Disclaimer: Do not own anything. SO THERE!!
*This story is dedicated to a friend who wishes to remain anonymous. I'm sorry fate took everything away from you.
I Wish It Was Different
Ch. 2: "The Changes"
"Sanbi! It's time for breakfast!" a mother yelled to her daughter, whom was up stairs.
"Gomen nasai, Okaa-san! I'm not hungry!" the girl, Sanbi, yelled back.
"You have to eat something!" the woman argued.
"I know." the girl whispered to herself. Suddenly a decent meal would actually sound good. Sanbi's stomach started to
growl. "I'm coming, Okaa-san!" Sanbi put the items she was looking at back into the cardboard box. "Anma-chan..."
Sanbi's eyes began to water. She quickly choked back her tears, then went down stairs. There, her father was already at
the table with his newspaper in his face, and her mother at the stove.
"Ohayo Gozaimasu." Sanbi greeted, trying to be cheerful. Her father nodded his head, still buried in the paper, and her
mother turned around to greet her with a smile.
"Do you want eggs, Miroku?" her mother asked her father.
"Iie."
"Okay."
Everything went silent from there. Sanbi watched the toast pop up from the toaster. Her gray-blue eyes the went to her
breakfast in front of her. *Anma-chan always made breakfast...* Sanbi thought, as she tucked a stray lock of coal-black
hair behind her ear. *Anma-chan, I miss you already... why did you have to go?* Sanbi blinked the tears away. *Speaking of
Anma-chan, I still have to go through the items she left me.*
"Daijiobu, Sanbi?"
"Huh?" Sanbi looked up at her mother.
"You're very quiet. Are you thinking of Kagome-san?"
Sanbi nodded her answer. Her mother hugged her.
"Gomen nasai. I know you were close to her." Sanbi's mother continued cooking.
"Yes, I know. Well, thanks for breakfast, Kaa-san."
"But you only took one bite!"
"Yuki." Miroku told Sanbi's mother. "Let her be."
Sanbi looked at all the boxes Kagome left her. *I'm even staying in her room when she was a girl.* Sanbi went
over to a box she hadn't opened yet. On top there was a note by Kagome.
Dear Granddaughter,
I'm leaving my precious possessions in your care. Remember I told you all about Sengoku Jidai? All about Inu Yasha,
Miroku (whom your father is named after), Sango, Shippou, and all the others? Well, here is proof that everything I
told you was true. If you feel like going to Sengoku Jidai, be sure to take these contents with you, pull the arrow
out of the well, and proceed from there.
Love Always,
Anma-chan
Sanbi put the note down, and opened the box. Inside was a yellow backpack, that looked basically new. The bulging
contents were removed, however. There was bows and an arrow, and something shining in a small, glass container. Sanbi
carefully took it out and held it up. It was a piece of something pink, and a pink aura surrounded it. *A Shikon shard?!*
Sanbi couldn't believe that all Kagome told her was true.
*It can't be true! It just can't be!* Sanbi thought wildly to herself. *But there is only one way to find out!*
Sanbi grabbed the yellow backpack, stuffed it full of clothes, put the Shikon shard into it's side pocket, grabbed the
arrows and bow, and ran down stairs.
"Okaa-san? Otou-san?" They were at a shrine, praying.
"Yes dear?" Yuki asked her daughter.
"I'm going to be gone for a while, so please call my school and tell them I died, k?"
"Okay, dear. Have a good time!"
*My parents are SO weird!* With that last thought, Sanbi ran out to the shrine.
Sanbi removed the boards that boarded the shrine up. Sanbi stepped quickly inside, and closed it behind her. She looked
into the dim light and saw the arrow. Old memories refilled her mind....
"Anma-chan? What is that arrow doing in this well?" a five year old Sanbi asked her grandmother.
"To seal it up, Saiai-chan."
"Who put it there?"
"Me."
"Naze?"
An old Kagome sighed. The wrinkles under her eyes made her look even more tired. "To keep myself away. Now, you are not
to come back down here any more, ne? Would you like me to tell you a story about a Dog Demon named Inu Yasha?"
"Oh, yes, Anma-chan! I love stories!"
Sanbi shook her head. *No time for this!*
Sanbi ran down the stairs and pulled the arrow out. A bright pink light shot out from the well, and to the Heavens,
then disappeared. Sanbi looked down into the well, held her breath, and jumped in.
