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Mwahahahaha. I got you all. Didn't expect that in the last chapter did
you. Hah. Ok it explains what she is in later chapters. Thank you for your
Reviews Candycoatedwaterdrops and Kei-chan. Welcome to Angel Feathers. Keep
up the good reviews. I will update again soon. And Xandra. What was the
last chapter I e-mailed you. I am a dip and have forgatten.
Noir's POV
There was no way I was going to let the man I loved die. I dove and clutched my arms to my sides. Like
skydivers do to gain speed and soon I was right in front of Riddick . I let my wings pop wrapping my arms
under his before the air lift filled my wings and pulled me back. I felt the jerk of the air filling my wings. But
Riddicks weight still dragged me down a little. I stared ahead to make sure we didn't hit anything and
strained my arms to hold him. I pumped my wings and we gained a little altitude.
"Noir look out." Riddick yelled under me. I turned my head slightly and saw the speeder coming towards us.
It blared it horn and veered to the right. I veered to the left. I felt my wings turning trying to regain they're
strength and surety. I watched my wings for a moment and then looked ahead.
"S$#@." I yelled. A building in front of me made me turn sharp again. I swerved away from the building and
nearly overturned myself in the air. One arm slipped from Riddick.
"No." I screamed. I knew that I couldn't hold him up with just one hand. And swerving so much had taken
me higher up. I dropped him flew a couple feet on unsteady wings and then fell myself.
Riddick's POV
I saw the lights coming at us yelled at Noir to watch out. She veered right and I felt her shaking a little. I
looked up and saw that her wings were turning in what I knew to be a bad way.
"S$#@." I heard her yell and then she veered away from something else. I felt her arm slipping from under
mine. And then it wasn't there any more. I knew Noir couldn't hold me with one arm. I looked down. It looked
like a construction site or something. I closed my eyes and said a quick prayer that I wouldn't land on
anything sharp and then I dropped. We had only been twenty feet up. Not a far drop. But it still felt like I
had been dropped off a hundred foot building. My legs took the impact. I dislocated one knee and knocked
my head hard on a box. I lay there dazed for a moment then I sat up and looked at my leg. My lower leg was
twisted in a strange direction. I reached down and relocated it myself. Grunting with the pain. I stood and
limped a feet away from where I had been. I looked up at the sky.
"Noir?" I shouted. I listened for the sound of beating wings. Instead looked towards the sound and saw a
large white pyramid poking out from behind a huge crate.
"Noir." I shouted and ran. I jumped a crate laying next to the one that had the wing tip and saw Noir laying
there staring up at the sky. Rain drops fell on her upturned face.
"Noir." I said concerned. She didn't look at me. She just kept staring. I looked her over. Her left wing was a
crooked angle. She had a bunch of cuts and bruises but I didn't think that anything was too serious. I
leaned over her.
"Noir." I said reaching a hand around behind her. "Come on sweetie. We need to get you out of the rain." I
pulled her up. She was limp. When I lifted her she moaned.
"No."
"No what?" I asked concerned that she was hurting inside somewhere.
"No." She moaned again. I lifted her up and tried to carry her princess style but her wings got in the way. I
looked around.
"Noir." I said setting her down. "I'm going to go find a place for us to get out of the rain." I rubbed her hair
for a minute then I turned and walked to wards the lights of the street. I looked up and down the street and
saw a ratty hotel. The light blinked vacancy. I ran over to it and burst through the door. The attendant was
on one of the waiting chairs making out with his girlfriend. I raised a corner of my lip in disgust.
"I need a room." I yelled. The man jumped startled that he had been caught doing something on the chairs
of the lobby. The girl squealed and pulled her dress down.
"I need a room."I said again. The man sneered at me and walked behind the desk.
"Allright." He said tapping on an old style computer.' For how long?"
"I don't know." I said. The man typed something.
"Allright. That will be two hundred credits." He said.
"I can't pay tonight. My ATM is out of order." I lied. The man smirked.
"Well then I'm afraid you will have to find another hotel." He said haughtily. I reached over the counter and
grabbed him and pulled him over the counter. The girl screamed.
"Listen. I need a room to night. I will not go and find another hotel because I need a room now." I yelled.
The man cowered below me. " I will pay you tomorrow." The man nodded. I dropped him.
