Warrior of the Sun

Sup I'm Freeloader This is a awesome Exalted story about a Solar named Markus and well he's just awesome you'll see PLEASE PLEASE R&R this is my first story and well I need to know what this site likes well I see ya out there.

Disclaimer: Like everything else in the world even tho I want Exalted I do not own it

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Rain poured down outside Tepet castle as Markus walked toward the gates. The two guards crossed their spears and said loudly "You may not pass!" Markus only smirked and grabbed the two spears, yanked them out of the guard's hands, and spun the spears around. Before the guards knew what hit them the metal spear tips were in their own chests. Markus put his hand up to the gate and it fell to pieces. Splinters flew everywhere, but no sound was made. Inside there was an elaborate courtyard. The rain poured down creating thick mud on the ground. Markus walked through the gate and paused to look around for a moment. It was a beautiful dirt courtyard with flowers growing on either side of the path. The architecture of the buildings was dazzling. As Markus walked further down the path the flowers curved outward and created a giant circle with a statue in the center of the circle. The statue was made out of white jade and the warrior that it depicted was made to look very strong and glorious. He wore an elaborate articulated plate that had engravings all over it and carried a gigantic sword that was only a little smaller than he. Then, right next to the statue, a man that looked exactly like the statue walk forward. The man had a smile on his face and continued to walk toward Markus.

"You're not supposed to be here" he said as what Markus knew would become his last words. He ran forward and pulled the gigantic sword out of its sheath and Markus just stood there. Right before the Dragon Blooded's sword was about to hit Markus, Markus dodged to the side and pulled his own. Markus was quick in his decision to pull his sword down on the man's arm and he did. Markus's sword only ricocheted off as his next three blows smashed into the Dragon Blooded's helmet and also causing no damage. Markus was not fazed as he knew that his weapon would probably not do much damage to one of the strongest armors in the area.

More Dragon Blooded came to the courtyard as they heard the two fighting. And they started cheering for the dragon blooded who Markus found to be named Leokul.

Markus blocked every blow that the Leokul laid and started to act like he was getting tired. Even Markus knew that by misleading and opponent is the easiest way to cause his downfall. Markus leaned on his sword with and exhausted look on his face with his shoulders hunched. The Leokul started to laugh and walked forward and pulled his sword behind his head and that was the time for Markus to act. That was the time when he was most vulnerable. Leokul couldn't dodge or parry due to the awkward weight balance needed to cause a blow to kill Markus.

Markus pulled his sword up from its place on the ground and slashed upward between the plates of the Leokul's armor. Then Markus pulled his sword upward spreading the plates and then pushed as hard as he could down cutting through the chain mail, flesh, and bones as well. Then Markus had an easy attack due to Leokul being stunned by his devastating blow. He pulled his sword out and slashed down on the Leokul's head spraying blood on to the stunned bodies of the on looking Dragon blooded.

Rain pored down on the ground as Leokul's body fell limp onto the cold mud. Blood seeped through the back and front of his armor and formed a pool of blood on the ground. The other Dragon blooded just stared at Markus with disbelief as the Tepet house's greatest warrior was slain. Markus put his foot on the Leokul's body and pulled his sword out of his head. He turned to the crowd of Dragon Blooded and noticed that more were joining the crowd. No mortal was known to have such power ever in the Realm. A Dragon Blooded could easily destroy a mortal and yet Markus had just slain the Tepet house's greatest warrior. A few others stepped forward and one swung at Markus from behind. Markus bent backwards as the sword slashed over him and did a handstand catching the sword between his feet then kicking it upward disarming the soldier behind him. Markus quickly flipped over the man behind him and put his arm around the man's neck. The whole crowd heard a snapping sound of bone breaking as the man fell limp on the ground with his head facing the wrong direction. The more that came at Markus, the more fell to his sword. One by one the Tepet house's army of Dragon Blooded were destroyed. Markus moved quickly into the castle and toward the throne room killing more guards along the way. Two arrows came whizzing at him from behind and he caught them without looking and snapped then in half with his fingers then dropped them to the ground that was cover in the blood of his enemies. Markus walk forward, slowly, up to the thrown and slew more Dragon Blooded that were being sent at him by the Leader of house Tepet. Markus had an angry look on his face with his eyebrows slanting downward. He was breathing very hard and his clothes were tattered from close slashes. He wore no armor that was visible, but instead wore black silk shirt and pants that were loose on his body. As a wind aspect dragon blooded created a small twister out of thin air Markus's clothes were blown around and a gleam emitted from under his black shirt. Markus dodged the twister quickly as it flew by him. And the whirling horror smashed into the wall and dissipated as the dagger Markus threw went through the eye slits of the Dragon Blooded's helmet. Blood started to pour out of the helmet and the as the dragon blooded reached up and pulled the dagger from his eye. The dragon blooded screamed in pain as Markus's sword pierced his abdomen. Markus stopped in front of the throne and started at the Tepet houses noble ruler Enroth. Enroth sighed and stood up.

"Well, like my daddy said right before he killed his mom" as he pulled his sword "You want anything done right you gotta do it yourself." Enroth started to slash upward. "He also said.."

Markus caught the sword in his hands holding it on either side of the blade. "Never fuck with a Solar!"(I know I know But I had to put in the blade quote it fit perfectly.) Markus clenched his hands together and the blade fell to pieces. A swirling whirlwind of Golden light appeared around Markus and grew bigger and bigger as Markus pulled back his hand with his palm facing towards Enroth. Markus let out a yell of rage as he thrusted his hand forward and for a moment time seemed to pause with Markus's palm on Enroth's chest. Then Enroth shot backwards knocking of his thrown and smashing through the stone walls of the castle into the mess area of the troops. Enroth's body landed on one of the center tables of the mess hall and the troops at the table look at Markus with shock. Markus just turned around and went out the same way he came in to the troops "You better come scoop up your friend."

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Welp that's it hope you liked it there will be more comen soon I got a lot of ideas and characters to put in so please R&R and tell me if this story is worth continuing.

-Freeloader