Disclaimer: I don't own Zoids. Too bad, :P
I'll be trying a lot harder to get the chapters up, I promise! I've been sorta lazy about them, have any of you noticed that? Well, here's chapter 23!!!
Raven Falls in Love
Guess Who!
Chapter 23
"Zeke! I really need you!" Van said desperately. Zeke shook his head. -This is your battle, not mine. -
"Fine! I'll do just fine without you anyways!" Van cried before getting hit by Melinda again.
"MELINDA! YOU'LL GET IT!" Van yelled angrily. "Then come and get me!" Melinda answered while shooting a few missiles. Van easily dodged them and came charging at Melinda. Melinda smirked. 'Finally! A real battle!' she thought.
"Here I come!" Melinda yelled and bravely jumped forward. "WHAT?!" Van cried. He turned so his side was facing Melinda instead. Van got bashed on the side pretty hard.
"Argh, can't you battle like a normal person?!" Van asked with a trace of annoyance in his voice.
"Normal? Explain normal to me." She said while pouncing on him.
"Like, uh, I don't know! With missiles and firepower!"
"Sorry, I don't have much of that!" She answered while knocking him off his feet.
"Man, Van's really getting a beating." Irvine said.
"Hey, this might be good for him." Moonbay suggested.
"Are you sure Moonbay?" Fiona asked.
"Oh yeah. That kids just had 1 too many wins. He needs a good beating once in a while!"
Fiona sighed. She didn't think this would turn out too well on Van's part.
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Raven trekked on doggedly. Shadow ran loyally beside the Genosaurer. Raven eagerly over every hill, expecting to see Melinda there, waiting, and running up to him and hugging him, saying she was sorry and loved him too much to stay away from him. Then he would put his arms around her waist, look down at her, then have a nice, long, sweet kiss that would make everyone awe and make Van jealous.
He smiled to himself, then quickly took the smile off his lips. 'She definetly won't be doing that when I arrive.'
He pretended he was at Melinda camp with Van, Fiona, Irvine, and Moonbay. Everyone would be looking at Raven and Melinda, waiting to hear Raven explain. "Melinda, I-"
"RAVEN!" Melinda yelled. "Don't even explain, I don't want to know. We're through. I don't want to see you again. Ever. Now get outa here or I will make you!" She threatened.
Raven shivered. 'That's probably what it's gonna be like.' He thought. 'Or I may never see her again. At all.'
'Or...Or Van could be charming her.' He thought reluctantly.
**************he's imagining this*****************
"Melinda, forget about Raven. Come with me." Van said, leaning against a Harley in a leather jacket. He was offering a biking helmet to her.
"Alright." Melinda answered, walking over to him, grabbing the helmet and getting on the bike.
AN: Ok, ok, that's not what he was thinking! Here's what he was really thinking. I just HAD to put that in, sorry.
"Melinda, forget about Raven. Come with me." Van said, offering his left hand. Melinda look around, uncertain. Van's eyes softened. "Raven hurt you. Bad. I promise I won't do that to you." Melinda looked up at Van. Van moved closer, looking at her with pleading eyes.
Melinda put her head on Van's chest and closes her eyes. "I'll go with you." She says while Van wraps his arms around her. "Ok." He says softly through her long, silky hair.
***************End of his imagination*****************
"Van, if I catch you doing that, I will get you!" Raven whispered. 'Wait. I'm not sure how Melinda will react to Van, so...' He thought. He shook his head. 'I should think about other things, not Melinda.' He looked over and saw high rock wall sticking out from the ground and a large pile of rocks right next to it. And a little to the right, he saw some zoid tracks! "She must've been here!"
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Van panted, thinking fast. He was behind a cliff, and if Melinda came he'd be done for. 'I'm not going to lose against a girl!' He thought.
"Hi Van."
"What?!" Van yelled. Raven's Genosaurer appeared behind a ledge. "Raven! What are you doing here?"
"I want to talk to Melinda."
"Then talk to me." Melinda answered. She was out of her Zoid, standing nobly on the ledge of the cliff, staring hard at Raven.
Ok, now I really need your opinion! I can't make the next chapter without it! Would you like...
More Raven/Melinda romance
More battles
More humor
Or...
More fighting between everyone?!
You don't have to answer, but it would really help me out if you did! Until I get at least 5, I'm not starting the next chapter! It can be through a review or email, just tell me what ya want!
