More Then They Asked For
Sup, Freeloader here. Hope u like my story so far. U just wait the fight scene in this chapter is the best. Hey I'm looken for new characters so if you want to be in my story just e-mail me or IM me my SN is Freeloader Laf. I am on AIM a lot but you probably have a better chance getten me on e- mail. I'm hoping to post 2 more chapters soon after this one soon but I am getten a lot of school work so it might take a while. Markus has got a way to go so I need more characters. PLEASE R&R it would be the best way to get feedback well c ya.
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Markus woke up to hear two men talking on the upper deck. He and Thomas had set sail 6 hours ago and he fell asleep almost immediately after they left the dock.
"I didn't know anyone else came with us." Markus thought to himself as he slowly got out of bed and walked towards the stairs. Markus looked up the stairs at the deck above and slowly raised his head to get a peak of the newcomer. Markus first noticed that there was another ship docked with them on the opposite side of where he was. Then he noticed that Thomas was talking to a man that Markus could not see due to the sail being in between him and Thomas, but he could see their feet and 1 other standing behind the unknown figure on the other ship. Markus slowly walked up behind the Mast and started to climb upward to get a better view of the situation and in the meantime listed to the conversation that was going on below him.
"Have you seen this man?" The Leader of the group said showing Thomas a picture of Markus.
"No not at all. Why what did he do?" Thomas said.
"This man is named Markus. His last name is unknown, but he attacked the headquarters of the Tepet house and is now trying to run. If you have any information on this man it would be greatly appreciated." The Leader said.
"Now that I think about it" Thomas started to say with a look on his face that presented to the man that he was trying to think back and had trouble remembering. " well. yes, yes, I do remember this man. I saw him.Wait where was it? Yes, I saw him at the fish market he was wearing a cloak and I cannot be sure it was him, but I do recognize that tattoo on his head." He said, noticing the Dawn Caste mark on Markus head which looked like a sun.
Markus took hold of a long rope that hung off the mast of the boat(for all you ppl out there that don't know what a mast is it's the pole that holds up the sail. | the pole on the left side) and pulled out his dagger. When Markus looked closer, he noticed that the soldiers wore the insignia of house Cathak. They must have been patrolling the Inner Sea for him. Markus also noticed that on the boat that docked with them there was a guard standing in the central area of the boat that looked like the easiest target, but there were many others in the vicinity.
Markus gripped the rope tightly as an idea popped into his head. He jumped from his position and swung down towards the guard that he had targeted just seconds earlier. Markus made contact with the man and shoved his dagger into the guard's stomach and lifted him up into the air as Markus swung back upward. When Markus reached the end of the boat he let the guard go and he fell into the water as planned. Markus then let him-self drop and pulled another dagger out of his belt. He spun the dagger around in an elaborate method and then threw it as hard as he could.(Time for a matrix swipe around the dagger) The dagger flew through the air and slammed in- between the closest guards eyes. The guard fell backwards and landed on the ground before Markus even touched the deck of the ship. Markus landed crouched and with his legs ready to spring towards the ship's mast. The guard behind him started to chase him and Markus ran forward to the mast and then kept running. Markus body was horizontal to the deck of the ship as he ran up the mast. Then Markus did a back flip, landed behind the group of soldiers and pulled his sword.
Markus's sword glowed bright blue as he slashed through one of the soldier's swords and into his chest. Markus attacked six more times before anyone seemed to move and by the time the man on Thomas's ship turned around nine of his men were dead. More than twenty more soldiers that heard the racket poured up from the bowls of the ship. And the other soldier than Markus now sensed to be a Dragon Blooded came back his own ship but stood back to wait and see how good Markus actually was.
The soldiers stood in a 2 rows slowly marching towards Markus with their spears gleaming in the sunlight. Small blue air waves seemed to make spirals around Markus's sword and as he pulled it back and let his sword fly through the air the small spirals split off his sword and formed ten duplicate swords flying to their separate targets. The swords smashed through the weak body armor of the first ten soldiers and sent them falling to the ground. The other ten just looked at each other and let out a battle cry as they ran at Markus, with their spears, at full force. Markus turned and ran to the edge of the ship and jumped off. The soldiers walked to the edge with a puzzled look on their faces and looked down only to see the waves of the Sea splashing against the boat.
