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You all give me the motivation I need. Thank you. *Sniff sniff*. Oh yeah.
Noir is french for Black. Yeah I know what a coincidence. But I liked it.
Anyway. back to the story.
Riddick's POV
I yanked Mouse up from his seat and held him above the floor a foot.
"Where is she?" I growled. Mouse squirmed a little.
"She is in one of the storage rooms." He squeaked the mouse he was." It's empty. So that they can fill it
later with something." I narrowed my eyes and dropped him.
"Take me there." I said pulling up my goggles. Mouse walked to the door and pushed some buttons on the
panel and the door slid open. He peeked out and then turned to me and nodded. I followed him out the
door.
There was no one around. A tickle of suspicion started at the bottom of my stomach but I ignored it and
continued to follow Mouse down the red lit corridors. He stopped before a big metal door.
"This is it." He said. I pushed him aside and felt up the line of the door. I then turned to the control panel.
I looked it over and touched a few buttons. Nothing.
"Oh." Mouse grunted disgustedly." Move aside." He pushed me away from the door and started to mess
with the panel. "Amateur." He muttered. I smiled amused. I could have killed him for that. Should have.
I watched as he pulled the panel off and felt around inside the wires. Soon he pulled another control panel
off that looked exactly like the one on the front on the door. He hit a few buttons and the door slid open. I
looked at him with confused amazement.
"Hey. You gotta get sent to Slam for something." He said and shrugged. I walked into the dark room and
looked around. I saw that the control panel from the inside of the room had been removed. I shook my
head. I would have to remember that. I looked around the room. Empty. I turned to Mouse. He shrugged. I
looked back into the room. I heard a sniffling sound coming from the back of the room. I moved to the
wall and knelt in front of the bench attached to the wall.
"Noir." I said against the wall. The sniffling continued. I pulled the panel off the side of the wall and
looked into the dark space. Noir was laying scrunched into a fetal position. I reached under and put my
hand on her arm.
"No." She whimpered and slid further under the seat.
"Noir." I said reaching down again. " It's me. Riddick." I reached under and this time she let me grab her
and pull her out. She stayed in the fetal position.
"Noir." I said leaning over her. She pushed my hands away and shuddered. "Come on Noir." I said
pulling her hands away from her face.
"Oh god Noir."I said. She pulled her hands away from me and covered her face again. But I had
already seen it. Her neck was red and blistered from the collar she had on. The burn had moved up her
face and into her hairline. It had to hurt.
"What's wrong with her?" Mouse siad over my shoulder. I swung out my arm and swept him of his feet.
"S#@! Riddick." He yelled. I turned my attention back to Noir and pulled her into my arms.
"It's ok." I whispered against her hair." Your still beautiful." She sobbed.
"Well isn't this the prettiest picture." I growled and turned my head slightly.
"What the hell did you do to her?" I said between clenched teeth. Mcatyhey walked into the room.
"Lights on." The room became bright.
"She was... oh how do you put this... " He began. "A B%$#@."
Noir's POV
I sat there in Riddicks arms and shivered. The pain in my face, neck and chest was excrutiating. But the fear
of Mcatyhey was stronger.
"What the hell did you do to her?" Riddick said. I felt the vibration from his chest go through me.
"Lights on." Mcatyhey said stepping into the room.
"She was ... oh how do you put this." He looked thought full for a moment then he looked directly at
Riddick." A B%$#@.
"Don't listen to him Riddick." I whispered against his chest. He squeezed me harder. I peeked over his
shoulder. Mcatyhey looked at me with disgust.
" Guards." He said. About twelve armed men entered the room." Lock these two away where they won't
cause any damage." A guard grabbed Mouse and pulled him struggling from the room. Mcatyhey turned to
leave but then he turned back and looked at me again.
"And get rid of her." He said then he left the room. Riddick tensed. The guards that were left moved
cautiously towards us. I pulled away from Riddick and looked him in the eye sadly.
"Riddick." I whispered. He looked at me regretfully. (You know the look in the end of the movie when
Carolyn gets stabbed. That is the all time sexiest look.) "I never thanked you for that kiss." I leaned in and
gently pressed my lips to his forehead then I let the guards pull me away. Riddick held onto me. Gripping my
hand hard. I looked at him out of sad eyes and smiled.
" I won't let them do this." He said standing and coming towards me. A guard came up behind him and
slammed his stick against the back of Riddicks shoulders. He fell but he swiped the feet of the guard out
from under him with a well placed kick.
