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Mcatyhey's POV
I sat in the cockpit waiting for some to tell me that they had been caught. The alarm sounding was getting
on my nerves. Booted feet ran into the cockpit. I looked up at the men.
"Well." I said.. They shuffled nervously. I groaned and turned.
"Imbecils." i muttered. Suddnely a red light blinked on on the main control panel.
"What does that mean?" I asked pointing. The pilot stepped forward and looked at the light.
"They're in the main corridor heading toward the cargo bay." He said turning quickly. The guards ran out of
the room towards the cargo bay. I jumped up and followed. Turning at the door.
"Get this ship off the ground and into space." I yelled then I turned and headed out of the room.
Noir's POV
"Mouse hurry up." I shouted at him looking nervously down the halls.
"Give me a minute." He said bitting his lip. I heard botted feet running towards us.
"Hurry Mouse." I felt the rumble of the engines go through the floor.
"F$#@" Riddick said and grabbed my hand. "Come on mouse we need to go now." He said trying to pull
Mouse away from the wires.
"I'm not done yet."He said pulling his arm away. "You guys go I'll catch up." Riddick looked ready to do
what he said but then he stiffened and stayed.
"Hurry up." He growled.
"There they are!" I turned and saw that guards had found us. they rqaised they're guns and started to fire at
us.
"Run." I shouted and took off down the hall. I turned and saw that Mouse was still working on the wires.
"Mouse. Run." I shouted. He yelled an expletive and dropped the wires and turned and ran. It seemed to go
in slow motion. The guard raisning his gun. Mouse running as hard as he could toward us. The gun firing.
Mouse lunging forward with the force of the hit. I stopped ang caught him. We fell to the ground.
"Mouse." I whimpered tears coming to my eyes. He looked up at me through glazed eyes.
"Hey I'm glad you'll get away." HE whispered putting a finger on my cheek. A few tears fell and landed on
his face.
"I really liked you alot." He whispered. I laughed once it turning into a sob half way through.
"I like you to MOuse." I said. I leaned over and gave him a kiss. I felt him smile under my lips and then he
gave a sigh and that was his last breath. I looked up at the guards who sat there staring at me as if they
didn't know what to do with me.
"Are you happy now." I yelled. " You killed him, you B#@$ards." Riddick pulled me up and out of the hall
way. Behind us the guards started to fire again. I quickly blinked the tears away anbd followed Riddick.
"In here." He said opening a door. I felt a wave of cold air wash over me. The cargo doors were open and I
saw that it was raining outside. I walked over to them and saw that we were above the buildings. I turned
back to Riddick. He was blocking the doors.
"Riddick." I said.
"What?" He yelled not turning to me.
"Riddick." I shouted. He turned and looked at me sharply.
"What?" He yelled.
"I can't do it." I said quietly. Riddick walked over to the doors and looked out.
"Why not?" He asked. "We wait till they pass a building and then we jump." I looked out the door again
and nodded.
"Allright. I can do that." Suddenly a hissing crackling noise was heard. We both turned simultaniously and
saw that they had a blow torch. Riddick turned back to me.
"We've got to go now." He shouted. I nodded. He watched outsied the door for passing buildings. I stared
at him.
"Riddick." I said. He looked at me. "I love you." He smiled and then he kissed me hard. I wound my arms up
around his neck and pulled him closer. He pulled away first.
"Let's go." He said. I nodded and grabbed his hand. A loud clashing noise drew our attention. They had
broken through. A man cralwed thorugh the hole and saw us. He spoke into his collar.
"They're going to jump close the cargo door." He said. A response followed and soon the gears began to
turn on the door and it slowly began to close. The men all had they're guns pointed at us.
"No funny buissness now." The first man said. Riddick squeezed my hand. I looked at him. He winked at me.
I nodded.
"What are you two doing?" The man asked. We didn't answer. We just stared at eahc other. "What the hell
is going on?" Suddenly RIddick took a step towards the guards. One young man fired. I screamed and
covered my eyes. But i didn't hear the bullet hit flesh. I heard a metal ping instead. I opened my eyes and
saw that the guard had missfiored and hit the floor. The bullet was now flying around the room. I crouched
down trying to avoid being hit. It hit instead of a body an air tank. The cap flew off and it flew towards us.
I moved out of the way just in time but it hit Riddick full on the stomach. Both Riddick and the airtank flew
off the ship.