The Dragon Blooded just stood their casually as he saw Markus climbing up the other side of the boat and back onto the deck. Markus walked up to where the guards where looking down at the water and looked down himself and said. "Man that guys just awesome how the hell do we compete with that?" The soldiers started to chuckle and nod in agreement as they looked over to see who it was that made the comment. The guard closest to him turned his head and started at the dripping wet pants and then slowly brought his eyes up to Markus's sopping wet shirt and then his eyes met with Markus's and widened. Markus only cocked his head to the side and said "Waaaiittt a second. Don't I look familiar? O Yea!" Markus grabbed the man's outfit at the collar and the stomach and threw him over board. The others turned to see Markus doing a triple back flip and landing on the other side of the deck.
It took them a while to gather their surroundings and realize what had happened. And while they were doing this Markus held his hands out as if he was holding a bow and then, out of thin air, a bow started forming from Markus's extended fist and then formed a bow string in his hand that was closest to his body. The shape already had the bow string pulled back and an arrow knocked. Markus let the arrow fly and the first arrow slammed into an unsuspecting soldier and just as the arrow hits Markus fires another and another until all of the poor souls had arrows stuck into them before the first hit the ground.
Markus heard a clapping sound form behind him and turned to meet whatever horror awaited him. Markus only saw the DB walking across the plank that connected the two ships "Encore, Encore" The DB said still clapping sarcastically.(for all of you that don't know what Encore means it means Again or More) As He walked across the plank water swirled up around him and then formed sea blue. The armor covered him from head to toe and you could see small bubbles coming up from his legs and slowing rising to the top. The water still seemed to move as the DB walked onto the deck of the ship which Markus was on and pulled a sword from his armor that looked exactly like his armor with bubbles coming up from the hilt to the top of the blade.
The DB charged forward and pulled his sword over his head and swung as hard as he could onto Markus. Markus released his hands and the Golden blow dissipated into the air. Then, Markus pulled two daggers from his belt, pulled them up and formed them into an x to catch the falling blade. It worked perfectly. Markus caught the blade in his daggers and then forced the giant blade to the ground. Markus ran up it and flipped over the DB and turned to stab him in the back, only to see a huge pole of water coming out of the DB's back and it slammed into him and sent him flying backwards, forcing him onto the ground near the mast. The DB turned and Markus saw the water form back around him into his armor.
"He must be able to use his armor as and extension of his body but it has to come of another part for him to use it." Markus thought to himself as he planned his next attack. Markus looked at his sheath and noticed that his sword was gone. "I must have lost it when I was in the water." He remembered. Markus felt around him for a better weapon a all he found was a spear with the tip broken off at the end behind him. Markus gripped the staff tightly and stood up.
"Ha you really think THAT had with stand a blow from THIS" The DB said as he looked up his sword from hilt to tip.
Markus shrugged his shoulders and made a face that presented to the DB that he didn't really care. The DB (Dragon Blooded) charged and yelled with rage as he started to swing as hard as he could. Markus held the staff down near his waist with his arms fully extended and clenched his hands. Then, Markus closed his eyes and focused his mind as hard as he could on the staff and breathed in deeply and release the air from his lungs. And then, a shockwave of light worthy of the Unconquered sun himself was emitted from his staff and extended in all directions. . The Dragon Blooded dropped his sword immediately and brought his hands up to his eyes letting out a scream of pain. Markus charged forward and shoved the staff into the DB's stomach and left it there. The DB brought his hands down to his stomach and grabbed it in pain. Then the DB unleashed his armor and sent a pillar forward and Markus pulled a dagger as he spun to the side and dodged the attack. Markus continued spinning and stuck his dagger into the unarmored portion of his the DB's back. Markus's sword then appeared in his hands and he stuck it into the upper spinal column of the DB's back near the neck. Blood dripped from the wound as the Markus pulled the blade out with a sick sucking sound. The DB fell to the ground and died. But not before he heard the last thing that his ears would hear which was the sound of Markus's voice saying "There's your fucking Encore."
Markus walked back up onto Thomas's boat and without a word to Thomas, undocked their ship and walked down to the deck to get some much needed sleep.
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Well that's the end of chapter 3 pleeassseee R&R I'm getten desperate here man, even flames are accepted all I want to know is if people are reading my story. We'll I had people say that my story needed more action and.well I don't know about you but I think you sure got your wish. This whole chapter was devoted to action spare the short bit in the beginning.