"Riddick. No!" I shouted as the guards pulled me from the room. My last sight of Riddick was him being
covered by armed men.
I yanked Mouse up from his seat and held him above the floor a foot.
"Where is she?" I growled. Mouse squirmed a little.
"She is in one of the storage rooms." He squeaked the mouse he was." It's empty. So that they can fill it
later with something." I narrowed my eyes and dropped him.
"Take me there." I said pulling up my goggles. Mouse walked to the door and pushed some buttons on the
panel and the door slid open. He peeked out and then turned to me and nodded. I followed him out the
door.
There was no one around. A tickle of suspicion started at the bottom of my stomach but I ignored it and
continued to follow Mouse down the red lit corridors. He stopped before a big metal door.
"This is it." He said. I pushed him aside and felt up the line of the door. I then turned to the control panel.
I looked it over and touched a few buttons. Nothing.
"Oh." Mouse grunted disgustedly." Move aside." He pushed me away from the door and started to mess
with the panel. "Amateur." He muttered. I smiled amused. I could have killed him for that. Should have.
I watched as he pulled the panel off and felt around inside the wires. Soon he pulled another control panel
off that looked exactly like the one on the front on the door. He hit a few buttons and the door slid open. I
looked at him with confused amazement.
"Hey. You gotta get sent to Slam for something." He said and shrugged. I walked into the dark room and
looked around. I saw that the control panel from the inside of the room had been removed. I shook my
head. I would have to remember that. I looked around the room. Empty. I turned to Mouse. He shrugged. I
looked back into the room. I heard a sniffling sound coming from the back of the room. I moved to the
wall and knelt in front of the bench attached to the wall.
"Noir." I said against the wall. The sniffling continued. I pulled the panel off the side of the wall and
looked into the dark space. Noir was laying scrunched into a fetal position. I reached under and put my
hand on her arm.
"No." She whimpered and slid further under the seat.
"Noir." I said reaching down again. " It's me. Riddick." I reached under and this time she let me grab her
and pull her out. She stayed in the fetal position.
"Noir." I said leaning over her. She pushed my hands away and shuddered. "Come on Noir." I said
pulling her hands away from her face.
"Oh god Noir."I said. She pulled her hands away from me and covered her face again. But I had
already seen it. Her neck was red and blistered from the collar she had on. The burn had moved up her
face and into her hairline. It had to hurt.
"What's wrong with her?" Mouse siad over my shoulder. I swung out my arm and swept him of his feet.
"S#@! Riddick." He yelled. I turned my attention back to Noir and pulled her into my arms.
"It's ok." I whispered against her hair." Your still beautiful." She sobbed.
"Well isn't this the prettiest picture." I growled and turned my head slightly.
"What the hell did you do to her?" I said between clenched teeth. Mcatyhey walked into the room.
"Lights on." The room became bright.
"She was... oh how do you put this... " He began. "A B%$#@."
Noir's POV
I sat there in Riddicks arms and shivered. The pain in my face, neck and chest was excrutiating. But the fear
of Mcatyhey was stronger.
"What the hell did you do to her?" Riddick said. I felt the vibration from his chest go through me.
"Lights on." Mcatyhey said stepping into the room.
"She was ... oh how do you put this." He looked thought full for a moment then he looked directly at
Riddick." A B%$#@.
"Don't listen to him Riddick." I whispered against his chest. He squeezed me harder. I peeked over his
shoulder. Mcatyhey looked at me with disgust.
" Guards." He said. About twelve armed men entered the room." Lock these two away where they won't
cause any damage." A guard grabbed Mouse and pulled him struggling from the room. Mcatyhey turned to
leave but then he turned back and looked at me again.
"And get rid of her." He said then he left the room. Riddick tensed. The guards that were left moved
cautiously towards us. I pulled away from Riddick and looked him in the eye sadly.
"Riddick." I whispered. He looked at me regretfully. (You know the look in the end of the movie when
Carolyn gets stabbed. That is the all time sexiest look.) "I never thanked you for that kiss." I leaned in and
gently pressed my lips to his forehead then I let the guards pull me away. Riddick held onto me. Gripping my
hand hard. I looked at him out of sad eyes and smiled.
" I won't let them do this." He said standing and coming towards me. A guard came up behind him and
slammed his stick against the back of Riddicks shoulders. He fell but he swiped the feet of the guard out
from under him with a well placed kick.
"Riddick. No!" I shouted as the guards pulled me from the room. My last sight of Riddick was him being
covered by armed men.