My Heart Will Go On - Legolas' View
*I mean no offence to you, Legolas, and all the rest of the fellowship as well. Please forgive me if I did.*
Once, my beautiful hair,
Was clean and, was shiny.
Now its light is fading,
It's tangled.
Once, my body's perfect,
It's fit and, it's fragrant.
Now it simply smells bad,
Like a fish.
My hair, my body as well,
They are now yearning for a good wash. (yearning for a wash)
Shampoo, and comb and hot bath,
I miss you all so much and,
I'd be thankful if I had these now.
Hair of Aragorn,
So oily, disgusting!
Never let it come near, and touch me.
Body of Gimli,
So smelly, it's stinky!
Please don't hug me and remind me of your height.
I hate to be one of them!
Elves should be all clean and elegant. (clean and elegant)
You all, take care of hygiene,
Thought it's hard in this journey,
But you shouldn't be that dirty!
Beauty and my sanity,
How I'm suffering for them, who knows? (suffer much for them)
This quest's such a living hell,
I regret that I have come,
But too late, there is no way back.
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Thanks again to Carmen for her idea. Hey, 3 words of her sentences survived!
So this is the second song. Frankly saying, I don't think it's as good as the first one. Please review and tell me what you think.. And give me suggestions to improve my 'songs', and what my new 'target' should be. My brain is too dumb to think about anything new. I need ideas. *Looking at you expectantly* Please tell me which song you would like me to rewrite, and the topic of the lyrics.
*I mean no offence to you, Legolas, and all the rest of the fellowship as well. Please forgive me if I did.*
Once, my beautiful hair,
Was clean and, was shiny.
Now its light is fading,
It's tangled.
Once, my body's perfect,
It's fit and, it's fragrant.
Now it simply smells bad,
Like a fish.
My hair, my body as well,
They are now yearning for a good wash. (yearning for a wash)
Shampoo, and comb and hot bath,
I miss you all so much and,
I'd be thankful if I had these now.
Hair of Aragorn,
So oily, disgusting!
Never let it come near, and touch me.
Body of Gimli,
So smelly, it's stinky!
Please don't hug me and remind me of your height.
I hate to be one of them!
Elves should be all clean and elegant. (clean and elegant)
You all, take care of hygiene,
Thought it's hard in this journey,
But you shouldn't be that dirty!
Beauty and my sanity,
How I'm suffering for them, who knows? (suffer much for them)
This quest's such a living hell,
I regret that I have come,
But too late, there is no way back.
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Thanks again to Carmen for her idea. Hey, 3 words of her sentences survived!
So this is the second song. Frankly saying, I don't think it's as good as the first one. Please review and tell me what you think.. And give me suggestions to improve my 'songs', and what my new 'target' should be. My brain is too dumb to think about anything new. I need ideas. *Looking at you expectantly* Please tell me which song you would like me to rewrite, and the topic of the lyrics.
