An: I decided to lay off the romances for a while and start on a funny one. I hope you like it. I know some of my other stories have had bad spelling in them, but I'm trying my best to keep you peoples happy and work on it. Enjoy. :)
By: Goten's baby dragon
Camping Trip
Part 1: Forced to go
Vegeta sat on the living room couch flipping through the channels
at a fast speed. He had now gone through all the channels for the 15th
time and still hadn't found something to watch. Vegeta had nothing
better to do since he blew up the gravity machine for the 3ed time this
month, and Bulma wasn't to happy about it.
"Stupid TV never has anything good to watch," Vegeta said as he
continued to flip through the channels.
" Hey Vegeta, what ya doing," Goku asked as he teleported in front of
Vegeta.
"Get out of my way," Vegeta said in a low and angry tone.
"Oh so ya watching TV huh. I thought you would be training," Goku said
still standing in front of Vegeta.
"Get out of my way Kakarot," Vegeta said.
"Did you blow up the gravity machine again," Goku asked not even
bothering to move.
"YES I BROKE THAT DAMN CONTRAPTION, NOW GET OUT OF MY WAY," Vegeta yelled, now very annoyed with Goku.
"Gosh Vegeta you don't have to yell at me," Goku said as he moved out
of Vegeta's way.
"Why are you over here," Vegeta asked.
"Glad you asked. I came to ask if you and Trunks wanted to go camping
with me, Gohan, and Goten," Goku asked.
"No," Vegeta said.
"Awww come on Vegeta it will be fun," Goku said.
"No," Vegeta said again.
"Just us guys, no yelling wives and there frying pans," Goku said.
"Kakarot, it is your mate that hits you with a frying pan, not mine,"
Vegeta said.
"You want me to start," Bulma said as she walked in to the living room.
"No," Vegeta said not even turning around to look at her.
"I think I should. This is the 3ed time in one month you have broken that
machine," Bulma said.
"So, you can fix it," Vegeta said.
"Yeah I can fix it, it's just do I actually want to fix it," Bulma said.
"You better fix it," Vegeta said now turning around to look at her.
"You can't tell me to do any thing MR. Ya know I could just see if you
like fixing the thing yourself," Bulma said.
"But I need to train," Vegeta said.
" You don't NEED to train," Bulma said.
"Um do you want me to go," Goku said.
"Yes," Vegeta said.
"No Goku you stay right here," Bulma said. " Now if you NEED to train
then I think you should go on this camping trip."
"No. I will not go camping with that buffoon," Vegeta said.
"Oh yes you will if you really want the machine fixed," Bulma said. Vegeta
was now speech less giving Bulma the death glare.
"So does this mean Vegeta is coming," Goku asked.
"Yes," Bulma said.
"No," Vegeta said. Goku was now very confused and looking back and
forth at the two.
"Oh yes you are. If you go, I will have fixed your little machine by the time you get back," Bulma said.
"You will," Vegeta said in a surprised but confused voice.
"Yep," Bulma said. " So Goku how long are you staying there?"
"About a week," Goku said.
"Yeah that's just enough time for me to get it done," Bulma said.
"A WEEK," Vegeta yelled out.
"Yep," Goku said.
"I'm NOT going to stay with you for a week," Vegeta said.
"Do you want that machine fixed," Bulma asked Vegeta.
"Yes," Vegeta replied.
"Then you'll go with Goku," Bulma said as she stared at Vegeta with that
'do it now' look and Vegeta sighed and turned around.
"Ok then I'll come here at 6:00 a.m. tomorrow to pick you up," Goku said then he vanished.
"You better go get packing," Bulma said.
"Whatever," Vegeta said as he got up off the couch and walked up the
stares.
"Oh and tell Trunks to pack as well," Bulma called out at Vegeta as he
walked up the stars. Vegeta just waved his hand once behind him
for an 'ok' as he continued to walk up the stars.
"Hey it's not like you had anything better to do any way," Bulma said as
Vegeta slammed the door to the room.
~At 5:59 in the morning~
" Dad, I'm to tired to get up now," Trunks whined.
"Do bad, that baka Kakarot is going to get us any second now," Vegeta
said.
"Ok," Trunks said in a lazy attitude as he slowly crawled out of bed.
"Veggi are you here," Goku yelled from down stares.