"Give me the key." I said reaching out my hand. He handed me the key. I headed out the door.
"And don't call the cops. Or I'll have to tell your manager about your little in chair exam." The girl gasped.
"Bob. You can't let him tell. I'll lose my job." She said. The man nodded.
"We won't call the cops."He said. I nodded and left.
I leaned over Noir and saw that her eyes were closed. Her chest was rising and falling in rhythmic
breathing. I didn't know if she was unconscious or not. I gripped her under her arms and pulled her to the
oom and opened the door. I dragged her inside, her wings momentarily getting stuck in the door, and laid her on the bed and
then I turned and closed and locked the door behind me. The room was dingy and dirty. I turned to Noir
and tried to figure out what to do with her wings. I walked around to the side of the bed facing the wall and
pulled her wing straight. It draped over the bed and leaned against the wall. I walked around o the other side
and pulled her other wing out. It draped over the bed and onto the small table that was against the window.
I looked over her crooked wing. Broken. I saw the bone. It hadn't broken the skin but I saw the bone poking
out. I reached for it and held it in my hands. I sighed and then snapped the bone back into place. I heard her
groan in pain. I looked at her and saw that she had her eyes open and she was clenching her jaw. She was
holding her right arm and biting
her lip. Tears streamed from her eyes. I sat on the bed next to her and stroked her
leg. She relaxed and sat there panting for a moment.
"Noir." I said quietly. She looked at me." What are you?" She just stared at me. I sighed and rubbed my
head. A stirring in the bed made me turn and look. Noir sat up slowly. I watched in amazement as her wings
slowly slid back into her back. When there was nothing left but a few feathers. Angel feathers. She fell back onto the bed
and turned onto her side. I sighed and laid down next to her. Before I knew it I was asleep.
Noir's POV
I woke up to a dull throbbing in my back. I groaned and rolled over right into Riddick. I gasped and sat up
quickly away from him. I breathed a sigh of relief when he didn't wake up. I stood and stretched my arms
behind my back. I rolled my neck and it popped. I headed to the bathroom of the hotel room and looked
through the little medicine cabinet and found shampoo and conditioner. I grabbed the towel off the top of
the toilet and dropped it on the floor out side the bathtub. I stripped my clothing and stepped into the tub
and turned the water on light. I groaned in pleasure as the hot water rushed over my body. I hadn't had hot
water for two years. It felt wonderfull. I also hadn't showered naked for two years. TO me that shower was
the greatest luxury. I reached outside and grabbed the shampoo. I squeezed it generously
onto my hand and then i massaged it into my hair. It wasn't exactly herbal essence but it was nice. I let t the
lather run down my body. Enjoying the tickle of it. I used the conditioner and then I got out of the tub and
searched for a razor among the soaps and hand towels. I nearly shouted in triumph when I found one. I got
back into the shower and slowly slid the razor over my legs. When I had finished I just let the water run
over me.
Riddick's POV
I woke up and sat up quickly expecting someone to be there to take us back to Slam. I relaxed when I saw
that I was alone. I heard the shower in the bathroom going. I grinned and stood and headed for the
bathroom. I quietly opened the door and walked into the steamy room and leaned against the wall. Soon the
water was shut off and the shower curtain shoved back.
"Damn."I said. She looked up and gasped and spun and shoved herself against the wall in the tub. I saw a
large bump on her back where her broken wing had gone back in ."I was
hoping to join you." She turned her head and looked at me out of the corner of her eye.
"What are you doing inhere?" She asked.
"Looking at a beautiful woman's rear end." I said. She grinned and turned her head and looked at me.
"I guess its only fair." She said." I did see your butt. Only I didn't drop the soap. And in this case I think
that would prove fatal to my virginity's health." My eyes widened.
"Virginity huh," I said. "Oh."
"Yes Riddick." She said exasperated. "Virginity. You know the meaning of the word right?" I nodded. She
smiled and turned and stepped out of the tub. I looked away from her goddess like body.
"Riddick." She said quietly. I looked her in the eye. "Am I really beautiful?" I looked her up and down.
When my eyes connected with her face she was blushing. A maroon color in my vision. Yet I could tell it
was a pretty pink. I reached out a hand a cupped her cheek with my hand.