*I hope you're right, Anma-chan.*
A figure shot straight up when it saw the bright pink light disappear from the well in Inu Yasha forest.
*What the hell?! Kagome?! Are you back?!*
A tired Sanbi climbed out of the well, and looked around. *A dream?! This has to be a dream! Must of happened when I hit
my head.*
Suddenly, there was a rustling of bushes, and a demon, six feet tall, with horns growing out of it's head, came into the
clearing.
"EEEEEEEEK!!!" Sanbi freaked when she saw the ugly demon. Yellow drool dripping from it's mouth, while it yelled,
"Shikon no Tama! Shikon no Tama!"
"What?! I don't--" Sanbi gasped when she remembered the piece of the jewel in the yellow pack.
"SHIKON NO TAMA!" The demon screamed again, and this time, Sanbi took off running, remembering what Kagome told her
about demons. The six foot demon had no trouble catching up with her. Sanbi looked behind her, her heart pounding,
ready to burst from her chest. Her lungs ached for air as she pushed herself harder to run.
"Somebody help me..." Sanbi whispered to herself, then in a desperate need she shouted, "SOMEBODY HELP
MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!"
There was no mistake in that sent of her's. His ears picked up a shout, "SOMEBODY HELP MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!"
"Keh. So the wench got herself in trouble yet again?" And he took off toward the cry.
The ugly demon raised his clawed hand to smash Sanbi to bits, when suddenly, a red streak rushed between the demon and
Sanbi.
Sanbi looked behind her to see a dog-like boy, with cute, fluffy ears on his head (AN: ^_^), blocking the demon's path
to her. The dog demon pulled out a sword, that transformed into a huge fang.
*Eh? Is this what Anma-chan told me about? 'The Tesuiguia' I think she called it?*
The dog demon took one swing, and the six foot demon was dissipated into dust by a bright, white light.
The dog demon sheathed the sword into a sheath that was WAY too small for it, however, it still sheathed. The demon
boy turned and looked at Sanbi. His intense yellow eyes looked down at the girl, and the light wind blew strands of
silver hair this way and that.
Sanbi had to hold some of her hair away from her face, while she looked at this character Kagome told her so much about.
"A-Are you Inu Yasha?"
"Keh. Are you loosing your memory, wench?"
"WHAT THE HELL WERE YOU THINKING?!" Sanbi yelled at the poor bewildered dog demon. "I COULD OF HANDLED THAT PATHETIC
EXCUSE OF A DEMON MYSELF!"
"Not from where I'm standing!"
Sanbi's eyes looked at Inu Yasha's head. His ears twitched. *I want to touch them...* Sanbi thought as she walked
up to Inu Yasha and started playing with his ears. Inu Yasha pulled back and glared.
"Don't play with my ears, Kagome!"
"Ma-Matte yo! I'm not--"
Suddenly, three figures appeared out of the bushes. One was a girl who had a HUGE boomerang on her back, and a cat
with two tails that stood faithfully by her side. The other was a kitsune pup, with a bushy tail. The other one was a
very cute (AN: ^_^) young man who wore Buddhist priest type clothes, and carried a staff in his hand.
Sanbi only knew them by description as Sango, Shippou, and Miroku. Suddenly, the kitsune fox got very excited.
"KAGOMEEEEEE!!!" he cried out with glee, and hugged Sanbi.
"Shi-Shippou?"
"Nani?"
"Sango? Miroku?"
All of them nodded. "This has to be a dream! You guys aren't real!"
"Oi, Kagome! Did you suddenly get stupid?!" Inu Yasha asked.
"Ma-Matte yo!" Sanbi exclaimed as she set Shippou down on the ground. "I'm not Kagome! Ore wa, Sanbi! I'm Kagome's
granddaughter!"
(ore wa = (oh-lre) (wah) impolite slang for "I am...")
(AN: Should I be mean, and stop here? *Thinks* Nah! I'll continue! ^_^)
"Musaka, kono ama!" Inu Yasha yelled. "It's only been two months!"
"No! It's been 50 years!" Sanbi cried out.
(musaka (muh-sah-kah) = no way!)
Everyone was gathered in Kaede's hut. The old woman was in deep thought. "Now, child," Kaede said to Sanbi. "Are you
sure you have everything about this tale correct? One little piece of information may be important."