"SHUT UP YOU STUPID BAKA, MY MATE IS STILL ASLEEP," Vegeta yelled
at Goku from the top of the stares.
"NOT ANY MORE," Bulma screamed out from the room.
"Now look at what you did," Vegeta said.
"What did I do," Goku said.
"You woke my mate you dumb ass," Vegeta said.
"Hey where is Goten," Trunks asked as he walked out of his room.
"Out side," Goku said.
"Ok," Trunks said as he slid down the railing and ran out the door and Vegeta slowly fallowed by walking down the stares.
"Hey Veggi where is your bag," Goku asked. Vegeta heeled up a dino cap
as he walked by Goku and out the door. " Lazy," Goku said as he fallowed
Vegeta out the door.
"At least I'm covenant," Vegeta replied.
"Oh yeah, well where is your tent," Goku asked and Vegeta just held up
another Dino cap.
" You are very lazy Vegeta. Where did you get the Dino caps any way,"
Goku asked.
" My mate's stupid father makes them, baka. I get them for free," Vegeta
said.
"That's a really big bag Goten," Trunks said, " what do you have in there
any way?"
"I have my compass, a portable fan, 7 pares of clothes, pillow, tent,
sun block, sleeping bag, gum, gameboy, batteries, CD player, 8 CDs,
tube float, goggles, a map of the area, 2 big bags of chips, 15 candy bars, and my tooth brush a tooth paste," Goten said.
"That's a lot," Trunks said.
"Hey why don't you have a bag," Goten asked.
"I have my dino caps. This one has my clothes, this one has my training
gear, this one has lots of junk food, and this one has my sleeping bag
and pillow," Trunks said.
" I wish I had a Dino cap, but mom says they are to expensive and a
whist of money," Goten said.
"Let me ask you this, did mom pack your bag," Gohan asked Goten.
"Yep," Goten answered.
"That's what I thought," Gohan said.
"Well let's go," Goku said as he turned Super Saiyan and put on his bag.
"What are you going Super Saiyan for," Vegeta asked.
"The place is fare away and if we want to make it before night fall we have to go super," Goku said.
"Whatever," Vegeta said as he, and every body else went super and flu off.
~At 5:30 p.m.~
"Finally we made it," Goku said as he landed in a grassy clearing next to
a lake and a forest.
"Good, I'm tired," Goten said as he landed on the ground with a thump.
"I told you not to pack so much," Goku said.
"All I had in my bag was my fan, tent, pillow, sleeping bag, chips, candy bars, gameboy, CD player with the CD's, and gum. Mom added every thing else," Goten said.
"I guess we should set up camp now," Gohan said as he dropped his bag to the ground.
" Whatever," Vegeta said as he pressed the button on the Dino cap and
tossed it on the ground. The Dino cap opened to revel a large tent.
"Wow that's big," Goten said as he looked at the tall, wide green tent.
"Yeah well the woman wouldn't let me have the small house so I had to
settle with this," Vegeta said as he walked in.
"I think it's to tall for you," Goku said as he stared at the tent.
"What was that Kakarot," Vegeta said.
"Nothing," Goku said as he dug through his bag to find his tent.
"Come on in Trunks, and set up your stuff," Vegeta said.
"But I wanted to be in Goten's tent," Trunks whined.
"Whatever, it doesn't mater to me," Vegeta said as he closed his flap for
the door and laid down on his blown up mattress and turned on a small
battery powered TV, and started flipping channels.
"Wow Veggi this is nice," Goku said as he popped his head in to look.
"I know, now get out," Vegeta said.
" Wow and a blow up bed too," Goku said as he walked in and hoped on
Vegeta's bed bouncing him up a little.
"Get off my bed," Vegeta said getting very angry at Goku.
"It's so comfy," Goku said still laying on the bed but with his eyes closed.
"GET OUT, YOU BAKA," Vegeta yelled.
"Ok, ok, I'm going," Goku said as he walked out.
"I'm going to kill Kakarot before this trip is over if he keeps this up,"
Vegeta mumbled to himself.
~At 8:00 p.m.~
"Damn it I'm hungry can't you start that fire any faster," Vegeta said as he sat on a rock by where the fire was going to be.
"I can't get the fire to start though," Goku said who was kneeling on the
ground rubbing two sticks together.
