An Empty Shell

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seashell: aww… poor girl. It's all right. My brain hurts and I'm confused and I'M the one who wrote it! Actually, since I was in French Immersion since kindergarten (so my whole school life), it doesn't seem that hard to me. The only bad thing is that my parents don't speak very good French, so I have to translate if I need help with homework.

Trunks' Saiyajin Princess: thanx for the info. Now for any new YGO stories I write, I know the name. And I WILL write the hikari as Ryou this time around. I dunno, nobody seems to know much about Shadi. I was running around the Internet looking for information on Malik and nary a speck of info did I see on Shadi and some vague confusing info for Malik _. But now I have a cheat sheet for the Millennium Items, and thanx again for Malik and Isis' info.

A/N: I must get some sort of protection against writer's block… anybody got any good ideas? Since nobody seems to know ANYTHING about Shadi other than he possesses the Ankh and Scale, I get to go nuts! Whoo-hoo! The one bad thing about my cheat sheet is they put Pegasus' full name as Pegasus J. Crawford and THAT IS WRONG! It's Maximillion Pegasus. Hmph. My cheat sheet tells me the owner, the abilities, the spirit (if it has one), and a brief summary of the ability and how it wound up with the owner. Whee! Whoa, hold on! The ability for the Millennium Tauk is "can show the near future, although a wielder of another Millennium Item may alter that future" but the summary says that KAIBA altered the future. Kaiba doesn't have a Millennium Item! What's going on here? *wanders off in confusion* And I have now changed Bakura and Ryou around. The hikari is now Ryou and the yami is now Bakura, although the last name is still Hino, because Bakura Bakura just sounds weird. Thanx be to EVERYBODY for pointing that out. Sorry about the semi-flame, Crystal Rain.

DISCLAIMER: I own nobody but those mentioned in the disclaimer for Ch. 2!

CHAPTER 3:: Reva Confronts Bakura And Hence Thickens The Plot

                The next day, Domino High got a cultural shock as eight visitors showed up for classes. Some people were just suspicious because they came for the last day of classes, others were more suspicious because they all had different family names, but looked like another one.

                At lunch later that day, Kali was in a pretty good mood. Her negative energy had lapsed for once, so she could spend time with her fellow Silver spirits without causing them harm. She had passed her Geo quiz even though she didn't study, and she had Jazz Band after school. Life was good.

                For today, at least.

                "Somebody's happy," Son teased as the two friends grabbed a table. Awan was still waiting in line, and Kali could see Son trying hard not to keep looking over his shoulder at his hikari.

                "What's not to be happy about today?" Kali sighed. "The sun is shining, it's not 40 below, I have Jazz after school and my negative energy is gone for today. Why shouldn't I be happy?"

                "Because here comes Reva," Blake offered, joining them. "Looking awfully mad, might I add."

                "This is all your fault," Reva hissed at Kali as she threw herself down in a chair.

                "What happened?" Kali asked sweetly.

                "PE. Second block. White-haired kid. Two of them." Reva groused as she poked her dinner with a fork.

                "Oh, so you spotted Ryou and Bakura." Kali said nonchalantly. "Don't tell me Bakura tried to go beat up the gym teacher or something again."

                "No, he tried to kill ME!" Reva growled. "Meeeeeeeee!"

                "And?" Kali prompted.

                "Thankfully, Caryn had enough sense to transport us to before class started and I threatened to put his hikari in the electric chair and then decapitate the hikari if he tried any funny stuff."

                "Oh, you're in for it." Kali groaned. She shivered. "Bakura's got a horrible temper. He was a tomb-raider in the Ancient. Trust me on this one, don't make him mad."

                As fast as it takes for a fly to beat its wings, Kali received a vision from the Glass. (A/N: aw man! Now the Glass is pretty much the Eye and the Tauk put together! This is what I get for creating new items without knowing what the others were or what they did!)

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A/N: keep reviewing, my favourite readers! Thanx to the following people who have reviewed:

*seashell

*Trunks' Saiyajin Princess

*KaTyA

*JR

*Keiko

*Crystal Rain

*jenruki-gal4ever

You guys keep this story up! Keep it up, most beloved reader-peeps!