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Riddicks POV
I wasn't expecting the elbow in the ribs but the knee's in the groin was even more unexpected. I fell back and
groaned slightly at the pain. I stood there for a moment breathing deep listening to the sounds of the fight
still going on even though I wasn't even there any more. No wonder the girl had survived so long. The
whole prison was occupied by F#$%^@! morons. I smiled and looked down the hall after the girl. I shook
my head and straightened stretching my shoulders a little and turning my neck popping it. She was good.
Using my own restraint against me. She was definitely good. But I was better. I slowly and quietly walked
away not wanting to disturb Damon's little orgy. Almost at the end of the hallway I remembered something
that puzzled me. She had looked me over as if she could see me, yet she didn't have a shine job.
Something was going on.
The hot water felt good going over my sore shoulders and back washing the blood from my skin. It stung
the cut that I had received from the fight but that was healing nicely and wouldn't bother me for long. The
water left a trail of pink suds going down the drain. The girl still troubled me. I had searched for her for what
seemed like days and I had been unable to find her. Yet there were stories about her every where I turned.
She could stand on the walls, crawl on the ceiling, and was as of now known as the best with a shiv in the
joint. I sighed and turned my head into the spray. She wouldn't be known for that for long. Suddenly the bar
of soap slipped from my hands and landed on the floor. I was thankful that I had chased everyone else out I
didn't want a fight to break out over leaning over for the soap.
"Isn't that a no-no in prison?" I heard a feminine voice behind me. I turned and saw the girl I had been
hunting for standing there at the entrance to the showers. I smiled.
"It's only a no-no when your new and people don't know that you could kill them without even batting an
eye. " I told her slowly taking a step towards her she threw me a blanket and that when I noticed that her
eyes were closed.
"Cover yourself I don't want to see any thing that might even scare the toughest of inmates." She said
sarcastically. I grinned and wrapped the blanket around my waist.
"It's safe." I said quietly taking another step closer to her. She opened her eyes and looked at me strangely.
"It's never safe here." She said quietly. I smiled wider but inwardly I was confused. From what I had heard
she was top dog. You didn't mess with this B!&*%.
"I've heard that you have been looking for me." She said crossing her arms and leaning against the wall. She
looked cool and relaxed but I knew that she was ready to run at the slightest provoking.
"Really?" I said." I thought I told them all to keep they're mouths shut." She shrugged.
"If you didn't want then to talk then you should have cut out they're tongues. But I still would have known.
I have my ways of getting information." She said evasively. Curiosity twitched inside me like a worm on a
hook. I wanted to know what this girl was here for and what had made her so powerful.
"What do you want with me?" She asked. I looked her up and down.
"A good F$#@."I told her. She looked at me contentiously then turned and started to leave.
"If you insist on being disgusting then so be it but you can be disgusting by yourself or with your friends
cause I won't stand there and listen to you degrade yourself." I smirked. She had guts to walk away from me.
"So what do the people call you in this place?" I called after her. She turned a corner and disappeared.
I walked into the hallway outside of the showers to see which way she had gone but she was no where to
be seen. I drew my eyebrows together in confusion then I went back and finished drying off then I got
dressed and went in search of a place to hang the blanket so that she would see it and take it back.
Noir's POV
I slid into my hole and crawled under the blankets. I was shivering and not just from the cold. I closed my
eyes and immediately saw his extremely tight wet butt. A slight smile touched my lips and I clutched the
blanket that he had used tighter to my chest. He was a very good looking man this Riddick. He had a bad
scar on his left calf but I thought that it was pretty sexy. I Snuggled
deeper under the blankets and soon my eyelids grew heavy. I fell asleep praying that I would dream of a
certain someone.
"Hey where are you going?" I heard the man call behind me. I didn't turn and started to walk faster.
"Hey. HEY!"I heard him yell again. This time only he sounded more angry. I heard his footsteps behind me. I
broke into a run. The heavy rain made the ground slick and I had a hard time running on it. I quickly shed
my coat and turned sharply down an alley. I heard the man call me some rather disgusting things behind me
but I wasn't about to hesitate. I heard the usual popping sound and then I jumped. Taking flight.