"This is never going to work," Vegeta said.
"But I saw a guy on TV start a fire this why, he rubbed to sticks together,
or was it rocks," Goku said as he got up and graved two rock and began
rubbing them together.
"Baka," Vegeta said as he went in his tent and came back out with a
lighter. Vegeta got on the other side on the pile of wood and lit it with
the lighter.
"Oh wow look Veggi it worked," Goku said as he dropped the rocks and
looked at the blazing fire.
"Yea, right," Vegeta said with little amusement as he looked at the fool
he called Kakarot looking at the fire like a little amazed 4 year old.
" Great, now we can cook," Gohan said.
"Cook what," Vegeta asked.
"Um.........." Gohan said as he looked over at Goku for a answer.
"I thought we had food," Goku said.
"I have chips," Goten said as he crammed another hand full of chips into
his mouth.
"And I have candy bars," Trunks said as he bit a Baby Ruth.
"Ok, good enough for me," Goku said as he ran over to where the two boys
sat on the ground.
"No, we can't eat that for dinner," Gohan said.
"Then what are we going to eat," Goku asked.
"Um......." Gohan said as he looked around, " fish."
"I love fish great idea, but where are we going to find fish," Goku asked.
"In the lake stupid," Vegeta said.
"Oh ok. Who wants to go fishing," Goku asked.
"I do," Goten said as he sued up off the ground.
"Me too," Trunks said as he sued up as well.
"Ok, how about you Gohan," Goku asked.
"Count me out of this one," Gohan said as he sat down by the fire.
"How about you Veggi," Goku asked.
"No why, and stop calling me that, my name is Vegeta," Vegeta said.
"Ok then, lets go," Goku said as he, Goten, and Trunks ran to the lake
and striped out of all there clothing then dived into the water.
"Last chance," Goku called out.
"I'm still not going to," Vegeta said.
"That goes dub bal for me," Gohan said.
"But the water's nice and warm," Goku said.
"Just catch a damn fish and leave me a loan," Vegeta said.
"Ok," Goku said as he dived under water.
~After Dinner~
"Wow that was good," Goku said as he rubbed his belly and laid down
on the soft grass.
"Yeah it was good on the inside. Tomorrow I'm cooking," Vegeta said.
"Why, wasn't I a good cook," Goku asked.
"No, you burnt mine," Vegeta said.
"You dropped my first one on the ground then burnt my last on," Gohan
said.
"Mine wasn't cooked long enough," Trunks said.
"And mine still had the bones," Goten said.
"Every body's fish had bones in them," Vegeta said.
"Yeah well mommy always took out the bones," Goten said.
"Well you got it made, my mom can't even cook," Trunks said.
"Yes, but when she tries it's a lot better that Kakarot's cooking," Vegeta
said.
"Ok, ok, tomorrow Vegeta can try cooking," Goku said.
"Hey I've cooked before," Vegeta said.
"When," Goku asked.
"On some kind of grill thing out side," Vegeta said.
"So then how good where they," Goku asked.
"I don't know it started raining and they all got wet so nobody ate them,"
Vegeta said.
"Well that's great to know," Gohan said.
"Yeah well, if it hadn't of rained, I'm sure they would have been the best
hot dogs ever," Vegeta said.
"Yeah well we'll see how good the fish are tomorrow," Goku said.
"We're having fish again," Vegeta complained.
"Well do you see anything else to eat," Gohan said.
"Well then can't you kill a deer or something," Vegeta said.
"NO. Not a deer, there to cute," Goten said.
"Well then kill an ugly Dinosaur," Vegeta said.
"Why don't you kill what where going to eat then, since you're so worried
about it," Gohan said.
"I didn't see you hop in that lake and catch a fish, why don't you go kill
something, besides I like killing something worth killing," Vegeta said
the he glanced over at Goku.
"Well I didn't see you hop in the lake either," Gohan said.
"I don't want to get wet," Vegeta said.
"Well you're going to have to get wet if you want to wash off," Goku said.
"What is the point in that, you'll just smell like a nasty fish after that. Now I wish that woman would have given me that small house, that way I
could take a real shower," Vegeta said.
"Whatever Vegeta," Goku said.