Mcatyhey's POV
I sat in the cockpit waiting for some to tell me that they had been caught. The alarm sounding was getting
on my nerves. Booted feet ran into the cockpit. I looked up at the men.
"Well." I said.. They shuffled nervously. I groaned and turned.
"Imbecils." i muttered. Suddnely a red light blinked on on the main control panel.
"What does that mean?" I asked pointing. The pilot stepped forward and looked at the light.
"They're in the main corridor heading toward the cargo bay." He said turning quickly. The guards ran out of
the room towards the cargo bay. I jumped up and followed. Turning at the door.
"Get this ship off the ground and into space." I yelled then I turned and headed out of the room.
Noir's POV
"Mouse hurry up." I shouted at him looking nervously down the halls.
"Give me a minute." He said bitting his lip. I heard botted feet running towards us.
"Hurry Mouse." I felt the rumble of the engines go through the floor.
"F$#@" Riddick said and grabbed my hand. "Come on mouse we need to go now." He said trying to pull
Mouse away from the wires.
"I'm not done yet."He said pulling his arm away. "You guys go I'll catch up." Riddick looked ready to do
what he said but then he stiffened and stayed.
"Hurry up." He growled.
"There they are!" I turned and saw that guards had found us. they rqaised they're guns and started to fire at
us.
"Run." I shouted and took off down the hall. I turned and saw that Mouse was still working on the wires.
"Mouse. Run." I shouted. He yelled an expletive and dropped the wires and turned and ran. It seemed to go
in slow motion. The guard raisning his gun. Mouse running as hard as he could toward us. The gun firing.
Mouse lunging forward with the force of the hit. I stopped ang caught him. We fell to the ground.
"Mouse." I whimpered tears coming to my eyes. He looked up at me through glazed eyes.
"Hey I'm glad you'll get away." HE whispered putting a finger on my cheek. A few tears fell and landed on
his face.
"I really liked you alot." He whispered. I laughed once it turning into a sob half way through.
"I like you to MOuse." I said. I leaned over and gave him a kiss. I felt him smile under my lips and then he
gave a sigh and that was his last breath. I looked up at the guards who sat there staring at me as if they
didn't know what to do with me.
"Are you happy now." I yelled. " You killed him, you B#@$ards." Riddick pulled me up and out of the hall
way. Behind us the guards started to fire again. I quickly blinked the tears away anbd followed Riddick.
"In here." He said opening a door. I felt a wave of cold air wash over me. The cargo doors were open and I
saw that it was raining outside. I walked over to them and saw that we were above the buildings. I turned
back to Riddick. He was blocking the doors.
"Riddick." I said.
"What?" He yelled not turning to me.
"Riddick." I shouted. He turned and looked at me sharply.
"What?" He yelled.
"I can't do it." I said quietly. Riddick walked over to the doors and looked out.
"Why not?" He asked. "We wait till they pass a building and then we jump." I looked out the door again
and nodded.
"Allright. I can do that." Suddenly a hissing crackling noise was heard. We both turned simultaniously and
saw that they had a blow torch. Riddick turned back to me.
"We've got to go now." He shouted. I nodded. He watched outsied the door for passing buildings. I stared
at him.
"Riddick." I said. He looked at me. "I love you." He smiled and then he kissed me hard. I wound my arms up
around his neck and pulled him closer. He pulled away first.
"Let's go." He said. I nodded and grabbed his hand. A loud clashing noise drew our attention. They had
broken through. A man cralwed thorugh the hole and saw us. He spoke into his collar.
"They're going to jump close the cargo door." He said. A response followed and soon the gears began to
turn on the door and it slowly began to close. The men all had they're guns pointed at us.
"No funny buissness now." The first man said. Riddick squeezed my hand. I looked at him. He winked at me.
I nodded.
"What are you two doing?" The man asked. We didn't answer. We just stared at eahc other. "What the hell
is going on?" Suddenly RIddick took a step towards the guards. One young man fired. I screamed and
covered my eyes. But i didn't hear the bullet hit flesh. I heard a metal ping instead. I opened my eyes and
saw that the guard had missfiored and hit the floor. The bullet was now flying around the room. I crouched
down trying to avoid being hit. It hit instead of a body an air tank. The cap flew off and it flew towards us.
I moved out of the way just in time but it hit Riddick full on the stomach. Both Riddick and the airtank flew
off the ship.