I replaced the other chappie with this one because the other one, in my opinion was kinda rushed. So
here's the revised chapter.
DISCLAIMER: CCS doesnt belong to me.
Trapped, Nowhere To Go
by Naomi Li
~~~CHAPTER ONE~~~
Syaoran fired his last missile and smirked as it collided with the Japanese aircraft. He picked up his radio
and said, "Mission accomplised, I'm coming home!"
"Good job Syaoran!!" Eriol, his crew tracker said, "Wait, no! More Japanese reinforcements heading your
way! At least ten F-3A's!"
"DAMN!" Syaoran shouted, "I'm out of missiles!" He stared out of the window in frustration and watched
as the Japanese pilots closed in on him. "I'm sorry Eriol, I'm caught. Send for me when you can. Tell
the captain that it has been a pleasure serving her." he sighed and saluted.
"Good bye everyone." Syaoran said before the radio went dead and a new voice spoke.
"Surrender, unit 286. Surrender or we'll shoot." the pilot said.
"I surrender." Syaoran said, "Requesting permission to land."
"Accepted." the pilot said. Syaoran grabbed a tight hold of the side of his plane and it dropped suddenly.
He then grabbed the handle and jammed it forward. His F-5 plane sped off towards Hong Kong.
"Fools, you should've shot when you had the chance." Syaoran chuckled as he approached the military
port where his crew was waiting. He hoisted himself out of the cockpit and jumped out of his fighter jet.
"Welcome back, man." Eriol said as he punched Syaoran lightly on the shoulder. He laughed as his
captain and cousin, Li Meiling made her way up to him. Her face was full of shock, and Syaoran saluted
while trying to keep his face straight.
"What would we do without you Li!" Meiling exclaimed. Syaoran shrugged and walked towards the
deck. He walked outside and looked towards the ocean. The sun was painting the sky with colors.
'I do love my job, but what would it be like to live like someone normal.' Syaoran thought as he walked
along the shore. 'Better get home, tomorrow I have to finish the flight exam.' he thought as he ran out
to the parking lot. He slipped on his black jacket and put his motorcycle helmet on. He revved up the
engine and sped off towards his apartment.
~~~Tomoeda~~~
Touya slammed the orphanage door shut. "KUSO!!!" he yelled.
"Niichan! Sh! The children are asleep." Sakura, his sister said. "What happened?"
"We lost the Hong Kong fighter pilot. I should've shot it down when I had the chance!" Touya said angrily.
"It's ok, niichan, you can try again next time, the man is bound to get assigned to a mission again, if he
is as good as he sounds." Sakura comforted her brother.
"I suppose..." Touya said as he went to his room to ponder.
"I have to check on the captives. I hate seeing those poor people locked up in cages like animals. Even
animals do not deserve that kind of treatment." Sakura said as she slipped on her shoes and headed out
the door.
"Kaniki!! Where are you!!" Sakura called to a guard who appeared behind her and put his hands around
her waist.
"Get off! I just came to check on the captives." Sakura said as she pried the boy's fingers off of her.
"They're in there." he said irritably as Sakura walked in and looked around. She spotted a girl in a
cell at the corner.
"KANIKI you baka! Women were not to be captured!!" Sakura bellowed in the boy's face and she slapped
him. "LEARN!" she yelled as she yanked the keys off his belt and unlocked the girl's cell and offered her
a hand.
"It's ok, I'm not going to hurt you. You are coming to the house with me, and if you'd like you can help
me take care of the orphans there." Sakura offered.
"Hai, I would like that." the girl said quietly as she allowed Sakura to lead her to the exit.
"Can you wait here a minute?" Sakura asked the girl. She nodded silently. Sakura walked out of the
prison and lugged in a box that was about her size.
She tipped it over and brought out homecooked plates of food. She walked up to each cell and handed
the captives each a tray with steaming food on it. She smiled warmly as she made her way back to the
girl.
"I never caught your name." Sakura said as she looked at the girl. "Tomoyo desu...Tomoyo Daidouji."
the girl said.
"Tomoyo, ne? May I call you Tomoyo-chan?" Sakura asked as Tomoyo nodded. "I never got your name
either." Tomoyo said.
"Sakura Kinomoto. You can call me Sakura-chan!" she said happily.
Tomoyo followed Sakura into the orphanage. "Gomen nasai Sakura-chan, demo, could I use the phone?"
Tomoyo asked shyly.
"Of course! It's right over there." Sakura said, "Take as long as you want."
"Arigato gozaimasu." Tomoyo said as she made her way over to the phone and picked it up. She pushed
a few buttons and the tone rang.
"Wei, Hong Kong Military Airport, Sector 3. How may I help you?" the person spoke.
"I would like to speak to Commander Li please." Tomoyo said sweetly.
"Hai." the person said.
"Moshi moshi, Li-kun." Tomoyo said.
"TOMOYO?!" Syaoran yelled into the phone by accident.
"Hai, I'm in an orphanage run by a kind girl my age, her name is Kinomoto Sakura." Tomoyo replied, "I've
missed you all so much!"
"I have missed you too Tomoyo. But I cannot talk, Hiiragizawa is coming and if he saw me talking to you,
he'd hop right into his jet and blow up Japan to rescue you. What is the phone number at the orphanage
you are at?" Syaoran asked.
"485 748 956." Tomoyo said.
"I will contact you soon Tomoyo-chan." Syaoran said.
"Until then commander!" Tomoyo saluted and she hung up.
Tomoyo felt something pulling on her hand.
'Oh no! Did someone hear my call?' she thought as she turned to look at the person.
CLIFFHANGER!!
This was just the prologue!!
