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DevilishlyDiesel.And of course Candycoatedwaterdrops and Hazelavender. You
guys rock. And seeing as I haven't done a dedication in a while I will do
one now. I dedicate this chapter to... (Drum roll.) ........ Oddinsmeyjar.
I know that I spelt that wrong. Forgive me. Anyway. You all should read
her story. It is the best. It gave me the inspiration for this story. Check
it out.
And I'm sorry for not uploading sooner but I have been oh so busy. And I'm
writing another story. So I have been doing that instead of updating for my
wonderful peoples. Can you ever forgive me?
Noir's POV
"What are you talking about?" I asked. His jaw was so tight mine hurt just looking at it.
"I was being transported from TriFuror to a slam on New mecca. A merc Jonhs had caught me." He
explained. "We crash landed on a planet of endless day. I was given a deal. I would help them I would go
free. Then came the eclipse. And theses things came out of the ground and killed everyone but a few of us.
Me a girl and a Priest. There were eight of us. Three got out." I smiled sadly.
"I'm sorry Riddick."I said placing a hand on his shoulder.
"I watched a woman ripped from my arms and eaten. A woman I cared for." I stared at space out of the
window. "And now they going back to that planet. Those B#$%ards are going back there."
"We can change that" I turned and looked at Mouse.
"If we change the coordinates on the screen it will alert the other passengers." Riddick said turning his head
slightly.
"I know that." Mouse said." But there is a way to get to a different planet without changing anything on the
screen." He said. I looked at him curiously.
"It will alert the crew but we can hide somewhere." He said. I looked at Riddick and for a moment we just
stared at each other for a moment then I turned back to Mouse.
"We're listening." I said. Mouse smiled and I noticed that his two front teeth were missing and the rest were
black. I cringed inwardly.
"Ok that's it." Mouse said popping out of a hole in the side of the wall. Black grease covered his arms and
face. "Now we hide." I lead them to the garbage shoot and opened the door. Riddick and Mouse both
looked at me as if I were crazy.
"What?" I asked defensively." It's either this or a cramped space under some seat."
"I vote cramped seat." Mouse said rasing a hand.
"Me too." Riddick said. I narrowed my eyes at them.
"Fine but don't come running to me when your necks are chinked." I said walking away to the room with the
seats.
Mcatyhey's POV
My double wide cryotube opened with a hiss. I yawned and stepped out.
"What the hell is going on?" I shouted at the men standing around me.
"The ship has a coolant leak." One man said. I turned and stared at him.
"Well?" I shouted. The man cringed.
" We need to stop and get it fixed. We only have a few days. And then the ship will explode." I stared at
him.
"Where's the next planet?" I asked.
"It's NeabraFour. We're sixty hours away from it." I stared at the man with narrowed eyes.
"What about the prisoner?"I asked. The man pulled at his collar.
"They're room is locked and secure. Life signs are normal... "
"Has anyone checked on them?" I yelled. The men shuffled around. I spun around and flung out my arms.
"I am surrounded by imbeciles." I muttered and headed out of the room to the control room.
Noir's POV
I was about to kill Riddick and Mouse for wanting to stay in the seats then in the garbage shoot. My legs
were cramped and my back was killing me. My neck was on fire and my shoulders weren't there anymore.
I didn't know how long we had been in there. I had slept most of the time waking and reciting every song
that I knew in my head. I retold myself all the stories that I knew and every recipe that I could think of
adding ingredients to some and taking away ingredients in others. One time I got out and stretched but that
had been hours before and I was cramped again.
"Riddick."I whispered." I'm going to kill you." But then I thought about how he must feel. He was twice as
big as I was ina tiny space.
"Nevermind." I wiggled and squirmed till I found a new position to lay in that took some of the strain from my
shoulders. I closed my eyes and thought about everything. Where I was. Where I was going. Why I was
where I was. Tears filled my eyes as I thought about the past. Things I didn't want to remember filled my
head. I wiped at my eyes. My face still hurt but the it was just a throbbing hurt now. I couldn't tell if my
face was till ugly and red and blistered. I gently passed a hand over my cheeks. The skin was still slightly
puckered but that was all. My cold hand felt good on my cheek. I dropped my hand and sighed. Boredom
was not my favorite pastime. Suddenly the panel crunched and was pulled away.
