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This is my first attempt at a Zoids fanfic, to you may need to correct a lot. This is based on the chaotic century version when they're a little bit more grown up than when we first saw them? Confused? I'm sure you'll start to understand once you start reading!
This will be about Raven, how he actually falls in love and with whom. ^_^ Hope you'll like it!
Raven attacks (Chapter 1)
"Shadow! What city are we going to?" asked Raven.
"The city called Laken." He answered. "Humph. Why is taking so long then? I thought we'd be there already." He complained.
"I told you to go northeast, but you went north. No we must go the East." Answered Shadow.
"Well then, let's pick up the speed!" He said. The Genobreaker went considerably faster. "We'll be there in no time now." He smirked and laughed.
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The girl who lived in the city, or more like a village, Laken, was out helping the ladies pick rice. She had brown, straight, silky hair that shined, deep brown eyes, and a slim figure. Suddenly, she saw something red on the horizon.
"What's that?" Everyone asked. They went back to their work, until the rockets roar was growing louder, and soon the ground started. Women and girls started screaming, dropping their sacks of rice and running in pure terror.
Melinda, the girl's name, was knocked to the ground and was knocked unconscious.
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"Heh, this'll all just be too easy." Raven said to himself. Shadow agreed with him. He started destroying the village, pleased from hearing the cries of the village folk. Five minutes later, while examining his work, Shadow said there was someone out there.
"Shadow, I destroyed everything and everyone. There is no way someone had survived." He informed Shadow.
"No, no, she wasn't in the village. She was in the rice fields, lying on the ground. There is also a little girl beside her too." Shadow explained.
"Humph, let them be. I see no reason why you informed me of that." Raven said.
"They could turn us in and give our position away." Shadow said.
Raven had been trying very hard not to be seen by people lately. He had started to hate fighting the large numbers of Zoids. Oh, they were easy, the just got annoying sometimes.
Raven grumbled and said, "Alright, you win. We'll take them as hostages. For what, I'll have to think that up." He jumped out of his Zoid. The little girl next to Melinda looked badly hurt and might not live. She looked to be about two and was crying hysterically. Raven glared at her and then picked her up, rocked her and said some soft words. He let Shadow take Melinda. He put Melinda in the backseat of the cockpit.
"Shadow! Get a first aid kit; this girl needs some treatment." Said Raven. Shadow got the First Aid kit. Raven tried to fix her up as best he could, but it seemed she had a broken arm. She had some major cuts and some minor bruises, but that was about all. He got a flat board and wrapped medical tape around her arm. That'll have to do for now. He thought.
Raven got into the cockpit, and tried to put the little girl in the backseat, but she clung to him like a magnet. He let her sit in his lap in the front seat.
"What's your name?" he asked the little girl. "Cristhie." She said.
"Christie?" She nodded her head proudly. "Cute." Was the last thing said in the cockpit that night.
Christie fell asleep on Raven's lap, and Raven himself was getting pretty tired. "Shadow." He said softly, as not to wake the sleeping girl.
"Yes?" asked Shadow. "Will you control the Genobreaker for awhile? I need some sleep."
"Sure." Said Shadow. "Thanks." He made sure Christie was comfortable and not too cold, and fell asleep.
Raven dreamed he was near a rocky cliff. He was looking up at it when he heard a scream. He suddenly fell for some reason and his head landed on an extremely hard rock. (Wait, aren't most rocks extremely hard?) He got up, but then fell again. His head hurt like hell.
Suddenly, he was awake, and his head hurt. Really bad. Shadow had been trying to wake him up, but it seems Melinda succeeded first by taking a piece of metal and banging it on Raven's head.
"STOP THAT NOW!!!" Raven yelled, glaring back at Melinda. She was frightened; she hadn't known he would wake up so quickly and angrily. But of course, wouldn't you be cranky if someone woke you up by banging a piece of metal on your head?
She sat back, staring at her feet. Christie had woken up and started to cry because she was hungry.
God, what have I done? He asked himself.
Well, what do you guys think so far? I love reviews, good and bad! Please set me straight if I've gotten something wrong too, that would be greatly appreciated!
