A/N: ok here it is what you've all been waiting for!!....................................................

.............................................where is everybody?..?

Former name : I told u ure story is stupid...

Shut up there just not here right now!

Anyways the chapter is very sad and those with weak stomachs PLZ leave the room..jk





Chapter 4 part one: the mysterious Thorn...

"Where are u? I can't see anything, to much smoke." Kiva looked around trying to find his father when he heard a large cry but it wasn't his fathers, it was something he never heard before. Kiva ran into the room where he heard the cry and saw a large monster it was grey and had teeth that moved and 2 large arms with huge claws on them.

"What the hell is that?!" Kiva could barely move because of all the fear. Just then a dark shadow walked in from another door.

"Father?" he barely managed to say.

"Not really kid." the voice was scratchy.

"Kiva!" said another sayjin.

"...?" Kiva couldn't move and he didn't know why he hadn't even gotten attacked. Just then he notice the monster he heard was somehow draining his energy.

"Stay out of this little girl!" the dark figure had said.

"My name is Thorn." the female sayjin had put her had in front of her and charged a ki ball.

"What the hell?!" the dark figure started to shake.

"Diamond rain" the mysterious sayjin threw the ki ball into the air and watched as it shot out diamond like rain (hence the name diamond storm). The dark figure and the monster fell to the ground and Kiva felt his energy come back to him.

"Thanks." Kiva said while standing up.

"No problem, what is a young sayjin like you doing here? You could of been killed?"

"Im looking for my father, he's the head general of the sayjin army." Thorn's mouth dropped open at what Kiva had said.

"Your not suppose to be here, your father would kill me if he knew you were here!" Thorn grabbed Kiva by the arm and started to run to the exit but was stopped by another monster.

"What is that thing?!" Kiva looked up at the monster.

"Its called a venom, they are very strong but not very smart, stay here." Thorn put Kiva behind a wall and charged at the monster.

"Knows my chance." Kiva ran to find his father but was stopped by a short angry guy.

"Hey watch it, do you know who I am!" Vegeta got up and looked at Kiva.

"Vegeta?" Kiva got up and smacked Vegeta in the head.

"Hey!" Vegeta was about to smack Kiva when a venom ran threw a wall and glared at the two sayjin's

"Run!" Kiva and Vegeta ran up a flight of stairs and didn't stop. (A/N: Burn those calories)

"What the hell was that?!" asked Vegeta.

"I think they call it a venom." Kiva looked at where they were, he could see the giant ship above them.

"Where on the top floor...or what's left of it." Kiva looked around to see if he could spot his father.

"Kiva, lets split up and look for are fathers."

"Right!" with that, Kiva and Vegeta split up to look for there fathers.

Chapter 4 part two: all he could do is watch

~*Vegeta's P.O.V*~

I look around all the rumble and spotted what looked like a girl.

" Reena!" I shouted and ran over to my sister, she was unconscious and badly hurt. She must have been hurt in the collision.

'If I had only been here sooner I could have protected you.' I thought.

~*no ones P.O.V*~

"Vegeta..." Reena had woken up but was still badly hurt.

"Don't talk, taking makes you die." Vegeta started to cry.

"Don't worry about me ill be just...just fine." Reena could barely stay awake.

"Don't worry I wont leave, I promise." Vegeta had to break his promise when he heard his father yell in pain.

"Father?!" Vegeta took one last look at his wounded sister.

"Don't worry I'll get you help." Vegeta took off to find his father. He ran into a room where he spotted him.

"Father!" Vegeta started to run but was grabbed by an arm.

"Son!" King Vegeta started to run but was stopped by a another venom.

"Ra Tule, let him go!" King Vegeta blasted the venom and ran at the man named Ra Tule, but before he could make it Vegeta was stabbed in the neck by Ra Tule's claws. Vegeta fell to the ground.

"Don't worry he's not dead Vegeta, he's just paralyzed from the neck down." Ra Tule laughed but stopped as he saw King Vegeta run at him.

All Vegeta could do was watch as he saw his father's guts get ripped from his body. All he could do was listen to the cries of his father. All he could do was lay on the ground and cry himself to sleep.

~*kiva's P.O.V*~

I walked down a hall only to see a venom attacking Laylee.

"Oh no." I charged at the venom giving it all I had.. I guess I over estimated the creators because I defeated it with ease. I looked at Laylee, she wasn't hurt real bad.

"Are u ok?" I asked.

I listen as she told me how she was with my father and she was going to bring me lunch so we could all eat together but the loric kingdom had broken the peace treaty and had attacked the tower as a sign of war. Then she told me as my father ran off to fight Hacres, Hacres was one of the two leaders of the loric kingdom. Ra Tule was the other one. I had to leave her alone when I saw my father in trouble.

~*no ones P.O.V*~

"Father!" Kiva ran into the empty room where his father and Hacres were fighting.

"Kiva get down!" before Kiva could fully understand what his father had said he was hit in the head by Hacres. Kiva fell to the floor and started to black out...

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A/N: well that's chapter 4 and thorn dragonballz don't worry u are gonna do more then just save Kiva's ass. And for banana girl u are gonna come in the next chapter.

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Is that u former name?

Former name: :'( why, why did that have to happen to Vegeta..(sobs) im going to go get a drink

I better not find u on the riding mower naked again!

Well that was chapter 4 ill try to hurry up and make another one since I have 11 reviews and im only on chapter 4 ^_^...but banana girl has over 700! Err..jk