Sanbi nodded her head. "Just like I said. Anma-chan was upset, she went back to her time, and shot an arrow into the
well."
"What do you think, Kaede-sama?" Miroku asked.
"Hmm. It appears that the arrow Kagome shot into the well made time here slower, while her time was quickened."
"So Kagome is an old hag like you, Kaede-baabaa?"
"That was really rude, Inu Yasha." Sanbi told him. Inu Yasha just stared with a blank expression. *Kagome would have
said the same thing...* he thought.
"Keh. Like I care!"
"Well, you should start caring!" Sango yelled at him. "With out Kagome, how are we supposed to finnish the mission?!"
"You mean a shard detector?" Shippou asked.
Everyone turned to Sanbi. "Uh, I don't know about that. I don't even know how to sense them."
"Oh, great!" Inu Yasha exclaimed. "Just great! Well, we'll just have to deal with what we have."
"Oi! Kusore! I never agreed with this job!"
(kusore (koo-soh-lre) = shit head)
"Well, deal with it now!"
"I don't have to!"
"Oh well!"
"No!"
"Well, then I'll make you, bitch!"
"Then make me!"
"As long as Sanbi-sama is collecting shards with us, Inu Yasha," Miroku told them, "try to get along with her."
"Keh!"
"And while you're here, Sanbi-sama," Miroku took her hands in his. "I humbly ask you, will you bare my child?"
"Eh?!" Sanbi squeaked out.
Miroku suddenly had a huge, throbbing lump on his head because of Sango's boomerang.
"You even ask Kagome's cursed lineage, leech?" Inu Yasha asked trying not to be suprised.
"Inu Yasha?" he turned to Sanbi.
"Nani?"
"I want to try something. Try to stand in an open space. Good! Like that! Inu Yasha! OSUWARI!!!!!!"
Inu Yasha went crashing to the ground, his curses muffled by the ground.
"If I may ask, Sanbi-chan," Sango started. "I noticed you are wearing boy's clothing. May I know why?"
Sanbi shrugged. "I'm just that way."
Inu Yasha got up off the ground. "If you even think of saying 'osuwari' during the mission, you better think twice,
tomboy!"
Sanbi looked at him calmly. "Osuwari."
To Be Continued....
Next chapter: Ch. 3 "Homesick Already?!"
AN: Well, do you like so far? And thank you SOOOO much for those who are reviewing!! my responses are under the
Japanese Vocab, k? You guys are great!! ^_^
Japanese Vocabulary:
Oi = (guy slang) Hey!
Matte yo = Wait!
Sanbi = My joy; my life; or an endearment (AN: My character, Sanbi, is a tomboy)
Kono ama = You dirty slut!
Anma-chan = an endearing way of saying, "Grandma" or "Granny"
Ohayo Gazamasu = Good morning!
Daijobu = are you ok?
Kaa-san = mom; mother
Tou-san = dad; father
Resposes:
Emily Jones: Just so you and everyone else knows, Inu Yasha isn't the bad dude here. He yelled at her for a reason.
But, yea, he messed up!
YMK: Well, Inu Yasha doesn't know much about how Kagome is.... yet ^_^
Animaniac Girl: That would be an interesting story... do you have fan fic based on that? By the way, did you know
that "Inu-chan" is Japanese for "Pup" or "Puppy"? It's true! ^_^
Nea: Thank you! ^_^
rEbEcCa: I'm glad you like it so far! ^_^
miyomi-sama: I'll try to make it a happy ending, but please don't hate me if it doesn't turn out that great...
*makes puppy eyes*
Inuyasha: I'm working on the 3rd chapter as we speak! ^_^
darkangelfrmhell: Sankyou! ^_^
Solus Nox: Sure thing!
Twin Star of Suzaku: Well, I did update! ^_^
notaningen: I'm working on the third chapter!
Kurisutara: I know what you mean. I also hate it when Inu Yasha and Kagome hurt each other... sniff They're
like fire and water. They can't go near each other without getting hurt...
sk8ergurl3789: *cowers* Gomen nasai! But I wrote back, ne?
Kayo: uh... was this chapter good enough?
Zelda Gwyn: I'm writing the 3rd!