I awoke suddenly something disturbing my sleep. I stopped breathing and looked out of the grate. Legs. I
carefully and silently crawled from my blankets and onto the ceiling. The legs stayed where they were and
then I heard a deep voice whispering.
"Why the hell do you think that he would be there?" The first voice said. The sound of shuffling feet. And
a new voice.
"What makes you think that he wouldn't be there?"
"Because he's smarter then that, @$$#*!!."
"Riddick is not your average criminal but he's not invincible."
"Yeah but he's smart. What should we do?" I recognized the second voice as that of mouse. The weasel. I
sneered.
"This will take careful planning but if it works then Riddick will be gone for good and we'll be the F#@!$%
^ rulers of this little paradise."
"What am I supposed to do." I heard mouse say. I could imagine him rubbing his hands together greedily.
"You just keep an eye out for him and inform me of where he is at every possible moment."
"Ok, ok, ok." Mouse said and then I heard his feet running down the hallway. The pair of legs in front of the
grate didn't move for the longest time, then suddenly the man crouched down and looked into the hole
through the grate. I saw his silver eyes carefully look over the hole and then he seemed satisfied and stood
and slowly walked away. I slid down the wall and quietly looked through the grate. What were they
planning?
Riddick's POV
"I never doubted you for a second." Jack's voice says. I smile and then turn to the priest.
"Any one not up for this?" I say a little sarcastically. The priest looks at me and says something about his
God. I ignore him. Slowly in single file we leave the hole on the side of the mountain and make our way
through the canyon. We stop and hide behind some rocks to ovoid being seen by the beast's. I grab
Carolyn's hand and wait for the right moment o run. It finally comes and I pull them along. We reach a slick
hill and I push them up.
"You know the way." I yell at them." Run. You know the way." I turn and a huge beast lands in front of me. I
crawl backwards as fast as my arms can go. I turn and see that they have reached the skiff safely. Now it
was my turn. I look back at the thing creeping towards me and yell something unrepeatable at it then I jump
up and run down the hill towards the small mining town.
I jerk awake sweat covering my body. I doubted that they would ever leave. The nightmares. I sat up and
looked around the small room that was off to the side of the main hall way. There were lot's of these rooms.
All filled with bunks for the inmates to sleep on. I had slept on every bunk in slam at least three times. I
knew every kink and broken spring. I stood up slowly I and ran a hand over my shaved head. Hmm. Time to
shave again. I thought. I headed for the showers again. It had been about a month since I had last seen the
girl. I figured that I might get lucky and she'll come to see me in the showers again. I shrugged and decided
to try my luck. I walked down the halls thinking yet still on the guard for danger. I don't know how I didn't
know they were there but suddenly I heard a muffled groan and then a whispered 'I'm sorry'. I turned and
saw a man standing behind me a scared expression on his face. A hand had wrapped itself around his neck
and I saw that his neck had been slit. Suddenly he dropped to the ground and there stood the girl I grinned
slightly and cocked my head o the side looking at her at an angle.
"Hello." I said quietly. She wiped her bloody arm down and looked at me suspiciously.
"I'm surprised you couldn't hear him coming." She said bending down and searching the man's body. She
pulled a few things out of his pockets but left his clothes and boots. I looked at her strangely. What was
more important then new boots to a girl who didn't wear any. She straightened and walked past me.
"Some one's planning something against you." She said continuing down the hall way. I walked after her.
" It wouldn't be the first time." I said nonchalantly. She looked at me sharply.
"Then next time I won't kill the man who sneaks up behind you." She said and started to walk off. I grabbed
her arm and pulled her to me but she did something unexpected. As I swung her to me she ran to meet me
and ran up my body and flipped. I released her arm and watched her run down the hall and turn. I smiled.
She was a very interesting girl. I could see now how she had lived so long.