~*~TO BE CONTINUED IN PART 2 ~*~
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AN: Well did ya like it. I hope so. I also hope I did good on the spelling. Well tell me what you think about it and I'll try and review soon. :)
By: Goten's baby dragon
Camping Trip
Part 1: Forced to go
Vegeta sat on the living room couch flipping through the channels
at a fast speed. He had now gone through all the channels for the 15th
time and still hadn't found something to watch. Vegeta had nothing
better to do since he blew up the gravity machine for the 3ed time this
month, and Bulma wasn't to happy about it.
"Stupid TV never has anything good to watch," Vegeta said as he
continued to flip through the channels.
" Hey Vegeta, what ya doing," Goku asked as he teleported in front of
Vegeta.
"Get out of my way," Vegeta said in a low and angry tone.
"Oh so ya watching TV huh. I thought you would be training," Goku said
still standing in front of Vegeta.
"Get out of my way Kakarot," Vegeta said.
"Did you blow up the gravity machine again," Goku asked not even
bothering to move.
"YES I BROKE THAT DAMN CONTRAPTION, NOW GET OUT OF MY WAY," Vegeta yelled, now very annoyed with Goku.
"Gosh Vegeta you don't have to yell at me," Goku said as he moved out
of Vegeta's way.
"Why are you over here," Vegeta asked.
"Glad you asked. I came to ask if you and Trunks wanted to go camping
with me, Gohan, and Goten," Goku asked.
"No," Vegeta said.
"Awww come on Vegeta it will be fun," Goku said.
"No," Vegeta said again.
"Just us guys, no yelling wives and there frying pans," Goku said.
"Kakarot, it is your mate that hits you with a frying pan, not mine,"
Vegeta said.
"You want me to start," Bulma said as she walked in to the living room.
"No," Vegeta said not even turning around to look at her.
"I think I should. This is the 3ed time in one month you have broken that
machine," Bulma said.
"So, you can fix it," Vegeta said.
"Yeah I can fix it, it's just do I actually want to fix it," Bulma said.
"You better fix it," Vegeta said now turning around to look at her.
"You can't tell me to do any thing MR. Ya know I could just see if you
like fixing the thing yourself," Bulma said.
"But I need to train," Vegeta said.
" You don't NEED to train," Bulma said.
"Um do you want me to go," Goku said.
"Yes," Vegeta said.
"No Goku you stay right here," Bulma said. " Now if you NEED to train
then I think you should go on this camping trip."
"No. I will not go camping with that buffoon," Vegeta said.
"Oh yes you will if you really want the machine fixed," Bulma said. Vegeta
was now speech less giving Bulma the death glare.
"So does this mean Vegeta is coming," Goku asked.
"Yes," Bulma said.
"No," Vegeta said. Goku was now very confused and looking back and
forth at the two.
"Oh yes you are. If you go, I will have fixed your little machine by the time you get back," Bulma said.
"You will," Vegeta said in a surprised but confused voice.
"Yep," Bulma said. " So Goku how long are you staying there?"
"About a week," Goku said.
"Yeah that's just enough time for me to get it done," Bulma said.
"A WEEK," Vegeta yelled out.
"Yep," Goku said.
"I'm NOT going to stay with you for a week," Vegeta said.
"Do you want that machine fixed," Bulma asked Vegeta.
"Yes," Vegeta replied.
"Then you'll go with Goku," Bulma said as she stared at Vegeta with that
'do it now' look and Vegeta sighed and turned around.
"Ok then I'll come here at 6:00 a.m. tomorrow to pick you up," Goku said then he vanished.
"You better go get packing," Bulma said.
"Whatever," Vegeta said as he got up off the couch and walked up the
stares.
"Oh and tell Trunks to pack as well," Bulma called out at Vegeta as he
walked up the stars. Vegeta just waved his hand once behind him
for an 'ok' as he continued to walk up the stars.
"Hey it's not like you had anything better to do any way," Bulma said as
Vegeta slammed the door to the room.
~At 5:59 in the morning~
" Dad, I'm to tired to get up now," Trunks whined.
"Do bad, that baka Kakarot is going to get us any second now," Vegeta
said.
"Ok," Trunks said in a lazy attitude as he slowly crawled out of bed.
"Veggi are you here," Goku yelled from down stares.
"SHUT UP YOU STUPID BAKA, MY MATE IS STILL ASLEEP," Vegeta yelled
at Goku from the top of the stares.
