Hey ya all,
Ok, this is the second version of my first fict.
My first version had a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes in it, but this
time I had help ^__^
^__^ Mawsi and Helco, thank you so much! ^__^
Anyway . In this fict, the scouts are 17/18 years old. There hadn't been any attacks for a long time, so the scouts decided to go on vacation together. I'm not gonna tell too much already. So enjoy, I hope you'll all like it. Oh right. I don't own sailor moon.
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"Usagi, hurry up! You don't want to be late for our trip to Europe, Do ya?"
Rei shouted at the little blond. "I'm on my way!" A loud voice was heard, coming from upstairs. Rei turned her head to look at the two other girls, who peered outside if Minako was arriving yet.
"There she is," Ami said with a soft relief, "finally." Minako was running towards the front door of the Tsukino residence. Out of breath she said: "Sorry I'm late, I have no excuse, just late. Uh... Isn't Usagi ready yet?"
Again, Rei was facing the stairs and looking up. "U-SAAA-GIIII!!! I thought you didn't want to miss the flight?" "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!" Usagi had been talking about the flight ever since they had decided to take a break and go to Europe and visit some places and countries there.
"The flight is the only thing I do want to miss!" As Makoto said that, her little blue haired friend gave her a worried look.
The fear in Mako's voice was easy to hear, even a fool could notice. All the girls had given their personal pep-talk to Makoto, telling her not to worry and that nothing bad was going to happen. Ami, however, was the only one who knew Makoto actually didn't want to come. She also knew why Makoto did decide to come after all. The others just thought her fear wasn't that big. Mako told them it would be okay; and her fear wouldn't be as great as they all thought.
Makoto honestly didn't want to come on this trip, all because of the plane.
She and Ami had a good talk about it, it was not that Ami convinced her to come, oh no, nothing like that. Ami told her they shouldn't go if she didn't felt comfortable about it, the other girls would look for something near-by, so they didn't have to go on a plane trip. But Mako didn't want to spoil the fun for the others: she knew how much they where looking forward to this trip. And she didn't want to be alone this summer, so she just had to come. Besides, she would like to see more of the world and she wanted to conquer her fears. 'Don't be such a wimp, there is nothing to be scared of', she told herself.
The four girls decided to wait for Usagi in the living room. They were all sitting in silence, two girls dreaming about how their trip would be, one thinking of her tall friend across the table and one girl worrying about the plane trip and thinking of her past, how a plane destroyed her perfect little life.
It didn't take very long until the peace of silence was disturbed by a loud cry and a lot of noise coming from the stairs.
The four girls jumped up and were running towards the noise. Usagi was lying on the bottom of the stairs, all her clothes where spread out in the hall and she was looking like her foot was growing out of her ear and her hand out of her back.
"Ouch... that really hurts... WHÉÉÉÉÉÉ" and Usagi started crying (what a surprise) Her friends lifted her up and helped her packing her stuff again. After Ami had taken a good look on her leader she told the others Usagi was fine and was just being a cry-baby again.
The girls checked if they had everything and then they went off. Mr Tsukino and Mrs Mizuno brought the girls to the airport. Rei and Usagi sat together in Mr Tsukino's car and the three other girls were with Mrs Mizuno.
Rei and Usagi were arguing all the way from Usagi's home to the airport (did we expect something else?) while in the other car there was an unnatural silence.
Even Minako didn't say much, she was just watching outside and daydreaming about their trip. Makoto was just sitting very nervously, having no idea about what she should look at or what to think of. Ami was really looking forward to the trip and to the historical places and learning something about other cultures.
Not only were both Ami and Minako thinking about that, they had their tall pale friend sitting between them. The look in her eyes made them both very worried. 'Her fear for planes can't be that big, can it?', Minako was thinking.
As the airport came closer, the noise of the planes also became more audible.
'No damnit, I shouldn't be such a wimp.
It's a part of my past, I have to move on.
This is only the sound, it's not that bad.
No plane is gonna crash... no crash this time...
No, I don't want to cry, I don't want to think about it!
No... Damnit... why do these tears appear?
It's gonna be fine Mako, it's gonna be just... fine.
DAMNIT!!! Stop the memories.
I don't want to see or hear all those screaming and dying people again.
Why do I see everything again, why do I hear it all again?
I have to get over it, I have to go on that plane and I won't show any fear.
No, the ...'
Makoto's thoughts were broken by a soft hand on her cheek, wiping away a tear with a thumb. Makoto hadn't realised she had been crying that much.
