OK, I need help. I just slightly edited the last chapter, and have the next
chapter nearly written, but I am looking to all of you for help. There are
some serious flaws in this story, I can feel that. I just cannot see what
they are. I need some constructive criticism, what do you like, but more
importantly, what bothers you? I mean, I know what's going to happen next
in the story, and I know how its going to end, but I can't seem to write it
correctly. This whole damn story is just depressing me right now, because
it sux so bad....so, please help!
