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Riddick's POV
I saw Rocky Leaning over her and I felt a rage go though me. He was not going to hurt her. I jumped out of
the hole and did quick work of the man in front of me.
I wouldn't do that if I were you." I said. Rocky turned to me. I saw Noir peek out from behind him.
"Riddick." Rocky said as if her were actually happy to see me." So good to see you again."
"Rocky." I replied." What? Are your boys not putting out enough that you have to pick on helpless girls
now?" I could tell his face turned red.
"So who put you up to this?" I asked him but I really wasn't paying any attention to him at that moment. I
was busy watching Noir stealthily pull a shiv from her pants.
"Really Hmm." I said even though I had not caught his reply." Cause last time I was here you couldn't F%$#
yourself without someone telling you how to do it." He growled and rushed me but I was ready for that. I
dodged just in time and slid my shiv across his belly as I did so. I saw the man holding Noir drop and Noir
running. A sharp pain filled my side. I groaned and turned and knocked Rocky off of me pulling the shiv
out of my side as I did so. I flung the shiv back at him and it caught his arm. He cried out. I turned and saw a
man leading Noir back to the gang but she stumbled and went down. I dropped to my knees just in time to
avoid being hit by Rocky but I never took my eyes off of Noir and the man. Suddenly he slapped her across
the face and her head snapped and then hung there. A red haze filled my vision and I cried out in anger and
attacked Rocky with a new fury. I quickly put an end to that problem with a quick flick of the wrist across
the throat. I turned to the other guys around but not seeing any threat from them I turned back to the guy
holding Noir. And was shocked at what I saw. Noir was kneeling over the man now tears streaming down
her face. I took a step towards her and then ducked again as another idiot flew overhead. I jumped on him
and snapped his neck.
Noir's POV
I heard my neck pop as the man slapped me. And then my head hung there as I tried to hold back the tears. I
felt a hand grab my chin and force me to look. It as the man who had slapped me. I quickly reached up and
stuck my shiv in his throat. He gurgled and clutched at the weapon for a moment then he fell over me. I
crawled slowly out from underneath him and knelt by his side the tears falling freely now. I heard a snap. I
looked up and saw RIddick straddling another man. The man's head between Riddicks huge hands and then
suddenly he wasn't there nay more. All that was there was a huge pile of people.
"Riddick." I shouted. I jumped up to help him and had just reached the pile when a hand held me back. I
raised my hand with the shiv defensively and looked down at my attacker.
"Woh." Mouse shouted raising a hand to protect himself. I lowered the shiv and looked at him confused.
"You shouldn't interfere with thins right now." He said standing and pulling me away. I struggled against
him for moment then I quit and let him lead me away from the fight and down numerous halls. I didn't notice
where we were going. I wasn't paying attention to anything. All I could think about was Riddick. He had
saved me. Probably indirectly but he had saved me nonetheless.
"Here." Mouse said pulling me down to the ground. I looked into the dark hole and saw that it made a sharp
turn a little ways down. I looked at mouse curiously then headed down the tunnel. I gripped the shiv in my
hand hard ready to do anything if Mouse meant trouble. I made the turn and stopped dead in my tracks.
Before me was a nice little room not high enough to stand in or wide enough to lie straight in but it looked
comfortable nonetheless. Blankets on the floor and books against the wall. I turned and looked at mouse
behind me amazed. He grinned.
" You r not the only one with a special hides away." He said smugly. I turned and looked back into the little
room. Mouse gently pushed me further into the room. I crawled to the other side and sat against the wall.
Mouse sat opposite me his lags crossed.
"Why are you doing this for me?" I asked quietly after a moment of awkward silence.
"Because you saved my life." He said smiling happily. " I needed to return the favor." I smiled at him and
thought how weird it was that I had never known what an interesting guy mouse was.
"Thank you." I said. He nodded and smiled at me wider. I smiled back and then I turned and looked at his
selections of books. The art of war, spanish-english dictionary revised second edition, an encyclopedia (H
through K), for love or honor. I cocked an eyebrow and picked up the last one and looked at him. He
grinned, shrugged, and shook his head.
"I get what I can when I can." He said." I don't make the reading choices." I smiled and set the book down.
Then I lay down on the blankets and shut my eyes. I lay there for ten minutes when I finally herd mouse try
to quietly leave.