"Your the most beautiful woman I have ever seen." I said. She smiled and turned her head into my hand. I
took a step towards her. She took a step towards me. I kissed her deeply savoring her taste. She slid her arms
up over my shoulders. I wrapped my arms around her bare waist and deepened the kiss.
Noir's POV
There was no way I was going to let the man I loved die. I dove and clutched my arms to my sides. Like
skydivers do to gain speed and soon I was right in front of Riddick . I let my wings pop wrapping my arms
under his before the air lift filled my wings and pulled me back. I felt the jerk of the air filling my wings. But
Riddicks weight still dragged me down a little. I stared ahead to make sure we didn't hit anything and
strained my arms to hold him. I pumped my wings and we gained a little altitude.
"Noir look out." Riddick yelled under me. I turned my head slightly and saw the speeder coming towards us.
It blared it horn and veered to the right. I veered to the left. I felt my wings turning trying to regain they're
strength and surety. I watched my wings for a moment and then looked ahead.
"S$#@." I yelled. A building in front of me made me turn sharp again. I swerved away from the building and
nearly overturned myself in the air. One arm slipped from Riddick.
"No." I screamed. I knew that I couldn't hold him up with just one hand. And swerving so much had taken
me higher up. I dropped him flew a couple feet on unsteady wings and then fell myself.
Riddick's POV
I saw the lights coming at us yelled at Noir to watch out. She veered right and I felt her shaking a little. I
looked up and saw that her wings were turning in what I knew to be a bad way.
"S$#@." I heard her yell and then she veered away from something else. I felt her arm slipping from under
mine. And then it wasn't there any more. I knew Noir couldn't hold me with one arm. I looked down. It looked
like a construction site or something. I closed my eyes and said a quick prayer that I wouldn't land on
anything sharp and then I dropped. We had only been twenty feet up. Not a far drop. But it still felt like I
had been dropped off a hundred foot building. My legs took the impact. I dislocated one knee and knocked
my head hard on a box. I lay there dazed for a moment then I sat up and looked at my leg. My lower leg was
twisted in a strange direction. I reached down and relocated it myself. Grunting with the pain. I stood and
limped a feet away from where I had been. I looked up at the sky.
"Noir?" I shouted. I listened for the sound of beating wings. Instead looked towards the sound and saw a
large white pyramid poking out from behind a huge crate.
"Noir." I shouted and ran. I jumped a crate laying next to the one that had the wing tip and saw Noir laying
there staring up at the sky. Rain drops fell on her upturned face.
"Noir." I said concerned. She didn't look at me. She just kept staring. I looked her over. Her left wing was a
crooked angle. She had a bunch of cuts and bruises but I didn't think that anything was too serious. I
leaned over her.
"Noir." I said reaching a hand around behind her. "Come on sweetie. We need to get you out of the rain." I
pulled her up. She was limp. When I lifted her she moaned.
"No."
"No what?" I asked concerned that she was hurting inside somewhere.
"No." She moaned again. I lifted her up and tried to carry her princess style but her wings got in the way. I
looked around.
"Noir." I said setting her down. "I'm going to go find a place for us to get out of the rain." I rubbed her hair
for a minute then I turned and walked to wards the lights of the street. I looked up and down the street and
saw a ratty hotel. The light blinked vacancy. I ran over to it and burst through the door. The attendant was
on one of the waiting chairs making out with his girlfriend. I raised a corner of my lip in disgust.
"I need a room." I yelled. The man jumped startled that he had been caught doing something on the chairs
of the lobby. The girl squealed and pulled her dress down.
"I need a room."I said again. The man sneered at me and walked behind the desk.
"Allright." He said tapping on an old style computer.' For how long?"
"I don't know." I said. The man typed something.
"Allright. That will be two hundred credits." He said.
"I can't pay tonight. My ATM is out of order." I lied. The man smirked.
"Well then I'm afraid you will have to find another hotel." He said haughtily. I reached over the counter and
grabbed him and pulled him over the counter. The girl screamed.
"Listen. I need a room to night. I will not go and find another hotel because I need a room now." I yelled.
The man cowered below me. " I will pay you tomorrow." The man nodded. I dropped him.
"Give me the key." I said reaching out my hand. He handed me the key. I headed out the door.
"And don't call the cops. Or I'll have to tell your manager about your little in chair exam." The girl gasped.