Riddicks POV
I wasn't expecting the elbow in the ribs but the knee's in the groin was even more unexpected. I fell back and
groaned slightly at the pain. I stood there for a moment breathing deep listening to the sounds of the fight
still going on even though I wasn't even there any more. No wonder the girl had survived so long. The
whole prison was occupied by F#$%^@! morons. I smiled and looked down the hall after the girl. I shook
my head and straightened stretching my shoulders a little and turning my neck popping it. She was good.
Using my own restraint against me. She was definitely good. But I was better. I slowly and quietly walked
away not wanting to disturb Damon's little orgy. Almost at the end of the hallway I remembered something
that puzzled me. She had looked me over as if she could see me, yet she didn't have a shine job.
Something was going on.
The hot water felt good going over my sore shoulders and back washing the blood from my skin. It stung
the cut that I had received from the fight but that was healing nicely and wouldn't bother me for long. The
water left a trail of pink suds going down the drain. The girl still troubled me. I had searched for her for what
seemed like days and I had been unable to find her. Yet there were stories about her every where I turned.
She could stand on the walls, crawl on the ceiling, and was as of now known as the best with a shiv in the
joint. I sighed and turned my head into the spray. She wouldn't be known for that for long. Suddenly the bar
of soap slipped from my hands and landed on the floor. I was thankful that I had chased everyone else out I
didn't want a fight to break out over leaning over for the soap.
"Isn't that a no-no in prison?" I heard a feminine voice behind me. I turned and saw the girl I had been
hunting for standing there at the entrance to the showers. I smiled.
"It's only a no-no when your new and people don't know that you could kill them without even batting an
eye. " I told her slowly taking a step towards her she threw me a blanket and that when I noticed that her
eyes were closed.
"Cover yourself I don't want to see any thing that might even scare the toughest of inmates." She said
sarcastically. I grinned and wrapped the blanket around my waist.
"It's safe." I said quietly taking another step closer to her. She opened her eyes and looked at me strangely.
"It's never safe here." She said quietly. I smiled wider but inwardly I was confused. From what I had heard
she was top dog. You didn't mess with this B!&*%.
"I've heard that you have been looking for me." She said crossing her arms and leaning against the wall. She
looked cool and relaxed but I knew that she was ready to run at the slightest provoking.
"Really?" I said." I thought I told them all to keep they're mouths shut." She shrugged.
"If you didn't want then to talk then you should have cut out they're tongues. But I still would have known.
I have my ways of getting information." She said evasively. Curiosity twitched inside me like a worm on a
hook. I wanted to know what this girl was here for and what had made her so powerful.
"What do you want with me?" She asked. I looked her up and down.
"A good F$#@."I told her. She looked at me contentiously then turned and started to leave.
"If you insist on being disgusting then so be it but you can be disgusting by yourself or with your friends
cause I won't stand there and listen to you degrade yourself." I smirked. She had guts to walk away from me.
"So what do the people call you in this place?" I called after her. She turned a corner and disappeared.
I walked into the hallway outside of the showers to see which way she had gone but she was no where to
be seen. I drew my eyebrows together in confusion then I went back and finished drying off then I got
dressed and went in search of a place to hang the blanket so that she would see it and take it back.
Noir's POV
I slid into my hole and crawled under the blankets. I was shivering and not just from the cold. I closed my
eyes and immediately saw his extremely tight wet butt. A slight smile touched my lips and I clutched the
blanket that he had used tighter to my chest. He was a very good looking man this Riddick. He had a bad
scar on his left calf but I thought that it was pretty sexy. I Snuggled
deeper under the blankets and soon my eyelids grew heavy. I fell asleep praying that I would dream of a
certain someone.
"Hey where are you going?" I heard the man call behind me. I didn't turn and started to walk faster.
"Hey. HEY!"I heard him yell again. This time only he sounded more angry. I heard his footsteps behind me. I
broke into a run. The heavy rain made the ground slick and I had a hard time running on it. I quickly shed
my coat and turned sharply down an alley. I heard the man call me some rather disgusting things behind me
but I wasn't about to hesitate. I heard the usual popping sound and then I jumped. Taking flight.