This is my first attempt at a Zoids fanfic, to you may need to correct a lot. This is based on the chaotic century version when they're a little bit more grown up than when we first saw them? Confused? I'm sure you'll start to understand once you start reading!
This will be about Raven, how he actually falls in love and with whom. ^_^ Hope you'll like it!
Raven attacks (Chapter 1)
"Shadow! What city are we going to?" asked Raven.
"The city called Laken." He answered. "Humph. Why is taking so long then? I thought we'd be there already." He complained.
"I told you to go northeast, but you went north. No we must go the East." Answered Shadow.
"Well then, let's pick up the speed!" He said. The Genobreaker went considerably faster. "We'll be there in no time now." He smirked and laughed.
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The girl who lived in the city, or more like a village, Laken, was out helping the ladies pick rice. She had brown, straight, silky hair that shined, deep brown eyes, and a slim figure. Suddenly, she saw something red on the horizon.
"What's that?" Everyone asked. They went back to their work, until the rockets roar was growing louder, and soon the ground started. Women and girls started screaming, dropping their sacks of rice and running in pure terror.
Melinda, the girl's name, was knocked to the ground and was knocked unconscious.
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"Heh, this'll all just be too easy." Raven said to himself. Shadow agreed with him. He started destroying the village, pleased from hearing the cries of the village folk. Five minutes later, while examining his work, Shadow said there was someone out there.
"Shadow, I destroyed everything and everyone. There is no way someone had survived." He informed Shadow.
"No, no, she wasn't in the village. She was in the rice fields, lying on the ground. There is also a little girl beside her too." Shadow explained.
"Humph, let them be. I see no reason why you informed me of that." Raven said.
"They could turn us in and give our position away." Shadow said.
Raven had been trying very hard not to be seen by people lately. He had started to hate fighting the large numbers of Zoids. Oh, they were easy, the just got annoying sometimes.
Raven grumbled and said, "Alright, you win. We'll take them as hostages. For what, I'll have to think that up." He jumped out of his Zoid. The little girl next to Melinda looked badly hurt and might not live. She looked to be about two and was crying hysterically. Raven glared at her and then picked her up, rocked her and said some soft words. He let Shadow take Melinda. He put Melinda in the backseat of the cockpit.
"Shadow! Get a first aid kit; this girl needs some treatment." Said Raven. Shadow got the First Aid kit. Raven tried to fix her up as best he could, but it seemed she had a broken arm. She had some major cuts and some minor bruises, but that was about all. He got a flat board and wrapped medical tape around her arm. That'll have to do for now. He thought.
Raven got into the cockpit, and tried to put the little girl in the backseat, but she clung to him like a magnet. He let her sit in his lap in the front seat.
"What's your name?" he asked the little girl. "Cristhie." She said.
"Christie?" She nodded her head proudly. "Cute." Was the last thing said in the cockpit that night.
Christie fell asleep on Raven's lap, and Raven himself was getting pretty tired. "Shadow." He said softly, as not to wake the sleeping girl.
"Yes?" asked Shadow. "Will you control the Genobreaker for awhile? I need some sleep."
"Sure." Said Shadow. "Thanks." He made sure Christie was comfortable and not too cold, and fell asleep.
Raven dreamed he was near a rocky cliff. He was looking up at it when he heard a scream. He suddenly fell for some reason and his head landed on an extremely hard rock. (Wait, aren't most rocks extremely hard?) He got up, but then fell again. His head hurt like hell.
Suddenly, he was awake, and his head hurt. Really bad. Shadow had been trying to wake him up, but it seems Melinda succeeded first by taking a piece of metal and banging it on Raven's head.
"STOP THAT NOW!!!" Raven yelled, glaring back at Melinda. She was frightened; she hadn't known he would wake up so quickly and angrily. But of course, wouldn't you be cranky if someone woke you up by banging a piece of metal on your head?
She sat back, staring at her feet. Christie had woken up and started to cry because she was hungry.
God, what have I done? He asked himself.
Well, what do you guys think so far? I love reviews, good and bad! Please set me straight if I've gotten something wrong too, that would be greatly appreciated!