Thank you to all who took their time to read and review! You guys make me sooo happy!! ^_^
*This story is dedicated to a friend who wishes to remain anonymous. I'm sorry fate took everything away from you.
I Wish It Was Different
Ch. 2: "The Changes"
"Sanbi! It's time for breakfast!" a mother yelled to her daughter, whom was up stairs.
"Gomen nasai, Okaa-san! I'm not hungry!" the girl, Sanbi, yelled back.
"You have to eat something!" the woman argued.
"I know." the girl whispered to herself. Suddenly a decent meal would actually sound good. Sanbi's stomach started to
growl. "I'm coming, Okaa-san!" Sanbi put the items she was looking at back into the cardboard box. "Anma-chan..."
Sanbi's eyes began to water. She quickly choked back her tears, then went down stairs. There, her father was already at
the table with his newspaper in his face, and her mother at the stove.
"Ohayo Gozaimasu." Sanbi greeted, trying to be cheerful. Her father nodded his head, still buried in the paper, and her
mother turned around to greet her with a smile.
"Do you want eggs, Miroku?" her mother asked her father.
"Iie."
"Okay."
Everything went silent from there. Sanbi watched the toast pop up from the toaster. Her gray-blue eyes the went to her
breakfast in front of her. *Anma-chan always made breakfast...* Sanbi thought, as she tucked a stray lock of coal-black
hair behind her ear. *Anma-chan, I miss you already... why did you have to go?* Sanbi blinked the tears away. *Speaking of
Anma-chan, I still have to go through the items she left me.*
"Daijiobu, Sanbi?"
"Huh?" Sanbi looked up at her mother.
"You're very quiet. Are you thinking of Kagome-san?"
Sanbi nodded her answer. Her mother hugged her.
"Gomen nasai. I know you were close to her." Sanbi's mother continued cooking.
"Yes, I know. Well, thanks for breakfast, Kaa-san."
"But you only took one bite!"
"Yuki." Miroku told Sanbi's mother. "Let her be."
Sanbi looked at all the boxes Kagome left her. *I'm even staying in her room when she was a girl.* Sanbi went
over to a box she hadn't opened yet. On top there was a note by Kagome.
Dear Granddaughter,
I'm leaving my precious possessions in your care. Remember I told you all about Sengoku Jidai? All about Inu Yasha,
Miroku (whom your father is named after), Sango, Shippou, and all the others? Well, here is proof that everything I
told you was true. If you feel like going to Sengoku Jidai, be sure to take these contents with you, pull the arrow
out of the well, and proceed from there.
Love Always,
Anma-chan
Sanbi put the note down, and opened the box. Inside was a yellow backpack, that looked basically new. The bulging
contents were removed, however. There was bows and an arrow, and something shining in a small, glass container. Sanbi
carefully took it out and held it up. It was a piece of something pink, and a pink aura surrounded it. *A Shikon shard?!*
Sanbi couldn't believe that all Kagome told her was true.
*It can't be true! It just can't be!* Sanbi thought wildly to herself. *But there is only one way to find out!*
Sanbi grabbed the yellow backpack, stuffed it full of clothes, put the Shikon shard into it's side pocket, grabbed the
arrows and bow, and ran down stairs.
"Okaa-san? Otou-san?" They were at a shrine, praying.
"Yes dear?" Yuki asked her daughter.
"I'm going to be gone for a while, so please call my school and tell them I died, k?"
"Okay, dear. Have a good time!"
*My parents are SO weird!* With that last thought, Sanbi ran out to the shrine.
Sanbi removed the boards that boarded the shrine up. Sanbi stepped quickly inside, and closed it behind her. She looked
into the dim light and saw the arrow. Old memories refilled her mind....
"Anma-chan? What is that arrow doing in this well?" a five year old Sanbi asked her grandmother.
"To seal it up, Saiai-chan."
"Who put it there?"
"Me."
"Naze?"
An old Kagome sighed. The wrinkles under her eyes made her look even more tired. "To keep myself away. Now, you are not
to come back down here any more, ne? Would you like me to tell you a story about a Dog Demon named Inu Yasha?"
"Oh, yes, Anma-chan! I love stories!"
Sanbi shook her head. *No time for this!*
Sanbi ran down the stairs and pulled the arrow out. A bright pink light shot out from the well, and to the Heavens,
then disappeared. Sanbi looked down into the well, held her breath, and jumped in.