"Get out." Riddicks deep voice said. I looked out and saw that red lights were blinking in the dark.
"What's going on?" I asked sliding out.
"We have a problem." He said. I looked apprehensively at the door.
"What is it?" I asked standing and stretching. Mouse jumped out at me. I gasped and held a hand over my
heart.
"You scared the living daylights out of me." I said panting.
"Sorry." He said. "We're on NeabraFour." i looked form him to Riddick.
"So what's the problem?"
"WE have no way of getting off the ship." Mouse said. I raised an eyebrow.
"And why is that?" I asked skeptically.
"They know that we're gone. They have the whole ship in lockdown."Ridick explained. "The hatch door
only opens from the cockpit and that is so heavily guarded that a mouse wouldn't get through." I giggled at
the pun.
"I'm not a mouse, am I." I said and headed out the door.
Riddick's POV
We crouched in the shadows outside the control room and watched armed men run around like F#@$ing
idiots. I would have been amused if I hadn't been trying to hide from them.
"Allright." Noir said next to me." Which panel opens the door?" I looked at her curiously.
"It's green on the third computer above the pilot." I said. " What are you planning to do?" She smiled.
"A girl has to have her little secrets." She said and started to move back.
"Wait." Mouse said." I just thought of something. The front doors will be guarded. W can't leave that
way."
"So what other way is there?" Noir asked.
"The cargo hold doors." I said." But they're controls are in the cockpit too."
"Well then I better get going." She said. I watched her back up a ways to the wall. Then I turned and looked
at Mouse.
"What is wrong with that girl?" i asked. He just smiled and put a finger to his lips and pointed. I narrowed
my eyes at him and then looked at what he was pointing at. My eyes widened.
"You still wonder how she lived so long without a protector?" Mouse whispered. I didn't answer and
instead just watched her crawl on the ceiling to the cockpits door. Yes that's right the ceiling.
"She's a pretty amazing girl." Mouse said. I just nodded.
Noir's Pov
My fingers strained as they held up my body. I slid my left hand over the ceiling and felt for a new groove
to lock my fingers in. I found it and then I slid my right foot up and locked my toes in the groove vacated by
my hand. Slowly I moved forward. At the door I waited for what felt like hours on my poor fingers but soon
running guards came out of the room leaving the door open for a moment. Quickly I launched myself into
the room. I landed on the floor and slid a few feet to the foot of a chair. I stood quickly and looked around
ready to fight if I had to. There was no one. I walked over to the third panel. The green one. And looked it
over. I chewed my lip in concentration.
"Hey what the hell are you doing in here?" I spun and saw a man holding a gun up to me. I smiled innocently.
"I was looking for the bathroom." I said taking a step towards him. The blinking red lights hid my face
enough so that at first he didn't know who I was. I took another step towards him.
"I don't think that you should be here ma'am. How did you get on the ship in the first place?" He asked
lowering his gun slightly. I smiled.
"Well you probably won't believe this but," I said slyly taking another step towards him." I crawled on the
ceiling in here." He laughed nervously and looked away from me for a moment. A moment I had been
waiting for. I lunged at him and shoved him against the door. I placed my thumbs against his throat but
before I could add the pressure he shoved his gun into my ribs. I fell back gasping. He held the gun to my
head.
"I have orders to shoot anyone I see tampering with the computer." He said and tightened on the trigger. I
squeezed my eyes shut. But the shot never came. Instead a loud thud sounded and a thump." I opened my
eyes and was looking up at a hand.
"We need to get moving." Riddick said. I reached up and took his hand. He lifted me up and looked at me
curiously.
"What the hell are you?" He asked. I blushed and looked away. Mouse was hitting buttons on the green
screen.
"Ok let's go." he said turning around. We ran from the room.
A siren went off.
"S#!@." Riddick muttered." They know we're here." He shouted over the blaring scream.
"Hey guys wait. I think I can shut it off." Mouse yelled behind us. I stopped and turned to him.