"You should have told us you didn't want to do this, we would have looked for something else then, you know." Makoto lifted her head to look into the worried eyes of her blue-haired friend. She couldn't stand it if her friend looked at her the way she did right now. Makoto turned away her head and didn't speak.
Suddenly she felt an arm hanging over her to comfort her. "Really Mako, if I would have known you were this scared, I wouldn't have let you come!", the blonde on her other side said.
"No, it's okay, really, I will be alright, don't worry about me. I just had to clear my mind for a moment, but I'm okay now" "Are you sure?" "Yeah Minako, I'm fine." "Okay, but don't forget we are here for you and you shouldn't try to face your fear alone" "Yeah, I know... thanks!" Makoto gave her two friends a relived and thankful smile.
"Gosh, I had to listen all the way to: 'Did not!' 'Did too!' 'Did not!' 'Did too!' Next time we should put Rei and my little daughter in different cars. I cannot believe those two are friends..." Mrs. Mizuno nodded in agreement and gave Mr. Tsukino a smile. She didn't tell Mr. Tsukino what the girls in her car were talking about, she didn't want to worry the other two girls more than they already were about Makoto.
The girls were standing together, waiting for the voice to say they could get into the plane.
"Finally!" Rei said with an irritated tone when she heard the voice saying the words they all wanted to hear.
"Bye dad, gonna miss ya! Give mom a big kiss from me! Love ya!" Usagi kissed her father on the cheek and run in the direction of the other girls.
"Bye mom, I'll give you a call as soon as we get there." Ami hugged her mom. "Be careful, sweetie" her mother said while she moved closer to Ami's face and whispered in her ear: "Take good care of yourself and your friend, she looks like she needs you" Ami pulled away from her mom and smiled weakly. "I will"
The Girls waved Mr. Tsukino and Mrs. Mizuno goodbye and walked into the plane.
~exited, happy, irritated, worried, frightened~
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I want to thank: SailorSoul2, Lizzy Hakubi, Codie, Hokushin, And Ryudo for their review on the first version of this fic.
And I want to thank Mawsi and Helco (again? Yes again!) for helping with the technical stuff. ^__^
So, this was the first chapter of my first fic. I hope ya all like it
*hope* *hope*
anyway, please review. I would like to know how others think about my fict.
-xxx- Me
^__^ Mawsi and Helco, thank you so much! ^__^
Anyway . In this fict, the scouts are 17/18 years old. There hadn't been any attacks for a long time, so the scouts decided to go on vacation together. I'm not gonna tell too much already. So enjoy, I hope you'll all like it. Oh right. I don't own sailor moon.
= = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = =
"Usagi, hurry up! You don't want to be late for our trip to Europe, Do ya?"
Rei shouted at the little blond. "I'm on my way!" A loud voice was heard, coming from upstairs. Rei turned her head to look at the two other girls, who peered outside if Minako was arriving yet.
"There she is," Ami said with a soft relief, "finally." Minako was running towards the front door of the Tsukino residence. Out of breath she said: "Sorry I'm late, I have no excuse, just late. Uh... Isn't Usagi ready yet?"
Again, Rei was facing the stairs and looking up. "U-SAAA-GIIII!!! I thought you didn't want to miss the flight?" "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!" Usagi had been talking about the flight ever since they had decided to take a break and go to Europe and visit some places and countries there.
"The flight is the only thing I do want to miss!" As Makoto said that, her little blue haired friend gave her a worried look.
The fear in Mako's voice was easy to hear, even a fool could notice. All the girls had given their personal pep-talk to Makoto, telling her not to worry and that nothing bad was going to happen. Ami, however, was the only one who knew Makoto actually didn't want to come. She also knew why Makoto did decide to come after all. The others just thought her fear wasn't that big. Mako told them it would be okay; and her fear wouldn't be as great as they all thought.
Makoto honestly didn't want to come on this trip, all because of the plane.
She and Ami had a good talk about it, it was not that Ami convinced her to come, oh no, nothing like that. Ami told her they shouldn't go if she didn't felt comfortable about it, the other girls would look for something near-by, so they didn't have to go on a plane trip. But Mako didn't want to spoil the fun for the others: she knew how much they where looking forward to this trip. And she didn't want to be alone this summer, so she just had to come. Besides, she would like to see more of the world and she wanted to conquer her fears. 'Don't be such a wimp, there is nothing to be scared of', she told herself.