U got it I want it! -Freeloader
Sup, Freeloader here. Hope u like my story so far. U just wait the fight scene in this chapter is the best. Hey I'm looken for new characters so if you want to be in my story just e-mail me or IM me my SN is Freeloader Laf. I am on AIM a lot but you probably have a better chance getten me on e- mail. I'm hoping to post 2 more chapters soon after this one soon but I am getten a lot of school work so it might take a while. Markus has got a way to go so I need more characters. PLEASE R&R it would be the best way to get feedback well c ya.
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Markus woke up to hear two men talking on the upper deck. He and Thomas had set sail 6 hours ago and he fell asleep almost immediately after they left the dock.
"I didn't know anyone else came with us." Markus thought to himself as he slowly got out of bed and walked towards the stairs. Markus looked up the stairs at the deck above and slowly raised his head to get a peak of the newcomer. Markus first noticed that there was another ship docked with them on the opposite side of where he was. Then he noticed that Thomas was talking to a man that Markus could not see due to the sail being in between him and Thomas, but he could see their feet and 1 other standing behind the unknown figure on the other ship. Markus slowly walked up behind the Mast and started to climb upward to get a better view of the situation and in the meantime listed to the conversation that was going on below him.
"Have you seen this man?" The Leader of the group said showing Thomas a picture of Markus.
"No not at all. Why what did he do?" Thomas said.
"This man is named Markus. His last name is unknown, but he attacked the headquarters of the Tepet house and is now trying to run. If you have any information on this man it would be greatly appreciated." The Leader said.
"Now that I think about it" Thomas started to say with a look on his face that presented to the man that he was trying to think back and had trouble remembering. " well. yes, yes, I do remember this man. I saw him.Wait where was it? Yes, I saw him at the fish market he was wearing a cloak and I cannot be sure it was him, but I do recognize that tattoo on his head." He said, noticing the Dawn Caste mark on Markus head which looked like a sun.
Markus took hold of a long rope that hung off the mast of the boat(for all you ppl out there that don't know what a mast is it's the pole that holds up the sail. | the pole on the left side) and pulled out his dagger. When Markus looked closer, he noticed that the soldiers wore the insignia of house Cathak. They must have been patrolling the Inner Sea for him. Markus also noticed that on the boat that docked with them there was a guard standing in the central area of the boat that looked like the easiest target, but there were many others in the vicinity.
Markus gripped the rope tightly as an idea popped into his head. He jumped from his position and swung down towards the guard that he had targeted just seconds earlier. Markus made contact with the man and shoved his dagger into the guard's stomach and lifted him up into the air as Markus swung back upward. When Markus reached the end of the boat he let the guard go and he fell into the water as planned. Markus then let him-self drop and pulled another dagger out of his belt. He spun the dagger around in an elaborate method and then threw it as hard as he could.(Time for a matrix swipe around the dagger) The dagger flew through the air and slammed in- between the closest guards eyes. The guard fell backwards and landed on the ground before Markus even touched the deck of the ship. Markus landed crouched and with his legs ready to spring towards the ship's mast. The guard behind him started to chase him and Markus ran forward to the mast and then kept running. Markus body was horizontal to the deck of the ship as he ran up the mast. Then Markus did a back flip, landed behind the group of soldiers and pulled his sword.
Markus's sword glowed bright blue as he slashed through one of the soldier's swords and into his chest. Markus attacked six more times before anyone seemed to move and by the time the man on Thomas's ship turned around nine of his men were dead. More than twenty more soldiers that heard the racket poured up from the bowls of the ship. And the other soldier than Markus now sensed to be a Dragon Blooded came back his own ship but stood back to wait and see how good Markus actually was.
The soldiers stood in a 2 rows slowly marching towards Markus with their spears gleaming in the sunlight. Small blue air waves seemed to make spirals around Markus's sword and as he pulled it back and let his sword fly through the air the small spirals split off his sword and formed ten duplicate swords flying to their separate targets. The swords smashed through the weak body armor of the first ten soldiers and sent them falling to the ground. The other ten just looked at each other and let out a battle cry as they ran at Markus, with their spears, at full force. Markus turned and ran to the edge of the ship and jumped off. The soldiers walked to the edge with a puzzled look on their faces and looked down only to see the waves of the Sea splashing against the boat.
