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After many days in the desert, the two banished friends finally find grass. For the past month, they had been fighting off monsters as well as bounty hunters. Slowly they grew more and more skilled with their weapons. In the guild, they had not had a lot of chances to really use their weapons, but now, they have been forced to fight.
Now, they finally came to the shore side city of Lavender Precious. They too a quick rest at the inn, always wary of bounty hunters, and tore down any reward pictures they found of them. Finally, they left on the first boat to the castle city of Jad. They traveled one whole day by sea, and finally made it to the city. As they were getting off the boat, Hawk overheard one of the sailors complaining to leave port. The captain asked why, and the sailor answered that the port seemed too quiet. The two friends walked off the dock and entered a small tunnel. They expected to hear the sounds of merchants coming through the hall, but once they reached the end of the tunnel, and large, burly, hairy man stepped out and stood in front of the group.\
"Ah, new comers. Welcome to the castle city of Jad," the beastman said, "We, the beastmen of the beast man kingdom, have taken over this city." the beastman continued on, stating the rules of the city
"Boy, I bet Niko could get a lot of money off this guy selling razors," Falcon teased. Suddenly, the beastman stopped mid sentence
"YOU!" yelled, the beastman, "come here." Falcon stepped forward and looked the beastman straight in the eye.
"Yes?"
"Are you looking for a fight, because with your kind of attitude, you'll get into a lot of fights pretty fast?"
"Thank you for the advice," and without looking back at the hairy beastman, he turned and walked back into the crowd. After the beastman finished with introductions, the two friends headed to the weapons shop. Just as they came to the door, a young teen clad in bright silver armor came out of the door, cursing.
"Hey, do they have any good weapons in there?" Hawk asked.
"Are you kidding me? They have nothing. They say that the beastmen took it. Piece of shit weapons shop. They have jack shit, and yet the lady in there's still dancing around, as if she's waiting for a customer. Idiots," and with this, he stormed away towards the pub.
With nowhere else to go, they headed towards the pub as well. In most places, where there was a pub, there was information. As they walked in the front door, the saw the knight just ordering a mug of beer, while sitting down to a table with two girls. One of them had purple hair, was wearing almost a bathing suit of sorts, and was holding an old beat-up walking stick. The other girl, though, looked more like a fighter. She had golden blond hair, tied up in two neat loops in the top of her head, was wearing a green sort of dress armor, and was brandishing an oversized lance, which she was currently threatening the knight with, saying if he didn't get out, she'd stick it through him.
"I'd really hate to be him right about now," Falcon said. They found a table, and also ordered up two beers.
"So, what do we do now?" Falcon asked, "We're stuck in Jad, and even if we do find a way out of here, where do we go? Sooner or later, King Flamekhan will figure out that we hitched a ride out of there."
"Well," Hawk said,"Lor-, I mean, King Flamekhan always said that if you ever needed help, seek out the Priest of Ligh-"Just then, the knight and the two girls came over to their table.
"Sorry," The knight said, "But we couldn't help overhearing your conversation." At this, Hawk and Falcon both froze up. "We're going to Wendel to see the priest of light as well." Then, the two friends sighed. They had not heard that the two were outlaws.
"Oh, yeah," Falcon said, hesitantly, "we're going to Wendel too. I heard that the roads to Wendel are filled with ferocious animals."
"Yeah, that's why we're going together." The blonde girl, who's name was Lise, said, "I heard that at night, the beastmen turn into wolves. This way, you can leave if you kill the wolves. They're not as smart as wolves, either."
"So it's decided, we go at sunset," Said Angela, the purple haired girl, and with that they all left.
"Well," Falcons said, "I guess we better go and get a room, and get some shut eye, looks like we're in for a long night." They walked over to the lady, who was as usual dancing, and as ked for a two bed room bed.
"How much would that be?" Hawk asked.
"Oh, with the Beastmen here, I can't possibly make a profit. It's on the house." They got the room number, and headed off to their room. On the way there, Falcon couldn't help but think about how much his life had changed. Please, R&R. Also, go to fictionpress.com or .net, I'm not sure which one it is, and see my original fiction. It's under general fiction, and it's called The New Guy.
