First off I can't believe Ephram and Laynie broke up, but now she's going
back to boarding school. That makes me mad. Well glad I got that off my
chest now on with the story.
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Chapter 2
"Amy! What are you doing here?" Ephram shouts surprised to see her here. " I came to drop off a letter for Colin, they are going to Denver to stay the at the hospital and bring Colin home tomorrow. What may I ask are you doing here?" Amy asked even though she knew the answer. " Well I happen to be picking Laynie up so she and I can go to dinner" Ephram explained smiling. Amy told Ephram that Laynie would be out in a minute. Ephram and Amy then said goodbye to each other before Amy headed down the porch steps and turning the direction toward her house.
Amy was right because Laynie came out of her house a few moments later. Ephram was speechless when he saw her because she looked drop dead gorgeous in the dress she picked out. Laynie saw Ephram's reaction and started laughing. Ephram realized his mouth was hanging open so he quickly said " flowers for the beautiful lady" while handing Laynie the flowers in his hand. She starts laughing and said between breaths stop flattering me Ephram and be you. " Thank you for the advice, and I will consider it" Ephram replies with sarcasm in his voice. They walk to the car which Ephram opens the door for Laynie and helps her inside. Then he climbs in after her.
25 minutes later they pull into the parking lot. " Oh my god, J Alexander's Restaurant, the most expensive restaurant in Colorado," Laynie shouted with happiness. " Don't forget the fanciest restaurant," Ephram added jokingly.
They went into the restaurant and met a person that asked for the name and time the reservation was under. Ephram (the one who knew) replied "Ephram Brown for 6:30." " Ah! Yes Mr. Brown, you reserved the best seat in the house if I haven't mistaken," the guy said. Ephram agreed so the guy motioned them to follow him. They got to their table and sat down. 5 minutes later they ordered their food and drinks. Then Laynie asked Ephram how long it took him to make reservations for tonight. Ephram who wasn't surprised that the question came up answered with "all afternoon." He also added that since Laynie was the only girl that he has cared this much about and wanted to make this night special and that ever since he met her he has been the happiest he has ever been since his mom died. After his speech Laynie was already blushing and smiling.
When their food arrived Ephram's cell phone began to ring. Ephram excused himself from the table and walked outside of the restaurant and answered the phone. "Hello" Ephram said. "Ephram before you say anything, I just called to say take your time because I won't be able to pick you up for at least an hour" said Ephram's dad on the other end of the line. Ephram then said bye to his dad then hung up. He walked back inside to his table and sat down. They ate their dinner and had a good time talking to each other for the next hour and twenty minutes.
When they were done, Ephram called his dad and then paid for the dinner (which was extremely expensive). When Ephram's dad got there to pick them up, Ephram held the door open for Laynie, then climbed in after her. Ephram and Laynie talked all the way to Laynie's house.
About 30 minutes after they left the restaurant they pulled into Laynie's driveway. Ephram walked Laynie to her door. There Laynie told Ephram that she had a great time (which made Ephram blush a little, but also made him smile). Ephram told Laynie that he was glad she had a great time because he liked her a lot. Laynie told Ephram goodnight, but before Ephram said goodnight he said it was his turn to give her a kiss. He leaned in and kissed her. They kissed for 5 minutes before Ephram said goodnight and walked back to the car. Before Ephram got in the car he heard Laynie yell that she liked him a lot to. He just smiled and waved goodbye and got into the car.
When Ephram got home he went directly to his room, but on his way he did thank his dad. When he got into his room he grabbed his cell phone out of his jacket pocket and dialed Amy's number. "Hello" Amy's familiar voice said into the speaker. "Hey Grover, I just called to thank you for the restaurant idea," Ephram said. " Ham? Oh hey Ephram, no problem just glad I could help," Amy replied. They both said goodnight and hung up. Right as Ephram hung up his dad called his name and said "Ephram! Someone is at the door for you." So Ephram gets up and walks into the dinning room and sees..........
Ha Ha Ha Ha a cliffhanger. Must be frustrating to read a chapter then it ends with a cliffhanger. I hate cliffhangers but they are so fun to write. Well all of my fans out there that read my other story to (Amy and Ephram's stay in the city) I have the second chapter almost written, so you won't have to wait much longer. So please read and review. If you do your part, which is read, and review, then I will do mine, which is, write more chapters. Hope you enjoyed the story and I hope it was worth the wait.
