Here's the translations of the elvish sentences in my poem. If you find errors, please tell me !!!
Ai Haldir o Lorien i mòr erin le
Ah Haldir of Lorien the darkness is on you
Firich, tûr gwaith lîn ù-beria le
You die, the power of your people don't protect you
Tiro i gûr. Andelu i ven.
Look at the death. The path is very dangerous.
Arda = Elvish word for Middle-Earth.
Edhilion = Son of the Elves
Hiro hon hîdh ab 'wanath.
May he find peace after his death.
(adaptation of Legolas' words in TTT when he cries over Merry and Pippin, after the encounter with the Rhorrim)