"NOT ANY MORE," Bulma screamed out from the room.
"Now look at what you did," Vegeta said.
"What did I do," Goku said.
"You woke my mate you dumb ass," Vegeta said.
"Hey where is Goten," Trunks asked as he walked out of his room.
"Out side," Goku said.
"Ok," Trunks said as he slid down the railing and ran out the door and Vegeta slowly fallowed by walking down the stares.
"Hey Veggi where is your bag," Goku asked. Vegeta heeled up a dino cap
as he walked by Goku and out the door. " Lazy," Goku said as he fallowed
Vegeta out the door.
"At least I'm covenant," Vegeta replied.
"Oh yeah, well where is your tent," Goku asked and Vegeta just held up
another Dino cap.
" You are very lazy Vegeta. Where did you get the Dino caps any way,"
Goku asked.
" My mate's stupid father makes them, baka. I get them for free," Vegeta
said.
"That's a really big bag Goten," Trunks said, " what do you have in there
any way?"
"I have my compass, a portable fan, 7 pares of clothes, pillow, tent,
sun block, sleeping bag, gum, gameboy, batteries, CD player, 8 CDs,
tube float, goggles, a map of the area, 2 big bags of chips, 15 candy bars, and my tooth brush a tooth paste," Goten said.
"That's a lot," Trunks said.
"Hey why don't you have a bag," Goten asked.
"I have my dino caps. This one has my clothes, this one has my training
gear, this one has lots of junk food, and this one has my sleeping bag
and pillow," Trunks said.
" I wish I had a Dino cap, but mom says they are to expensive and a
whist of money," Goten said.
"Let me ask you this, did mom pack your bag," Gohan asked Goten.
"Yep," Goten answered.
"That's what I thought," Gohan said.
"Well let's go," Goku said as he turned Super Saiyan and put on his bag.
"What are you going Super Saiyan for," Vegeta asked.
"The place is fare away and if we want to make it before night fall we have to go super," Goku said.
"Whatever," Vegeta said as he, and every body else went super and flu off.
~At 5:30 p.m.~
"Finally we made it," Goku said as he landed in a grassy clearing next to
a lake and a forest.
"Good, I'm tired," Goten said as he landed on the ground with a thump.
"I told you not to pack so much," Goku said.
"All I had in my bag was my fan, tent, pillow, sleeping bag, chips, candy bars, gameboy, CD player with the CD's, and gum. Mom added every thing else," Goten said.
"I guess we should set up camp now," Gohan said as he dropped his bag to the ground.
" Whatever," Vegeta said as he pressed the button on the Dino cap and
tossed it on the ground. The Dino cap opened to revel a large tent.
"Wow that's big," Goten said as he looked at the tall, wide green tent.
"Yeah well the woman wouldn't let me have the small house so I had to
settle with this," Vegeta said as he walked in.
"I think it's to tall for you," Goku said as he stared at the tent.
"What was that Kakarot," Vegeta said.
"Nothing," Goku said as he dug through his bag to find his tent.
"Come on in Trunks, and set up your stuff," Vegeta said.
"But I wanted to be in Goten's tent," Trunks whined.
"Whatever, it doesn't mater to me," Vegeta said as he closed his flap for
the door and laid down on his blown up mattress and turned on a small
battery powered TV, and started flipping channels.
"Wow Veggi this is nice," Goku said as he popped his head in to look.
"I know, now get out," Vegeta said.
" Wow and a blow up bed too," Goku said as he walked in and hoped on
Vegeta's bed bouncing him up a little.
"Get off my bed," Vegeta said getting very angry at Goku.
"It's so comfy," Goku said still laying on the bed but with his eyes closed.
"GET OUT, YOU BAKA," Vegeta yelled.
"Ok, ok, I'm going," Goku said as he walked out.
"I'm going to kill Kakarot before this trip is over if he keeps this up,"
Vegeta mumbled to himself.
~At 8:00 p.m.~
"Damn it I'm hungry can't you start that fire any faster," Vegeta said as he sat on a rock by where the fire was going to be.
"I can't get the fire to start though," Goku said who was kneeling on the
ground rubbing two sticks together.
"This is never going to work," Vegeta said.