"Where are you going?" I asked not opening my eyes. I heard him gasp and he hit the wall with one hand.
"Geeze. You scared the $#!^ out of me." He said looking at me. I opened my eyes and looked him
over.
"Where were you going?" I asked again.
"Out to see if Riddick is ok." He said. I sat up and crawled towards him.
" We go out together." I said and headed down the hall to the little grate.
"Ok, you're the boss." I heard mouse said sarcastically behind me but I ignored him and crawled out of the
hole.
We walked down halls together me keeping one eye on mouse and one eye on the halls watching for
Riddick. Mouse just looked nervous.
"Where is the hallway you brought me from." I asked him. He looked back at me nervously and then he
pointed to hallway a little ways ahead of us. I quietly ran and peeked down the hallway. Lots of dead men. I
walked down the hall and began picking through the bodies. Trying to see if Riddick was among them.
Nothing. I straightened and looked up and down the hall way.
" Riddick." I called out in a whisper." Riddick." Suddenly out of my little hole he fell bleeding and breathing
hard.
"Riddick." I hissed and bent down to help him. He was covered with blood and I was sure that some of it
was his.
"Oh Riddick." I said concerned, looking him over." Where are you cut?" I asked him. His tight jaw only
tightened.
"Mouse." I called down the hallway. He peeked his head around the corner. "Come help me." I said waving
him over. He shook his head vehemently.
"Riddick saved your life as much as I did now get over here." I hissed. Mouse reluctantly walked up to us.
Riddick growled but let mouse slip an arm under his own. I got on the other side of him and we helped him
up.
"Um.. Uh.." I said looking down the hallways." Let's go to the showers." I said. Mouse nodded and we
stumbled off together towards water.
Mcatyhey's POV
"We didn't get her or him sir." The man on the left said. I turned and looked them both over contentiously.
"I am surrounded by idiots." I muttered settling my girth into the wide seat at my desk.
"Major just let us use the darts and we'll get them." The second man said. I thought about that for a moment
and then nodded. No more idiot prisoners. Now I would get my girl and kill the man who had betrayed me.
"No one double crosses a Mcatyhey." I said then I waved the guards out of the room.
Riddick's POV
I saw Rocky Leaning over her and I felt a rage go though me. He was not going to hurt her. I jumped out of
the hole and did quick work of the man in front of me.
I wouldn't do that if I were you." I said. Rocky turned to me. I saw Noir peek out from behind him.
"Riddick." Rocky said as if her were actually happy to see me." So good to see you again."
"Rocky." I replied." What? Are your boys not putting out enough that you have to pick on helpless girls
now?" I could tell his face turned red.
"So who put you up to this?" I asked him but I really wasn't paying any attention to him at that moment. I
was busy watching Noir stealthily pull a shiv from her pants.
"Really Hmm." I said even though I had not caught his reply." Cause last time I was here you couldn't F%$#
yourself without someone telling you how to do it." He growled and rushed me but I was ready for that. I
dodged just in time and slid my shiv across his belly as I did so. I saw the man holding Noir drop and Noir
running. A sharp pain filled my side. I groaned and turned and knocked Rocky off of me pulling the shiv
out of my side as I did so. I flung the shiv back at him and it caught his arm. He cried out. I turned and saw a
man leading Noir back to the gang but she stumbled and went down. I dropped to my knees just in time to
avoid being hit by Rocky but I never took my eyes off of Noir and the man. Suddenly he slapped her across
the face and her head snapped and then hung there. A red haze filled my vision and I cried out in anger and
attacked Rocky with a new fury. I quickly put an end to that problem with a quick flick of the wrist across
the throat. I turned to the other guys around but not seeing any threat from them I turned back to the guy
holding Noir. And was shocked at what I saw. Noir was kneeling over the man now tears streaming down
her face. I took a step towards her and then ducked again as another idiot flew overhead. I jumped on him
and snapped his neck.
Noir's POV
I heard my neck pop as the man slapped me. And then my head hung there as I tried to hold back the tears. I
felt a hand grab my chin and force me to look. It as the man who had slapped me. I quickly reached up and
stuck my shiv in his throat. He gurgled and clutched at the weapon for a moment then he fell over me. I
crawled slowly out from underneath him and knelt by his side the tears falling freely now. I heard a snap. I
looked up and saw RIddick straddling another man. The man's head between Riddicks huge hands and then
suddenly he wasn't there nay more. All that was there was a huge pile of people.