"Do it quick." I yelled. Mouse nodded and turned to a panel on the wall. He searched it over for a few
minutes and he walked back through the hall a few feet.
"I found it." He shouted and started to pulled the panels away from the wall. "There's a main line that
controls all the power in the ship. It runs through the main hall all the way to the cockpit." He pulled a long
wire out of the wall and started to strip it.
Noir's POV
"What are you talking about?" I asked. His jaw was so tight mine hurt just looking at it.
"I was being transported from TriFuror to a slam on New mecca. A merc Jonhs had caught me." He
explained. "We crash landed on a planet of endless day. I was given a deal. I would help them I would go
free. Then came the eclipse. And theses things came out of the ground and killed everyone but a few of us.
Me a girl and a Priest. There were eight of us. Three got out." I smiled sadly.
"I'm sorry Riddick."I said placing a hand on his shoulder.
"I watched a woman ripped from my arms and eaten. A woman I cared for." I stared at space out of the
window. "And now they going back to that planet. Those B#$%ards are going back there."
"We can change that" I turned and looked at Mouse.
"If we change the coordinates on the screen it will alert the other passengers." Riddick said turning his head
slightly.
"I know that." Mouse said." But there is a way to get to a different planet without changing anything on the
screen." He said. I looked at him curiously.
"It will alert the crew but we can hide somewhere." He said. I looked at Riddick and for a moment we just
stared at each other for a moment then I turned back to Mouse.
"We're listening." I said. Mouse smiled and I noticed that his two front teeth were missing and the rest were
black. I cringed inwardly.
"Ok that's it." Mouse said popping out of a hole in the side of the wall. Black grease covered his arms and
face. "Now we hide." I lead them to the garbage shoot and opened the door. Riddick and Mouse both
looked at me as if I were crazy.
"What?" I asked defensively." It's either this or a cramped space under some seat."
"I vote cramped seat." Mouse said rasing a hand.
"Me too." Riddick said. I narrowed my eyes at them.
"Fine but don't come running to me when your necks are chinked." I said walking away to the room with the
seats.
Mcatyhey's POV
My double wide cryotube opened with a hiss. I yawned and stepped out.
"What the hell is going on?" I shouted at the men standing around me.
"The ship has a coolant leak." One man said. I turned and stared at him.
"Well?" I shouted. The man cringed.
" We need to stop and get it fixed. We only have a few days. And then the ship will explode." I stared at
him.
"Where's the next planet?" I asked.
"It's NeabraFour. We're sixty hours away from it." I stared at the man with narrowed eyes.
"What about the prisoner?"I asked. The man pulled at his collar.
"They're room is locked and secure. Life signs are normal... "
"Has anyone checked on them?" I yelled. The men shuffled around. I spun around and flung out my arms.
"I am surrounded by imbeciles." I muttered and headed out of the room to the control room.
Noir's POV
I was about to kill Riddick and Mouse for wanting to stay in the seats then in the garbage shoot. My legs
were cramped and my back was killing me. My neck was on fire and my shoulders weren't there anymore.
I didn't know how long we had been in there. I had slept most of the time waking and reciting every song
that I knew in my head. I retold myself all the stories that I knew and every recipe that I could think of
adding ingredients to some and taking away ingredients in others. One time I got out and stretched but that
had been hours before and I was cramped again.
"Riddick."I whispered." I'm going to kill you." But then I thought about how he must feel. He was twice as
big as I was ina tiny space.
"Nevermind." I wiggled and squirmed till I found a new position to lay in that took some of the strain from my
shoulders. I closed my eyes and thought about everything. Where I was. Where I was going. Why I was
where I was. Tears filled my eyes as I thought about the past. Things I didn't want to remember filled my
head. I wiped at my eyes. My face still hurt but the it was just a throbbing hurt now. I couldn't tell if my
face was till ugly and red and blistered. I gently passed a hand over my cheeks. The skin was still slightly
puckered but that was all. My cold hand felt good on my cheek. I dropped my hand and sighed. Boredom
was not my favorite pastime. Suddenly the panel crunched and was pulled away.
"Get out." Riddicks deep voice said. I looked out and saw that red lights were blinking in the dark.
"What's going on?" I asked sliding out.
