Right! 6 months later, I write chapter threeee....
Ok so, in this time, was told, and had agreed that, this wasn't DARK enough. so now, i can hopefully make it darker. And perhaps i'll bring myself to write longer chapters. Oh right, and i'll spell check them with this primitive spellchevcker i have! ya never know...
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1 week later...
Neptune awoke, got dressed, and headed for breakfast. which was, of course, bagels. The morning ceremonies as usual. But wait! The slightly vandalized bulliten board in the stinking hallway said that 2 new scientists were coming. Wesker had written it, so there were no further details. The headache had evolved to a slight dizzyness, so it felt awkward waling to the main building. Toby, the pet dog of someone who neptune wasn't quite sure of, greeted him along the way. Nice dog, that Toby. It was a wonder how his presence passed with Wesker though...
Of the two newcomers, Poiso and Iceflame, Poiso arrived first. By helicopter. This was apparently becuase he had worked for Umbrella Antarctica, a top secret research base, in the past. And he ceartaintly diddn't look happy to be here. He merley walked through the door, at a quick walk, exchanged nods with wesker, and kept on walking, carrying a suit case.
Iceflame arrived 10 minutes later. By that time, Neptune was doing his job. But Dragon Lady had told him that "He walked through the door, pretty meekly, and started walknig the wrong way. Wekser, Rather than saying some, just followed him. Later I heared something that sounded like someone who was very surprised. Wesker followed him all the way to the storage room!"
And so, the day proceeded as its old boring self, with exceptions for learning what Poiso and ICeflame were going to do: Poiso would research the virus's effects on dogs, and Iceflame Snakes. Neptune would continiue waiting for the sharks... that night, the headache/dizzyness had subsided a little.
Ok so, in this time, was told, and had agreed that, this wasn't DARK enough. so now, i can hopefully make it darker. And perhaps i'll bring myself to write longer chapters. Oh right, and i'll spell check them with this primitive spellchevcker i have! ya never know...
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1 week later...
Neptune awoke, got dressed, and headed for breakfast. which was, of course, bagels. The morning ceremonies as usual. But wait! The slightly vandalized bulliten board in the stinking hallway said that 2 new scientists were coming. Wesker had written it, so there were no further details. The headache had evolved to a slight dizzyness, so it felt awkward waling to the main building. Toby, the pet dog of someone who neptune wasn't quite sure of, greeted him along the way. Nice dog, that Toby. It was a wonder how his presence passed with Wesker though...
Of the two newcomers, Poiso and Iceflame, Poiso arrived first. By helicopter. This was apparently becuase he had worked for Umbrella Antarctica, a top secret research base, in the past. And he ceartaintly diddn't look happy to be here. He merley walked through the door, at a quick walk, exchanged nods with wesker, and kept on walking, carrying a suit case.
Iceflame arrived 10 minutes later. By that time, Neptune was doing his job. But Dragon Lady had told him that "He walked through the door, pretty meekly, and started walknig the wrong way. Wekser, Rather than saying some, just followed him. Later I heared something that sounded like someone who was very surprised. Wesker followed him all the way to the storage room!"
And so, the day proceeded as its old boring self, with exceptions for learning what Poiso and ICeflame were going to do: Poiso would research the virus's effects on dogs, and Iceflame Snakes. Neptune would continiue waiting for the sharks... that night, the headache/dizzyness had subsided a little.