*I hope you're right, Anma-chan.*
A figure shot straight up when it saw the bright pink light disappear from the well in Inu Yasha forest.
*What the hell?! Kagome?! Are you back?!*
A tired Sanbi climbed out of the well, and looked around. *A dream?! This has to be a dream! Must of happened when I hit
my head.*
Suddenly, there was a rustling of bushes, and a demon, six feet tall, with horns growing out of it's head, came into the
clearing.
"EEEEEEEEK!!!" Sanbi freaked when she saw the ugly demon. Yellow drool dripping from it's mouth, while it yelled,
"Shikon no Tama! Shikon no Tama!"
"What?! I don't--" Sanbi gasped when she remembered the piece of the jewel in the yellow pack.
"SHIKON NO TAMA!" The demon screamed again, and this time, Sanbi took off running, remembering what Kagome told her
about demons. The six foot demon had no trouble catching up with her. Sanbi looked behind her, her heart pounding,
ready to burst from her chest. Her lungs ached for air as she pushed herself harder to run.
"Somebody help me..." Sanbi whispered to herself, then in a desperate need she shouted, "SOMEBODY HELP
MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!"
There was no mistake in that sent of her's. His ears picked up a shout, "SOMEBODY HELP MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!"
"Keh. So the wench got herself in trouble yet again?" And he took off toward the cry.
The ugly demon raised his clawed hand to smash Sanbi to bits, when suddenly, a red streak rushed between the demon and
Sanbi.
Sanbi looked behind her to see a dog-like boy, with cute, fluffy ears on his head (AN: ^_^), blocking the demon's path
to her. The dog demon pulled out a sword, that transformed into a huge fang.
*Eh? Is this what Anma-chan told me about? 'The Tesuiguia' I think she called it?*
The dog demon took one swing, and the six foot demon was dissipated into dust by a bright, white light.
The dog demon sheathed the sword into a sheath that was WAY too small for it, however, it still sheathed. The demon
boy turned and looked at Sanbi. His intense yellow eyes looked down at the girl, and the light wind blew strands of
silver hair this way and that.
Sanbi had to hold some of her hair away from her face, while she looked at this character Kagome told her so much about.
"A-Are you Inu Yasha?"
"Keh. Are you loosing your memory, wench?"
"WHAT THE HELL WERE YOU THINKING?!" Sanbi yelled at the poor bewildered dog demon. "I COULD OF HANDLED THAT PATHETIC
EXCUSE OF A DEMON MYSELF!"
"Not from where I'm standing!"
Sanbi's eyes looked at Inu Yasha's head. His ears twitched. *I want to touch them...* Sanbi thought as she walked
up to Inu Yasha and started playing with his ears. Inu Yasha pulled back and glared.
"Don't play with my ears, Kagome!"
"Ma-Matte yo! I'm not--"
Suddenly, three figures appeared out of the bushes. One was a girl who had a HUGE boomerang on her back, and a cat
with two tails that stood faithfully by her side. The other was a kitsune pup, with a bushy tail. The other one was a
very cute (AN: ^_^) young man who wore Buddhist priest type clothes, and carried a staff in his hand.
Sanbi only knew them by description as Sango, Shippou, and Miroku. Suddenly, the kitsune fox got very excited.
"KAGOMEEEEEE!!!" he cried out with glee, and hugged Sanbi.
"Shi-Shippou?"
"Nani?"
"Sango? Miroku?"
All of them nodded. "This has to be a dream! You guys aren't real!"
"Oi, Kagome! Did you suddenly get stupid?!" Inu Yasha asked.
"Ma-Matte yo!" Sanbi exclaimed as she set Shippou down on the ground. "I'm not Kagome! Ore wa, Sanbi! I'm Kagome's
granddaughter!"
(ore wa = (oh-lre) (wah) impolite slang for "I am...")
(AN: Should I be mean, and stop here? *Thinks* Nah! I'll continue! ^_^)
"Musaka, kono ama!" Inu Yasha yelled. "It's only been two months!"
"No! It's been 50 years!" Sanbi cried out.
(musaka (muh-sah-kah) = no way!)
Everyone was gathered in Kaede's hut. The old woman was in deep thought. "Now, child," Kaede said to Sanbi. "Are you
sure you have everything about this tale correct? One little piece of information may be important."