Review, onegai!
.:NL:.
here's the revised chapter.
DISCLAIMER: CCS doesnt belong to me.
Trapped, Nowhere To Go
by Naomi Li
~~~CHAPTER ONE~~~
Syaoran fired his last missile and smirked as it collided with the Japanese aircraft. He picked up his radio
and said, "Mission accomplised, I'm coming home!"
"Good job Syaoran!!" Eriol, his crew tracker said, "Wait, no! More Japanese reinforcements heading your
way! At least ten F-3A's!"
"DAMN!" Syaoran shouted, "I'm out of missiles!" He stared out of the window in frustration and watched
as the Japanese pilots closed in on him. "I'm sorry Eriol, I'm caught. Send for me when you can. Tell
the captain that it has been a pleasure serving her." he sighed and saluted.
"Good bye everyone." Syaoran said before the radio went dead and a new voice spoke.
"Surrender, unit 286. Surrender or we'll shoot." the pilot said.
"I surrender." Syaoran said, "Requesting permission to land."
"Accepted." the pilot said. Syaoran grabbed a tight hold of the side of his plane and it dropped suddenly.
He then grabbed the handle and jammed it forward. His F-5 plane sped off towards Hong Kong.
"Fools, you should've shot when you had the chance." Syaoran chuckled as he approached the military
port where his crew was waiting. He hoisted himself out of the cockpit and jumped out of his fighter jet.
"Welcome back, man." Eriol said as he punched Syaoran lightly on the shoulder. He laughed as his
captain and cousin, Li Meiling made her way up to him. Her face was full of shock, and Syaoran saluted
while trying to keep his face straight.
"What would we do without you Li!" Meiling exclaimed. Syaoran shrugged and walked towards the
deck. He walked outside and looked towards the ocean. The sun was painting the sky with colors.
'I do love my job, but what would it be like to live like someone normal.' Syaoran thought as he walked
along the shore. 'Better get home, tomorrow I have to finish the flight exam.' he thought as he ran out
to the parking lot. He slipped on his black jacket and put his motorcycle helmet on. He revved up the
engine and sped off towards his apartment.
~~~Tomoeda~~~
Touya slammed the orphanage door shut. "KUSO!!!" he yelled.
"Niichan! Sh! The children are asleep." Sakura, his sister said. "What happened?"
"We lost the Hong Kong fighter pilot. I should've shot it down when I had the chance!" Touya said angrily.
"It's ok, niichan, you can try again next time, the man is bound to get assigned to a mission again, if he
is as good as he sounds." Sakura comforted her brother.
"I suppose..." Touya said as he went to his room to ponder.
"I have to check on the captives. I hate seeing those poor people locked up in cages like animals. Even
animals do not deserve that kind of treatment." Sakura said as she slipped on her shoes and headed out
the door.
"Kaniki!! Where are you!!" Sakura called to a guard who appeared behind her and put his hands around
her waist.
"Get off! I just came to check on the captives." Sakura said as she pried the boy's fingers off of her.
"They're in there." he said irritably as Sakura walked in and looked around. She spotted a girl in a
cell at the corner.
"KANIKI you baka! Women were not to be captured!!" Sakura bellowed in the boy's face and she slapped
him. "LEARN!" she yelled as she yanked the keys off his belt and unlocked the girl's cell and offered her
a hand.
"It's ok, I'm not going to hurt you. You are coming to the house with me, and if you'd like you can help
me take care of the orphans there." Sakura offered.
"Hai, I would like that." the girl said quietly as she allowed Sakura to lead her to the exit.
"Can you wait here a minute?" Sakura asked the girl. She nodded silently. Sakura walked out of the
prison and lugged in a box that was about her size.
She tipped it over and brought out homecooked plates of food. She walked up to each cell and handed
the captives each a tray with steaming food on it. She smiled warmly as she made her way back to the
girl.
"I never caught your name." Sakura said as she looked at the girl. "Tomoyo desu...Tomoyo Daidouji."
the girl said.
"Tomoyo, ne? May I call you Tomoyo-chan?" Sakura asked as Tomoyo nodded. "I never got your name
either." Tomoyo said.
"Sakura Kinomoto. You can call me Sakura-chan!" she said happily.
Tomoyo followed Sakura into the orphanage. "Gomen nasai Sakura-chan, demo, could I use the phone?"
Tomoyo asked shyly.
"Of course! It's right over there." Sakura said, "Take as long as you want."
"Arigato gozaimasu." Tomoyo said as she made her way over to the phone and picked it up. She pushed
a few buttons and the tone rang.
"Wei, Hong Kong Military Airport, Sector 3. How may I help you?" the person spoke.
"I would like to speak to Commander Li please." Tomoyo said sweetly.
"Hai." the person said.
"Moshi moshi, Li-kun." Tomoyo said.
"TOMOYO?!" Syaoran yelled into the phone by accident.
"Hai, I'm in an orphanage run by a kind girl my age, her name is Kinomoto Sakura." Tomoyo replied, "I've
missed you all so much!"
"I have missed you too Tomoyo. But I cannot talk, Hiiragizawa is coming and if he saw me talking to you,
he'd hop right into his jet and blow up Japan to rescue you. What is the phone number at the orphanage
you are at?" Syaoran asked.
"485 748 956." Tomoyo said.
"I will contact you soon Tomoyo-chan." Syaoran said.
"Until then commander!" Tomoyo saluted and she hung up.
Tomoyo felt something pulling on her hand.
'Oh no! Did someone hear my call?' she thought as she turned to look at the person.
CLIFFHANGER!!
This was just the prologue!!
Review, onegai!
.:NL:.