"We have a problem." He said. I looked apprehensively at the door.
"What is it?" I asked standing and stretching. Mouse jumped out at me. I gasped and held a hand over my
heart.
"You scared the living daylights out of me." I said panting.
"Sorry." He said. "We're on NeabraFour." i looked form him to Riddick.
"So what's the problem?"
"WE have no way of getting off the ship." Mouse said. I raised an eyebrow.
"And why is that?" I asked skeptically.
"They know that we're gone. They have the whole ship in lockdown."Ridick explained. "The hatch door
only opens from the cockpit and that is so heavily guarded that a mouse wouldn't get through." I giggled at
the pun.
"I'm not a mouse, am I." I said and headed out the door.
Riddick's POV
We crouched in the shadows outside the control room and watched armed men run around like F#@$ing
idiots. I would have been amused if I hadn't been trying to hide from them.
"Allright." Noir said next to me." Which panel opens the door?" I looked at her curiously.
"It's green on the third computer above the pilot." I said. " What are you planning to do?" She smiled.
"A girl has to have her little secrets." She said and started to move back.
"Wait." Mouse said." I just thought of something. The front doors will be guarded. W can't leave that
way."
"So what other way is there?" Noir asked.
"The cargo hold doors." I said." But they're controls are in the cockpit too."
"Well then I better get going." She said. I watched her back up a ways to the wall. Then I turned and looked
at Mouse.
"What is wrong with that girl?" i asked. He just smiled and put a finger to his lips and pointed. I narrowed
my eyes at him and then looked at what he was pointing at. My eyes widened.
"You still wonder how she lived so long without a protector?" Mouse whispered. I didn't answer and
instead just watched her crawl on the ceiling to the cockpits door. Yes that's right the ceiling.
"She's a pretty amazing girl." Mouse said. I just nodded.
Noir's Pov
My fingers strained as they held up my body. I slid my left hand over the ceiling and felt for a new groove
to lock my fingers in. I found it and then I slid my right foot up and locked my toes in the groove vacated by
my hand. Slowly I moved forward. At the door I waited for what felt like hours on my poor fingers but soon
running guards came out of the room leaving the door open for a moment. Quickly I launched myself into
the room. I landed on the floor and slid a few feet to the foot of a chair. I stood quickly and looked around
ready to fight if I had to. There was no one. I walked over to the third panel. The green one. And looked it
over. I chewed my lip in concentration.
"Hey what the hell are you doing in here?" I spun and saw a man holding a gun up to me. I smiled innocently.
"I was looking for the bathroom." I said taking a step towards him. The blinking red lights hid my face
enough so that at first he didn't know who I was. I took another step towards him.
"I don't think that you should be here ma'am. How did you get on the ship in the first place?" He asked
lowering his gun slightly. I smiled.
"Well you probably won't believe this but," I said slyly taking another step towards him." I crawled on the
ceiling in here." He laughed nervously and looked away from me for a moment. A moment I had been
waiting for. I lunged at him and shoved him against the door. I placed my thumbs against his throat but
before I could add the pressure he shoved his gun into my ribs. I fell back gasping. He held the gun to my
head.
"I have orders to shoot anyone I see tampering with the computer." He said and tightened on the trigger. I
squeezed my eyes shut. But the shot never came. Instead a loud thud sounded and a thump." I opened my
eyes and was looking up at a hand.
"We need to get moving." Riddick said. I reached up and took his hand. He lifted me up and looked at me
curiously.
"What the hell are you?" He asked. I blushed and looked away. Mouse was hitting buttons on the green
screen.
"Ok let's go." he said turning around. We ran from the room.
A siren went off.
"S#!@." Riddick muttered." They know we're here." He shouted over the blaring scream.
"Hey guys wait. I think I can shut it off." Mouse yelled behind us. I stopped and turned to him.
"Do it quick." I yelled. Mouse nodded and turned to a panel on the wall. He searched it over for a few
minutes and he walked back through the hall a few feet.
"I found it." He shouted and started to pulled the panels away from the wall. "There's a main line that
controls all the power in the ship. It runs through the main hall all the way to the cockpit." He pulled a long
wire out of the wall and started to strip it.