I awoke suddenly something disturbing my sleep. I stopped breathing and looked out of the grate. Legs. I
carefully and silently crawled from my blankets and onto the ceiling. The legs stayed where they were and
then I heard a deep voice whispering.
"Why the hell do you think that he would be there?" The first voice said. The sound of shuffling feet. And
a new voice.
"What makes you think that he wouldn't be there?"
"Because he's smarter then that, @$$#*!!."
"Riddick is not your average criminal but he's not invincible."
"Yeah but he's smart. What should we do?" I recognized the second voice as that of mouse. The weasel. I
sneered.
"This will take careful planning but if it works then Riddick will be gone for good and we'll be the F#@!$%
^ rulers of this little paradise."
"What am I supposed to do." I heard mouse say. I could imagine him rubbing his hands together greedily.
"You just keep an eye out for him and inform me of where he is at every possible moment."
"Ok, ok, ok." Mouse said and then I heard his feet running down the hallway. The pair of legs in front of the
grate didn't move for the longest time, then suddenly the man crouched down and looked into the hole
through the grate. I saw his silver eyes carefully look over the hole and then he seemed satisfied and stood
and slowly walked away. I slid down the wall and quietly looked through the grate. What were they
planning?
Riddick's POV
"I never doubted you for a second." Jack's voice says. I smile and then turn to the priest.
"Any one not up for this?" I say a little sarcastically. The priest looks at me and says something about his
God. I ignore him. Slowly in single file we leave the hole on the side of the mountain and make our way
through the canyon. We stop and hide behind some rocks to ovoid being seen by the beast's. I grab
Carolyn's hand and wait for the right moment o run. It finally comes and I pull them along. We reach a slick
hill and I push them up.
"You know the way." I yell at them." Run. You know the way." I turn and a huge beast lands in front of me. I
crawl backwards as fast as my arms can go. I turn and see that they have reached the skiff safely. Now it
was my turn. I look back at the thing creeping towards me and yell something unrepeatable at it then I jump
up and run down the hill towards the small mining town.
I jerk awake sweat covering my body. I doubted that they would ever leave. The nightmares. I sat up and
looked around the small room that was off to the side of the main hall way. There were lot's of these rooms.
All filled with bunks for the inmates to sleep on. I had slept on every bunk in slam at least three times. I
knew every kink and broken spring. I stood up slowly I and ran a hand over my shaved head. Hmm. Time to
shave again. I thought. I headed for the showers again. It had been about a month since I had last seen the
girl. I figured that I might get lucky and she'll come to see me in the showers again. I shrugged and decided
to try my luck. I walked down the halls thinking yet still on the guard for danger. I don't know how I didn't
know they were there but suddenly I heard a muffled groan and then a whispered 'I'm sorry'. I turned and
saw a man standing behind me a scared expression on his face. A hand had wrapped itself around his neck
and I saw that his neck had been slit. Suddenly he dropped to the ground and there stood the girl I grinned
slightly and cocked my head o the side looking at her at an angle.
"Hello." I said quietly. She wiped her bloody arm down and looked at me suspiciously.
"I'm surprised you couldn't hear him coming." She said bending down and searching the man's body. She
pulled a few things out of his pockets but left his clothes and boots. I looked at her strangely. What was
more important then new boots to a girl who didn't wear any. She straightened and walked past me.
"Some one's planning something against you." She said continuing down the hall way. I walked after her.
" It wouldn't be the first time." I said nonchalantly. She looked at me sharply.
"Then next time I won't kill the man who sneaks up behind you." She said and started to walk off. I grabbed
her arm and pulled her to me but she did something unexpected. As I swung her to me she ran to meet me
and ran up my body and flipped. I released her arm and watched her run down the hall and turn. I smiled.
She was a very interesting girl. I could see now how she had lived so long.