Sanbi nodded her head. "Just like I said. Anma-chan was upset, she went back to her time, and shot an arrow into the
well."
"What do you think, Kaede-sama?" Miroku asked.
"Hmm. It appears that the arrow Kagome shot into the well made time here slower, while her time was quickened."
"So Kagome is an old hag like you, Kaede-baabaa?"
"That was really rude, Inu Yasha." Sanbi told him. Inu Yasha just stared with a blank expression. *Kagome would have
said the same thing...* he thought.
"Keh. Like I care!"
"Well, you should start caring!" Sango yelled at him. "With out Kagome, how are we supposed to finnish the mission?!"
"You mean a shard detector?" Shippou asked.
Everyone turned to Sanbi. "Uh, I don't know about that. I don't even know how to sense them."
"Oh, great!" Inu Yasha exclaimed. "Just great! Well, we'll just have to deal with what we have."
"Oi! Kusore! I never agreed with this job!"
(kusore (koo-soh-lre) = shit head)
"Well, deal with it now!"
"I don't have to!"
"Oh well!"
"No!"
"Well, then I'll make you, bitch!"
"Then make me!"
"As long as Sanbi-sama is collecting shards with us, Inu Yasha," Miroku told them, "try to get along with her."
"Keh!"
"And while you're here, Sanbi-sama," Miroku took her hands in his. "I humbly ask you, will you bare my child?"
"Eh?!" Sanbi squeaked out.
Miroku suddenly had a huge, throbbing lump on his head because of Sango's boomerang.
"You even ask Kagome's cursed lineage, leech?" Inu Yasha asked trying not to be suprised.
"Inu Yasha?" he turned to Sanbi.
"Nani?"
"I want to try something. Try to stand in an open space. Good! Like that! Inu Yasha! OSUWARI!!!!!!"
Inu Yasha went crashing to the ground, his curses muffled by the ground.
"If I may ask, Sanbi-chan," Sango started. "I noticed you are wearing boy's clothing. May I know why?"
Sanbi shrugged. "I'm just that way."
Inu Yasha got up off the ground. "If you even think of saying 'osuwari' during the mission, you better think twice,
tomboy!"
Sanbi looked at him calmly. "Osuwari."
To Be Continued....
Next chapter: Ch. 3 "Homesick Already?!"
AN: Well, do you like so far? And thank you SOOOO much for those who are reviewing!! my responses are under the
Japanese Vocab, k? You guys are great!! ^_^
Japanese Vocabulary:
Oi = (guy slang) Hey!
Matte yo = Wait!
Sanbi = My joy; my life; or an endearment (AN: My character, Sanbi, is a tomboy)
Kono ama = You dirty slut!
Anma-chan = an endearing way of saying, "Grandma" or "Granny"
Ohayo Gazamasu = Good morning!
Daijobu = are you ok?
Kaa-san = mom; mother
Tou-san = dad; father
Resposes:
Emily Jones: Just so you and everyone else knows, Inu Yasha isn't the bad dude here. He yelled at her for a reason.
But, yea, he messed up!
YMK: Well, Inu Yasha doesn't know much about how Kagome is.... yet ^_^
Animaniac Girl: That would be an interesting story... do you have fan fic based on that? By the way, did you know
that "Inu-chan" is Japanese for "Pup" or "Puppy"? It's true! ^_^
Nea: Thank you! ^_^
rEbEcCa: I'm glad you like it so far! ^_^
miyomi-sama: I'll try to make it a happy ending, but please don't hate me if it doesn't turn out that great...
*makes puppy eyes*
Inuyasha: I'm working on the 3rd chapter as we speak! ^_^
darkangelfrmhell: Sankyou! ^_^
Solus Nox: Sure thing!
Twin Star of Suzaku: Well, I did update! ^_^
notaningen: I'm working on the third chapter!
Kurisutara: I know what you mean. I also hate it when Inu Yasha and Kagome hurt each other... sniff They're
like fire and water. They can't go near each other without getting hurt...
sk8ergurl3789: *cowers* Gomen nasai! But I wrote back, ne?
Kayo: uh... was this chapter good enough?
Zelda Gwyn: I'm writing the 3rd!
Thank you to all who took their time to read and review! You guys make me sooo happy!! ^_^