After many days in the desert, the two banished friends finally find grass. For the past month, they had been fighting off monsters as well as bounty hunters. Slowly they grew more and more skilled with their weapons. In the guild, they had not had a lot of chances to really use their weapons, but now, they have been forced to fight.
Now, they finally came to the shore side city of Lavender Precious. They too a quick rest at the inn, always wary of bounty hunters, and tore down any reward pictures they found of them. Finally, they left on the first boat to the castle city of Jad. They traveled one whole day by sea, and finally made it to the city. As they were getting off the boat, Hawk overheard one of the sailors complaining to leave port. The captain asked why, and the sailor answered that the port seemed too quiet. The two friends walked off the dock and entered a small tunnel. They expected to hear the sounds of merchants coming through the hall, but once they reached the end of the tunnel, and large, burly, hairy man stepped out and stood in front of the group.\
"Ah, new comers. Welcome to the castle city of Jad," the beastman said, "We, the beastmen of the beast man kingdom, have taken over this city." the beastman continued on, stating the rules of the city
"Boy, I bet Niko could get a lot of money off this guy selling razors," Falcon teased. Suddenly, the beastman stopped mid sentence
"YOU!" yelled, the beastman, "come here." Falcon stepped forward and looked the beastman straight in the eye.
"Yes?"
"Are you looking for a fight, because with your kind of attitude, you'll get into a lot of fights pretty fast?"
"Thank you for the advice," and without looking back at the hairy beastman, he turned and walked back into the crowd. After the beastman finished with introductions, the two friends headed to the weapons shop. Just as they came to the door, a young teen clad in bright silver armor came out of the door, cursing.
"Hey, do they have any good weapons in there?" Hawk asked.
"Are you kidding me? They have nothing. They say that the beastmen took it. Piece of shit weapons shop. They have jack shit, and yet the lady in there's still dancing around, as if she's waiting for a customer. Idiots," and with this, he stormed away towards the pub.
With nowhere else to go, they headed towards the pub as well. In most places, where there was a pub, there was information. As they walked in the front door, the saw the knight just ordering a mug of beer, while sitting down to a table with two girls. One of them had purple hair, was wearing almost a bathing suit of sorts, and was holding an old beat-up walking stick. The other girl, though, looked more like a fighter. She had golden blond hair, tied up in two neat loops in the top of her head, was wearing a green sort of dress armor, and was brandishing an oversized lance, which she was currently threatening the knight with, saying if he didn't get out, she'd stick it through him.
"I'd really hate to be him right about now," Falcon said. They found a table, and also ordered up two beers.
"So, what do we do now?" Falcon asked, "We're stuck in Jad, and even if we do find a way out of here, where do we go? Sooner or later, King Flamekhan will figure out that we hitched a ride out of there."
"Well," Hawk said,"Lor-, I mean, King Flamekhan always said that if you ever needed help, seek out the Priest of Ligh-"Just then, the knight and the two girls came over to their table.
"Sorry," The knight said, "But we couldn't help overhearing your conversation." At this, Hawk and Falcon both froze up. "We're going to Wendel to see the priest of light as well." Then, the two friends sighed. They had not heard that the two were outlaws.
"Oh, yeah," Falcon said, hesitantly, "we're going to Wendel too. I heard that the roads to Wendel are filled with ferocious animals."
"Yeah, that's why we're going together." The blonde girl, who's name was Lise, said, "I heard that at night, the beastmen turn into wolves. This way, you can leave if you kill the wolves. They're not as smart as wolves, either."
"So it's decided, we go at sunset," Said Angela, the purple haired girl, and with that they all left.
"Well," Falcons said, "I guess we better go and get a room, and get some shut eye, looks like we're in for a long night." They walked over to the lady, who was as usual dancing, and as ked for a two bed room bed.
"How much would that be?" Hawk asked.
"Oh, with the Beastmen here, I can't possibly make a profit. It's on the house." They got the room number, and headed off to their room. On the way there, Falcon couldn't help but think about how much his life had changed. Please, R&R. Also, go to fictionpress.com or .net, I'm not sure which one it is, and see my original fiction. It's under general fiction, and it's called The New Guy.