Every review will get you a step closer to the next chapter and closer to find out what happens.
Chapter 2
"Amy! What are you doing here?" Ephram shouts surprised to see her here. " I came to drop off a letter for Colin, they are going to Denver to stay the at the hospital and bring Colin home tomorrow. What may I ask are you doing here?" Amy asked even though she knew the answer. " Well I happen to be picking Laynie up so she and I can go to dinner" Ephram explained smiling. Amy told Ephram that Laynie would be out in a minute. Ephram and Amy then said goodbye to each other before Amy headed down the porch steps and turning the direction toward her house.
Amy was right because Laynie came out of her house a few moments later. Ephram was speechless when he saw her because she looked drop dead gorgeous in the dress she picked out. Laynie saw Ephram's reaction and started laughing. Ephram realized his mouth was hanging open so he quickly said " flowers for the beautiful lady" while handing Laynie the flowers in his hand. She starts laughing and said between breaths stop flattering me Ephram and be you. " Thank you for the advice, and I will consider it" Ephram replies with sarcasm in his voice. They walk to the car which Ephram opens the door for Laynie and helps her inside. Then he climbs in after her.
25 minutes later they pull into the parking lot. " Oh my god, J Alexander's Restaurant, the most expensive restaurant in Colorado," Laynie shouted with happiness. " Don't forget the fanciest restaurant," Ephram added jokingly.
They went into the restaurant and met a person that asked for the name and time the reservation was under. Ephram (the one who knew) replied "Ephram Brown for 6:30." " Ah! Yes Mr. Brown, you reserved the best seat in the house if I haven't mistaken," the guy said. Ephram agreed so the guy motioned them to follow him. They got to their table and sat down. 5 minutes later they ordered their food and drinks. Then Laynie asked Ephram how long it took him to make reservations for tonight. Ephram who wasn't surprised that the question came up answered with "all afternoon." He also added that since Laynie was the only girl that he has cared this much about and wanted to make this night special and that ever since he met her he has been the happiest he has ever been since his mom died. After his speech Laynie was already blushing and smiling.
When their food arrived Ephram's cell phone began to ring. Ephram excused himself from the table and walked outside of the restaurant and answered the phone. "Hello" Ephram said. "Ephram before you say anything, I just called to say take your time because I won't be able to pick you up for at least an hour" said Ephram's dad on the other end of the line. Ephram then said bye to his dad then hung up. He walked back inside to his table and sat down. They ate their dinner and had a good time talking to each other for the next hour and twenty minutes.
When they were done, Ephram called his dad and then paid for the dinner (which was extremely expensive). When Ephram's dad got there to pick them up, Ephram held the door open for Laynie, then climbed in after her. Ephram and Laynie talked all the way to Laynie's house.
About 30 minutes after they left the restaurant they pulled into Laynie's driveway. Ephram walked Laynie to her door. There Laynie told Ephram that she had a great time (which made Ephram blush a little, but also made him smile). Ephram told Laynie that he was glad she had a great time because he liked her a lot. Laynie told Ephram goodnight, but before Ephram said goodnight he said it was his turn to give her a kiss. He leaned in and kissed her. They kissed for 5 minutes before Ephram said goodnight and walked back to the car. Before Ephram got in the car he heard Laynie yell that she liked him a lot to. He just smiled and waved goodbye and got into the car.
When Ephram got home he went directly to his room, but on his way he did thank his dad. When he got into his room he grabbed his cell phone out of his jacket pocket and dialed Amy's number. "Hello" Amy's familiar voice said into the speaker. "Hey Grover, I just called to thank you for the restaurant idea," Ephram said. " Ham? Oh hey Ephram, no problem just glad I could help," Amy replied. They both said goodnight and hung up. Right as Ephram hung up his dad called his name and said "Ephram! Someone is at the door for you." So Ephram gets up and walks into the dinning room and sees..........
Ha Ha Ha Ha a cliffhanger. Must be frustrating to read a chapter then it ends with a cliffhanger. I hate cliffhangers but they are so fun to write. Well all of my fans out there that read my other story to (Amy and Ephram's stay in the city) I have the second chapter almost written, so you won't have to wait much longer. So please read and review. If you do your part, which is read, and review, then I will do mine, which is, write more chapters. Hope you enjoyed the story and I hope it was worth the wait.