I meant to get Chapters 5 and 6 up last night, but for some reason every time I tried doing anything on FF, it told me Load denied and I couldn't figure out why. So I couldn't get it up yesterday. As for the format of Chapter 5, I didn't get the chance to fix that, but I hope this chapter will be better. I will get chapter 7 up once I get 6 reviews, so if you want to read the rest of the story, please review. And remember, since this is my first story, I want constructive criticism only, no flames please
Chapter 6

As soon as I got home, I picked up the phone to call Jason and let him know

how it went. "Hey. So how'd it go?" he asked. I laughed. "How'd you know it was

me?" I asked. "I was waiting for you to call. So how'd it go?" he asked again. "It was

fun. We stayed at the resturant and had dinner, then we went bowling. Then we went

back to the resturant and talked for a few minutes then left. It was pretty fun." I told

him. He chuckled. "See?I told you you'd have fun. Anyway, I don't know if you want

to come, but Billy has this science fair type thing tomorrow afternoon. He just found

out about it today. But the rest of us are going just to lend moral support." he told

me. I nodded. "I'll come. It wouldn't be fair to Billy if only the 4 of you went. We're a

team, we should all go. What time is it at?" I asked. "1:30." he responded. I wrote it

down just so I would remember it. "I can make it. I'm meeting David again

tomorrow, but not until 5:00." I said, just as my parents had come in the door. Since

I wasn't actually supposed to be using the phone, I noticed the disapproving looks I

was getting from my parents. "Jason, I gotta go. I'll see you tomorrow." I told him,

hanging up and looking at my parents. Being the type of person who hardly ever got

in trouble for anything, after I had blown up at my parents for what seemed like

hours, they had ended up taking away my phone privligages. It was rare for me to

get into trouble, and when I did, I knew I had done something wrong. Like now. I

wasn't supposed to be on the phone, so I'd probably lose that longer. They didn't say

anything, just frowned at me and went out into the living room. I slipped upstairs to

my room and took out the paper bag I had hidden under my bed 2 days before. I

took out the bottle I had stashed there and looked at it. I had tasted alcohol before

and hadn't liked the taste of it. I also knew what it could do to you. But I had also

heard that alcohol helped you get rid of a lot of problems. At the time, I thought it

might be helpful to try. So I opened the bottle and took a big swig. I frowned at the

taste, but continued drinking it until I noticed the whole bottle was gone. I made sure

my parents were no where in sight and crept downstairs to the kitchen. My parents

had left again, which was fine with me because I prefered not to be anywhere near

them. I knew my dad kept alcohol in the house, beer, wine, you name it, it was

probably there. I took a beer can out of the fridge and went back up to my room.