A/N- SRY I haven't been able to update in awhile, I would have updated sooner if it wasn't for school. Oh well the good thing is that I did update. Today the Shiz clan arrives at the loric kingdom! Man bad things are going to happen to the shiz clan soon, so stop reading this authors note and start reading the story...

Chapter 9: arrival at the loric kingdom...

Alari's ship was everything J'dee said it was, not only was it fast and it rid smoothly.

"How long until we get there?" asked Vegeta.

"Hello this is your captain speaking, we would like to thank you for flying Alari's

airlines, we hope you enjoyed the ride, oh yeah there's a large loric ship chasing us and we will

be expecting missel's anytime now." just then the ship started to shake from the missel's, and the began to fall.

"Oh S!!T were falling, and why the f!!K Am I being beeped?! Kiva looked out

the window. "Were at the loric kingdom!" the ship then crashed into a mountain.

~*after everyone got out and blew that stupid ship into a million pieces.*~

"I though u said this ship could pass threw radar." said Kiva

"It can, but I think that ship was scouting the area we were trying to land at." Alari looked at what remained of her ship

"Hey guys, come look at this." J'dee pointed at what looked to be a war. "Why would they start a war with everyone at once, it makes no sense."

"Everyone except planet Vegeta has broken into chaos, think about it, the Tufflet's never tried anything as bold as attacking the entire planet, what's with everyone." BeGee looked down at all the dead bodies. "To bad we missed the fight."

"Everyone will drown in the hatred of the chaotic god." said Thorn.

"What does that mean?" asked Kiva.

"Hun, oh never mind its an old sayjin prophecy." Thorn looked at the large castle like building. "that must be it, the loric castle." everyone turned there attention to the loric castle.

"Then that's where we have to go." Vegeta powered up and took off toward the castle.

"Lets not keep him waiting." Kiva looked at everyone "lets go!" everyone powered up

and followed Vegeta.

Thorn looked down at all the dead bodies. "Its coming, I can fell it."

"What's coming?" BeGee appeared right next to Thorn. "You said, its coming, what's coming?" Thorn looked around, everyone else was ahead of them,

"Ok, ill tell you but you have to promise that you wont tell anyone else." Thorn looked once more to see if anyone was near

"I promise on my entire banana collection." BeGee placed her hand on her heart.

"Um, right, anyways, there is a myth that a very powerful monster lives in that Castel." thorn looked up where everyone was. "I have a feeling his waiting for us, waiting for Vegeta and Kiva."

"Well don't forget if needed Vegeta and Kiva can fuse and kick anyones ass." BeGee turned on a female looking scouter with a banana sticker on it. Were almost there.

"I think you mean we are there." Thorn pointed to the shiz clan, they were standing in front of a large metal door.

"What are we going to do this is the only way to get in without being noticed." J'dee knocked at the door.

"What wrong why aren't we going in?" asked Thorn.

"The hole castle has a magic lock on it, this is the weakest part of the castle, but we still cant break this door down." Alari examined the door once more. "Maybe if we all pushed on it we can open it?"

"Its worth a try." Kiva looked at everyone. "Ok guys lets go on three."

"One"

"Two"

"Three"

Everyone began to push the door. "its not working." said J'dee.

~*five minutes after more pushing*~

"I give up!" Vegeta was the last one still trying when he finally gave up.

Just then angel walked up to the door, and with one single knock door large door came tumbling down.

Kiva: :O

Vegeta: :O

Thorn: :O

BeGee: :O

Alari: :O

J'dee: :O

Some dead guy: :O

"Um, um, it was probably weak from when u all tried to open it, yeah that must be it." angel has a guilty look on her face.

"Im sure that's its." Thorn looked at angel. "That would explain it all."

"We better keep on moving." Kiva looked at everyone. "There's no turning back now, once we go in we are all expected to not come back until Ra Tule and Hacres are dead."

"Right." everyone said at once.

The shiz clan ventured into the deep Castel not knowing what lied ahead.

~*the secret hallway entrance to the castle*~

"I feel like were being followed." BeGee said looking around

"We are, I can feel there power, there's more then one, im guessing roughly five." said Thorn

Just then a fighter attacked from the walls.

"Quick run into that open place, were sitting ducks in this hallway." Kiva ordered everyone.

The shiz clan ran into the open hallway. There were three fighters running circles around them all. Hacres and Ra Tule stood in front of two separate hallways.

"Hacres!" Kiva looked at Hacres with anger. "I can never forgive you!" Kiva chased Hacres down the hall.

"Vegeta stop him we need to do this together." Thorn was too late Vegeta had already ran after Ra Tule. "God damnit."

"Thorn we have bigger problems, these guys wont stop moving, I cant tell who they are." Alari tried to focus on the three fighters but was unable to.

"Fuck this." BeGee pulled out her missel luncher's. "Missel lunch." dozens of missel's launched as if they all had a mind of there own.

"Mind Tease!" just then all the missel's stopped and fell.

"That move that's Dagon's move." Thorn looked up at a balcony, there on the balcony was a sayjin around Thorns age. "Dagon?!"

"That's right, Thorn I've come back, and all for the purpose of killing you. Dagon looked down at Thorn.

"Don't worry Thorn we got your back." said BeGee.

"Your gonna have to beat me first before u can try to help your friends."

"Raddits?!." Kakarot looked at his former brother with shock.

"Raddits, what are you doing here?!" BeGee had the same look as Thorn and her brother.

"Oh no, K.K, Thorn and BeGee are in real trouble hun Alari." J'dee looked over to her android partner, she had the same look as Everyones one else. "What's wrong?" when J'dee looked over to see what was bothering Alari she noticed another sayjin android. "What on Vegeta is going on, its almost as if Ra Tule and Hacres have summoned all these sayjin's, all these sayjin's knew all my friends, they all must have tried to stop Ra Tule and Hacres and failed, now they serve them, its up to all of us to save what little souls they have left, I wont stop until planet Vegeta is safe!"

"Damn you Hacres you can't run forever!" just then Kiva stepped into another open space. Where Hacres stood.

"You want me? Hacres grinned. " Come and get me!" Kiva went super and raced toward Hacres with incredible speed.

"You cant run forever!" Vegeta said while chasing Ra Tule down.

Just then Ra Tule stopped in the middle of yet another open space.(A/N- damn there's a lot of open spaces around here)

"We fight now!" said Ra Tule.

"Fine with me." Vegeta went super can charged a kai ball. "All avenge my father."

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A/N- wuahaha evil cliffy, sry bout that I just wanted to have the fight a separate chapter, hope u understand. Well ill try to update fast, and SRY about the long wait, it was partly school and partly lazy ness. Well cya and don't forget to REVIEW or ill have my muse attack you

*Shows fellow readers his muse with foam in his mouth and a doggie chain on him*

former name: *spits out fake foam and takes the Chain off* this is stupid!

your ruining the act! Now we'll never get reviews! I better end this now

Bye, bye, bye, review, bye, bye (subliminal message ; ).........)