"Bob. You can't let him tell. I'll lose my job." She said. The man nodded.
"We won't call the cops."He said. I nodded and left.
I leaned over Noir and saw that her eyes were closed. Her chest was rising and falling in rhythmic
breathing. I didn't know if she was unconscious or not. I gripped her under her arms and pulled her to the
oom and opened the door. I dragged her inside, her wings momentarily getting stuck in the door, and laid her on the bed and
then I turned and closed and locked the door behind me. The room was dingy and dirty. I turned to Noir
and tried to figure out what to do with her wings. I walked around to the side of the bed facing the wall and
pulled her wing straight. It draped over the bed and leaned against the wall. I walked around o the other side
and pulled her other wing out. It draped over the bed and onto the small table that was against the window.
I looked over her crooked wing. Broken. I saw the bone. It hadn't broken the skin but I saw the bone poking
out. I reached for it and held it in my hands. I sighed and then snapped the bone back into place. I heard her
groan in pain. I looked at her and saw that she had her eyes open and she was clenching her jaw. She was
holding her right arm and biting
her lip. Tears streamed from her eyes. I sat on the bed next to her and stroked her
leg. She relaxed and sat there panting for a moment.
"Noir." I said quietly. She looked at me." What are you?" She just stared at me. I sighed and rubbed my
head. A stirring in the bed made me turn and look. Noir sat up slowly. I watched in amazement as her wings
slowly slid back into her back. When there was nothing left but a few feathers. Angel feathers. She fell back onto the bed
and turned onto her side. I sighed and laid down next to her. Before I knew it I was asleep.
Noir's POV
I woke up to a dull throbbing in my back. I groaned and rolled over right into Riddick. I gasped and sat up
quickly away from him. I breathed a sigh of relief when he didn't wake up. I stood and stretched my arms
behind my back. I rolled my neck and it popped. I headed to the bathroom of the hotel room and looked
through the little medicine cabinet and found shampoo and conditioner. I grabbed the towel off the top of
the toilet and dropped it on the floor out side the bathtub. I stripped my clothing and stepped into the tub
and turned the water on light. I groaned in pleasure as the hot water rushed over my body. I hadn't had hot
water for two years. It felt wonderfull. I also hadn't showered naked for two years. TO me that shower was
the greatest luxury. I reached outside and grabbed the shampoo. I squeezed it generously
onto my hand and then i massaged it into my hair. It wasn't exactly herbal essence but it was nice. I let t the
lather run down my body. Enjoying the tickle of it. I used the conditioner and then I got out of the tub and
searched for a razor among the soaps and hand towels. I nearly shouted in triumph when I found one. I got
back into the shower and slowly slid the razor over my legs. When I had finished I just let the water run
over me.
Riddick's POV
I woke up and sat up quickly expecting someone to be there to take us back to Slam. I relaxed when I saw
that I was alone. I heard the shower in the bathroom going. I grinned and stood and headed for the
bathroom. I quietly opened the door and walked into the steamy room and leaned against the wall. Soon the
water was shut off and the shower curtain shoved back.
"Damn."I said. She looked up and gasped and spun and shoved herself against the wall in the tub. I saw a
large bump on her back where her broken wing had gone back in ."I was
hoping to join you." She turned her head and looked at me out of the corner of her eye.
"What are you doing inhere?" She asked.
"Looking at a beautiful woman's rear end." I said. She grinned and turned her head and looked at me.
"I guess its only fair." She said." I did see your butt. Only I didn't drop the soap. And in this case I think
that would prove fatal to my virginity's health." My eyes widened.
"Virginity huh," I said. "Oh."
"Yes Riddick." She said exasperated. "Virginity. You know the meaning of the word right?" I nodded. She
smiled and turned and stepped out of the tub. I looked away from her goddess like body.
"Riddick." She said quietly. I looked her in the eye. "Am I really beautiful?" I looked her up and down.
When my eyes connected with her face she was blushing. A maroon color in my vision. Yet I could tell it
was a pretty pink. I reached out a hand a cupped her cheek with my hand.
"Your the most beautiful woman I have ever seen." I said. She smiled and turned her head into my hand. I
took a step towards her. She took a step towards me. I kissed her deeply savoring her taste. She slid her arms
up over my shoulders. I wrapped my arms around her bare waist and deepened the kiss.