My dad wouldn't do or say things like in the story o.k. and please review
because I need pointers because I'm a beginner at making stories and please
review =) I would most likely do the same thing in real life.
I'm playing game when my dad comes in with a duck
Me: what the hell is that for?
Dad: Well your mother is out and I'm going to cook today
A cloud comes from my head and I see a coffin WITH ME INSIDE IT!
So I run to kitchen and
Dad: I'm done!! (In a tuney voice)
Me: AHHHHHHHH!
Me: I'm not eating
Dad: You can't leave in till you
Picks up a knife
And chops of the duck's head
HAAAAAA! STUPID DUCK (not in story)
Dad: have raw duck
Me: Dad why is it still moving
Me and my Dad: AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
We run around in circles until we bash our heads against the wall
Duck: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! (Even thought it has no head it can laugh)
What will the duck do to us?
You can choose! (Sorry for taking your idea Sailor Saturn)
The duck can kill us
The duck can eat us
The duck can leave us alone and terrorize the world
I can wake up and call the U.S navy
I'm playing game when my dad comes in with a duck
Me: what the hell is that for?
Dad: Well your mother is out and I'm going to cook today
A cloud comes from my head and I see a coffin WITH ME INSIDE IT!
So I run to kitchen and
Dad: I'm done!! (In a tuney voice)
Me: AHHHHHHHH!
Me: I'm not eating
Dad: You can't leave in till you
Picks up a knife
And chops of the duck's head
HAAAAAA! STUPID DUCK (not in story)
Dad: have raw duck
Me: Dad why is it still moving
Me and my Dad: AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
We run around in circles until we bash our heads against the wall
Duck: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! (Even thought it has no head it can laugh)
What will the duck do to us?
You can choose! (Sorry for taking your idea Sailor Saturn)
The duck can kill us
The duck can eat us
The duck can leave us alone and terrorize the world
I can wake up and call the U.S navy