The Dragon Blooded just stood their casually as he saw Markus climbing up the other side of the boat and back onto the deck. Markus walked up to where the guards where looking down at the water and looked down himself and said. "Man that guys just awesome how the hell do we compete with that?" The soldiers started to chuckle and nod in agreement as they looked over to see who it was that made the comment. The guard closest to him turned his head and started at the dripping wet pants and then slowly brought his eyes up to Markus's sopping wet shirt and then his eyes met with Markus's and widened. Markus only cocked his head to the side and said "Waaaiittt a second. Don't I look familiar? O Yea!" Markus grabbed the man's outfit at the collar and the stomach and threw him over board. The others turned to see Markus doing a triple back flip and landing on the other side of the deck.
It took them a while to gather their surroundings and realize what had happened. And while they were doing this Markus held his hands out as if he was holding a bow and then, out of thin air, a bow started forming from Markus's extended fist and then formed a bow string in his hand that was closest to his body. The shape already had the bow string pulled back and an arrow knocked. Markus let the arrow fly and the first arrow slammed into an unsuspecting soldier and just as the arrow hits Markus fires another and another until all of the poor souls had arrows stuck into them before the first hit the ground.
Markus heard a clapping sound form behind him and turned to meet whatever horror awaited him. Markus only saw the DB walking across the plank that connected the two ships "Encore, Encore" The DB said still clapping sarcastically.(for all of you that don't know what Encore means it means Again or More) As He walked across the plank water swirled up around him and then formed sea blue. The armor covered him from head to toe and you could see small bubbles coming up from his legs and slowing rising to the top. The water still seemed to move as the DB walked onto the deck of the ship which Markus was on and pulled a sword from his armor that looked exactly like his armor with bubbles coming up from the hilt to the top of the blade.
The DB charged forward and pulled his sword over his head and swung as hard as he could onto Markus. Markus released his hands and the Golden blow dissipated into the air. Then, Markus pulled two daggers from his belt, pulled them up and formed them into an x to catch the falling blade. It worked perfectly. Markus caught the blade in his daggers and then forced the giant blade to the ground. Markus ran up it and flipped over the DB and turned to stab him in the back, only to see a huge pole of water coming out of the DB's back and it slammed into him and sent him flying backwards, forcing him onto the ground near the mast. The DB turned and Markus saw the water form back around him into his armor.
"He must be able to use his armor as and extension of his body but it has to come of another part for him to use it." Markus thought to himself as he planned his next attack. Markus looked at his sheath and noticed that his sword was gone. "I must have lost it when I was in the water." He remembered. Markus felt around him for a better weapon a all he found was a spear with the tip broken off at the end behind him. Markus gripped the staff tightly and stood up.
"Ha you really think THAT had with stand a blow from THIS" The DB said as he looked up his sword from hilt to tip.
Markus shrugged his shoulders and made a face that presented to the DB that he didn't really care. The DB (Dragon Blooded) charged and yelled with rage as he started to swing as hard as he could. Markus held the staff down near his waist with his arms fully extended and clenched his hands. Then, Markus closed his eyes and focused his mind as hard as he could on the staff and breathed in deeply and release the air from his lungs. And then, a shockwave of light worthy of the Unconquered sun himself was emitted from his staff and extended in all directions. . The Dragon Blooded dropped his sword immediately and brought his hands up to his eyes letting out a scream of pain. Markus charged forward and shoved the staff into the DB's stomach and left it there. The DB brought his hands down to his stomach and grabbed it in pain. Then the DB unleashed his armor and sent a pillar forward and Markus pulled a dagger as he spun to the side and dodged the attack. Markus continued spinning and stuck his dagger into the unarmored portion of his the DB's back. Markus's sword then appeared in his hands and he stuck it into the upper spinal column of the DB's back near the neck. Blood dripped from the wound as the Markus pulled the blade out with a sick sucking sound. The DB fell to the ground and died. But not before he heard the last thing that his ears would hear which was the sound of Markus's voice saying "There's your fucking Encore."
Markus walked back up onto Thomas's boat and without a word to Thomas, undocked their ship and walked down to the deck to get some much needed sleep.
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Well that's the end of chapter 3 pleeassseee R&R I'm getten desperate here man, even flames are accepted all I want to know is if people are reading my story. We'll I had people say that my story needed more action and.well I don't know about you but I think you sure got your wish. This whole chapter was devoted to action spare the short bit in the beginning.
U got it I want it! -Freeloader