Well, hope you enjoyed the chapter! Don't forget to review~ *WINK WINK!!!*
I'll be trying a lot harder to get the chapters up, I promise! I've been sorta lazy about them, have any of you noticed that? Well, here's chapter 23!!!
Raven Falls in Love
Guess Who!
Chapter 23
"Zeke! I really need you!" Van said desperately. Zeke shook his head. -This is your battle, not mine. -
"Fine! I'll do just fine without you anyways!" Van cried before getting hit by Melinda again.
"MELINDA! YOU'LL GET IT!" Van yelled angrily. "Then come and get me!" Melinda answered while shooting a few missiles. Van easily dodged them and came charging at Melinda. Melinda smirked. 'Finally! A real battle!' she thought.
"Here I come!" Melinda yelled and bravely jumped forward. "WHAT?!" Van cried. He turned so his side was facing Melinda instead. Van got bashed on the side pretty hard.
"Argh, can't you battle like a normal person?!" Van asked with a trace of annoyance in his voice.
"Normal? Explain normal to me." She said while pouncing on him.
"Like, uh, I don't know! With missiles and firepower!"
"Sorry, I don't have much of that!" She answered while knocking him off his feet.
"Man, Van's really getting a beating." Irvine said.
"Hey, this might be good for him." Moonbay suggested.
"Are you sure Moonbay?" Fiona asked.
"Oh yeah. That kids just had 1 too many wins. He needs a good beating once in a while!"
Fiona sighed. She didn't think this would turn out too well on Van's part.
*****************************************************
Raven trekked on doggedly. Shadow ran loyally beside the Genosaurer. Raven eagerly over every hill, expecting to see Melinda there, waiting, and running up to him and hugging him, saying she was sorry and loved him too much to stay away from him. Then he would put his arms around her waist, look down at her, then have a nice, long, sweet kiss that would make everyone awe and make Van jealous.
He smiled to himself, then quickly took the smile off his lips. 'She definetly won't be doing that when I arrive.'
He pretended he was at Melinda camp with Van, Fiona, Irvine, and Moonbay. Everyone would be looking at Raven and Melinda, waiting to hear Raven explain. "Melinda, I-"
"RAVEN!" Melinda yelled. "Don't even explain, I don't want to know. We're through. I don't want to see you again. Ever. Now get outa here or I will make you!" She threatened.
Raven shivered. 'That's probably what it's gonna be like.' He thought. 'Or I may never see her again. At all.'
'Or...Or Van could be charming her.' He thought reluctantly.
**************he's imagining this*****************
"Melinda, forget about Raven. Come with me." Van said, leaning against a Harley in a leather jacket. He was offering a biking helmet to her.
"Alright." Melinda answered, walking over to him, grabbing the helmet and getting on the bike.
AN: Ok, ok, that's not what he was thinking! Here's what he was really thinking. I just HAD to put that in, sorry.
"Melinda, forget about Raven. Come with me." Van said, offering his left hand. Melinda look around, uncertain. Van's eyes softened. "Raven hurt you. Bad. I promise I won't do that to you." Melinda looked up at Van. Van moved closer, looking at her with pleading eyes.
Melinda put her head on Van's chest and closes her eyes. "I'll go with you." She says while Van wraps his arms around her. "Ok." He says softly through her long, silky hair.
***************End of his imagination*****************
"Van, if I catch you doing that, I will get you!" Raven whispered. 'Wait. I'm not sure how Melinda will react to Van, so...' He thought. He shook his head. 'I should think about other things, not Melinda.' He looked over and saw high rock wall sticking out from the ground and a large pile of rocks right next to it. And a little to the right, he saw some zoid tracks! "She must've been here!"
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Van panted, thinking fast. He was behind a cliff, and if Melinda came he'd be done for. 'I'm not going to lose against a girl!' He thought.
"Hi Van."
"What?!" Van yelled. Raven's Genosaurer appeared behind a ledge. "Raven! What are you doing here?"
"I want to talk to Melinda."
"Then talk to me." Melinda answered. She was out of her Zoid, standing nobly on the ledge of the cliff, staring hard at Raven.
Ok, now I really need your opinion! I can't make the next chapter without it! Would you like...
More Raven/Melinda romance
More battles
More humor
Or...
More fighting between everyone?!
You don't have to answer, but it would really help me out if you did! Until I get at least 5, I'm not starting the next chapter! It can be through a review or email, just tell me what ya want!
Well, hope you enjoyed the chapter! Don't forget to review~ *WINK WINK!!!*
