Evil renewed.
Hotaru: this is just my first attempt at anything besides humor. Please review and give me any ideas or characters you think would be fun or helpful. This takes place two years after the destruction of the last Deathsaurer. Disclaimer: I don't own anything except Crys!
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The Deathsaurer and the Death Stinger had been destroyed. That was true and the conflicts with Zoids seemed to dissolve into the past. The Guardian force was disbanded and everyone was living much happier lives. Van Flyheight and Fiona Elesee Lunette had settled down and moved back to his home, the wind Colony. Irvine and Moonbay were together on the road and happy as could be. Raven and Reese had disappeared into the shadows and off the face of the Earth. Only a few sightings scattered about Zi marked their existence. It was truly paradise, or so they thought. But we all know there is no such thing as true paradise. As did the Snake in the Garden of Eden lead Eve away, so too would a similar temptation. Aw but evil takes many shapes and appears in many places. Soon Zi would be facing a far more evil and powerful being then ever imagined. It all started with a good deed done to a dying stranger.
She stumbled through the desert and collapsed on the ground. Her vision swam and she saw her life pass before her eyes.
"I can't die like this" she whispered. Her throat burned and cried out for water. She'd been stranded in this desert for weeks all because of a deal gone bad. She looked up into the sky and begged for forgiveness. Just as she was prepared to die a couple came walking towards her. They stopped and looked down at her.
"Poor thing she must be dying of thirst" the girl said.
"I suppose she is, here" the boy agreed holding a full canteen of water out to her. She was about to take it when her pride got the better of her. She pulled herself up to a sitting position and folded her arms over her chest.
"I don't need your pity" she coughed. They looked at each other then down at her again. She gave them a defiant look then fell over to the ground unconscious. They both sat down next to her and poured the cold water over her lips and down her throat.
"Who do you think she is" the girl asked.
"I don't know, probably some lost kid from a nearby village." Her friend replied. Her eyes fluttered open and she jumped to her feet taking a fighting stance.
"Who are" she asked pulling out a knife and holding it above her head ready to swipe.
"My name is Reese" the girl said.
"Raven" the boy muttered. The girl gasped and dropped the blade to the ground.
"You're them?! Oh my god please don't tell anyone I was rude to you or I'll get killed" she begged. Raven and Reese looked at each other confused for a moment.
"You know of us" Reese asked.
"Know of you? The people back at my colony love you guys!" All of a sudden she stopped talking and straightened up in a more serious manner. "What brings you to these parts?"
"Just wandering"
"Well I am glad you wandered here today. I am forever in your debt. Thank you" she bowed low. "My name is Crystal but my friends call me Crys, I'm so glad I could meet you."
"Charmed I'm sure" Reese said.
"We have to be going now" Raven said getting up and turning to walk away. Crys's eyes narrowed to slits and she smirked.
"Now why ever would you be going? I owe you my life the least I can do is- " she stopped again as a loud roar echoed over the hills. She turned just in time to see a large flash of red light land behind her. It was a dinosaur like zoid with red metal and long spikes on its tail. It roared again.
"Isn't that-"
"It couldn't be" raven said firmly "Ambient was destroyed along with Hiltz two years ago!" Crys chuckled.
"You would think that Raven but your wrong, dead wrong." But it wasn't Crys speaking at all. It was ambient, though the voice was a harsher tone it was indeed human coming from the Organoid. Crys smiled as she ran her hand along the smooth metal of Ambient's neck.
"They saved me Hiltz, can't we just let them go for now" Crys asked.
"I must personally thank you for saving this girl. She is very close to me. You're lucky today for I am feeling generous. Get out of my sight or I'll kill you anyway" the Organoid Barked.
"You don't scare me Ambient even if you can talk!" Raven yelled. Ambient chuckled lightly.
"Still the simple minded fool you always were ay Raven. I'm not Ambient, it is I Hiltz" the creature announced.
"How is that possible" Reese asked.
"Its simple really you see-" but he was interrupted as Crys clamped her hands around his mouth.
"My dear Hiltz I dare say you'll spoil the surprise if you explain yourself further" she said. He nodded and she let go.
"She's controlling him as if he were a dog" Raven whispered to Reese.
"Strange" she muttered.
"Come now I don't believe strange is an accurate word for this. More like freaky phenomenon" Crys replied. Ambient/Hiltz growled at her for the 'Freaky' comment. She glared down at him. "Silence!" He lay down on the ground submissively and whimpered like a scorned puppy.
"How can you control Hiltz like that" Raven asked.
"I have a special way with Organoids and by fusing with ambient Hiltz became one. He doesn't even realize its happening the poor fool. It's too late for him now he's mine to control" she laughed coldly and simply disappeared into the night. Ambient/Hiltz followed suit and Raven and Reese were left all alone.
"We have to tell Van" Reese said.
"Yes" Raven muttered.
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Hotaru: well how bad was it? Honestly I just thought of this story as I watched the final four episodes and thought "hey what if Hiltz wasn't dead and that he wasn't the leader behind everything." Yes well flames, reviews character descriptions for OC's would be wonderfully appreciated.