"But I saw a guy on TV start a fire this why, he rubbed to sticks together,
or was it rocks," Goku said as he got up and graved two rock and began
rubbing them together.
"Baka," Vegeta said as he went in his tent and came back out with a
lighter. Vegeta got on the other side on the pile of wood and lit it with
the lighter.
"Oh wow look Veggi it worked," Goku said as he dropped the rocks and
looked at the blazing fire.
"Yea, right," Vegeta said with little amusement as he looked at the fool
he called Kakarot looking at the fire like a little amazed 4 year old.
" Great, now we can cook," Gohan said.
"Cook what," Vegeta asked.
"Um.........." Gohan said as he looked over at Goku for a answer.
"I thought we had food," Goku said.
"I have chips," Goten said as he crammed another hand full of chips into
his mouth.
"And I have candy bars," Trunks said as he bit a Baby Ruth.
"Ok, good enough for me," Goku said as he ran over to where the two boys
sat on the ground.
"No, we can't eat that for dinner," Gohan said.
"Then what are we going to eat," Goku asked.
"Um......." Gohan said as he looked around, " fish."
"I love fish great idea, but where are we going to find fish," Goku asked.
"In the lake stupid," Vegeta said.
"Oh ok. Who wants to go fishing," Goku asked.
"I do," Goten said as he sued up off the ground.
"Me too," Trunks said as he sued up as well.
"Ok, how about you Gohan," Goku asked.
"Count me out of this one," Gohan said as he sat down by the fire.
"How about you Veggi," Goku asked.
"No why, and stop calling me that, my name is Vegeta," Vegeta said.
"Ok then, lets go," Goku said as he, Goten, and Trunks ran to the lake
and striped out of all there clothing then dived into the water.
"Last chance," Goku called out.
"I'm still not going to," Vegeta said.
"That goes dub bal for me," Gohan said.
"But the water's nice and warm," Goku said.
"Just catch a damn fish and leave me a loan," Vegeta said.
"Ok," Goku said as he dived under water.
~After Dinner~
"Wow that was good," Goku said as he rubbed his belly and laid down
on the soft grass.
"Yeah it was good on the inside. Tomorrow I'm cooking," Vegeta said.
"Why, wasn't I a good cook," Goku asked.
"No, you burnt mine," Vegeta said.
"You dropped my first one on the ground then burnt my last on," Gohan
said.
"Mine wasn't cooked long enough," Trunks said.
"And mine still had the bones," Goten said.
"Every body's fish had bones in them," Vegeta said.
"Yeah well mommy always took out the bones," Goten said.
"Well you got it made, my mom can't even cook," Trunks said.
"Yes, but when she tries it's a lot better that Kakarot's cooking," Vegeta
said.
"Ok, ok, tomorrow Vegeta can try cooking," Goku said.
"Hey I've cooked before," Vegeta said.
"When," Goku asked.
"On some kind of grill thing out side," Vegeta said.
"So then how good where they," Goku asked.
"I don't know it started raining and they all got wet so nobody ate them,"
Vegeta said.
"Well that's great to know," Gohan said.
"Yeah well, if it hadn't of rained, I'm sure they would have been the best
hot dogs ever," Vegeta said.
"Yeah well we'll see how good the fish are tomorrow," Goku said.
"We're having fish again," Vegeta complained.
"Well do you see anything else to eat," Gohan said.
"Well then can't you kill a deer or something," Vegeta said.
"NO. Not a deer, there to cute," Goten said.
"Well then kill an ugly Dinosaur," Vegeta said.
"Why don't you kill what where going to eat then, since you're so worried
about it," Gohan said.
"I didn't see you hop in that lake and catch a fish, why don't you go kill
something, besides I like killing something worth killing," Vegeta said
the he glanced over at Goku.
"Well I didn't see you hop in the lake either," Gohan said.
"I don't want to get wet," Vegeta said.
"Well you're going to have to get wet if you want to wash off," Goku said.
"What is the point in that, you'll just smell like a nasty fish after that. Now I wish that woman would have given me that small house, that way I
could take a real shower," Vegeta said.
"Whatever Vegeta," Goku said.
~*~TO BE CONTINUED IN PART 2 ~*~
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AN: Well did ya like it. I hope so. I also hope I did good on the spelling. Well tell me what you think about it and I'll try and review soon. :)