Ok let me get a few things cleared up. I'm sorry if you don't like my fic, think it's fake, or what have you. If you don't like it, tough cookies. If you flame, I'll sic Jump on you. I reposted the 1st chapter cos I left a bit out before the garden scene. Please reread the 1st chapter and tell me what you think.
Mel and Lady of the Lilacs: I'm sorry I killed Dom. But since Lady Knight, which made it obvious that Kel and Dom would be together, there was no other way. I am a HUGE Dom fan. Really. i am actually in the process of writing a Kel-Becomes-Knight-Commander fic with DOM in it....it might be R though.
Mystery Warrior Maiden: *sniff* It's good to be loved. Thanks.
Unsigned Anonymous: Sorry. It's K/N.
Lady of the Lilacs: I do what the nice reviewers tell me to do. Moink.
Gilby the Fish: Yay! Thank you!
Clarylissa: Glad you like, sorry you're brain dead. I laugh at Neal often.
Keita: I'm wrong. Summary changed. I'm a dumbhead.
Lady of Lilacs again: You can have Dom. *hands over Dom-on-a-Stick*
Clarylissa: Dirty minded TP is good, right?
6-a Opal: I'm sorry you feel that way. I added Flynn. Alanna & Wyldon were already there. I added a little K/N foreshadowing (look right before she knocks on his door).
CSporty128: OK. *hands over Neal-on-a-Stick* It was gonna stay K/N, but I could have added some Wyldon/Jon or something.
Peachblossomluver: Eesh, I'll have to think about that cos my heart belongs to Neal. And Jon. Young Alanna-book Jon. Gods, they were meant to be together (Alanna and Jon.) *swoons over those blue eyes*
