I've always hated author notes, but I need to include them. First, I don't own Sailor Moon. Next, this is the first story that I have ever posted, so I would appreciate some feedback on this. If you have some ideas of what you would like to see happen in this story I am open to sugestions.
Quick notes about the setting and my writing in general: they are in the US so I'm using American names
this story is about Amy- she's my favorite so I write mainly about her but I do include the other characters
I don't really do villians
"There she is!" he thought. He had long ago stopped trying to convince himself that he didn't like her. Now he actually had a chance to meet her. Not only was she in his class but the seat next to her wasn't taken yet. "Uh, is this seat taken yet?"
"Huh?" she asked looking up from her book. "I don't think anybody's sitting there."
He sat down in the seat.
"What book are you reading?" he asked. "Great way to start a conversation," he mentally chided himself.
"It's not actually a book," she said. "It's a friendship book. My friends write notes and things like that in it. I'm trying to catch up right now." She turned back to her book. "Oh no! I almost forgot about that."
He was pretty sure she was talking to herself.
"I can't believe she did that to me! How am I going to be able to do that?"
"Maybe this wasn't the best idea in the world," he thought.
"I'm sorry, I'm being rude. My name's Amy," she said.
"I'm Zach," he said.
"It's nice to meet you. Should I know you from somewhere?" asked Amy.
"I went to school here for the last part of last year, but I don't think we ever met," said Zach.
"I know this is going to sound strange, but do you dance any?" asked Amy.
"What kind of dancing?" asked Zach.
"Whatever's popular and swing."
"I do a little bit of both," said Zach. "But nothing seems very strange yet."
"It will now," said Amy. "You see my friends are going to a dance club tonight to celebrate the beginning of their last year of high school. One of my friends said I have to find a date to bring to the club, even though they all know that I have nobody to ask. I need to find somebody to take with me tonight because otherwise my friends will tease me to no end."
"So you're wanting me to go with you to this club?" asked Zach.
"I guess so," said Amy. "You don't have to go if you don't want to."
"So what time did you say you were meeting your friends?" asked Zach.
"I didn't say, but we're going to meet at 6," said Amy. "I wonder where the teacher is."
"There's still 10 minutes before class," said Zach. "The teacher might not get here until just before class is supposed to start."
"I guess we need to figure out how we're going to work this," said Amy.
"I'm going to have to go shopping after school to find an outfit to wear tonight," said Zach.
"I have to go shopping too," said Amy. "What time could you get to the mall?"
"It would take me about half an hour maybe forty-five minutes after school got out if I went home first," said Zach.
"Same here," said Amy. "How about we meet at the mall at 4:00? We can look for outfits together and then go from there."
"Where exactly are we going to meet? And do you know if there's an admission charge at this club?" asked Zach.
"Let's meet at the food court," said Amy. "I'll ask my friends about admission at lunch and I'll tell you this afternoon."
"Good morning. My name is Darien, I'll be your teacher. I want you all to call me Darien. It looks like everybody's here already so I think we'll start early."
"Oh my gosh, I can't believe this," said Amy.
"What's wrong?" asked Zach.
"Our teacher is my friend's boyfriend," said Amy.
"I expect you all to be quiet unless I ask you to speak," said Darien. "There will be no exceptions."
Quick notes about the setting and my writing in general: they are in the US so I'm using American names
this story is about Amy- she's my favorite so I write mainly about her but I do include the other characters
I don't really do villians
"There she is!" he thought. He had long ago stopped trying to convince himself that he didn't like her. Now he actually had a chance to meet her. Not only was she in his class but the seat next to her wasn't taken yet. "Uh, is this seat taken yet?"
"Huh?" she asked looking up from her book. "I don't think anybody's sitting there."
He sat down in the seat.
"What book are you reading?" he asked. "Great way to start a conversation," he mentally chided himself.
"It's not actually a book," she said. "It's a friendship book. My friends write notes and things like that in it. I'm trying to catch up right now." She turned back to her book. "Oh no! I almost forgot about that."
He was pretty sure she was talking to herself.
"I can't believe she did that to me! How am I going to be able to do that?"
"Maybe this wasn't the best idea in the world," he thought.
"I'm sorry, I'm being rude. My name's Amy," she said.
"I'm Zach," he said.
"It's nice to meet you. Should I know you from somewhere?" asked Amy.
"I went to school here for the last part of last year, but I don't think we ever met," said Zach.
"I know this is going to sound strange, but do you dance any?" asked Amy.
"What kind of dancing?" asked Zach.
"Whatever's popular and swing."
"I do a little bit of both," said Zach. "But nothing seems very strange yet."
"It will now," said Amy. "You see my friends are going to a dance club tonight to celebrate the beginning of their last year of high school. One of my friends said I have to find a date to bring to the club, even though they all know that I have nobody to ask. I need to find somebody to take with me tonight because otherwise my friends will tease me to no end."
"So you're wanting me to go with you to this club?" asked Zach.
"I guess so," said Amy. "You don't have to go if you don't want to."
"So what time did you say you were meeting your friends?" asked Zach.
"I didn't say, but we're going to meet at 6," said Amy. "I wonder where the teacher is."
"There's still 10 minutes before class," said Zach. "The teacher might not get here until just before class is supposed to start."
"I guess we need to figure out how we're going to work this," said Amy.
"I'm going to have to go shopping after school to find an outfit to wear tonight," said Zach.
"I have to go shopping too," said Amy. "What time could you get to the mall?"
"It would take me about half an hour maybe forty-five minutes after school got out if I went home first," said Zach.
"Same here," said Amy. "How about we meet at the mall at 4:00? We can look for outfits together and then go from there."
"Where exactly are we going to meet? And do you know if there's an admission charge at this club?" asked Zach.
"Let's meet at the food court," said Amy. "I'll ask my friends about admission at lunch and I'll tell you this afternoon."
"Good morning. My name is Darien, I'll be your teacher. I want you all to call me Darien. It looks like everybody's here already so I think we'll start early."
"Oh my gosh, I can't believe this," said Amy.
"What's wrong?" asked Zach.
"Our teacher is my friend's boyfriend," said Amy.
"I expect you all to be quiet unless I ask you to speak," said Darien. "There will be no exceptions."