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Rosebud Phaerietaylez
Chapter 10
The Vision
I am sitting here,
Meditating at night
In sadness.
And sadness unlike any other.
I realize that my time
Will soon come,
When I will be with
The One.
Dew gathers on the leaves of the trees
And foliage, and a little leaf
Floats on a lake
Just created from yesterday's
Downpour.
And here I am,
Dressed in white,
Meditating,
Looking at the heavens,
And it seems the world
Will be lost forever.
I cry silently,
In anguish, frustration.
I now bear the sorrows-
Lord, please carry this yoke
That weighs down
On my shoulders!
And then, as my teardrops
Splash onto the grass,
One light, two lights, three,
A thousand, and then a million
Swirl across the midnight sky
Like shooting stars turned
Into comets.
As the dance around,
My eyes become wide-open.
The heavens part,
And the sun rises
In all its glory.
And now the divine wind,
That wind that would bring
Happiness and peace,
Blows towards me.
My hair flies in the wind,
And suddenly, just suddenly,
I realize
There will be peace in the world.
Those tears I now cry,
For you, my brothers and sisters.
You will now find happiness
When you breathe in the divine wind
Be one, and cry tears of joy.
This I ask of you.
Please, keep that promise,
That prophecy, that proposition
Alive.
For I will still be crying,
For I am happy
Living this life in this world,
Always.
I am the divine wind,
And I will be crying,
And sighing happily
Until the end of the world,
For you.
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End Chapter 10
Review. Please?
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Rosebud Phaerietaylez
Chapter 10
The Vision
I am sitting here,
Meditating at night
In sadness.
And sadness unlike any other.
I realize that my time
Will soon come,
When I will be with
The One.
Dew gathers on the leaves of the trees
And foliage, and a little leaf
Floats on a lake
Just created from yesterday's
Downpour.
And here I am,
Dressed in white,
Meditating,
Looking at the heavens,
And it seems the world
Will be lost forever.
I cry silently,
In anguish, frustration.
I now bear the sorrows-
Lord, please carry this yoke
That weighs down
On my shoulders!
And then, as my teardrops
Splash onto the grass,
One light, two lights, three,
A thousand, and then a million
Swirl across the midnight sky
Like shooting stars turned
Into comets.
As the dance around,
My eyes become wide-open.
The heavens part,
And the sun rises
In all its glory.
And now the divine wind,
That wind that would bring
Happiness and peace,
Blows towards me.
My hair flies in the wind,
And suddenly, just suddenly,
I realize
There will be peace in the world.
Those tears I now cry,
For you, my brothers and sisters.
You will now find happiness
When you breathe in the divine wind
Be one, and cry tears of joy.
This I ask of you.
Please, keep that promise,
That prophecy, that proposition
Alive.
For I will still be crying,
For I am happy
Living this life in this world,
Always.
I am the divine wind,
And I will be crying,
And sighing happily
Until the end of the world,
For you.
******
End Chapter 10
Review. Please?