"Riddick." I shouted. I jumped up to help him and had just reached the pile when a hand held me back. I
raised my hand with the shiv defensively and looked down at my attacker.
"Woh." Mouse shouted raising a hand to protect himself. I lowered the shiv and looked at him confused.
"You shouldn't interfere with thins right now." He said standing and pulling me away. I struggled against
him for moment then I quit and let him lead me away from the fight and down numerous halls. I didn't notice
where we were going. I wasn't paying attention to anything. All I could think about was Riddick. He had
saved me. Probably indirectly but he had saved me nonetheless.
"Here." Mouse said pulling me down to the ground. I looked into the dark hole and saw that it made a sharp
turn a little ways down. I looked at mouse curiously then headed down the tunnel. I gripped the shiv in my
hand hard ready to do anything if Mouse meant trouble. I made the turn and stopped dead in my tracks.
Before me was a nice little room not high enough to stand in or wide enough to lie straight in but it looked
comfortable nonetheless. Blankets on the floor and books against the wall. I turned and looked at mouse
behind me amazed. He grinned.
" You r not the only one with a special hides away." He said smugly. I turned and looked back into the little
room. Mouse gently pushed me further into the room. I crawled to the other side and sat against the wall.
Mouse sat opposite me his lags crossed.
"Why are you doing this for me?" I asked quietly after a moment of awkward silence.
"Because you saved my life." He said smiling happily. " I needed to return the favor." I smiled at him and
thought how weird it was that I had never known what an interesting guy mouse was.
"Thank you." I said. He nodded and smiled at me wider. I smiled back and then I turned and looked at his
selections of books. The art of war, spanish-english dictionary revised second edition, an encyclopedia (H
through K), for love or honor. I cocked an eyebrow and picked up the last one and looked at him. He
grinned, shrugged, and shook his head.
"I get what I can when I can." He said." I don't make the reading choices." I smiled and set the book down.
Then I lay down on the blankets and shut my eyes. I lay there for ten minutes when I finally herd mouse try
to quietly leave.
"Where are you going?" I asked not opening my eyes. I heard him gasp and he hit the wall with one hand.
"Geeze. You scared the $#!^ out of me." He said looking at me. I opened my eyes and looked him
over.
"Where were you going?" I asked again.
"Out to see if Riddick is ok." He said. I sat up and crawled towards him.
" We go out together." I said and headed down the hall to the little grate.
"Ok, you're the boss." I heard mouse said sarcastically behind me but I ignored him and crawled out of the
hole.
We walked down halls together me keeping one eye on mouse and one eye on the halls watching for
Riddick. Mouse just looked nervous.
"Where is the hallway you brought me from." I asked him. He looked back at me nervously and then he
pointed to hallway a little ways ahead of us. I quietly ran and peeked down the hallway. Lots of dead men. I
walked down the hall and began picking through the bodies. Trying to see if Riddick was among them.
Nothing. I straightened and looked up and down the hall way.
" Riddick." I called out in a whisper." Riddick." Suddenly out of my little hole he fell bleeding and breathing
hard.
"Riddick." I hissed and bent down to help him. He was covered with blood and I was sure that some of it
was his.
"Oh Riddick." I said concerned, looking him over." Where are you cut?" I asked him. His tight jaw only
tightened.
"Mouse." I called down the hallway. He peeked his head around the corner. "Come help me." I said waving
him over. He shook his head vehemently.
"Riddick saved your life as much as I did now get over here." I hissed. Mouse reluctantly walked up to us.
Riddick growled but let mouse slip an arm under his own. I got on the other side of him and we helped him
up.
"Um.. Uh.." I said looking down the hallways." Let's go to the showers." I said. Mouse nodded and we
stumbled off together towards water.
Mcatyhey's POV
"We didn't get her or him sir." The man on the left said. I turned and looked them both over contentiously.
"I am surrounded by idiots." I muttered settling my girth into the wide seat at my desk.
"Major just let us use the darts and we'll get them." The second man said. I thought about that for a moment
and then nodded. No more idiot prisoners. Now I would get my girl and kill the man who had betrayed me.
"No one double crosses a Mcatyhey." I said then I waved the guards out of the room.