looks like he'd have to wait. He grabbed the C4, and there was that last ration. He decided to leave it for Raiden. Snake wanted a fair fight this time. He wanted Raiden to put up a fight. The Snowfields was close, he'd at least gotten some shots off. But the Blast Furnace was pathetic! Even for Raiden that was pretty damn bad. Raiden could've at least gotten up instead of staying on his back.
In the Warehouse, it was clear they were early or something. Raven wasn't there, or he was killed in the M1 tank or something. Raven was no where to be found. Snake had no claymores left, but he now had four C4 in his stash. He didn't want to use all of it here. He walked to the back. He needed to hide from Raiden.
***
Raiden made his way down to the warehouse. He gave a sigh, before he looked around. He found the rations, but everything else was gone. Snake was obviously here.
Raiden walked into the warehouse. It was so quiet. Raiden had almost forgotten about his Radar. He looked on it, but Snake wasn't in range. He was probably at the far end. Raiden peaked around the corner. If there was one thing he actually LEARNED from this, it was that Snake could be around any corner. He didn't see Snake anywhere, but he could sense his presence. He put down a claymore in the southeastern corner of the room. Snake didn't see this. He quickly ran to the southwestern end, looked around and then put a claymore there as well. "Come on out Snake!" Raiden shouted.
Snake came out of hiding just as Raiden shouted. Snake was at the far north end, and Raiden at the far south end. They both stood in front of the doors and glared at each other. Snake pulled out his Socom and fired off a shot. It barely missed Raiden. Raiden ducked out of the way, and Snake ran to his left.
Raiden ran to his right, that way he'd meet up with Snake. The warehouse was pretty big and had lots of room to run. Raiden got out his grenades. He threw one on top of on of the boxes in the warehouse. It exploded, and just as he predicted, fell over and blocked one of the ways. Snake wasn't sure what Raiden was doing.
Raiden ran down throwing grenades on top of boxes till they all collapsed. This would force Snake to run all the way up a row instead of cutting through the middle. Raiden had finally gotten done on the east side. Snake was on the east side. He had no choice but to run all the way to the southeastern corner. Unprepared Snake tripped one of Raiden's claymores! Raiden had nailed Snake!
Snake got up and Raiden had knocked down the boxes on the western side now. Damn! Raiden still had plenty of grenades left. Snake was going to run to the west but there was probably a claymore there too. Instead Snake ran up the middle since the other paths were blocked. BAM! A grenade exploded. Raiden must've thrown it. Luckily for Snake, he wasn't affected in the blast.
The center of the warehouse was blocked off by the boxes that Raiden had knocked down. This meant that now they were basically running around in a big Square. Kind of like fighting Ocelot.
Snake ran up the eastern row, and Raiden up the western. When each turned the corner, Snake was armed with a PSG-1. He turned the corner and quickly fired off a shot. Raiden was hit in the arm, but not too badly. Raiden pulled out his Socom now. He waited to see what Snake would do. With his Socom in one hand, and a grenade in the other, Raiden came out of hiding and decided to chase Snake!
Snake was running down the eastern side now. He then ran into the center and jumped on top of a box. They were tall, but not so tall he couldn't jump on. He wanted to elevate himself more, but if he did that he'd be a sore thumb to Raiden, and now that Raiden was actually DOING something Snake couldn't stick out like a sore thumb.
Raiden had ran right past Snake. Raiden actually stopped and thought for a moment. 'Snake can't be THAT fast,' he thought, and then he turned around and looked on a box and Snake was right there! Raiden quickly threw a grenade as Snake hopped off and ran the other way. Raiden continued to run around. The grenade had detonated and had actually blown a hole in the center.
Raiden picked up his claymore that he put down in the southwestern corner. He grabbed it and decided to put that on one of the boxes in the center. Snake might actually try something like that again.
Snake wanted to put down C4, but if he couldn't monitor Raiden's movements, it wasn't that useful. Snake, still equipped with his PSG-1 and was now in the northeastern corner, decided that if he really wanted to win this he'd have to make it look a little good.
Raiden's claymore was on the center box in the west, both of them. Raiden thought Snake would do something like that again. He wasn't too sure though. He couldn't anticipate moves like Snake could, but at least he was beginning to learn his enemy. With his Socom still equipped he took out his grenades again.
Snake was still on the move. Unless they saw each other, Snake and Raiden almost never stopped. Snake wasn't breaking a sweat. He still knew what kind of person Raiden was. But he was completely unprepared when he detonated another claymore, as he made tried to elevate himeelf. He fell of, and he knew Raiden was still moving! He quickly got back on the box and got up as high as he could on the next set of stacked boxes. He looked through his scope, and saw Raiden setting another claymore in the northwestern corner. He shot the claymore and it detonated in Raiden's hands! Raiden hadn't used a ration, but he certainly didn't expect Snake to do that.
Snake then laid down and watched Raiden run to the southwestern corner. He had a grenade in hand and had pulled the pin. He got to where Snake was and threw the grenade! In a swift motion Snake had jumped off the pile of boxes just as the grenade detonated. He landed on Raiden and they tumbled over with full blown force.
Remembering what happened in the blast furnace, Raiden kicked Snake off quickly and fired a shot into his arm with the Socom. If Snake wasn't going to give remorse, than neither should Raiden.
"Ack!" Snake screamed as he was shot in the arm. He quickly got up and before Raiden could fire off another shot he kicked the Socom away and did a round-house kick that knocked Raiden down.
Raiden quickly got back on his feet. He looked at his Socom on the ground. Immediantly he and Snake dived for it. They both grabbed it at the same time. They tussled for the gun as if it were the only gun they had. As they tussled Raiden kicked Snake twice trying to break his grip.
"I've had enough!" Snake said and then reached back and smacked Raiden with his FAMAS. Raiden yelped like a dog, but didn't let the grip go on the Socom. He kicked Snake in the face now, and retrieved his Socom. Snake flew off, but he watched as Raiden put it away. Raiden then did a torso- axle into Snake, and he connected with Snake, but in return Snake kicked Raiden. Thus, they both took damage, but only Snake used a ration. Amazing! Raiden was actually TAKING ON the Legend now! He had a small chance to win too.
Snake and Raiden quickly got up, and Snake rolled Raiden's way. This time, Raiden had jumped over Snake as he was balled up. Unfortunately he landed right behind Snake and so all Snake had to do was do a sweeper kick and it knocked Raiden off his feet.
Snake lifted his foot up and nearly stepped on Raiden's face, but Raiden kicked Snake in the kneecap. Snake didn't go down, but the kick was actually pretty damn painful. Snake groaned at first but quickly kicked Raiden while he was down. Raiden screamed, Damn Snake could hit hard.
Raiden kicked Snake in the kneecap again and then he got up and ran. Snake, pulled out his Socom and fired it like a semi-automatic machine gun. The bullets spread out vastly, but to Snake's amazement, NONE managed to hit Raiden!
Snake began to give chase. He had to reach Raiden before Raiden reached the doors at the end. Dammit! Snake could run fast, but Raiden could run just a bit faster. Snake then took one shot at Raiden's leg. Raiden yelped once again and fell over. Snake ran right past him, and through the doors. But before he went through the doors he turned around faced Raiden. "Not bad kid." He said and then disappeared through the doors.
TO BE CONTINUED.....
A/N: Hmmmm this makes me rethink who should win...but I had to make Raiden DO something, and he actually had to HIT Snake sooner or later and I was getting bored with him taking all the damage anyway. Please R+R! Oh and by the way....something came up with Chapter 12 that has prompt me to delete a few scenes so chapter 12 will take a little longer than expected to post....