The four girls decided to wait for Usagi in the living room. They were all sitting in silence, two girls dreaming about how their trip would be, one thinking of her tall friend across the table and one girl worrying about the plane trip and thinking of her past, how a plane destroyed her perfect little life.
It didn't take very long until the peace of silence was disturbed by a loud cry and a lot of noise coming from the stairs.
The four girls jumped up and were running towards the noise. Usagi was lying on the bottom of the stairs, all her clothes where spread out in the hall and she was looking like her foot was growing out of her ear and her hand out of her back.
"Ouch... that really hurts... WHÉÉÉÉÉÉ" and Usagi started crying (what a surprise) Her friends lifted her up and helped her packing her stuff again. After Ami had taken a good look on her leader she told the others Usagi was fine and was just being a cry-baby again.
The girls checked if they had everything and then they went off. Mr Tsukino and Mrs Mizuno brought the girls to the airport. Rei and Usagi sat together in Mr Tsukino's car and the three other girls were with Mrs Mizuno.
Rei and Usagi were arguing all the way from Usagi's home to the airport (did we expect something else?) while in the other car there was an unnatural silence.
Even Minako didn't say much, she was just watching outside and daydreaming about their trip. Makoto was just sitting very nervously, having no idea about what she should look at or what to think of. Ami was really looking forward to the trip and to the historical places and learning something about other cultures.
Not only were both Ami and Minako thinking about that, they had their tall pale friend sitting between them. The look in her eyes made them both very worried. 'Her fear for planes can't be that big, can it?', Minako was thinking.
As the airport came closer, the noise of the planes also became more audible.
'No damnit, I shouldn't be such a wimp.
It's a part of my past, I have to move on.
This is only the sound, it's not that bad.
No plane is gonna crash... no crash this time...
No, I don't want to cry, I don't want to think about it!
No... Damnit... why do these tears appear?
It's gonna be fine Mako, it's gonna be just... fine.
DAMNIT!!! Stop the memories.
I don't want to see or hear all those screaming and dying people again.
Why do I see everything again, why do I hear it all again?
I have to get over it, I have to go on that plane and I won't show any fear.
No, the ...'
Makoto's thoughts were broken by a soft hand on her cheek, wiping away a tear with a thumb. Makoto hadn't realised she had been crying that much.
"You should have told us you didn't want to do this, we would have looked for something else then, you know." Makoto lifted her head to look into the worried eyes of her blue-haired friend. She couldn't stand it if her friend looked at her the way she did right now. Makoto turned away her head and didn't speak.
Suddenly she felt an arm hanging over her to comfort her. "Really Mako, if I would have known you were this scared, I wouldn't have let you come!", the blonde on her other side said.
"No, it's okay, really, I will be alright, don't worry about me. I just had to clear my mind for a moment, but I'm okay now" "Are you sure?" "Yeah Minako, I'm fine." "Okay, but don't forget we are here for you and you shouldn't try to face your fear alone" "Yeah, I know... thanks!" Makoto gave her two friends a relived and thankful smile.
"Gosh, I had to listen all the way to: 'Did not!' 'Did too!' 'Did not!' 'Did too!' Next time we should put Rei and my little daughter in different cars. I cannot believe those two are friends..." Mrs. Mizuno nodded in agreement and gave Mr. Tsukino a smile. She didn't tell Mr. Tsukino what the girls in her car were talking about, she didn't want to worry the other two girls more than they already were about Makoto.
The girls were standing together, waiting for the voice to say they could get into the plane.
"Finally!" Rei said with an irritated tone when she heard the voice saying the words they all wanted to hear.
"Bye dad, gonna miss ya! Give mom a big kiss from me! Love ya!" Usagi kissed her father on the cheek and run in the direction of the other girls.
"Bye mom, I'll give you a call as soon as we get there." Ami hugged her mom. "Be careful, sweetie" her mother said while she moved closer to Ami's face and whispered in her ear: "Take good care of yourself and your friend, she looks like she needs you" Ami pulled away from her mom and smiled weakly. "I will"
The Girls waved Mr. Tsukino and Mrs. Mizuno goodbye and walked into the plane.
~exited, happy, irritated, worried, frightened~
= = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = =
I want to thank: SailorSoul2, Lizzy Hakubi, Codie, Hokushin, And Ryudo for their review on the first version of this fic.
And I want to thank Mawsi and Helco (again? Yes again!) for helping with the technical stuff. ^__^
So, this was the first chapter of my first fic. I hope ya all like it
*hope* *hope*
anyway, please review. I would like to know how others think about my fict.
-xxx- Me