Hotaru: this is just my first attempt at anything besides humor. Please review and give me any ideas or characters you think would be fun or helpful. This takes place two years after the destruction of the last Deathsaurer. Disclaimer: I don't own anything except Crys!
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
The Deathsaurer and the Death Stinger had been destroyed. That was true and the conflicts with Zoids seemed to dissolve into the past. The Guardian force was disbanded and everyone was living much happier lives. Van Flyheight and Fiona Elesee Lunette had settled down and moved back to his home, the wind Colony. Irvine and Moonbay were together on the road and happy as could be. Raven and Reese had disappeared into the shadows and off the face of the Earth. Only a few sightings scattered about Zi marked their existence. It was truly paradise, or so they thought. But we all know there is no such thing as true paradise. As did the Snake in the Garden of Eden lead Eve away, so too would a similar temptation. Aw but evil takes many shapes and appears in many places. Soon Zi would be facing a far more evil and powerful being then ever imagined. It all started with a good deed done to a dying stranger.
She stumbled through the desert and collapsed on the ground. Her vision swam and she saw her life pass before her eyes.
"I can't die like this" she whispered. Her throat burned and cried out for water. She'd been stranded in this desert for weeks all because of a deal gone bad. She looked up into the sky and begged for forgiveness. Just as she was prepared to die a couple came walking towards her. They stopped and looked down at her.
"Poor thing she must be dying of thirst" the girl said.
"I suppose she is, here" the boy agreed holding a full canteen of water out to her. She was about to take it when her pride got the better of her. She pulled herself up to a sitting position and folded her arms over her chest.
"I don't need your pity" she coughed. They looked at each other then down at her again. She gave them a defiant look then fell over to the ground unconscious. They both sat down next to her and poured the cold water over her lips and down her throat.
"Who do you think she is" the girl asked.
"I don't know, probably some lost kid from a nearby village." Her friend replied. Her eyes fluttered open and she jumped to her feet taking a fighting stance.
"Who are" she asked pulling out a knife and holding it above her head ready to swipe.
"My name is Reese" the girl said.
"Raven" the boy muttered. The girl gasped and dropped the blade to the ground.
"You're them?! Oh my god please don't tell anyone I was rude to you or I'll get killed" she begged. Raven and Reese looked at each other confused for a moment.
"You know of us" Reese asked.
"Know of you? The people back at my colony love you guys!" All of a sudden she stopped talking and straightened up in a more serious manner. "What brings you to these parts?"
"Just wandering"
"Well I am glad you wandered here today. I am forever in your debt. Thank you" she bowed low. "My name is Crystal but my friends call me Crys, I'm so glad I could meet you."
"Charmed I'm sure" Reese said.
"We have to be going now" Raven said getting up and turning to walk away. Crys's eyes narrowed to slits and she smirked.
"Now why ever would you be going? I owe you my life the least I can do is- " she stopped again as a loud roar echoed over the hills. She turned just in time to see a large flash of red light land behind her. It was a dinosaur like zoid with red metal and long spikes on its tail. It roared again.
"Isn't that-"
"It couldn't be" raven said firmly "Ambient was destroyed along with Hiltz two years ago!" Crys chuckled.
"You would think that Raven but your wrong, dead wrong." But it wasn't Crys speaking at all. It was ambient, though the voice was a harsher tone it was indeed human coming from the Organoid. Crys smiled as she ran her hand along the smooth metal of Ambient's neck.
"They saved me Hiltz, can't we just let them go for now" Crys asked.
"I must personally thank you for saving this girl. She is very close to me. You're lucky today for I am feeling generous. Get out of my sight or I'll kill you anyway" the Organoid Barked.
"You don't scare me Ambient even if you can talk!" Raven yelled. Ambient chuckled lightly.
"Still the simple minded fool you always were ay Raven. I'm not Ambient, it is I Hiltz" the creature announced.
"How is that possible" Reese asked.
"Its simple really you see-" but he was interrupted as Crys clamped her hands around his mouth.
"My dear Hiltz I dare say you'll spoil the surprise if you explain yourself further" she said. He nodded and she let go.
"She's controlling him as if he were a dog" Raven whispered to Reese.
"Strange" she muttered.
"Come now I don't believe strange is an accurate word for this. More like freaky phenomenon" Crys replied. Ambient/Hiltz growled at her for the 'Freaky' comment. She glared down at him. "Silence!" He lay down on the ground submissively and whimpered like a scorned puppy.
"How can you control Hiltz like that" Raven asked.
"I have a special way with Organoids and by fusing with ambient Hiltz became one. He doesn't even realize its happening the poor fool. It's too late for him now he's mine to control" she laughed coldly and simply disappeared into the night. Ambient/Hiltz followed suit and Raven and Reese were left all alone.
"We have to tell Van" Reese said.
"Yes" Raven muttered.
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Hotaru: well how bad was it? Honestly I just thought of this story as I watched the final four episodes and thought "hey what if Hiltz wasn't dead and that he wasn't the leader behind everything." Yes well flames, reviews character descriptions for OC's would be wonderfully appreciated.
